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Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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SEALs by carribbeanlady Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 133]
Summary:

SEALs Banner

 All Human.

Lieutenant Edward Masen and his troop of Navy SEALs have been stationed in the African country of Tembo Bara where a civil war has broken out, allowing citizens to be manipulated into joining terrorist groups.

In the midst of this, journalist Isabella Swan has been dumped on Edward to protect as she documents their missions. Being attracted to the woman in the middle of the chaos is not what Lt. Masen is ready for but love is not something anyone can control, even a Navy SEAL.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 48731
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

And they meet, fucked is way beyond what Edward is...LOL

*snicker* I'm pretty sure Mike is gonna get hit at some point if he don't watch himself...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Holy Freakin Hale...a shirtless Navy Seal Edward... dear lord how that gets the hormones flying...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Uggg...here come the tears...curse this overactive imagination...that bombing was horrifying.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OH my God Jasper has a son...THAT'S FANTASTIC!!!!

It must be so hard for soldiers to become a parent and not be there...sigh I really do appreciate our military men and women...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG...I definatly agree. Mamun swearing was epic!!

I loved it...snicker...Mike is so going to get killed if he keeps screwing up. I can't help but wonder why he keeps freezing up like he is. Gesshman the man survived Seal training what the hell????

Ohhh a shot Edward?!? Definatly not a high point in this chapter but like I said Mamun swearing kind of made up for it... =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OH MY FREAKIN HALE!!!! I can't believe they took Bella... in the words of my daughter 'Oh no they didn't...' Edward is going to be beside himself, good thing he gave her that cell phone before he left her. He's never going to leave Bella it Mike's protection agian.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

YEES!!!! They have Bella!!! *bouncing around for joy* That was really exciting and OMG I loved it!!! I can't wait to read about the aftermath...

 

Oh the idea of an undercover Edward sounds divine!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OH this was magnificent and I love that all live HEA in the end. Sigh..I can't wait for your future endevours...

 
Summary:

Bella has secrets which cause her not to date or trust men.  Edward had the shock of his life which causes him to not trust any woman except for his close friends and family.  Can these two fight their demons for the love that grows between the two of them?  Or will their pasts leave them broken forever?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, James, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 32477
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: December 29, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Just discovered you and already I feel excitement on where this may lead...



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! :D

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

LOL I would never survive one hour with Alice and her binders...that would be scary...hmmm dinner at 6ish...could a chance dinner with Edward be in the near future...wonder why she has laid off men?



Author's Response:

Ah, the binders... they haven't disappeared, trust me.. lol..  And you know there's always gonna be Edward and Bella fun... :)  I should be updating this towards the end of the week...  :D  Thanks for the review!!! :D

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Holy Hale that was  magnificent dinner! Wow I love how you have the characters interact with each other and the friendships are just so sweet. Whooo Bella finally is meeting the elusive Edward...gasp...did she just faint? Can't wait to read more...bounces around excitedly



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the dinner. :)  Hopefully I can get the next chapter up in a couple of days.  and then it'll be caught up to my chapters on FFn. :) Thanks for the review...  Here's a teaser for Chapter 3: There was a knock on the door and I looked through the peephole in the door to see Tanya standing at the door with a carseat and a bunch of bags around her.

What the hell is she doing here?  I haven't seen her in about a year, I thought to myself as I opened the door with a frown on my face.

"Tanya, what are you doing here?" I asked her.

"Here... This is yours," Tanya said.

 

Again, thanks for the review :)

Lexy

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Holy Hale! Wow!

So Edward is an insta-dad and is now raising his baby girl. No doubt a major shock but it's awesome he stepped up and is being a kickass dad. I love the backstory it makes it so much easier to see where Edward has come from. Knowing that Bella had such a horrible marriage may make things a bit complicated. Anxiously awaiting your next update



Author's Response:

Yeah.. I like that "insta-dad" :)  Later on, he'll be dealing with the single dad thing with Bella.. (hint, hint.. lol)  Thanks for reading.. and I appreciate your review :)

 

Teaser: She brought her hand to the back of my neck and started to play my hair.  I groaned; I couldn't help it.  It felt so good.  She gave me a little smirk before leaning towards me.  I licked my lips as I saw her do the same.  She glanced up once more to meet my eyes before I closed the gap between us and my lips met hers.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Well well well, our dear Edward has got it bad!  Poor guy he just got hit by the Swan Express...lol

I love that the girls can let loose and end their happy butts in jail. It is feakin hilarious. I LOVE how your mind works and how you brought these characters to life...can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

LOL...Edward's birthday is definalty a highlight in the year. Sigh...It brings warm fuzzies to my heart that Kate is taken so with Bella; I wonder if it makes Bella just a little sad that she won't be able to have children of her own. *snicker* I can't help but wonder what Alice whispered to Bella.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Holy Hale that James is a giant rat bastard. Good Lord he needs someone to go all Leah Clearwater on his ass. It's good riddens that he is out of Bella's life but he did leave some bad scars. *gasp and double Gasp!* Whoaa to have to talk about kissing a guy with his own mother...that is epic...



