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Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Blackout by MandyLeigh010 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 248]
Summary:

 

All human, Edward and Bella POV. Edward and Bella live in two different worlds, even though they live next to each other. Things get complicated when Edward, the leather jacket wearing cigarette smoking rebel falls for the girl next door.

*Banner by readergoof* : )


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 97025
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Too Pretty

Wow the song exchange was great! I've done that a time or two and it is true...you learn alot about a person by the music they listen to. Poor Edward has no clue he's already got it bad...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Criminal

Going to hell...why no my dear the only criminal thing Bella is guilty of is still being with Emmett. To be honet Emmett is not my favorite person right now and is a horrible boyfriend...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Just to Be the Next to Be With You

Ahhh meeting Daddy for the first time...Bet Edward is sweatin bullets now...LOL

Boy Emmett really doesn't have a clue does he...he's gonna hit the roof when he learns Edward is with Bella...*envisions mayham and is loving it*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Can't Take the Honkey Tonk Outta the Girl

Well dosn't that beat all...considers rearranging James's face... wonder why Edward  bolted?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: A Real Fine Place to Start

*Cheer central* I can't tell you how much I loved that Bella decked James! It was absolutly brilliant and cheered the whole time. *Smiles like a dumbass* It was beyond brilliant. Thank you for that...James is such a jackass. Hmmm now the mystery that is June 18th...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Camp Out

LOL...Wow Bella is such a wicked little vixen now isn't she. I've always had fun camping but can't say that I've ever pitched a tent indoors. What a way to bring camping to a city boy. *snort* Sounds like Emmett and Rosalie are perfect for each other (no suprise there)

 
Summary:

Bella Swan works at a child care center and Edward Cullen is the single dad she falls in love with.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 190579
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Brunch with the Drs Family

Hey hey hey, the morning after was just as scintilating... =)

Brunch with the Cullen's certianly is a lively affair. I love how Alexis opens up with family, it was so cute to watch her be more free, although getting a bump on the head is no fun. I can't wait to see how you progess the relationship with those two...



Author's Response: No the bump was not a fun thing for her. Something like that actually happened to my niece except she hit the dishwasher door that was open at the time. She still has a scar from it. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Babysitting for Dr Right

*Happy Squeal* Yes! After 6 months we are finally getting somewhere. Alexis is such a sweet little girl...I'm sure she won't mind Bella hanging out more with them. I wonder just how much Edward has been doing to get info on Bella...this first date should be quit interesting.

Can't wait...we've got a date with Dr. DILF!



Author's Response: I couldn't let Bella suffer for too long, 6 months was enough. You'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out how Edward is finding out information. Just so you're not let down with the next chapter, there is one more before the actual date. Thanks for the review

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Talk with Jakey Poo

Paging Dr. Edward...think I have pains...say where my heart is...

Well Bella met mama and laughed like crazy reading that she was having daydreams about Edward in front of her...wonder how many of us has ever done that. I must admit to being guilty of that a time or two. Wonder what's gonna happen on thier dates...LOL



Author's Response: Just reading this makes me think of Dr. Edward in his scrubs.......uh where was I, sorry :) The next chapter is their date so you'll find out soon enough what will happen. Thanks for leaving a review that makes me smile and laugh.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Date with Dr. Right

I wonder if Edward is having a little battle with himself about his feelings for Bella and then his wife. It must be hard to lose someone and have to start over. The date went really well and I now I swooned a couple of times. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response: In a later chapter, you'll hear what Edward is thinking. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Dinner and Lunch with the Dr

Well fiddlesticks for Bella...looks like that conversation is going to happen whether she wants it or not. I on the other hand am looking forward to it...

Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response: Yes that conversation will be happening in the next chapter. It's written, I just have to send it to my beta. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Talking About the Past

Wow those two have some pretty life altering pasts...it was fascinating to read about them.*Seeths just thinking about James* James was a complete tool and I am glad he is in jail. It was sad to see Edward relive his time with Tanya but am glad he is healing and getting over her. Yay for family time coming up...



