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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary: Feature

 Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!

Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy.  A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?

AU, a bit OOC, canon couples.  Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Nature of Being

Oh I hope the number reflected in Alice's head indicates Bella's decision to join Edward. I can't wait to see how this visit with the wolves turns out. What will Jacob do? I am just so excited!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 The Whirlwind

Holy Freakin Hale!!! The Volturi are there!!! OMG this is just to exciting. What are they all going to do now...I'll anxiously await your next update.

 
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Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The Pride of Lions

Oh Wow ! This is one hell of a chapter! I am in awe by the emotions if felt while reading it. I wonder what will happen? Will Edward stay away from Bella? Will Aro let Edward go? Oh dear lord there are so many questions running thru my mind. Please update soon!

 
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Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 This Is My Blood

OMG Aro is indeed twisted! Oh to make Edward do that in the state he is in. This is completly riveting and I am anxiously awaiting the next update!

Please let your family know that I appreciate the time you give to us. I am honored that you write for us as your writing makes me smile.



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the nice things you say about me! Yes, Aro is a bit twisted, but after 3000 years, I suppose the monotony has to get to you!

I'm glad you are enjoying, thanks for all the reviews!

 
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Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Gethsemane

Oh this was heartwrenching...the pain in Edward's plea was so heart moving. It took me a moment to read the rest as I was crying. I think we have all been at that point at some time or another. Lord knows my Gethsemene was just as painful.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 I Am Delivered

Ohhh that was phenomenol. I just love that Edward was there for her first human encounter. I am also thrilled he has found his joy.

I am sad there is only one chapter left but have enjoyed the ride.

 
Summary:

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Bella did what he asked, she moved on. She married another man but that man betrayed her. What happens when he comes back into her life years later? What happens when Edward realizes he made a mistake? Can he make her believe he always loved her? Can he atone for his mistakes? And what is Bella and their families hiding from Edward?

AU/AH ExB, canon couples, not a canon story

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 276724
[Report This] Published: August 19, 2009 Updated: June 13, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 What have we become...

FINALLY someone is shedding light on all that is Bella's messed up marriage. I feel extremely sad that Bella had to endure the loss of a child with such a heartless jackass. I would love nothing better than to tear James apart....grrrr

Now that Edward knows he better get his at together and make things right...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Why...

Wow!!!

Seth is one kickass friend! I just love that boy to pieces and I am glad that he is there to help Bella make some sense of the whole Edward mess...Three cheers for friends that hold us when we needed them the most.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A glimmer of hope

*Gasp* James and Victoria...aaaacccckkkk Those two should be hanged for thier evil ways. When all is said and done I hope those two are put thru the wringer and then some.

I can't tell you how excited i am that Bella and Edward will finally talk out everything...



Author's Response:

LOL! All I will say on James and Victoria is....don't jump to quickly to assume anything. ^_~  Chapter 12 has just been submitted so it should be up soon!! Thanks and sorry for the delay in responding.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Uggg Tanya strikes again and another marriage goes up in smoke. Interesting story my dear...will be following



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Yes, Tanya is not very nice in MMB. Glad you enjoyed the beginning to the story...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ahhh nice to see Bella continuing with her life. Seth...sigh...always liked his character so glad you have him and Bella be friends. LOL...so thee Edward Cullen has no idea Bella is now single...snicker...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WTH? Why is Edward a complete ass? To be honest I hope he explains soon because on one hand he feels for Bella but when near Bella he looses his shit. How does he really feel and why did he decide to end it so long ago.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Holy Hale things are starting to pick up...EXCELLENT

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Holy Hale things are starting to pick up...EXCELLENT

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (vjgm)

Oh dear lord what a day! No wonder Bella's nerves are frazzled; that poor girl has had alot to deal with. Victoria is a world class bitch, what's up with her. Is James trying to sabotage the Swan ranch? Aaacckkk!

Going out with the gang is definalty what Bella needed.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Master Understudy,

With great respect I ask that you reveal all that is wrong with Padwan Bella so that I may understand.

Whew I can just feel the force is strong in this story and reveal in its power. =) Can't wait for your next update.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Beginnings

Ahh my dear your Bella has been hurt so badly it trully is heartwrenching. Will she ever forgive Edward? It seems Edward is trying but I totally get the rejection, its not easy to get over...sigh

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 What about now.... (vgjm)

Oh God for a second there I thought she was going to take a hike and then I would have been devastated too. I am exstatic that they have had the talk and I can only hope it goes uphill from here; though I know there are still some bumpy roads to go down...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OMG this chapter was brilliant!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 (VGJM)

Aaaackkk Tyler and Tanya...sure could have done without those two sleezes. I am thrilled to know that Bella slapped the hell out of Tyler, It was GREAT!

I wonder if Edward will follow Bella to Vegas now...lol

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 (vjgm)

Wow this was such an intense chapter, and i can totally emphthize with Bella as I have little ones of my own. Sigh I would totally loose it if I lost one. I am thrilled that Edward was there to work it through with Bella together. A major stepping stone in moving forward.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I have two little one's of my own and even the thought of losing one is enough to make me sick.

This was very much a major step forward for them.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 (vjgm)

OMG I can't stop laughing...dear lord Bella and Alice taking down Emmett. A brilliant move to be sure. Wow I can't wait to see how these two handle the separation that is fast approaching.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Your arms feel like home (vjgm)

Ohhh so sad...the time apart will be torturous

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 (vjgm)

Ohhh Tanya is such a BITCH! Grrr I sure hope one of the girls tears into her for all the heartache she has caused. Dearl lord that girl needs a beat down. LoL...would love to see Alice get ahold of her. I sure hope Bella shows her a thing or two in Vegas.



Author's Response:

I have to agree, MMB Tanya is not a very nice person. I think you'll be happy with the results in Vegas. Thank you!!

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 (vjgm)

OH dear lord if Tanya needed a beat down before, definalty deserves on now...grrrr! Oh please update soon I can't wait to find out where you go from here.



Author's Response:

Tanya really does deserve a beat down....Hopefully Ch. 20 will be up soon. It's in the queue. Thank you again for the R & R.

 

 




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