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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
Status: Member
Member Since: July 01, 2009

Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!

I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.

I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.

10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04



With medical bills, school bills, not to mention rent, piling up, Bella looks for a way to dig herself out of debt.  Rose tells her about a new business she’s gotten into.  Bella tries her hand at the business, and ends up paired with Dr. Edward Cullen.  But can she separate business and pleasure?


Here's a link to the thread.  We'd love to hear your thoughts!

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 43549
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Mike Newton

Ok I trust you but can I have 2 cookies because Mike is such a fucking prick. I pity Bella for what she had to do but am infuriated at Mike for his lame ass comments.

Please update soon...

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Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 : Emmett, the Philosopher

Ok EEEeeeewwwwwww!!!

Alright it's out of my system now but the gag reflex was in full force when He was screwing Victoria...full body shudder. Sounds like Tanya was a hoe and a half.

Ohhhh he got Isabella's card....I can't wait for that phone call....

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Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Back in Business

Wow you two have deliciously devious minds...It's awesome. I am so happy Bella has had better dates since Mike...yuck what a fuckin sleeze. I can't wait to see what happens with Bella and sounds like that is going to be a good time....

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Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: The Wedding

OH Hale Yeah...that wedding went well in my opinion. I am really happy for Leah and Sam and can't help but laugh over the whole thing. Sigh...Eric is just the cutest thing. Ohh I hope the good doctor calls soon.

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Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: A picture's worth a thousand hard ons...

OH Hale YEAH!!!

We are definalty getting somewhere now!! I can't wait to see this little get together. I am sure Bella will have Aro eating out of her hand in no time.

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Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Blackmail is such a dirty word...

Ohhh the genius that is this chapter, while I cringe at the idea of Bella meeting D. I gotta admit Mike got what he deserved. It was pure brilliance!

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Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: A Guilt Trip and A Favor

Uh Oh D strikes me as creepy and I shudder to think what he would want as a favor for repayment.

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Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Dr. Cullen?

While I am happy they finally are meeting how could you leave me hanging like this?!? Shnikes!

Hmm what is Alice up to?

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: First Impressions

Ok so their first initial meeting could have been better...LMAO it was rather funny though that Edward had to "relieve" himself.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: A little German goes a long way

Wow that went very well, I wonder when Edward will clue Bella in that he likes her as more than just an excort. Hmmm Jake sounds fishy to me, don't like him. The bartender has me creeped out. LoL...Emmett needs to meet Rose



The summer before her junior year in college, Bella moves to be closer to her father. All the while adding some much needed space from her crazed frat-boy ex-boyfriend. Being there for her father comes with the fresh start she needs. (One without men to complicate it) Until, one evening after her shift the most gorgeous man she has ever laid eyes on...comes to her aid. He causes Bella to almost forget the vow she's taken against the opposite sex. Almost. That is until the realization that he's a frat boy and she's never going there again. No matter how those intense green eyes make her feel.

What will happen when Bella transfers to the University of Washington and meets a handsome coed, Edward? Will she find peace from her past or be stuck playing the part?


(thanks to ekimmuh for her help with the summary)

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 177757
[Report This] Published: August 03, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2010

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Raccoon Eyes

OH how could you leave me hanging like that...are you trying to KILL ME!!

I can only imagine what Edward is going to find. I don't think its Edward at the door as he has a key. If that psyho thinks it's only going to be girls at home I hope he's in for a fuckin surprise...please, please, PLEASE don't leave me hanging for to long.

Author's Response:

LOL I promise I will try not to take long in updating. Love me still? Please.



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Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds like RL needs to bitch slapped as she's been a royal bitch to me as

I sure hope Bella makes Edward cry as it is only fair...I loved it!!

Author's Response:

Aww man RL can be such a slunt face. boohiss. I hope yours gets better hun

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Shakespearean Smackdowns

Awwww come on why can't I tap that? Perv yes I know but not ashamed of it... =)

I so loved that the bitch brigade got slapped was priceless. Low class whore my ass...Bella and Char are ten times better than those high priced bitches. Indeed best invite ever...

Wow Edward is just the sweetest thing isn't he...

Author's Response:

WOOOHOOOOO...pevy girls unite!


ILY bb and your kickass slap down reviews hahaha

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why that devious frat boy. Tanya sounds like a coniving slut and she'll deserve whatever Alice throws at her...LOL which I can't wait to read.

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Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Rumor Mill

LOL boy Edward has a hard time dealing with one rejection. I wonder what Alice would say if she knew such a woman existed...I can't wait to find out

Author's Response:

Alice, dear sweet Alice, will inject herself into the situation-as always lol

 The review rocks thanks AJ

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Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Homobookaphob, Say What!

Oh my God this was awesome! James is such a fuckin asshole...what a pig! I am so glad Emmett is "teaching" him some manners.

Had a roomate once that just about drove me insane. She started off nice, moved in with her to keep her company while her husband was out of state for a job. I was going to school. God that girl complicated my existance when she decided she was gonna find a boyfriend with benefits while her husband was out of town. It was fucked up. Never again did I take on another roomate...she totally killed that experience for me.

