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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

 

The summer before her junior year in college, Bella moves to be closer to her father. All the while adding some much needed space from her crazed frat-boy ex-boyfriend. Being there for her father comes with the fresh start she needs. (One without men to complicate it) Until, one evening after her shift the most gorgeous man she has ever laid eyes on...comes to her aid. He causes Bella to almost forget the vow she's taken against the opposite sex. Almost. That is until the realization that he's a frat boy and she's never going there again. No matter how those intense green eyes make her feel.

What will happen when Bella transfers to the University of Washington and meets a handsome coed, Edward? Will she find peace from her past or be stuck playing the part?

 

(thanks to ekimmuh for her help with the summary)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 177757
[Report This] Published: August 03, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Chances & Choices

Oh Holy Hale! I sure hope her secret admirer is that tool Mike...shudders to think of it. As much as I want Bella to tell Edward about her past first, I don't care if Alice tells him first. Bella has serious issues to deal with so if she doesn't spill soon I am not opposed to Alice tell Edward the 411...

Can't wait...



Author's Response:

Thanks AJ, I just sent ch11 to be validated...hopefully it'll be up tomorrow sometime :) Thanks for the review though bb :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11Predators & Erotica

OMG that stalker of Bella's is uber creepy and gives me chills.

Mmmm Bella's poems certainly are *ahem* inspiring to say the least. I sure hope that her friends are able to keep her from her evil stalker...frankly that guy strikes me as the kind that would do anything to have her.



Author's Response:

AJ!!!!!! Thanks for leaving me some sugar, sugar!! ha-ha... And don't worry with Ali, Char. Edward, Emmett and Jasper.....Bella has a pretty good protection team.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Bimbo Brigade Bitch Slaps

Well hot damn that was awesome! I loved the flashbacks, I'm with Edward we need to go pummel Mike's ass for what he has done. I am thrilled that Bella finally let Edward in. This date is goin well and can't help but laugh at the bitch brigade gettin a good verbal smackdown...



Author's Response:

Thanks AJ, So happy you're enjoying it. And bless you for another awesome review m'dear.

xoxox

il

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Swizzle Stick Licks

LOL a good night for both Bella and Edward...finally some major pieces of the walls coming down. Our mystery stalker is seriously deranged. I can't wait to see what that nutball is going to try and open Edward's eyes to.



Author's Response:

Awww thanks hun, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

xoxox

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Raging Poet

Sorry couldn't leave longer review...computer connection sketchy but know i loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks bb for leaving me some love even with the PC FAIL.

 

p.s It's Tanya at the door. :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Alice--C*ckblock Extraordinaire

Sorry for taking so long to review...RL kicking my butt in a serious way and the frat guys here have been giving my friend a hard time recently so this story kind of had to be put on the back burner for me to deal with my issues with frat guys. I know its a lousy excuse but my friend was really hurt by this guy and i guess i kind of steered clear because of it. I know have her on the straight and narrow and feel better about reading.

I just loved that James is now going to be watched. LoL...OMG Bella kicking Tanya's ass was just priceless.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has moved home to Forks. It's only a matter of time until she crosses paths with Edward Cullen, her former best friend and first love. They parted on bad terms years ago, and both thought that they had moved on... All-human, LEMONS.

touchstone67 - hollaaaaa

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 132849
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Sweetest Thing

Wow...wow...I don't know about you but I am really confused as to what exactly Edward wants? It's no wonder Bella is so wary...honey I'd be wary too...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue / Carlisle's News

Uggg those two definatly need to talk to one another...They are needlessly hurting themselves. I am thrilled with how this is going and can't wait to how you play this all out...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue / Carlisle's News

Oh my dear I know all about RL sucking...I'm going thru a very hard time in my life right now and the only bright spot in my life at the moment are my little loves and my stories. Knowing that some of my stories have happy endings encourage me to fight for my own HEA. I do hope you continue to the end as I am enjoying this and am loving how you are weaving your story. It is hard for Bella and Edward right now but this will make them stronger...

 
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Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Hello, Alice

Ok getting serious whiplash from the back and forth messages Edward is putting out there, and I am dying to know the full story of what happened between them four years ago...from what I gather it is one hell of a story.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Emmett's House

No offense but Edward needs his Ass kicked 12 ways from sunday and then some. Poor Bella is going to be an emotional mess and I sure hope she slaps the hell out of Edward next time she sees him...

 
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Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: The Cottage

Wow I am stunned at some of the things revealed. What the Hell does Jake have to do with any of this... I have a ton of theories so I can't wait to see if any of then are valid...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: A Fair Warning

Seriously what the fuck is up with Edward...Ok I gotta know what happened back then...

Pads off to read the next chapters ASAP!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The New Girl

I have no idea why in the world Edward is being a major ass but can't wait for your reveals...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue / Carlisle's News

Holy Hell Edward may be a daddy!! Eeewww and with Jessica no less, boy has no taste in his women at this point. I wonder what Edward is freakin out about? I just found this story and already am dying to know how you weave your tale...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Dr. Cullen Strikes Again

OMG Charlie! What the hell was that man thinking!?! I do hope he is getting better.

OH. MY. GOD! Bella lost a baby? What in the world. I can't help but wonder what happened...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Stay

How in the world did everyone else find out Edward was adopted? There be a mystery afoot there.

Hmm is the baby Bella lost Edward's? Oh dear this is just to exciting... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: The Truth

Holy Freakin Hale!!! And he even dated Jessica of all things. That boy better feel like an ant right about now...

This is about the time where everything worse before it gets better huh...bring it on!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Horrible Truth

OMG!!! Stares at screen in absolute stunned silence...there are no words...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Insensitive

OMG  YOUR GONNA KILL ME!!! HEARTFAIL IS AN UNDERSTATEMENT!!

Oh man really? First Jessica is pregnant and if its Edward's I mean ewwwww, and then the whole adoption debacle...I'm going out of my mind here. I will believe is my mantra now so please update soon. I know these times have to be roung but please please throw me a biscuit and give me hope this will work out well soon...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: The Cullens

Ok so sneaking on during my breaks to read cuz i'm addicted like that...

I'm just a bit confused as to what's going on but being the awesome author you are; I'm sure to be clued in sometime soon. I am anxiously awaiting to see how this all plays out.

 
Summary:

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What if Bella realized Edward was planning to leave her after the incident at her 18th Birthday party? Could she let his family give up the one place where they could be truly comfortable? Would she be able to disappear to give the Cullens a chance to live normal lives? She has to find the strength to walk away before Edward has a chance to break her heart – something she is certain she would not be able to survive.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 65697
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: June 03, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Decision

Just found your story and must admit this first chapter is very intriguing...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: More to Lose

Awww Hell honey I couldn't be more excited about this story. It definalty is different to many of the other fics I have read. Color me suprised but have been pleasantly surprised. I love it.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Discovery

About falls off the chair! How could you leave me hanging like that! Oh dear lord those two are suffering miserably. I wonder what happened that caused Edward to feel such pain. This is all so exciting.

PS did I mention I love EPOV's? Well i case not, I love it! It helps me understand what is going on for both of them

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Devastation

Wow...I am stunned..the emotions that are in this chapter...Aaaaggggg it is just so heartwenching.



Author's Response:

It was difficult to write as well.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

~SP

 




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