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Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Extraction by Ready4Jasper Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 926]
Summary:

When Bella's unit is ambushed in the jungle and she is taken captive, an elite team is sent in to save her.  As events unfold, Bella finds herself caught in the web of this mysterious team made up of elite, and unique, people.  Things become even more interesting when she discovers that the leader of this group is a man she thought had dissapeared forever. 

extraction.jpg Extraction picture by skimmelman

Props to Annamorphos for her awesome banner making skills!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 124260
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: October 07, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Digging In

Wow Emmett sure had an interesting story to tell...sigh...there is definatly more to Rosalie than meets the eye. It is heartbreaking to see that Edward is so broken but Bella was broken as well and she knows what that is like. She will be key to reawakening his true self. I can't wait to see that come about. Bella definatly will be good for the team as well.

Project Maria?!? WTH? Will anxiously await that.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Project Maria

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!

I LOVE YOU!!! I could not be more psyched about this mission!

Not. Yours. Bitch. Christ I could not love your Alice more either for that matter. I so wanted to hit that Maria bitch but loved how you handled it. Maria will never torment Jasper again!! (Sings Ding Dong the Witch is DEAD ala wizard of oz) Bella was amazing and I hope Edward lets her in so she can help him thru all these emotions. I am floored and cant wait for more...seriously hooked...you are now one of my addictions...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Decompression

Wow....wow...Alice is just the best isn't she. I am so glad she is there for Jasper as the poor guy is totally loosing his marbles at the moment. The way they met all those years ago is just sweet in a strange way. Jasper a mercenary Alice a thief...so perfect for each other....

Ohhh I do hope that Edward will open up to Bella...he needs to be freed from his demons as well as she does...

 
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Date: January 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Fear

Wow... a mole within the organization? Ohhh who could it be? I can't wait to find out. Ohhh I am thrilled that Edward is slowly letting Bella back in, slowly but surely. Sigh, it's brilliant how you are doing it too.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Flight to Phoenix

Holy Fucking Hale! Will we find out what is up with Rose after all. I was thrilled with Bella going on this mission and pulling things off to a tee. I can't wait for the confrontation with Rose...please update soon!

 
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Date: February 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Retreat

OMG!! Rosalie is just evil! I know she feels the need to protect but she should have got all her facts straight before she laid into Bella. Sigh the aftermath of such a conversation has put a strain on everybody. Pleas Please PLEASE update soon!

 
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Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Turtle Mode

Yay Bella is slowly returning and I couldn't be happier. I am so excited  I am vibrating with anticipation!!

 
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Date: March 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: What tired minds can do

Aaackk when will that man learn to let himself live again without beating himself up. I was thrilled with him reaching out but now I just want to slap him and tell him not to screw up a good thing. I sure hope Bella is ready to snap some sense into him. I don't think Edward realizes that his friends would understand and want him to be happy again. I can't wait to see the aftermath of this trip.

 
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Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Riptides and Undertows

Oh my god! Talk about averting Mt. St. Helen's eruption. I mean Wow! I am thrilled Bella was able to get some things out and acutally deal...I am so excited for what is to come next...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: An Illusion of Control

Holy Freakin Hale!! That was spectacular!! I bow to your brilliance...I sure as hell hope they both work something out...

Please update SOON!! Pretty Please...

 
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Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Stay

*Squee...happy dance!* Wow that was a spectacular agreement...and I am on cloud nine that Bella and Edward are working TOGETHER! Deliriously happy!

Alice is just the sweetest thing and I love her to death...Ohhh a date with EC...SWOON!

 
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Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Tapas

I loved thier first date! It was great watching them learn about each other and have a good time. I cant wait to see how it progresses

 
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Date: August 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Club Night

*I am so excited that Edward is willing to try with Bella* This is great! The whole club scene was so much fun to read. Rose is truly a force to be wreckoned with...damn never cross her...lol

Whoa the fight was intense...I can't believe it went down like that.

