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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
Status: Member
Member Since: July 01, 2009

Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!

I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.

I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.

10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04


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What if Bella realized Edward was planning to leave her after the incident at her 18th Birthday party? Could she let his family give up the one place where they could be truly comfortable? Would she be able to disappear to give the Cullens a chance to live normal lives? She has to find the strength to walk away before Edward has a chance to break her heart – something she is certain she would not be able to survive.

Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 65697
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: June 03, 2010

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Face Time

AAaaaacccckkk so close yet so far. Oh to feel Edward's desolation is hard to read. I do hope he gets a chance to talk with Bella but can't really blame the girl for hiding out...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Consequences

Holy Crow...I don't know what to think...other than maybe this is one hell of a way to make Edward realize how it would be without Bella. I think Bella leaving on her own terms is an AWESOME twist!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Inevitable

Holy Hale!! That was one riveting chapter. More puzzle pieces for Bella to put two and two together...ahhh she's a smart girl she'll figure it out

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Meteors

Awwww *Getting to know you slowly plays in my mind* It's great that they all are reconnecting. LoL...I can't believe it's Jacob going to Jacksonville. Holy freaking Hale! I just can't wait to see how you finish weaving this story. Some things I think I've figured out but you have me second guessing myself on the rest.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Invitataion

I cant help but swoon at the lengths Edward is going thru to let Bella know how much he cares. I very hard lesson to learn but I love how your making them better for it. I can't wait to see if Bella invites Edward in...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Reunion

Ahhh what a smart approach. Yes Bella does owe it to herself to know her choices better. I am thrilled that Jacob and Edward have put thier differences aside in order to work together to keep Bella safe. I am just dying to see where you take this so please update soon... =)

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Gala

Wow Bella isn't the only confused one here. I hope all makes sense to us soon.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Sunlight

OMG are you TRYING to give me a heart attack! While I wonder why Bella is feeling the way she is i do sympathize with her. Will she ever let Edward back in her heart? Sigh...I do hope so. Gees that Victoria is relentless!

Author's Response:

Aw man, you caught me. I was trying to give you a heart attack :-o

Bella and Edward have some serious issues to deal with but Victoria will not go gentle into that good night. She has some major anger issues that girl.



Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: February 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Encounter

Way to go Jake!!! That run in with Victoria ia just a bit scary. I am so glad she now has to think twice about what she is up too...

Proud of Edward to for not completly flipping his lid...

Author's Response:

Jake is all kinds of cool.I love that he was in full control with Bella right there. Sam could learn a thing or two.

Edward is trying to be a better man...




With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5903]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well just found this story and can't help but be intrigued....

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well Holy Hale and then some...Bella and interesting twist

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow Edward really has a fucked up life but it seems like he is slowly trying to come out of it. I find it funny that it took him 3 months to finally wake up and see Bella. Hmmm should be interesting now that is brain is catchin up...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So know Bella knows...sure hope Edward doens't clam up and run and hide. It does seem pretty shocking that Jasper would hide such a thing from Bella but listening to his reasoning...well can't blame him. I think  it's great that Jasper is Edward's sponsor, it really is a great match. I wonder where you will take this and curiuos for more.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hmm seems like Edward has alot of demons to work with... listening to his story was heartbreaking but couldn't help but feel that he is on the road to recovery. That in itself is beautiful to read. Can't wait to read more.

Good Enough by jackbauer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]


Edward is a Forensic Psychologist for the FBI.   He’s the best in his field and the worst at relationships.  He has a habit of falling in love quickly but falling out of love just as fast when the women don’t measure up to his ideal.  When he gets shot by a criminal he’s been profiling, his nurse will take care of more than just his medicine, but is she good enough?

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 44593
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2009 Updated: September 30, 2009

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No begging or bribing necessary. I have an outragous love for forensics and anthropology so I am thrilled you are writing this story...i will excitedly be following the story can't wait to hear who James is and why Edward got shot

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  James is a bad guy- more to come soon. 

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So Masen is the hopless romantic...LOL god lord he's already planning the wedding. *snicker* Well I sure hope his angel lives up to his expectations. I can't wait to see how Alice is won over.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ooohhh Edward will you never learn? The whole idea of a sponge bath from Bella had me on uproarious laughter...when he didn't  *ahem* feel anything that did it...laughed until tears were in my eyes. I wonder if he knows they usually try and numb the area when a cathater is inserted. At least that is what one of my pre med friends says they do. I wonder if that's true or if he was pulling my leg. If it is it would explain why he had no reaction to her...

Author's Response:

Yes, I did some research on this - unfortunately.  Apparently sponge baths usually cause excitement, but having a catheter removed usually quelches excitement for a while.  I googled it.  :)

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So my dear what exactly are your goals for this chapter? Hope you attain it...

Seems like it would be a first for Edward to have anyone get him...though with that boy it's  wonder...LOL

I am just dying to know how the date between Emmett and Bella goes...but i can't help but smile at the thought of Emmett meeting Rosalie...

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL...I could only imagine the date Bella had with Edward. *giggles uncontrolably* Siiiiggggghhhh you would think with Edward being a profiler he'd have a clue that his dream gal is there with him... I did enjoy the conversation about Dr. Dork (such an appropriate name) and Alice taking Bella so Alice


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

As you wish... seems everyone around Edward sees the potential with Bella than even he's willing to admit. The whole crack about being voted off the island had me in stiches...Seriously enjoyin the ride

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Why does Edward doing something dumber not surprise me...sigh that boy never learns does he... lol

*light bulb lights up* Oh for the love of all that is Holy! PLEASE don't let it be something dumb with Nurse-flirts-alot...

Excited to see where you take this story though

Author's Response:

OH NO!  I would never do that!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

You better believe Edward is dumbest before the dawn...loL I think I like that sayig as well...

Edward really has to stop instantly falling in love with every other girl he meets or he's gonna loose the one that really I wonder when he finally figures that one out.

If I were Bella I'd slap him a time or two...sigh...this should get interesting fairly quick...I can't wait to hear what his friends and family tell him when he explains why Bella is mad at him...*uncontrolable giggles escape*

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wouldn't dare dream of killing you my dear...I am enjoyin the story so well and I have to wonder if Edward is gonna do something stupid again. LOL I agree with Jasper in that Edward is extemly dense.

Did I mention I was enjoying the story.... =)

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh have alot of work to do with that boy..LOL

Seriously, dense of Edward not to see the girl of his dreams right before him. *sigh* Maybe movin in together will help that messed up line of thinking for him.

Love the comment earlier...Men are animals some are just easier to train...I think I'm gonna put that on a t-shirt...its awesome!

Can't wait for more...Until we meet again...


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

LOL...YOU my dear are just to much...but I think instead of howling like a wolf I'll just drool and say "Mmmmmm Jacob..."

No need to hypnotize me to get me to review....I am enjoying this story so much that I am recruiting new readers so they can share my joy. =)

Yes I agree Edward got schooled and hope that boy starts learning a thing or two during his house arrest. God you gotta love Alice and her accidental misshaps when it comes to like her to change Bella's clothing options. I hope you update soon as I am excited to see what happens next...



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