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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
Status: Member
Member Since: July 01, 2009

Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!

I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.

I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.

10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Summary: Feature


Bella had the perfect life.  She was married to her longtime best friend, had a great job and a beautiful son…until a careless driver stole her happiness.

Edward was fulfilling his dreams.  His residency was almost over, he had a gorgeous fiancé, and he was ready to move forward, starting a family…until a devastating break-up and a health scare in his family shake his foundation.

See, sometimes, life doesn’t go the way you want.  Sometimes, things can happen that change the course you choose.  And most of the time, it takes courage to walk down the new path.

What if that new path started with a tee ball team?


Big thanks to sigh-for-sigh for the banner!!


Play with me on the forum.  I now have a thread in the Alternate Human thread.  


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 116372
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2009 Updated: October 06, 2010

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Holiday Plans

OH MY GOD!! *stares at the screen stunned, seriously stunned though I had a bad feeling this may happen* This chapter was exhilirating to say the least. Will you explain why Tanya choose to abort Edward's baby but not Volturi's. I guess that has me baffled. There will definalty be a showdown and I can't wait to read about it. Please UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the heartfail moment. 

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter!  You will know a lot after chapter 21.  So will Edward.  ;)  It should be up tomorrow. 

Let the fireworks begin!!


Thank you!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Tee Ball

Nuts computer spazing again...lets try this again.

Wow...I thought Tanya was a selfish Bitch before but this conversation seals the deal. I can't believe she had the audacity to ask Edward to come back and help raise her baby! That girl needs to be slapped something fierce. I am glad Peter is finally growing a pair and putting his foot down with Charlotte. Charlotte needs to just let Tanya sleep in the bed she has made.

The zoo was awesome... a perfect way to end an afternoon after a horendous morning...I can't wait to see how you end this even though it does make me sad to think the end is near...sniff.

Author's Response:

Yeah...Tanya just sealed the Most Cruel and Selfish Bitch award, didn't she?  She is unreal! 

Peter did the right thing, finally.  He's not a bad guy.  Charlotte will suffer the consequences of her behavior.  You'll hear a little about it later.

I'm so glad you liked the zoo!  Thankfully, their trip wasn't ruined.

I'm dying thinking about ending this story!  I look forward to writing these characters - and to hearing from all of you!


Thank you for supporting me from the beginning!  <3

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Practice Makes Perfect

Yep still hard a few years down the are amazing creatures arn't they...

Author's Response:

It doesn't get easier very quickly, does it?  And kids are wonderful - so resilient and able to adjust.


Hope you'll keep reading!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Reality Check

This is shaping up to be a really good story...I can already see some Uh Oh moments coming...LOL

How is it those two don't really see the immense attraction for each other *sigh* I guess it's one of the reasons we love reading about's who they are...

Author's Response:

There will be some uh oh moments along the  But, you're right, it is why we love Bella and Edward.  They are sometimes oblivious to what others see.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!  :)

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Friendship and First Dates

Twas a perfect fist date for the both of them and Seth was a riot...

Hope Bella doesn't overthink things to much so that she can move forward.

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Seth is so much fun to write!! His innocence is great.  He is a typical kid, enjoying life - even in the middle of his mother's first date with Edward.  lol

Bella is starting to move forward.  Edward needs to deal with his issues, too.

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Misunderstanding

I know good things come to those who wait...but...sometimes it's hard...

Ok whine much...sorry

I am now dying of curiosity as to what exactly happened with Tanya. LOL...would love to see Emmett kick Edward's butt...should be a riot.

Author's Response:

I totally understand - I'm not always a patient person!  But, Edward wasn't willing to spill in this chapter.  (Besides, it would have been a HUGE chapter if he would have.)  He will tell her everything soon.  Tanya isn't finished with him, she's still got a part to play...  Sorry, that probably doesn't help with the curiosity, does it? 

Let's hope Edward doesn't give Emmett a reason to thump him!  lol



Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Alone Time

OMG Did Tanya and Edward lose a baby? What a tragedy for Bella to maybe lose a would be so heartbreaking; it was hard enough losing Jake. Oh will Edward tell Bella what happened between Tanya and him any time soon...the suspense is killing me, but will try and wait patiently until you share with us...

