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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary: Feature

 Thank you, hellacullen, for the awesome banner!

Edward’s rebellious period didn’t last a few years; it lasted seventy.  A solitary hunter on the fringe of society, he stumbles across a young woman praying. Can he seduce her away from everything she's ever known? And will he be willing to fight for Bella instead of fighting against her?

AU, a bit OOC, canon couples.  Rated for lemons, violence and adult subject matter.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 129165
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2009 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The Caged Tiger

Whoa what a night for Bella. Yet can feel her fustration of not getting any concrete answers from Edward, though I do believe the answers will soon be coming. I have to wonder if Jacob will take to kindly to Edward being with Bella; highly doubt it. I wonder what the trip to Forks will bring...

 
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Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 I Will Not Be Denied

Well cant say that Rose's reaction to Edward's plan surprises me but still rather surprised that she attacked him with that much intensity. It' s a good thing Emmett wasn't there or he'd be a little peeved at Edward hitting Rose. I hope the ride to Forks goes well, and can't wait to see how things play out...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Lazarus Rising

Criminy! What on god's green earth is going on in that priests head? There something funny going on judging by Edward's reaction to both men. I can't wait to read what will happen next. Will we get a few words from Edward concerning our holy men? *excitedly waiting for more*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Raven's Reflection

Hmmm Volturi spies in the Vatican...now that wouldn's suprise me in the least. I just hope they don't get Edward,,,thouh have a funny feeling the Volturi may just be looking for him and a sure fire way of getting his attention is thru Isabella. This will be interesting to say the least



Author's Response:

Its been surprising how many people are saying-Volturi spies in the Vatican-of course! I don't know what that says. Thank you for reviewing!

 
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Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Burning

Wow a save from the fire and a first kiss...dear lord you know how to get a heart racing...was a magnificent chapter

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Pouring Gas on the Fire

The confrontation with the shapeshifters was SWEET! I just love how Edward was able to get some info from them without them realizing it.

Poor Edward being trapped with three couples during various extracurricular activites. I don't blame him for running; hopefully soon it will be his turn.

 
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Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Fusion

*quickly runs to freezer and sticks head in to cool the hell down*

Wow...that was amazing! I can't believe how well this was written and the emotions just flowed right off the screen. That Bella is one lucky little lady.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Seeds Of The Whirlwind

HOLY FREAKIN HALE!!! Well the vamp and the wolf are now out of the bag... Poor Bella has had a very trying day and I wouldn't doubt that she is going to go into shock with all that she has learned today? I am curious as to how Bella will handle all of this informtation. Please update as soon as you can...please...



Author's Response:

Thanks! Update is in the queue!

 
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Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Dances With Wolves

Oh dear lord this is so EXCITING!!! I am just vibrating with anticipation for what is to come. The fight scene was awesome! I can't believe Jake would put them all in danger like that. What was he thinking!! Oh please please Please update soon.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Delivering The Wind

Wow...Bella is completly in shock! I am so happy Edward got to her before the wolves could. Dear lord did I just say that? I know I'm Team Jacob but in this case I'm Team Edward all the way...hope the others don't hear me say that or my ass is grass. ;) That Monsignor is such a scheming SOB! I am disgusted by him, but can't help but wonder why the Volturi is keeping such close tabs on the Cullen's. I have my suspicions. Ohhh I can't wait until Bella wakes up...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Delivering The Wind

Wow...Bella is completly in shock! I am so happy Edward got to her before the wolves could. Dear lord did I just say that? I know I'm Team Jacob but in this case I'm Team Edward all the way...hope the others don't hear me say that or my ass is grass. ;) That Monsignor is such a scheming SOB! I am disgusted by him, but can't help but wonder why the Volturi is keeping such close tabs on the Cullen's. I have my suspicions. Ohhh I can't wait until Bella wakes up...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 A Bite To Eat

Yes!!!

I love that Edward is taking a leap of faith sort to speak, this above all will be what brings Bella back to him.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 1743

YYYEEEESSSS! At least they had that night...Oh I am so excited by the connection they are forming. This story is mindblowing!

 
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Date: February 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 The Nature of Being

Oh I hope the number reflected in Alice's head indicates Bella's decision to join Edward. I can't wait to see how this visit with the wolves turns out. What will Jacob do? I am just so excited!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 The Whirlwind

Holy Freakin Hale!!! The Volturi are there!!! OMG this is just to exciting. What are they all going to do now...I'll anxiously await your next update.

 
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Date: March 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The Pride of Lions

Oh Wow ! This is one hell of a chapter! I am in awe by the emotions if felt while reading it. I wonder what will happen? Will Edward stay away from Bella? Will Aro let Edward go? Oh dear lord there are so many questions running thru my mind. Please update soon!

 
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Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 This Is My Blood

OMG Aro is indeed twisted! Oh to make Edward do that in the state he is in. This is completly riveting and I am anxiously awaiting the next update!

Please let your family know that I appreciate the time you give to us. I am honored that you write for us as your writing makes me smile.



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the nice things you say about me! Yes, Aro is a bit twisted, but after 3000 years, I suppose the monotony has to get to you!

I'm glad you are enjoying, thanks for all the reviews!

 
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Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Gethsemane

Oh this was heartwrenching...the pain in Edward's plea was so heart moving. It took me a moment to read the rest as I was crying. I think we have all been at that point at some time or another. Lord knows my Gethsemene was just as painful.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 I Am Delivered

Ohhh that was phenomenol. I just love that Edward was there for her first human encounter. I am also thrilled he has found his joy.

I am sad there is only one chapter left but have enjoyed the ride.

 
Summary:

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Bella did what he asked, she moved on. She married another man but that man betrayed her. What happens when he comes back into her life years later? What happens when Edward realizes he made a mistake? Can he make her believe he always loved her? Can he atone for his mistakes? And what is Bella and their families hiding from Edward?

AU/AH ExB, canon couples, not a canon story

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 276724
[Report This] Published: August 19, 2009 Updated: June 13, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 What have we become...

FINALLY someone is shedding light on all that is Bella's messed up marriage. I feel extremely sad that Bella had to endure the loss of a child with such a heartless jackass. I would love nothing better than to tear James apart....grrrr

Now that Edward knows he better get his at together and make things right...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Why...

Wow!!!

Seth is one kickass friend! I just love that boy to pieces and I am glad that he is there to help Bella make some sense of the whole Edward mess...Three cheers for friends that hold us when we needed them the most.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A glimmer of hope

*Gasp* James and Victoria...aaaacccckkkk Those two should be hanged for thier evil ways. When all is said and done I hope those two are put thru the wringer and then some.

I can't tell you how excited i am that Bella and Edward will finally talk out everything...



Author's Response:

LOL! All I will say on James and Victoria is....don't jump to quickly to assume anything. ^_~  Chapter 12 has just been submitted so it should be up soon!! Thanks and sorry for the delay in responding.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Uggg Tanya strikes again and another marriage goes up in smoke. Interesting story my dear...will be following



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Yes, Tanya is not very nice in MMB. Glad you enjoyed the beginning to the story...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ahhh nice to see Bella continuing with her life. Seth...sigh...always liked his character so glad you have him and Bella be friends. LOL...so thee Edward Cullen has no idea Bella is now single...snicker...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WTH? Why is Edward a complete ass? To be honest I hope he explains soon because on one hand he feels for Bella but when near Bella he looses his shit. How does he really feel and why did he decide to end it so long ago.

 




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