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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Hidden by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1162]
Summary:

There are more secrets to the ‘new girl in school’ than even a family of vampires could have foreseen. What could the irresistible Bella Swan be hiding? There is more to the golden eyed girl than anyone could have expected.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 95376
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: January 28, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: 12: It's a Secret

Holy Freakin Hale! They eloped!!! *does a happy dance* I am so excited. What a wonderful surprise, talk about cashing in on a christmas coupon. Alice is sure to be livid and OMG the family is going to freak...especially Tanya. I can't wait to see what happens next.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: 6: Hunting We Will Go

Wow...got me an inkling to go hunt me some deer now...wow hunting can be HOT! LOL at least for our friends it can. Hehe love the V-card moments...can't stop smiling. I can't wait to see what you come up with next...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1: What Is Her Problem?

My dear you did just fine and I am excited to follow another one of your stories...I love daybreak and thrilled by this new one.

I absolutly love the car...definatly drool-worthy...

Can't wait for more...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2: Unexpected Revelations

LOL...that was great! WOW I can't believe that Bella is Alice's sister in law...what are the odds. This is going to be so much fun. I'm envious that they get to ride in Bella's car...sigh

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 3: Whys of Amber

Hmm I guess I would love to have Carlisle has my vamp incentive...

LOL I have to just smile at Edward's eagerness when it comes to Bella...Maybe the issues of him hurting her will not be such a limiting factor in thier relationship..but have a funny feeling Bella will put Edward in his place soon enough

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: 5: Monster Mash

Ahhh my dear that was absolutly marvelous! I adore the costumes and the dance was hilarious...

Edward so smitten it is humerous to watch him fall all over himself over Bella...Can't wait for this weekend

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: 7: Snow Angel

Ok not so mad at Edward anymore but Holy Hale if they keep getting interupted someone is going to combust! Tanya...venom indeed...*sudden inspirational thought*...If Bella feels this way already about Edward I woull think her jealousy will spark as well. *Evil grin appears* A cat fight can happen....*bounces around* I would LOVE to see Tanya get her but kicked...I know Bella has it in her. Can't wait to see what comes next.

Another story!! Just tell me when and with vampiric speed will I go to read it =)



Author's Response:

Lol, There will be a cat fight, in fact I'm writing it right now. I'm thinking about adding my new story after I finish daybreak. That give me a chance to write up a few chapters.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: 8: Hot n Cold

Eeegats!

Only Tanya could mess things up when things were going so well. I sure hope Alice and Bella have something devious up their sleeves. I have no ideas but have every confidence that you will come up with something perfect.

I have been feeling under the weather but reading your story will sitting her sick still puts a smile on my face

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: 9: Good or Bad Sign?

Ohh so many questions to little answers...LOL I have just as many as you named. I know curiousity killed the cat but I have nine lives and am willing to give up one to know the answers. I loved it all.., but Bella kicking Tanya's ass was priceless. Thank you for making my day a bit more bearable. I can't wait for more answers and dare I say that lemonade you were talking about. =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: 10: Didn't See That Coming

I'm with the girls faning themselves...I do believe I felt the heat rising here and I have snow outside my window! LOL...Tanya jealous was classic and to bad for her. I know I'm just evil that way. The game of Life was funny and can't help but laugh at the outcome. I wouldn't be to happy with the interuption Alice did but I never bet against Alice and believe Bella will thank her later.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: 11: You Got Me What?!

Wow the festivities were spectacular!!! Hmm W.O.W Bella has a tattoo, that is wickedly cool.  I was floored by the thoughtfulness of each gift. LOL oh my god i was in hysterics listening to the song Bella choose for Tanya, it was priceless, and i would give anything to see the look on her face. Oh I can't wait to see what Edward asks for...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: 13: Secret Between Lovers

Oh those two are lucky they've gotten away with what they have so far. i about chocked on Jasper's comment, I think he will be the one to put two and two together first...lol...I can't wait to see how the family reacts. I have way to many scenarios running thru my heard to put just one down. I can't wait to see how you bring the truth about.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: 14: Calm Before The Storm

LoL...those two are wickedly delightful. I am impressed they have kept this secret as long as they have. Gag...Mike and Jessica yep can see why Edward may have inverted on himself. Ohhh Valentine's Day...bounces around excitedly. I am sure that Bella will do something to blow Edward's mind.

 
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Date: March 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: 16: A Shocking Discovery

Ohh that bitch Tanya just can't take a hint...I sure hope there is at least one more cat fight in which Tanya finally learns to keep her hands off Edward. It won't be pretty for her otherwise. I just love Bella's abilities they are just to cool. I am happy for the outcome in which the family now knows and accepts the decisions Edward and Bella made.