Hmm sure hope Edward can calm Bella down, sounds like she is spooked probably cuz Edward was in danger. Whooo the stakes have risen!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Stitches

Wow...That was FABULOUS! Jasper's story is just so sad and I can't help but wonder if he will ever see his sister again. I hope she doesn show up as one of the bad guys...that would be tragic but intriguing. I am loving how you have Edward and Bella building their relationship together. It is so exciting...

 
Blackout by MandyLeigh010 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 249]
Summary:

 

All human, Edward and Bella POV. Edward and Bella live in two different worlds, even though they live next to each other. Things get complicated when Edward, the leather jacket wearing cigarette smoking rebel falls for the girl next door.

*Banner by readergoof* : )


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 97025
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Teenage Wasteland

LOL the rebel with a crush...priceless

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Step Right Up

LOL she may be asking for it all right, what an interesting back story. Wonder how Edward feels about dear sweet dad. Young or not it wasn't the best thing for Carlisle to be doing two girls at once.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Too Pretty

Wow the song exchange was great! I've done that a time or two and it is true...you learn alot about a person by the music they listen to. Poor Edward has no clue he's already got it bad...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Criminal

Going to hell...why no my dear the only criminal thing Bella is guilty of is still being with Emmett. To be honet Emmett is not my favorite person right now and is a horrible boyfriend...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Just to Be the Next to Be With You

Ahhh meeting Daddy for the first time...Bet Edward is sweatin bullets now...LOL

Boy Emmett really doesn't have a clue does he...he's gonna hit the roof when he learns Edward is with Bella...*envisions mayham and is loving it*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Can't Take the Honkey Tonk Outta the Girl

Well dosn't that beat all...considers rearranging James's face... wonder why Edward  bolted?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: A Real Fine Place to Start

*Cheer central* I can't tell you how much I loved that Bella decked James! It was absolutly brilliant and cheered the whole time. *Smiles like a dumbass* It was beyond brilliant. Thank you for that...James is such a jackass. Hmmm now the mystery that is June 18th...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Camp Out

LOL...Wow Bella is such a wicked little vixen now isn't she. I've always had fun camping but can't say that I've ever pitched a tent indoors. What a way to bring camping to a city boy. *snort* Sounds like Emmett and Rosalie are perfect for each other (no suprise there)

 
Summary:

Bella Swan works at a child care center and Edward Cullen is the single dad she falls in love with.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 190579
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2011


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Brunch with the Drs Family

Hey hey hey, the morning after was just as scintilating... =)

Brunch with the Cullen's certianly is a lively affair. I love how Alexis opens up with family, it was so cute to watch her be more free, although getting a bump on the head is no fun. I can't wait to see how you progess the relationship with those two...



Author's Response: No the bump was not a fun thing for her. Something like that actually happened to my niece except she hit the dishwasher door that was open at the time. She still has a scar from it. Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Babysitting for Dr Right

*Happy Squeal* Yes! After 6 months we are finally getting somewhere. Alexis is such a sweet little girl...I'm sure she won't mind Bella hanging out more with them. I wonder just how much Edward has been doing to get info on Bella...this first date should be quit interesting.

Can't wait...we've got a date with Dr. DILF!



Author's Response: I couldn't let Bella suffer for too long, 6 months was enough. You'll have to wait until the next chapter to find out how Edward is finding out information. Just so you're not let down with the next chapter, there is one more before the actual date. Thanks for the review

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Talk with Jakey Poo

Paging Dr. Edward...think I have pains...say where my heart is...

Well Bella met mama and laughed like crazy reading that she was having daydreams about Edward in front of her...wonder how many of us has ever done that. I must admit to being guilty of that a time or two. Wonder what's gonna happen on thier dates...LOL



Author's Response: Just reading this makes me think of Dr. Edward in his scrubs.......uh where was I, sorry :) The next chapter is their date so you'll find out soon enough what will happen. Thanks for leaving a review that makes me smile and laugh.

 




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