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Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2012


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: 1999 - Camping Trip

Gotta love Ted's solution to Edward's growing interest in girls...LOL You did were alot nicer to Edward than what my oldest got...a sex talk complete with powerpoint presentation on erections, STD's, pregnancy, periods, ect. you name it, it was in my presentation. My poor kids may be traumatized but they are well informed...lol..can still see my son's stunned face.

Wow so totally melted my heart of Edward ad Bella's first kiss...Sigh...

Emmett's and Japer's dare were down right...laughin until my stomach hurt...funny. This camping trip was awesome!



Author's Response:

Oh.My.God.  I am laughing so hard about the powerpoint (although I am quite sure I'll do the same when my son is of an age to discuss it!).  Still, that's just giggle-worthy.

Wasn't that a sweet kiss?  Aw!  And they did a good job for beginners!

And Emmett and Jasper are definitely good guys.  They do their best to make Edward feel good about himself.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: 2000-Christmas

*silent tears fall* That was indeed a tragic and heartfelt chapter...

Damn you were not kidding with the tissure remark. I will be sure to have them on hand next time. Poor Edward to loose his parents like that. It broke my heart to hear him cry out in grief like that...lord knows I have done that a time or two when my loved ones passed.

I will patiently await your next reveals...



Author's Response:

Such a difficult chapter.  So much to deal with for our poor kids.  Thank goodness Bella was there to catch him when he fell.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: 2001-Grand Gesture

*GASP...runs to get a box of tissues...silent tears fall*

Ok I know you warned me about tears and the big girl panties but burned thru the few tissues I had in a matter of minutes reading about the prom. This was devastating! No wonder things only went down hill from there. How in the HELL could Edward think that of Bella after everything they have been thru?

 *Silently plots Edward's demise...ok maybe not demise but a serious butt kickin is in order*

I can't even imagine Bella's pain. It is only a wonder that she thinks she is now  his nemesis, a thorn to his heart.

It is with a heavy heart and a bit of trepidation that I await your next update from BPOV. I am now thrawlled with this story and can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

We are thrilled to hear you are thrawlled.....BPOV is in queue so ppl don't have to wait for their dose of heartache.  PLease be ready for the next one, it will hurt, it will hurt bad.

We have a supposrt group started on our thread.....come and we will hold you and dry your tears.....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: 2001-Goodbye to You

OMG *Silent tears fall and shoulders shake with a shudder* It just seemed so much worse from Bella's POV. Every word was devastating and hurt. It is no wonder that she ran to hide from her pain. Dear Lord that was a tough chapter.

(((((((((HUGS))))))))))

I just don't know what to think right now...ponders this awhile.



Author's Response:

We don't know about you, but we are washing Ben and Jerry's down with copious amounts of vodka and playing strip poker with Captain Morgan.  Come join us on the thread for support.....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Holy Freakin Hale Batman!! It was...was...magnificent...totally spellbinding. I can't help but love Charlie's directness and totally awesome advice. I am thrilled that Bella faced some of those demons of hers head on. I am just so happy they are talking!!



Author's Response:

Charlie is such a DILF and Bella proved her strength a little.....

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: 2009-Bed of Roses

Wow Edward has been severly screwed up since that night... I don't know if I have words. He really has had i really roungh and it this chapter was definatly an eye opener into the world that is Edward Cullen...



Author's Response:

The chapter was so hard to write.....i even threw up in my mouth with respect to Lauren.....Poor Edward.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: 2009-Ordinary World

Wow you were right...poor Bella has been living shattered all these years. She never moved on and can't say that I blame her...her heart was left a long time ago. She has just been surviving but not living...I do hope this wedding is a beginning for her because her life is just sad. I can't wait for the reunion...



Author's Response:

Reunion part 1 is up!

Thank you so much for all of your support!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Stolen Away

Wow oh Wow! Edward really doesn't know what he did to Bella and I was cheering like mad when Jasper laid it all out... Hale to the YES!! I just love Jasper all the more for it. It was a tentative start at some acceptance on Bella's part and to be honest that is definatly more than Edward deserves. Sigh...But I still love our misfit Edward and secretly hope he succeeds in setting things straight.



Author's Response:

Yes it is more than he deserves, but he has a long road ahead of him just the same.  Bella is really broken and afraid to let anyone in.....as for Jasper, we had so much fun writing him.  He is so blunt.....lol.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Cry

Awww Edward is goin to have so many words to atone for. There is so much that Bella feels and yet she doesn't even know the half of all the pain Edward has been thru as well. *sigh* It will be great when they both can really talk and begin to heal.



Author's Response:

Neither of them fully appreciate the depths of the other's devastation...

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: How to Save a Life

Awww this chapter has definatly made me feel warm fuzzies and I am deliriously happy. Though I may have some heated words with that aunt of thiers...gggrrrrr...

It's great that Edward was there to stitch Bella back up and maybe now he has an inkling of what Bella has been through. He destroyed that girl and I better see him work his ass off to make it right. (ok enough of my rants)

Can't wait for more...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Drop in the Ocean

Hmm I just love how Edward is taking care of Bella...poor girl is so broken and really needs a hand putting herself back together. To bad the one that broke her so badly is the one who will put her back together. Aunt Betsy needs to have her lips sewed shut...grrrr. I am in utter awe of this magnificant story and have been pimping it out to all my friends...