Ahh I have such a wicked mind... whatever is in the bag has me thinking dirty thoughts. LOL I can't wait to see what you actually have coming out of that bag.

 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2012


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Crash

*Stares at screen in stunned silence...seriously you can hear the damn crickets*

I don't know what to say other than it was on Fabulously written chapter...I am delightfully stunned.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Words I Couldn't Say

HAPPY BIRHTDAY HONEY!!!

Oh I so want to just hug Charlie for snappin Edward out of his mood, three cheers for Charlie. Sigh...watching Edward fall apart was hard but it was necessary in his healing process. I wonder if Bella will now have the courage to open the blue box.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Far Away

Ok now I can' calm down a bit. While I applaud Edward for walking away, I'm still a bit upset with him still. i am thrilled he went to the therapist early and is making strides to get help.

LOL...Emmett is just to much and him finding out he's gonna be a daddy is just to funny...LMAO! That was brilliant!

Hmmm I respect Edward for telling Bella the truth and hope to god Bella dosn't totally lose her shit when she reads that. I will anxiously await the next update...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Whoo sounds intriguing...I wonder what happened those many years ago...can't wait to find out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 1997-New kid

LOL this great and the idea of Edward starting off as the ugly duckling is pure genius...it will be fun to watch these two over the years after all we have 8 years to catch up on...



Author's Response:

Yes and they journey is worth it!  They have quite the history and we'll take you through it if you stayed tuned.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: 1997-First day

Holy Hale! Renee has been drinking...*twilight zone music begins* this can only mean trouble in the last few weeks...

I am still curious as to why Edward broke it off years before but will wait until all is revealed...I am having a blast just thinking of all the possibilities...



Author's Response:

You'll find out much more about Renee in the next chapter.

What happens to tear them apart is *really* tough to read, so be prepared!  We're so glad you're reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: 1998 - The Rescue

Oh poor Bella...it is heartbreaking to know she has had that locked up inside for those many years...

I am so glad Edward was there to help her...what a friend.

Holy Hale...Cullen boys doing strip teases * Mind wonders, glazed look appears*... Wow what an image... and I have a very big and graphic imagination!

I am just exstatic for more...makes me wonder why on god's green earth did they stop being friends or stop seeing each other...I just can't wait to find out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: 1998 - The Dance

*SIGH* That Edward is quite the charmer...

Little miss Bella jealous; me thinks she protests to much. Wonder when those two will realize things have changed and that they are ment for each other.

 Awwww shcucks...just realized something bad goes down and they split...*cringes*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: 1999 - Camping Trip

Gotta love Ted's solution to Edward's growing interest in girls...LOL You did were alot nicer to Edward than what my oldest got...a sex talk complete with powerpoint presentation on erections, STD's, pregnancy, periods, ect. you name it, it was in my presentation. My poor kids may be traumatized but they are well informed...lol..can still see my son's stunned face.

Wow so totally melted my heart of Edward ad Bella's first kiss...Sigh...

Emmett's and Japer's dare were down right...laughin until my stomach hurt...funny. This camping trip was awesome!



Author's Response:

Oh.My.God.  I am laughing so hard about the powerpoint (although I am quite sure I'll do the same when my son is of an age to discuss it!).  Still, that's just giggle-worthy.

Wasn't that a sweet kiss?  Aw!  And they did a good job for beginners!

And Emmett and Jasper are definitely good guys.  They do their best to make Edward feel good about himself.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: 2000-Christmas

*silent tears fall* That was indeed a tragic and heartfelt chapter...

Damn you were not kidding with the tissure remark. I will be sure to have them on hand next time. Poor Edward to loose his parents like that. It broke my heart to hear him cry out in grief like that...lord knows I have done that a time or two when my loved ones passed.

I will patiently await your next reveals...



Author's Response:

Such a difficult chapter.  So much to deal with for our poor kids.  Thank goodness Bella was there to catch him when he fell.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: 2001-Grand Gesture

*GASP...runs to get a box of tissues...silent tears fall*

Ok I know you warned me about tears and the big girl panties but burned thru the few tissues I had in a matter of minutes reading about the prom. This was devastating! No wonder things only went down hill from there. How in the HELL could Edward think that of Bella after everything they have been thru?

 *Silently plots Edward's demise...ok maybe not demise but a serious butt kickin is in order*

I can't even imagine Bella's pain. It is only a wonder that she thinks she is now  his nemesis, a thorn to his heart.

It is with a heavy heart and a bit of trepidation that I await your next update from BPOV. I am now thrawlled with this story and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

We are thrilled to hear you are thrawlled.....BPOV is in queue so ppl don't have to wait for their dose of heartache.  PLease be ready for the next one, it will hurt, it will hurt bad.

We have a supposrt group started on our thread.....come and we will hold you and dry your tears.....

 




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