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Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Extraction by Ready4Jasper Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 925]
Summary:

When Bella's unit is ambushed in the jungle and she is taken captive, an elite team is sent in to save her.  As events unfold, Bella finds herself caught in the web of this mysterious team made up of elite, and unique, people.  Things become even more interesting when she discovers that the leader of this group is a man she thought had dissapeared forever. 

extraction.jpg Extraction picture by skimmelman

Props to Annamorphos for her awesome banner making skills!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 124260
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: October 06, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Waking up in Dallas

Wow I mean just WOW such an interesting story...what did those rat bastards do to her in south america? I would imagine Bella's tenacity will serve her well...she'll have that extraction team wrapped around her finger in to time...

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Recovery and Pain

YYYYyyyyesssss! More Emmett! I can't wait...just love that big bear of a man. I larger plan eyyy that sneaky little Edward. Did I mention how much I am enjoyin the story? Well if not I am. Wonder what that Emmett will do to to drive Bella but bet dollars to pesos that he don't break her...that girl is stubborn.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Running

Yeeessss Bella is gonna be released and I am ANXOUSLY awaiting the big confrontation...this is EXCELLENT!

 
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Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Momentum

LOL I may just have to hunt down your Muse and send her home...knowing my luck she's probably having coffee and a spa day with mine. My muse seems to have disappeared as well.

Wow...alot has happened for the crew over the past few days. I am glad Bella kicked Edward's butt into going to therapy and hope it helps him as much as Bella's is helping her. I have a jittery feeling as well about the mission and I will anxiously await more...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Change is Hard

Oh Hale ya! I am glad to see Bella get some much needed satisfaction at being able to hit someone...though it may be much more satisfying if it were Edward. LOL I can't wait to read that confrontation. Oh please for the love of all that's holy...let her get in a good swing at Edward. If what I suspect her training has put her thru I'd not mind a little pain on Edward...

Ok enough of my ranting...I will patiently await it all to play out as you reveal this story...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Cygnet

Wow *shivers run down my spine* The walk into the unknown is just so tantilizing...Bella is one tough cookie, but extremly exciting. I wonder how she will react when she finally sees Edward. I wouldn't mind a repeat of Emmett's hit. LOL

Ever trusted someone without knowing why? Can't say that anything comes to mind but I have to trust all will be ok at the end of everyday and some days that is really hard

 
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Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Soon

OH MY GOD THAT WAS BRILLIANT!!!!!!!

This chapter had intrigue, action, emotional pain, and dare I say hope...

 l LOVED IT!!! Please update soon!

I wouldn't mind a fist to the face for Edward considering he did leave her albeit probably not of his own accord but he could have at least have told her. I feel conflicted in my opinions right now so will axiously await your reveals...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: A Fleeting Glimpse

Egats! Sense overload....but think it's a brilliant chapter. There is so much going on underneath the surface of everything. I sure hope Bella can break thru those walls Edward has built up. But knowing Bella, she'll have them down in no time flat. I am so anxious for your next chapters...the excitement is addicting.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Nice to meet you...

*Gasp* Poor Edward, even with the bare details that boy has gone thru so much. I am floored by the strength Bella is exerting and could not be more thrilled that she will stay, be strong, and help Edward heal. I just can't help but love her stubborness all the more for it. Yay time with each of the team, this is going to be great. I am definalty doing a happy dance when you update next,

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Digging In

Wow Emmett sure had an interesting story to tell...sigh...there is definatly more to Rosalie than meets the eye. It is heartbreaking to see that Edward is so broken but Bella was broken as well and she knows what that is like. She will be key to reawakening his true self. I can't wait to see that come about. Bella definatly will be good for the team as well.

Project Maria?!? WTH? Will anxiously await that.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Project Maria

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!

I LOVE YOU!!! I could not be more psyched about this mission!

