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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Bella Swan works at a child care center and Edward Cullen is the single dad she falls in love with.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 190579
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Family Dinner at the Dr.'s House

Ahhh dinner was great and *sigh* the dancing was very swoonworthy. Lexi is just a sweetheart and I love her innocence. It cracked me up that Edward was concerned about her playing "doctor" with any of those little boys.

I can't wait for them to talk and finally resolve some issues. I do believe it will help them both



Author's Response: The talk is coming, but it's not in the next chapter. You'll have to wait one more for that. The doctor wouldn't shut up and wanted to have his say. Thanks, glad you liked the chapter.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Dr. DILF has His Say

Wow I do feel better knowing where Edward is coming from. It's not easy starting over and now I don't feel to pissed at him. I am sure Bella will understand but he needs to tell her in order for her to understand. Geesh men! LOL...I love the comment about Edward having his head get in the way...way to funny

 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I enjoyed reading your thoughts.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Talk with the Dr.

Holy Hale Honey that was indeed well worth the wait! I am exstatic that Bella and Edward have talked and moved onward in thier relationship. It is so exciting. Now I know there will be more bumps in the road but I can't wait. Family dinner is coming up and I wonder how  the Cullen's will take to Bella and more importantly how Bella will take to the Cullen's. EEEEkkkk I am dizzy with excitement



Author's Response: Brunch with the Cullens just posted so check it out. Don't forget Bella has already met Esme and Rosalie :) Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Sleepover with the Dr

Well Holy Hale and them some...WTH James is out and working in Edward's yard no less.

I love Bella's determination not to let James get any control over her...way to go girl!! Alexis's party was smashing and sounds like so much fun. I wonder what you have up you sleeve for the next chapter...



Author's Response: The next chapter is my favorite chapter that I've written so far. Though some of the ones I'm writing now are coming in close ;) We haven't seen the last of James that's for sure. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Weekend Getaway with Dr Right

Sigh...Edward is having one hell of a Birthday...Hot damn is it hot!!!

I can't however shake the feeling that James is not as sincere as he claims to be. I sure do hope Bella tells Edward about the lunch thing so James can't use that against Bella...the guy seriously gives me bad vibes... I. Don't. Trust. James!



Author's Response: We haven't seen the last of James. We'll find out in the next chapter if Bella tells Edward about what happened. Thanks for the review.

 
Crickets by HaleyDK Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 90]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a lonely aspiring journalist who just moved to New York City. Edward Cullen is a recent college graduate in the midst of a quarter-life crisis. Will their individual baggage keep them apart?

 
Banner by Inside-the-Disarray.  Thanks, lady!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 35305
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2009 Updated: November 09, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: We Are Beautiful, We Are Doomed

Oh noooooo he went home! How in the world are they going to work things out if he's home and she's still in NY?!? I feel bad Edward has been hidin in a hotel but now he has a goal to work towards...sigh...I will anxiously await your next update...



Author's Response:

The next chapter is being validated, so hopefully you won't have too long of a wait!

Bella knows that she messed up, so maybe the ball is in her court? They definitely both have a lot of personal growth that needs to happen and big goals in both their individual and collective futures.

Thanks so much for the review!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: About A Girl

I'm intrigued, so...onward!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Holiday

LOL...Alice and her "babies" sound like a handful...and could the tutu be a throw out to Legally Blond and the nefarious Bruiser...LOL

I am just dying to see what happens when Bella meet the family...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: You're So Damn Hot

Akkkk a cliffhanger...albeit a very appropriate cliffhanger...

Don't blame the Bella for zoning...geesh would happen to anyone

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Manhattan

LOL...yes first the drink in the lap, then mace in the face. Bella is definatly making points with Edward. I can't wait to see what happens next

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Waiting

LOL i can't help but laugh at Edward and his trips to Brookland...cracks me up. Glad Bella got her first article up, and that Jake better quit avoiding his friend

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Past the Sleep

A bit of a downer but now I feel I know Edward just a bit better

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Still Fighting It

Yay they aren't fighting it anymore! Bella is right...that boy to hard on himself...maybe she could help him out of it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: There Is A Light That Never Goes Out

While I feel Bella was  a bit melodramatic...I kinda of see her point but honey I wouldnt have held it against him...but alas I tend to be very forgiving for the most part. I do hope they work this out...

Please update soon...will be pondering the possibilites until then... =)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the reviews! I've loved reading them all.

