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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

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Bella did what he asked, she moved on. She married another man but that man betrayed her. What happens when he comes back into her life years later? What happens when Edward realizes he made a mistake? Can he make her believe he always loved her? Can he atone for his mistakes? And what is Bella and their families hiding from Edward?

AU/AH ExB, canon couples, not a canon story

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 276724
[Report This] Published: August 19, 2009 Updated: June 13, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Uggg Tanya strikes again and another marriage goes up in smoke. Interesting story my dear...will be following



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Yes, Tanya is not very nice in MMB. Glad you enjoyed the beginning to the story...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ahhh nice to see Bella continuing with her life. Seth...sigh...always liked his character so glad you have him and Bella be friends. LOL...so thee Edward Cullen has no idea Bella is now single...snicker...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WTH? Why is Edward a complete ass? To be honest I hope he explains soon because on one hand he feels for Bella but when near Bella he looses his shit. How does he really feel and why did he decide to end it so long ago.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Holy Hale things are starting to pick up...EXCELLENT

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Holy Hale things are starting to pick up...EXCELLENT

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (vjgm)

Oh dear lord what a day! No wonder Bella's nerves are frazzled; that poor girl has had alot to deal with. Victoria is a world class bitch, what's up with her. Is James trying to sabotage the Swan ranch? Aaacckkk!

Going out with the gang is definalty what Bella needed.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Master Understudy,

With great respect I ask that you reveal all that is wrong with Padwan Bella so that I may understand.

Whew I can just feel the force is strong in this story and reveal in its power. =) Can't wait for your next update.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Beginnings

Ahh my dear your Bella has been hurt so badly it trully is heartwrenching. Will she ever forgive Edward? It seems Edward is trying but I totally get the rejection, its not easy to get over...sigh

 
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Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 What about now.... (vgjm)

Oh God for a second there I thought she was going to take a hike and then I would have been devastated too. I am exstatic that they have had the talk and I can only hope it goes uphill from here; though I know there are still some bumpy roads to go down...

 
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Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OMG this chapter was brilliant!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 (VGJM)

Aaaackkk Tyler and Tanya...sure could have done without those two sleezes. I am thrilled to know that Bella slapped the hell out of Tyler, It was GREAT!

I wonder if Edward will follow Bella to Vegas now...lol

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 (vjgm)

Wow this was such an intense chapter, and i can totally emphthize with Bella as I have little ones of my own. Sigh I would totally loose it if I lost one. I am thrilled that Edward was there to work it through with Bella together. A major stepping stone in moving forward.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I have two little one's of my own and even the thought of losing one is enough to make me sick.

This was very much a major step forward for them.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 (vjgm)

OMG I can't stop laughing...dear lord Bella and Alice taking down Emmett. A brilliant move to be sure. Wow I can't wait to see how these two handle the separation that is fast approaching.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Your arms feel like home (vjgm)

Ohhh so sad...the time apart will be torturous

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 (vjgm)

Ohhh Tanya is such a BITCH! Grrr I sure hope one of the girls tears into her for all the heartache she has caused. Dearl lord that girl needs a beat down. LoL...would love to see Alice get ahold of her. I sure hope Bella shows her a thing or two in Vegas.



Author's Response:

I have to agree, MMB Tanya is not a very nice person. I think you'll be happy with the results in Vegas. Thank you!!

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 (vjgm)

OH dear lord if Tanya needed a beat down before, definalty deserves on now...grrrr! Oh please update soon I can't wait to find out where you go from here.



Author's Response:

Tanya really does deserve a beat down....Hopefully Ch. 20 will be up soon. It's in the queue. Thank you again for the R & R.

 

 
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Date: March 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Til we aren't strangers anymore (vjgm)

Alright!!! *does a happy dance* They are together and I couldn't be happier...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 (vjgm)

Wow thier fist day together was spectacular!! Oh dear lord I laughed so hard at Edward falling on his ass! Brilliant my dear.

 
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Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 (vjgm)

Aww Edward is just the sweetest thing ever isn't he? More men should learn from him...lol I think hell would freeze over if that happened.

EEEPPP oh dear lord why would Emmett be there to pick them up?

 
Gates by amp23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 441]
Summary:

Edward with book

Do you like stories where Bella is sweet and kind and mature beyond her years?  And when she and Edward meet they fall in love immediately and have lots of smexy times? And Jake is their dog?

If yes, then this is NOT the story for you.

But if like stories where Bella is insecure, moody, argumentative and occasionally thoughtless, or stories where Bella is kind of involved with both Edward and Jacob at the same time and dealing poorly with the situation - then you might like this story.

Here's what it's about:

Bella has just started her freshman year at Yale after taking a year off between high school and college. She is trying to balance her relationship with her long distance boyfriend, Jacob, while making friends at school and dealing with her classes.  She is also trying to manage the problem that caused her to take the year off before starting college.

And then she gets a ride from a Yalie named Edward Cullen . . .

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 121361
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Going to Brown

Hmmm what an interesting to start a story. Jessica and jacob...a very interesting couple indeed...

 
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Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Ride Home

LoL...that is definalty one heck of a first meeting. I love Emmett especially...that boy is all sorts of funny...

 
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Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Game

LOL...that was a great day and I have a feeling Rosalie will want an explanation as well...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Repurcussions

LoL...the girls definatly drug out all the dirty lil details now didn't they? I just love friends...they keep us honest with outselves...

 
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Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Not Date

Well that most certianly was a very nice "non date" I wonder what the full story is on Bella...like why the obsessive caloric counting? Does she have an eating disorder...cuz I have a few theories as to what if that's the case.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Jacob's Visit

Dear lord...I wonder what Bella sees in Jacob. He seems nice but there isn't the obsessive, can't stop thinking about you quality like Edward has. Although Edward does seem like a player so who am I to judge.

 




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