Author's Response: Yes, family time is coming. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Family Dinner at the Dr.'s House

Ahhh dinner was great and *sigh* the dancing was very swoonworthy. Lexi is just a sweetheart and I love her innocence. It cracked me up that Edward was concerned about her playing "doctor" with any of those little boys.

I can't wait for them to talk and finally resolve some issues. I do believe it will help them both



Author's Response: The talk is coming, but it's not in the next chapter. You'll have to wait one more for that. The doctor wouldn't shut up and wanted to have his say. Thanks, glad you liked the chapter.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Dr. DILF has His Say

Wow I do feel better knowing where Edward is coming from. It's not easy starting over and now I don't feel to pissed at him. I am sure Bella will understand but he needs to tell her in order for her to understand. Geesh men! LOL...I love the comment about Edward having his head get in the way...way to funny

 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I enjoyed reading your thoughts.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Talk with the Dr.

Holy Hale Honey that was indeed well worth the wait! I am exstatic that Bella and Edward have talked and moved onward in thier relationship. It is so exciting. Now I know there will be more bumps in the road but I can't wait. Family dinner is coming up and I wonder how  the Cullen's will take to Bella and more importantly how Bella will take to the Cullen's. EEEEkkkk I am dizzy with excitement



Author's Response: Brunch with the Cullens just posted so check it out. Don't forget Bella has already met Esme and Rosalie :) Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Sleepover with the Dr

Well Holy Hale and them some...WTH James is out and working in Edward's yard no less.

I love Bella's determination not to let James get any control over her...way to go girl!! Alexis's party was smashing and sounds like so much fun. I wonder what you have up you sleeve for the next chapter...



Author's Response: The next chapter is my favorite chapter that I've written so far. Though some of the ones I'm writing now are coming in close ;) We haven't seen the last of James that's for sure. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Weekend Getaway with Dr Right

Sigh...Edward is having one hell of a Birthday...Hot damn is it hot!!!

I can't however shake the feeling that James is not as sincere as he claims to be. I sure do hope Bella tells Edward about the lunch thing so James can't use that against Bella...the guy seriously gives me bad vibes... I. Don't. Trust. James!



Author's Response: We haven't seen the last of James. We'll find out in the next chapter if Bella tells Edward about what happened. Thanks for the review.

 
Crickets by HaleyDK Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a lonely aspiring journalist who just moved to New York City. Edward Cullen is a recent college graduate in the midst of a quarter-life crisis. Will their individual baggage keep them apart?

 
Banner by Inside-the-Disarray.  Thanks, lady!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 35305
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2009 Updated: November 08, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: We Are Beautiful, We Are Doomed

Oh noooooo he went home! How in the world are they going to work things out if he's home and she's still in NY?!? I feel bad Edward has been hidin in a hotel but now he has a goal to work towards...sigh...I will anxiously await your next update...



Author's Response:

The next chapter is being validated, so hopefully you won't have too long of a wait!

Bella knows that she messed up, so maybe the ball is in her court? They definitely both have a lot of personal growth that needs to happen and big goals in both their individual and collective futures.

Thanks so much for the review!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: About A Girl

I'm intrigued, so...onward!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Holiday

LOL...Alice and her "babies" sound like a handful...and could the tutu be a throw out to Legally Blond and the nefarious Bruiser...LOL

I am just dying to see what happens when Bella meet the family...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: You're So Damn Hot

Akkkk a cliffhanger...albeit a very appropriate cliffhanger...

Don't blame the Bella for zoning...geesh would happen to anyone

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Manhattan

LOL...yes first the drink in the lap, then mace in the face. Bella is definatly making points with Edward. I can't wait to see what happens next

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Waiting

LOL i can't help but laugh at Edward and his trips to Brookland...cracks me up. Glad Bella got her first article up, and that Jake better quit avoiding his friend

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Past the Sleep

A bit of a downer but now I feel I know Edward just a bit better

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Still Fighting It

Yay they aren't fighting it anymore! Bella is right...that boy to hard on himself...maybe she could help him out of it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




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