Author's Response:

OMG...that sucks...awful roommate. Where I live we call those on the side boyfriends Jodie's When guys go overseas with the military and their significant other gets a new 'friend' that's their Jodie. Thanks so much for the review I think you're awesome.


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Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Isle of Lesbos

Well this is very interesting...ok so I went all research geek and all...LOL

I wasn't to familiar with Sappho so went and found her poems and emersed myself to get a feel for the type of project these three were getting into. I must admit this is gonna be fun to read now that I know more about what's gonna have to be presented. *excitedly bounces around*

Hots for a teacher? Hell ya! I had thee most scrumptious anthropology professor...never had any attention problems there..well with the exception of a few fantasies of course...

Author's Response:

Well aren't you just like me...I am addicted to google...I swear hahaha...Glad you're excite with your bouncing lol...and hawt anthro pro's yum yum!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Misfits and strappy yellow death traps

Fav attention getting outfit: Deep purple v-neck cut wrap around dress that slims my waist and makes my breasts look spectacular...the color brings out my undertones nicely since I have tawny skin.

I loved the shopping spree and definatly think Mike is a tool...I'm dying to know what Kevin gave Bella in that bag...I can't wait to find out...

Author's Response:

hahahah...Monica I'm requesting pictures now, with that description. ;) lol

Mike is def a tool and you're the first to ask about the bag (outside of my beta) ....Sooo yay, I'm glad you paid attention..It will be revealed soon

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 The Unnamed Poet

Ok Revenge on bitch Tanya was awesome...Alice is a devious loving sister...I can't wait to see what she has in store for that tool James.

Who the fuck is ? guess is professor Laurant but could be wrong on that two. Unnamed poet is such a good title for this chapter and I had ablast reading it.

Author's Response:

Alice is hard at work...plotting on that asshat James..

The ?POV, I'm not spilling just yet. Thanks for the review I'm stoked that youlike it so far!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Inebriated Interruptions

Oh hell Bella is not gonna care that Edward has gone stalker on her ass...

And yes have been drunk enough that my friends have had to remind me of my antics from the night before because I don't particular one of a hot tub and crantasia bottle floating comes to mind

Author's Response:

Too hilarious, I have a  great mental of naked drunkedness and floating solo cups in a hot tub. lol Thanks for reviewing AJ I got a shout out for you in the next chapter.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Flirtacious Floozies & Pervy Baristas

I love how your brilliant mind works...Oh the sinful devious pixie that is Alice...God I love her! LOL...Eric is such a tool and coward to boot; would have been interesting to see him get his ass kicked by Edward. Charlotte really is a good friend and with time, will be a good friend to Alice as well. Well my dear things seem to be kicking up a notch and with that let Operation MBWLM (Make Bella Swan Like Me) commence. All I can say is let the games begin!!!

Author's Response:

Awww Thanks hunny!! Did you see my shout out to you in the A/N?? HAHA you always leave the best reviews love!!! Any great ideas on OP: MBSLM????

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Secret Admirers & Ali's Minions

Wow Alice has minions everywhere! I am in utter awe of that willful sprite. This will definatly be an operation to remeber. I like Edward am curious as to how she wrangled so many people into helping but then again maybe it's best we don't know. ;)

I am so curious as to who Bella's stalker first impression is James but certain cryptic comments has me second guessing myself. You keep me on the edge of my seat and am thrilled everytime I get an update notice

Author's Response:

Awwww, AJ, you make me smile. I am stoked that you are liking it so far. I'm trying hard not to give too many hints.

As we all know, Alice is a crazy deviant little person. :)


Thanks for the review bb!!!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Chances & Choices

Oh Holy Hale! I sure hope her secret admirer is that tool Mike...shudders to think of it. As much as I want Bella to tell Edward about her past first, I don't care if Alice tells him first. Bella has serious issues to deal with so if she doesn't spill soon I am not opposed to Alice tell Edward the 411...

Can't wait...

Author's Response:

Thanks AJ, I just sent ch11 to be validated...hopefully it'll be up tomorrow sometime :) Thanks for the review though bb :)

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11Predators & Erotica

OMG that stalker of Bella's is uber creepy and gives me chills.

Mmmm Bella's poems certainly are *ahem* inspiring to say the least. I sure hope that her friends are able to keep her from her evil stalker...frankly that guy strikes me as the kind that would do anything to have her.

Author's Response:

AJ!!!!!! Thanks for leaving me some sugar, sugar!! ha-ha... And don't worry with Ali, Char. Edward, Emmett and Jasper.....Bella has a pretty good protection team.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Bimbo Brigade Bitch Slaps

Well hot damn that was awesome! I loved the flashbacks, I'm with Edward we need to go pummel Mike's ass for what he has done. I am thrilled that Bella finally let Edward in. This date is goin well and can't help but laugh at the bitch brigade gettin a good verbal smackdown...

Author's Response:

Thanks AJ, So happy you're enjoying it. And bless you for another awesome review m'dear.





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