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Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Crickets by HaleyDK Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a lonely aspiring journalist who just moved to New York City. Edward Cullen is a recent college graduate in the midst of a quarter-life crisis. Will their individual baggage keep them apart?

 
Banner by Inside-the-Disarray.  Thanks, lady!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 35305
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2009 Updated: November 08, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: There Is A Light That Never Goes Out

While I feel Bella was  a bit melodramatic...I kinda of see her point but honey I wouldnt have held it against him...but alas I tend to be very forgiving for the most part. I do hope they work this out...

Please update soon...will be pondering the possibilites until then... =)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the reviews! I've loved reading them all.

She was definitely melodramatic.  They both made mistakes- Edward in his initial lie (no matter how well-intentioned and honorable it was) and Bella in her using his lie to push him away.  Bella's response was a gut reaction, and I think that this is part of her maturing process... at least I hope it is! :)

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: History Sticks to Your Feet

Shnikes! That was intense for awhile and I honestly felt anxiety myself over Edward's welfare. I sure hope you don't keep us waiting long...

One interesting  fic I am reading  right now is Trust in Advertising by vgm and A diseased Affair by EJ summers? I think... to be honest I am so bad with names...but can see the titles and synopsis clearly in my head



Author's Response:

Nope, definitely won't keep you waiting- the next chapter is in the validation queue right now. 

How fantastic is Trust in Advertising? I was so sad to read the last chapter, I really wanted it to go on forever.  I haven't heard of A Diseased Affair, I'll definitely look it up!

I love Breaking Bella by sixeightshuffle, it's pretty fantastic.

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Some Racing, Some Stopping

No probs with your "articial lemony sweetner" as you put it...

It may have been awk as you mentioned buy you did well. I also have an overactive imagination so your words still painted a vivid picture in my head. You sure left one heck of a cliffhanger so will anxiously await your next chapter...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the reassurance! The next chapter is in the queue, so hopefully you won't be waiting long :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Inches and Falling

Wow a wedding to plan and a proclomation of love...How could I not love this! It was very interesting how this all came about. Glad Edward is not as anxious and is finding some peace. I can't wait to see where thier relationship goes from here.



Author's Response:

 Thanks so much! It's definitely all been a process for them.  There are actually only like six chapters left, so they have some more ground to cover :)

Thanks for the review!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Spectacular Views

Wow so much going on...

Glad Edward brought Bella over...LOL Alice, birthday parties, and dresses...OH MY! Poor Bella is gonna go insane. Wonder what's up with Jake?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Spectacular Views

Wow so much going on...

Glad Edward brought Bella over...LOL Alice, birthday parties, and dresses...OH MY! Poor Bella is gonna go insane. Wonder what's up with Jake?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Don't Change Your Plans

Oh I just love Edward for putting in his two cents worth and feel it will be a party that Bella will love! I don't know if I can take the suspense for to long...so please don't leave me hanging to long...Pretty PLEASE

 
All I Need by Juliamine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Companion story to It Was Only His Baby written in EPOV. I suggest you read IWOHB chapters first.

Bella and Alice want what any couple wants, a baby. Bella asks Edward to donate his sperm to help her and Alice start a family. He agrees, but with one condition. What will Bella choose, and what does it mean to her relationship with Edward? A/B and E/B pairings. Lemons.

 

All I need


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 13955
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2009 Updated: September 08, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Flesh For the Win

I love it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keeping writing in EPOV it really does help with understanding some of Edward's reactions. I feel sorry for the fact that Edward has pinned for Bella for so long but he in a ways deserved it after the stupid decisions he's made over the years. I do hope they figure something out and it would be nice to read if he really does want a baby with Bella. I wonder what will happen when all this comes to light and i anxiously await your timing. I am absolutly loving the story!



Author's Response:

Since you said please... j/k yes I will keep writing his POV :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Unspoken Apology

Awww I am such a sucker for this Edward...granted I don't always agree with his tactics, but Good Lord he's loved her for years! Can't help but love him too.

Yes I am just dying to know what Edward was thinking over thier hiking trip....I can't wait!

 
Summary:

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With medical bills, school bills, not to mention rent, piling up, Bella looks for a way to dig herself out of debt.  Rose tells her about a new business she’s gotten into.  Bella tries her hand at the business, and ends up paired with Dr. Edward Cullen.  But can she separate business and pleasure?