Not. Yours. Bitch. Christ I could not love your Alice more either for that matter. I so wanted to hit that Maria bitch but loved how you handled it. Maria will never torment Jasper again!! (Sings Ding Dong the Witch is DEAD ala wizard of oz) Bella was amazing and I hope Edward lets her in so she can help him thru all these emotions. I am floored and cant wait for more...seriously hooked...you are now one of my addictions...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Decompression

Wow....wow...Alice is just the best isn't she. I am so glad she is there for Jasper as the poor guy is totally loosing his marbles at the moment. The way they met all those years ago is just sweet in a strange way. Jasper a mercenary Alice a thief...so perfect for each other....

Ohhh I do hope that Edward will open up to Bella...he needs to be freed from his demons as well as she does...

 
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Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Fear

Wow... a mole within the organization? Ohhh who could it be? I can't wait to find out. Ohhh I am thrilled that Edward is slowly letting Bella back in, slowly but surely. Sigh, it's brilliant how you are doing it too.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Flight to Phoenix

Holy Fucking Hale! Will we find out what is up with Rose after all. I was thrilled with Bella going on this mission and pulling things off to a tee. I can't wait for the confrontation with Rose...please update soon!

 
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Date: February 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Retreat

OMG!! Rosalie is just evil! I know she feels the need to protect but she should have got all her facts straight before she laid into Bella. Sigh the aftermath of such a conversation has put a strain on everybody. Pleas Please PLEASE update soon!

 
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Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Turtle Mode

Yay Bella is slowly returning and I couldn't be happier. I am so excited  I am vibrating with anticipation!!

 
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Date: March 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: What tired minds can do

Aaackk when will that man learn to let himself live again without beating himself up. I was thrilled with him reaching out but now I just want to slap him and tell him not to screw up a good thing. I sure hope Bella is ready to snap some sense into him. I don't think Edward realizes that his friends would understand and want him to be happy again. I can't wait to see the aftermath of this trip.

 
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Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Riptides and Undertows

Oh my god! Talk about averting Mt. St. Helen's eruption. I mean Wow! I am thrilled Bella was able to get some things out and acutally deal...I am so excited for what is to come next...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: An Illusion of Control

Holy Freakin Hale!! That was spectacular!! I bow to your brilliance...I sure as hell hope they both work something out...

Please update SOON!! Pretty Please...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Stay

*Squee...happy dance!* Wow that was a spectacular agreement...and I am on cloud nine that Bella and Edward are working TOGETHER! Deliriously happy!

Alice is just the sweetest thing and I love her to death...Ohhh a date with EC...SWOON!

 
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Date: July 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Tapas

I loved thier first date! It was great watching them learn about each other and have a good time. I cant wait to see how it progresses

 
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Date: August 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Club Night

*I am so excited that Edward is willing to try with Bella* This is great! The whole club scene was so much fun to read. Rose is truly a force to be wreckoned with...damn never cross her...lol

Whoa the fight was intense...I can't believe it went down like that.

Hmm sure hope Edward can calm Bella down, sounds like she is spooked probably cuz Edward was in danger. Whooo the stakes have risen!

 
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Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Stitches

Wow...That was FABULOUS! Jasper's story is just so sad and I can't help but wonder if he will ever see his sister again. I hope she doesn show up as one of the bad guys...that would be tragic but intriguing. I am loving how you have Edward and Bella building their relationship together. It is so exciting...

 
Blackout by MandyLeigh010 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 248]
Summary:

 

All human, Edward and Bella POV. Edward and Bella live in two different worlds, even though they live next to each other. Things get complicated when Edward, the leather jacket wearing cigarette smoking rebel falls for the girl next door.

*Banner by readergoof* : )


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 97025
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Teenage Wasteland

LOL the rebel with a crush...priceless

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Step Right Up

LOL she may be asking for it all right, what an interesting back story. Wonder how Edward feels about dear sweet dad. Young or not it wasn't the best thing for Carlisle to be doing two girls at once.

 




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