She was definitely melodramatic.  They both made mistakes- Edward in his initial lie (no matter how well-intentioned and honorable it was) and Bella in her using his lie to push him away.  Bella's response was a gut reaction, and I think that this is part of her maturing process... at least I hope it is! :)

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: History Sticks to Your Feet

Shnikes! That was intense for awhile and I honestly felt anxiety myself over Edward's welfare. I sure hope you don't keep us waiting long...

One interesting  fic I am reading  right now is Trust in Advertising by vgm and A diseased Affair by EJ summers? I think... to be honest I am so bad with names...but can see the titles and synopsis clearly in my head



Author's Response:

Nope, definitely won't keep you waiting- the next chapter is in the validation queue right now. 

How fantastic is Trust in Advertising? I was so sad to read the last chapter, I really wanted it to go on forever.  I haven't heard of A Diseased Affair, I'll definitely look it up!

I love Breaking Bella by sixeightshuffle, it's pretty fantastic.

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Some Racing, Some Stopping

No probs with your "articial lemony sweetner" as you put it...

It may have been awk as you mentioned buy you did well. I also have an overactive imagination so your words still painted a vivid picture in my head. You sure left one heck of a cliffhanger so will anxiously await your next chapter...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the reassurance! The next chapter is in the queue, so hopefully you won't be waiting long :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Inches and Falling

Wow a wedding to plan and a proclomation of love...How could I not love this! It was very interesting how this all came about. Glad Edward is not as anxious and is finding some peace. I can't wait to see where thier relationship goes from here.



Author's Response:

 Thanks so much! It's definitely all been a process for them.  There are actually only like six chapters left, so they have some more ground to cover :)

Thanks for the review!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Spectacular Views

Wow so much going on...

Glad Edward brought Bella over...LOL Alice, birthday parties, and dresses...OH MY! Poor Bella is gonna go insane. Wonder what's up with Jake?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Spectacular Views

Wow so much going on...

Glad Edward brought Bella over...LOL Alice, birthday parties, and dresses...OH MY! Poor Bella is gonna go insane. Wonder what's up with Jake?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Don't Change Your Plans

Oh I just love Edward for putting in his two cents worth and feel it will be a party that Bella will love! I don't know if I can take the suspense for to long...so please don't leave me hanging to long...Pretty PLEASE

 
All I Need by Juliamine Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Companion story to It Was Only His Baby written in EPOV. I suggest you read IWOHB chapters first.

Bella and Alice want what any couple wants, a baby. Bella asks Edward to donate his sperm to help her and Alice start a family. He agrees, but with one condition. What will Bella choose, and what does it mean to her relationship with Edward? A/B and E/B pairings. Lemons.

 

All I need


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 13955
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2009 Updated: September 08, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Flesh For the Win

I love it! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keeping writing in EPOV it really does help with understanding some of Edward's reactions. I feel sorry for the fact that Edward has pinned for Bella for so long but he in a ways deserved it after the stupid decisions he's made over the years. I do hope they figure something out and it would be nice to read if he really does want a baby with Bella. I wonder what will happen when all this comes to light and i anxiously await your timing. I am absolutly loving the story!



Author's Response:

Since you said please... j/k yes I will keep writing his POV :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Unspoken Apology

Awww I am such a sucker for this Edward...granted I don't always agree with his tactics, but Good Lord he's loved her for years! Can't help but love him too.

Yes I am just dying to know what Edward was thinking over thier hiking trip....I can't wait!

 
Summary:

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With medical bills, school bills, not to mention rent, piling up, Bella looks for a way to dig herself out of debt.  Rose tells her about a new business she’s gotten into.  Bella tries her hand at the business, and ends up paired with Dr. Edward Cullen.  But can she separate business and pleasure?

 

Here's a link to the thread.  We'd love to hear your thoughts! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=5822


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 43549
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Aftermath

Oh dear lord thanks for the update cuz those horrible images of Mike just kept coming to mind. *Breaths a sigh of relief* I feel for Bella and hope things start looking up for her. I can't wait for your next updates.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Whooo I can see this becoming a favorite...I hope you remain happy; I love updates. I find it hard myself that Rose is an escort being the independant woman that she is. I can't wait to see where you take this.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Setting up shop

*Loud Alice like squel* I am thrilled to get a new chapter and it warms my heart that Rose is such a good friend. I can't wait to see what kind of function Mike takes Bella to. I can't wait to read what happens next... 

 




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