 

Here's a link to the thread.  We'd love to hear your thoughts! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5822


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 43549
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Aftermath

Oh dear lord thanks for the update cuz those horrible images of Mike just kept coming to mind. *Breaths a sigh of relief* I feel for Bella and hope things start looking up for her. I can't wait for your next updates.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Whooo I can see this becoming a favorite...I hope you remain happy; I love updates. I find it hard myself that Rose is an escort being the independant woman that she is. I can't wait to see where you take this.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Setting up shop

*Loud Alice like squel* I am thrilled to get a new chapter and it warms my heart that Rose is such a good friend. I can't wait to see what kind of function Mike takes Bella to. I can't wait to read what happens next... 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Mike Newton

Ok I trust you but can I have 2 cookies because Mike is such a fucking prick. I pity Bella for what she had to do but am infuriated at Mike for his lame ass comments.

Please update soon...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 : Emmett, the Philosopher

Ok EEEeeeewwwwwww!!!

Alright it's out of my system now but the gag reflex was in full force when He was screwing Victoria...full body shudder. Sounds like Tanya was a hoe and a half.

Ohhhh he got Isabella's card....I can't wait for that phone call....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Back in Business

Wow you two have deliciously devious minds...It's awesome. I am so happy Bella has had better dates since Mike...yuck what a fuckin sleeze. I can't wait to see what happens with Bella and Sam...it sounds like that is going to be a good time....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: The Wedding

OH Hale Yeah...that wedding went well in my opinion. I am really happy for Leah and Sam and can't help but laugh over the whole thing. Sigh...Eric is just the cutest thing. Ohh I hope the good doctor calls soon.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: A picture's worth a thousand hard ons...

OH Hale YEAH!!!

We are definalty getting somewhere now!! I can't wait to see this little get together. I am sure Bella will have Aro eating out of her hand in no time.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Blackmail is such a dirty word...

Ohhh the genius that is this chapter, while I cringe at the idea of Bella meeting D. I gotta admit Mike got what he deserved. It was pure brilliance!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: A Guilt Trip and A Favor

Uh Oh D strikes me as creepy and I shudder to think what he would want as a favor for repayment.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Dr. Cullen?

While I am happy they finally are meeting how could you leave me hanging like this?!? Shnikes!

Hmm what is Alice up to?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: First Impressions

Ok so their first initial meeting could have been better...LMAO it was rather funny though that Edward had to "relieve" himself.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: A little German goes a long way

Wow that went very well, I wonder when Edward will clue Bella in that he likes her as more than just an excort. Hmmm Jake sounds fishy to me, don't like him. The bartender has me creeped out. LoL...Emmett needs to meet Rose

 
Summary:

 

The summer before her junior year in college, Bella moves to be closer to her father. All the while adding some much needed space from her crazed frat-boy ex-boyfriend. Being there for her father comes with the fresh start she needs. (One without men to complicate it) Until, one evening after her shift the most gorgeous man she has ever laid eyes on...comes to her aid. He causes Bella to almost forget the vow she's taken against the opposite sex. Almost. That is until the realization that he's a frat boy and she's never going there again. No matter how those intense green eyes make her feel.

What will happen when Bella transfers to the University of Washington and meets a handsome coed, Edward? Will she find peace from her past or be stuck playing the part?

 

(thanks to ekimmuh for her help with the summary)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 177757
[Report This] Published: August 03, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Raccoon Eyes

OH how could you leave me hanging like that...are you trying to KILL ME!!

I can only imagine what Edward is going to find. I don't think its Edward at the door as he has a key. If that psyho thinks it's only going to be girls at home I hope he's in for a fuckin surprise...please, please, PLEASE don't leave me hanging for to long.



Author's Response:

LOL I promise I will try not to take long in updating. Love me still? Please.

 

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds like RL needs to bitch slapped as she's been a royal bitch to me as well...lol

I sure hope Bella makes Edward cry as it is only fair...I loved it!!



Author's Response:

Aww man RL can be such a slunt face. boohiss. I hope yours gets better hun

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Shakespearean Smackdowns

Awwww come on why can't I tap that? Perv yes I know but not ashamed of it... =)

I so loved that the bitch brigade got slapped around...it was priceless. Low class whore my ass...Bella and Char are ten times better than those high priced bitches. Indeed best invite ever...

Wow Edward is just the sweetest thing isn't he...



Author's Response:

WOOOHOOOOO...pevy girls unite!

 

ILY bb and your kickass slap down reviews hahaha

 




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