Author's Response:

I love your reviews!! I love forward to them every time I post a chapte.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)  Here's a teaser for chapter 6:

"Of course, sweetheart.  As high as I can get you as long as you come back," I heard a velvety voice chuckle.

Oh, God.  It can't be, can it?

"Yeah, daddy.  That's perfect," a little girl's voice squealed, and the familiar voice laughed again.

I looked over towards the voices, and sure enough, there was Edward pushing a little girl with the same bronze hair on a swing.  My breathing hitched as I saw a huge smile spread across Edward's face as he was listening to the little girl squeal with delight.  He was absolutely the most divine creature I had ever seen; his smile reached his eyes and lit them up.  A light wind blew around them ruffling his hair and I swear I died.  I was just about to look away when his eyes met mine.  He gave a little wave and stopped the girl's swing, and stooped down to talk to her.  She ran off towards more play equipment while he stood up and started walking over towards me.

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Holy Hale! Bella has met the other woman in Edward's life and it tickles me to no end that Kate feels so comfortable with Bella. I wonder if it breaks Bella's heart that she may not have children of her own. Kate will be good for her. I am excited by what kind of cake Kate may ask for.

Yay for first dates! It should be most interesting with Alice havin free reign with Bella.



Author's Response:

I look forward to your reviews every time I post a new chapter!  You make me laugh with the "Holy Hale"s.. Keep it up.  I'm enjoying it. :)  Thanks for the review, I love them!!!   If you're looking for a teaser to chapter 7, check out The Fictionators Teaser Monday @ www. thefictionators. com. :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

One aspect of a memorable date was when my boyfriend (now husband) took me on a surprise drive. I had no idea where we were going and the little devil wouldn't even give me a hint. Once we started up the mountain I was a little concerned. 1/2 and hour later he pulled up to this overhang and wouldn't you know it the entire city was laying at our feet. It was the most spectacular view, quiet and oh so romantic.

As for the chapter...brilliant. Edward really is sweet. LOL... Esme is just the greatest and I love how nosy she is. A breakfast with the girls was just what the doctor ordered...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! :)

Chapter 8 teaser:

I looked over at Bella who grinned at me, and reached over to scoop up some of my gelato, and then scooped some of hers before putting it all in her mouth.  I watched as she pulled the spoon back out and licked what was left.  I felt my pants get tighter as I imagined what else that tongue could like.  She looked up at me and grinned again.

"What, Edward?" she laughed.

"N-nothing," I stammered before I cleared my throat.  Apparently, her little affair with her spoon made me breathless and incredibly turned on, and she clearly didn't believe me when I said it was nothing.  She rolled her eyes and smiled before taking another bite.

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Sigh...that was an excellent first date. I kinda am curious as the story behind Marcus and his overly indulgent pastries.  Can't wait to see how you play out thier relationship

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Awww I really feel for Bella; it must be so hard to deal with a situation like that. I wonder if she really will tell Edward what the whole deal is.

LoL, Kate is just so cute and I have a funny feeling that she will definalty heal Bella's heart.

 
Sway by Hibbleton Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 719]
Summary:

Single mom Bella finally has life under control again when a new PD starts working at the same radio station and teaches her that she doesn't have to be alone to take care of her responsibilities.

Epilogue posted!

Sway

Huge thanks to Shug for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 194808
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Moving Forward

Oh Hale yeah!!! I kiss and a promise....Yeeessssss. Tis the start of a beautiful thing. Ohhh just vibrating with anticipation of what is to come next..



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Can't wait to get the next chapter out since I know everyone's worried about how Bella handles everything.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Ipsy Bitsy Spider

Ohhh I just love Rose...what a way to get the need to know info out there for everyone. Alice is a doll and love her to death too. The game went well and can't help but laugh at Edward's reaction to Bella's cooking...that boy needs to have more faith. LOL...

I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  When I was planning the entire confrontation, I struggled to figure out how to get the info "public" since I couldn't picture this Bella willingly sharing it.  A chatty sales office seemed the perfect opportunity to get the ball rolling. 

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Unexpected

Holy Freakin Hale!! That was...Wow! Ohhh the conference is going to be so interesting, and honey you did both of them justice ;)

I understand that RL can get pretty stressful so take time for yourself as well, I'll still be here for you...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Tried my best to stay in my comfort zone (and even what I did write was pushing it, LOL) while keeping it true to the characters.  The conference... that'll be interesting.  A little bit of everything in those chapters.

Real life is still pretty insane but I have a backlog of chapters so updates shouldn't slow down.  In fact, I just sent the next chapter off to the 2nd beta so there should be an update relatively soon.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Meet Bella

Just found your story and cant wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for giving it a chance!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Meet Edward

Whoo Bella has a son...kind of figured but I can only wonder what that story is all about...



Author's Response:

It's all in Chapter 9 when you get to it, if you haven't already!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: A Little Background

Nice to see how obsessed Edward has become and so accepting of little Max. LOL...Bella's reaction to Alice coming...dear lord had tears coming out of my eyes; hysterical

 




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