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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5907]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hmm seems like Edward has alot of demons to work with... listening to his story was heartbreaking but couldn't help but feel that he is on the road to recovery. That in itself is beautiful to read. Can't wait to read more.

 
Good Enough by jackbauer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 540]
Summary:

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Edward is a Forensic Psychologist for the FBI.   He’s the best in his field and the worst at relationships.  He has a habit of falling in love quickly but falling out of love just as fast when the women don’t measure up to his ideal.  When he gets shot by a criminal he’s been profiling, his nurse will take care of more than just his medicine, but is she good enough?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 44593
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: September 30, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No begging or bribing necessary. I have an outragous love for forensics and anthropology so I am thrilled you are writing this story...i will excitedly be following the story can't wait to hear who James is and why Edward got shot



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  James is a bad guy- more to come soon. 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Masen is the hopless romantic...LOL god lord he's already planning the wedding. *snicker* Well I sure hope his angel lives up to his expectations. I can't wait to see how Alice is won over.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooohhh Edward will you never learn? The whole idea of a sponge bath from Bella had me on uproarious laughter...when he didn't  *ahem* feel anything that did it...laughed until tears were in my eyes. I wonder if he knows they usually try and numb the area when a cathater is inserted. At least that is what one of my pre med friends says they do. I wonder if that's true or if he was pulling my leg. If it is it would explain why he had no reaction to her...



Author's Response:

Yes, I did some research on this - unfortunately.  Apparently sponge baths usually cause excitement, but having a catheter removed usually quelches excitement for a while.  I googled it.  :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So my dear what exactly are your goals for this chapter? Hope you attain it...

Seems like it would be a first for Edward to have anyone get him...though with that boy it's  wonder...LOL

I am just dying to know how the date between Emmett and Bella goes...but i can't help but smile at the thought of Emmett meeting Rosalie...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL...I could only imagine the date Bella had with Edward. *giggles uncontrolably* Siiiiggggghhhh you would think with Edward being a profiler he'd have a clue that his dream gal is there with him... I did enjoy the conversation about Dr. Dork (such an appropriate name) and Alice taking Bella shopping...it so Alice

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

As you wish...

LOL...it seems everyone around Edward sees the potential with Bella than even he's willing to admit. The whole crack about being voted off the island had me in stiches...Seriously enjoyin the ride

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Why does Edward doing something dumber not surprise me...sigh that boy never learns does he... lol

*light bulb lights up* Oh for the love of all that is Holy! PLEASE don't let it be something dumb with Nurse-flirts-alot...

Excited to see where you take this story though



Author's Response:

OH NO!  I would never do that!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

You better believe Edward is dumbest before the dawn...loL I think I like that sayig as well...

Edward really has to stop instantly falling in love with every other girl he meets or he's gonna loose the one that really matters...lol I wonder when he finally figures that one out.

If I were Bella I'd slap him a time or two...sigh...this should get interesting fairly quick...I can't wait to hear what his friends and family tell him when he explains why Bella is mad at him...*uncontrolable giggles escape*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wouldn't dare dream of killing you my dear...I am enjoyin the story so well and I have to wonder if Edward is gonna do something stupid again. LOL I agree with Jasper in that Edward is extemly dense.

Did I mention I was enjoying the story.... =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh boy...you have alot of work to do with that boy..LOL

Seriously, dense of Edward not to see the girl of his dreams right before him. *sigh* Maybe movin in together will help that messed up line of thinking for him.

Love the comment earlier...Men are animals some are just easier to train...I think I'm gonna put that on a t-shirt...its awesome!

Can't wait for more...Until we meet again...

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

LOL...YOU my dear are just to much...but I think instead of howling like a wolf I'll just drool and say "Mmmmmm Jacob..."

No need to hypnotize me to get me to review....I am enjoying this story so much that I am recruiting new readers so they can share my joy. =)

Yes I agree Edward got schooled and hope that boy starts learning a thing or two during his house arrest. God you gotta love Alice and her accidental misshaps when it comes to clothes...so like her to change Bella's clothing options. I hope you update soon as I am excited to see what happens next...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

OME doesn't even cover for the "f"-up Edward just pulled. He better watch it cuz Rose just may remove some choice body parts...LOL... Run Edward Run!

Only 3 chapters left...sigh...have enjoyed reading your story and just LOVE you as well...Until we meet again.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ok my vote is not killing Edward in the end but a little pain is in order for being such a dumb ass.

Dun dun dun... has James's men finally caught up with Edward? Eeeepppp! Oh what a cliff hanger... I am gonna wonder what's going to happen until you update next...please don't leave me hanging for to long. 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

*GASP* this chapter...there are no words...adrenaline still pumping. Victoria is truly a vicious bitch and not sad to see her go...

Poor Bella...Oh i hope Edward doesn't go all emo and shit and leave Bella. I'll kill him myself if he does.

I will anxiously await your next update so please don't leave my hanging for long...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ohhh this journey is over...*sniff* I love that Edward is finally giving Bella her sponge bath and have to laugh over James being dead...yes I know  I am cruel but hey now Edward and Bella can be together.

Will definatly try and find controlled burn...another story...another adventure...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow...had to head and falls on couch....

Well it has been one heck of a ride and am thrilled by how it all ended. I just cracked up over all his failed marriage proposals. It was great! Not to fear already started Controlled burn and am having a blast reading it. Alas until we meet again.



Author's Response:

Thanks friend.  I have a appreciated all your support and nice words!

 
Summary:

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Edward is a romance novelist who moves to the sleepy town of Forks, WA so he can get some writing done, without distractions. Enter Bella, the waitress at the local diner. What is in Bella's past that makes her apprehensive, and can Edward break the barrier?

A big thank you to Readergoof for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 58870
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: First Date

LOL Well I Do believe our resident romance novelist is smitten. It really is cute and can't wiat to see what transpires...sigh... lights and dinner with Edward...swoon.



Author's Response:

Swoon indeed! And oh so smitten!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Deeper

YAY! They are going on a date!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Pain and Blossoming Love

The night definalty ended on a good note. What a tool Mike was...jeesh really...pounding the secretary on the desk? I'm glad Bella got away from that jackass.

It's good to see they are both talking...and ummm...Bella...don't think that man is going to run. LOL...lets just hope he survives Jake.



Author's Response:

Isn't he a tool?!?! And the talk is out of the way, YAY! Now to see how Jake handles things....:)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: I Can't Help Myself

Ohhh I wonder what Bella went through 6 mo ago...way to go to peak my interest...



Author's Response:

You will find out soon!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Other Guy

LOL...Poor Edward...so much temptation for a gentleman but I'm willing to bet dollars to pesos that Bella is having a hard time retraining herself as well.



Author's Response:

Oh she is certainly having a hard time too!!! But, who wouldn't be with Edward????

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: I'll Carry You Home

LoL...looks like Edward and Jacob have reached an understanding. The day was awesome!!



Author's Response:

That they do!!! Boys always work it out...either that or they kill each other haha! Glad you liked it

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: D-Day

Yes!! Score two for Cullen. Edward really is doing about as well as can be expected with the men in Bella's life. I can't wait to see what comes up next.



Author's Response:

Yummy goodness is what comes up next for you! And he is a freakin saint dealin with their crap

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: You Are Mine

Oh Hale Yeah!!! That was beautiful. Truly a beautiful night; poetry on writing.

The only thing I am wondering on at this moment is if Edward will eventually meet the infamous Mike. I would love to see that little confrontation.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! You made me smile! And perhaps he will meet Mike.....

 




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