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for the pimpage, sweet!  They both need some fixing and it is ironic that the only people who can heal them is them.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Storm

Oh dear lord there are no words for how much I love this...

All is so incredible...will some of the healing between them be coming?



Author's Response:

The healing has commenced, although it will be a long road.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Closer

This was FABULOUS!!! I cried, I screemed, everything... I am so excited that some communication has started even if Bella was drunk. I am so anxious for those two to talk and healing to begin....PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!



Author's Response:

The liquid courage certainly opened her up and removed her verbal filter!  Methinks it would have taken a lot longer to get to this point without this happening...

 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Two is Better than One

*Does happy snoopy dance because she got a notice that this story was updated*

Wow excellent strides made by both parties!! i was very teary as they talked to each other about what they felt. It was heartbreaking to think Bella is hiding because she thinks she is asking for it. I sure hope Edward can help bring back the the Bella we loved.

What does "Je ne veux plus jamais briser ton coeur" mean?



Author's Response:

I am so glad to see you enjoyed the update. Edward is going to have to be patient with Bella and reassure her a LOT!

The last line means "I will never break your heart again."

Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Banana Pancakes

OH MY GOD THOSE LESSONS WERE PRICELESS!!!

Seriously laughed thru the entire lessons cuz my imagination was definatly running amuck. It was great. Oh lord the parka comment had me rolling. It's almost 2am here but god in heaven this is so worth staying up for...who needs to be coherant at work anyways right...

I LOVED IT!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!  We're glad it gave you a laugh:)

 

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Losing My Religion

HOLY HALE!!! A drunk Carlisle and Charlie! You guys are just the greatest!!! That was one heck of a bachelor party. Awww isn't drunk Edward delightfully uninhibited. Bella sure got alot of blurting as well. LoL...I wonder what tomorrow will bring. I sure can't wait to be privy to that conversation!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Fragile

Dear lord my good authors, I'm surprised that the water didn't evaporate from that hot tub. Talk about scary...the idea of Edward being gone...gasp...don't even want to think about it. I am glad however that this happened seeing that it is opening them both up about things.



Author's Response:

We’re so glad you enjoyed it!  Yeah, there was a scare at the beginning, but it needed to happen for the end to occur...

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: I'd come for you

Oh Hale Yeah!!! I think I scared all the crickets away...lol

*Excitedly bouncing around* I am so excited to see how much progress these two have made. This chapter was magnificent!!! I can't wait to see what the next few days holds. Did I mention I am thrilled.



Author's Response:

It was a really fun chapter for us!  To finally move these two forward felt wonderful!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: As Time Goes By

OMG are you trying to kill me!! How could you leave me hanging like that!!?

Ok so buzzing with excitement...Alice and Jasper are married! Le Amore! It was a good day and Bella realizing that she needed Edward too...sigh. However your little cliffie is going to have me anxiously awaiting your next update. Soon....PLEASE!



Author's Response:

*shrugs*  We had to leave it somewhere:)  Hopefully, the next chapter will be up soon!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Hallelujah

Holy Fucking Hale...THAT WAS HOT!!!! DAMN I think I need to run and take a cold shower. WOW what a first for both of them. I am just dizzy with excitement for these two. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter!! *runs off to take a shower*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Nightingale

OMG!! * tears fall as I look for something to throw* Oh why did that evil bitch of an aunt have to ruin this for them. Aaaahhh I cried with them as Bella was asking him to let her go!! Oh the heartache!! Please udate soon so that I won't be crying to long.



Author's Response:

It's going to get harder before it is easier, but don't worry, we're HEA girls.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Goodbye My Lover

Holy Freakin Hale!! Wow such pain...will she ever find her way back to herself? I will wave my lil team Bella flag until she learns not to give up on herself. This was an emotional chapter but I'm glad to have her POV from when Bella left. They are both in such pain...sigh

I love Charlie for talking to them both, he is such an awesome dad.



Author's Response:

Charlie does, indeed, rock.  She's a hot mess, but she's trying not to isolate herself completely.

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: I'll Be There for You

OMG!!! Oh please don't let him make a mistake with Tanya!! I think I'm gonna be sick...*nears hyperventilations...breath!*

*chants...believe in your authors, believe in your authors...*

Please Please PLEASE update soon



Author's Response:

Have some faith.
Everything will work out just fine.
Thanks for the review

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Running to Stand Still

Ok Edward better have a damn good reason for not answering his calls...grrr i just don't understand him some days. I realize I'll get in his head soon but at this time its just how i feel.

Three cheers for our favorite southern boy! I am glad he is such a fuckawesome friend. I do hope Bella and Edward start pulling their shit together because they are miserable without each other.

I will anxiously await the next chapter



Author's Response:

You'll definitely get the reason Edward didn't call back in the next chapter.  It may not be what you're thinking...

 

And Jasper to the rescue!  He was JUST what Bella needed to move forward and get back home.

 

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: My love

Holy Fucking Hale ladies! God that was so hot it was scorching and believe it or not a damn cold shower is in order to pull my melted ass back together! Tanya really is a bitch and i couldn't be more proud of Bella, had my pom  poms out and was cheerin her on! It was brilliantly written, now if you lovely ladies will excuse me there is a cold shower waiting for me...

 




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