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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary: Feature

 Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!

Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy.  A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?

AU, a bit OOC, canon couples.  Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Prodigal Son Returns

Wow the first chapter and it is so riveting... I am lucky to find such a treasure

 
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Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Dark Angel

Hmmm Bella is certainly an interesting character...

 
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Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Innocence and Ecstasy

Aaacckkk computer keeps kicking me off but loving the story

 
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Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Before God

Oh Bella honey you have felt so much pain in such a short time. I now understand the need to go and pray...to release that amount of pain if even for a short time. I wonder how far Edward got and if he happened to be listening to this sad revelation

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 No Rest For The Wicked

To be honest I found your story by chance...I was looking under most recent category and just happened to stumble across this story. I am so happy that I did.

This creep was hurting children! What a low life bastard...sorry have kids of my own and to think of a sick man like this hurting them has me seeing red. Edward has a steel will in not hurting him...can't wait to read more.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Many Mysteries

Wow how great that Bella would like to atone for her past wrongs. I can't imagine life without out children. I was told when I was 16 that I may have difficulty having children...my appendix ruptured...I almost died... and my internal organs where scared. It was devastating to me that I may not even have children...but by grace I now have three and I feel truly blessed that they are in my life. I can empathize with Bella in that the pain is overwhelming at times...I've had many a dark night before I had my children in that he knowledge of not having any can be heartbreaking.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Apologies to Isabella

WTF that evil Bastard still hurt those children *Growl* I can't blame Edward from being furious. Karma will come back to get that man. Ahhh the dilemma's that Edward faces...perhaps he will find his redemption in his love for Isabella...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Into The Den of Lions

Oh dear Lord...I have no words for the emotion this brings to my heart...

 
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Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 May God Have Mercy

Wow justice comes in the form of a dark angel. I think my emotions were all over the place when it came to this chapter. I do believe I need Jasper to come over and help mangage this rollarcoaster.Eeep I think it got a bit warm over on my end...yeesh.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Choices

Whoo definatly gonna have to go check out th moonlight awards...

There is so much that is going on. I have so many questions. I wonder how Edward will tell Bella? Will Jake let her be? Hmmmm being that Bella knew Alice in school I wonder why they didn't really become friends? I just can't wait to read more and hope many of my questions...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Chariot Ride

I can't tell you how excited I am about this story. It has so many twists and turns and keeps me guessing about certain things. I love it and am excited for more.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Cygnus

Hmmm loved learning about Cygnus...quite intriguing...

I am thrilled Edward wants her willingly, after all they have both been thru they need to take it this slow.... 



Author's Response:

Hello! I just wanted to say thanks for this and all your other reviews. Unfortunately, things have been getting away from me a bit and leaving me little opportunity to reply to reviews, but I was really touched by yours, especially where you were talking about how scared you were when your own fertility was brought into question. I think the ability to bear children is integral to our identity as women and I am sure it is devastating to find out if that was taken.  So glad to hear yours worked out!

I see you are also a big sci fi fan, mne too! Who do you read?

Thanks again for all the reading and reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Caged Tiger

Whoa what a night for Bella. Yet can feel her fustration of not getting any concrete answers from Edward, though I do believe the answers will soon be coming. I have to wonder if Jacob will take to kindly to Edward being with Bella; highly doubt it. I wonder what the trip to Forks will bring...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 I Will Not Be Denied

Well cant say that Rose's reaction to Edward's plan surprises me but still rather surprised that she attacked him with that much intensity. It' s a good thing Emmett wasn't there or he'd be a little peeved at Edward hitting Rose. I hope the ride to Forks goes well, and can't wait to see how things play out...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Lazarus Rising

Criminy! What on god's green earth is going on in that priests head? There something funny going on judging by Edward's reaction to both men. I can't wait to read what will happen next. Will we get a few words from Edward concerning our holy men? *excitedly waiting for more*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection

Hmmm Volturi spies in the Vatican...now that wouldn's suprise me in the least. I just hope they don't get Edward,,,thouh have a funny feeling the Volturi may just be looking for him and a sure fire way of getting his attention is thru Isabella. This will be interesting to say the least



Author's Response:

Its been surprising how many people are saying-Volturi spies in the Vatican-of course! I don't know what that says. Thank you for reviewing!

 
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Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Burning

Wow a save from the fire and a first kiss...dear lord you know how to get a heart racing...was a magnificent chapter

 
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Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Pouring Gas on the Fire

The confrontation with the shapeshifters was SWEET! I just love how Edward was able to get some info from them without them realizing it.

Poor Edward being trapped with three couples during various extracurricular activites. I don't blame him for running; hopefully soon it will be his turn.

 
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Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Fusion

*quickly runs to freezer and sticks head in to cool the hell down*

Wow...that was amazing! I can't believe how well this was written and the emotions just flowed right off the screen. That Bella is one lucky little lady.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Seeds Of The Whirlwind

HOLY FREAKIN HALE!!! Well the vamp and the wolf are now out of the bag... Poor Bella has had a very trying day and I wouldn't doubt that she is going to go into shock with all that she has learned today? I am curious as to how Bella will handle all of this informtation. Please update as soon as you can...please...



Author's Response:

Thanks! Update is in the queue!

 
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Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves

Oh dear lord this is so EXCITING!!! I am just vibrating with anticipation for what is to come. The fight scene was awesome! I can't believe Jake would put them all in danger like that. What was he thinking!! Oh please please Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Delivering The Wind

Wow...Bella is completly in shock! I am so happy Edward got to her before the wolves could. Dear lord did I just say that? I know I'm Team Jacob but in this case I'm Team Edward all the way...hope the others don't hear me say that or my ass is grass. ;) That Monsignor is such a scheming SOB! I am disgusted by him, but can't help but wonder why the Volturi is keeping such close tabs on the Cullen's. I have my suspicions. Ohhh I can't wait until Bella wakes up...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Delivering The Wind

Wow...Bella is completly in shock! I am so happy Edward got to her before the wolves could. Dear lord did I just say that? I know I'm Team Jacob but in this case I'm Team Edward all the way...hope the others don't hear me say that or my ass is grass. ;) That Monsignor is such a scheming SOB! I am disgusted by him, but can't help but wonder why the Volturi is keeping such close tabs on the Cullen's. I have my suspicions. Ohhh I can't wait until Bella wakes up...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat

Yes!!!

I love that Edward is taking a leap of faith sort to speak, this above all will be what brings Bella back to him.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 1743

YYYEEEESSSS! At least they had that night...Oh I am so excited by the connection they are forming. This story is mindblowing!

 




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