Author's Response:

Your Edward questions will be answered soon.  I promise.  He's going to spill his guts to Bella.  He needs to be completely honest with her.  Patience...just a little more patience.

Bella suffered a lot.  Just the thought that she could have been pregnant tortured her.  But, she shared her feelings with Edward and that is so significant.


Thank you so much!!


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Cards and Confessions

Wow...what in the word does Tanya think she is doing? I kinda feel sorry for her and agree whole heartedly that she is running scared. Poor Esme and Billy to have to learn that they lost a grandbaby...however it was due to things beyound thier control. I am thrilled Bella and Edward confessed to each other... it will only bring them that much closer...

Author's Response:

Tanya is a selfish mess!  She really needs help - but not from Edward. 

The characters are facing two very different kinds of loss, but it unites them.  They are finally being honest with everyone around them.  And honesty is a great way to start a relationship.


Thank you!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Playing with the Cullens

The memorial weekend started off rough but is ending on a good note..

Sorry can't comment longer but know your story make me smile...

Author's Response:

The weekend did start off on a tough note, but thankfully, they are moving forward.  It needed to happen.  They had to talk before they could be a couple.  Honesty is so important!!


Your comment made me smile!!!  Thank you!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 In Memory of...

It was great! I did cry at the cemetary but what can I was to much for words...simply stunning. =) I do hope they work it out.

I worry what Tanya has up her sleeve...witht that woman you never know.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I'll let you in on a little secret...I cried a little writing about the cemetery.  Yeah, I'm a baby!!  I'm so glad it touched you!!

Tanya is still out there...


Thanks again!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Moving On

Well that was really heart felt and a bit heart breaking...poor Billy. I feel for him in his fear of losing all his family. Maybe it's a good thing Billy didn't know that Bella was pregnant when the accident happened but I have a funny feeling Billy knew about the lost grandchild.

I anxiously await your next update...

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you get Billy!!  You are very insightful!!  Billy has lost so much, he deserves to have a bad moment here and there.

I'm working on the next chapter right now!!


Thanks you for your thoughts on the chapter!  I love it!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Art on the Town

Heartfelt indeed...sigh...I know it's necessary but still the tears come to my eyes.I sure hope Edward can get over his relationship issues but after what Tanya has done...well I can't say I blame him.

Author's Response:

Yeah, it was necessary, sorry.  They really need to communicate.  They will...

Tanya really messed him up, didn't she? 


Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 A Slight Change of Plans

Egats! Your gonna kill my dear author...

I know this was the place to end it but my mind is going 100mph. Poor Edward to loose someone so like his mother. The things that must be going thru his mind. *shudder* I am comforted that you are writing the next chapters...I know his pain will be lessoned soon.

Author's Response:

Sorry I nearly killed you...  ;)

My mind hasn't stopped racing lately.  These characters own me!!  They are all I think about!  lol

Chapter 14 is almost finished.  I'll probably submit it on Sunday night.  It should be up on Monday.  Deep breaths until then.  I think it's pretty good...can't wait to see what you think!



Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Comfort

Wow still catching up on all the fic I've missed...RL has been kicking my butt in a really bad way this week; but this little gem of a chapter has made my day. It was so beautiful to see Bella there for Edward and her words of wisdom was priceless. They are finally starting a relationship *squels of joy are heard* I will axiously await your next chapter.

Author's Response:

I know how RL can kick!!  Mine has been the same. I'm just glad my chapter made your day better!

Bella and Edward really needed to have that talk.  Bella needed to hear herself say some of those things about moving on.  Edward needed a reality check.  Now, they can start a relationship!! 

Working on the next chapter!


Thank you!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Time Together

Ohhh Tanya just doesn't know when your dead lie down... Seriously would love to kick her butt. Time at the cabin...well...even without the details...lets just say I have an overactive imagination. Schnikes! I am so glad that  Bella is helping Edward with the loss of his child. Maybe Edward will get his chance with Bella at that new family... ;)

Author's Response:

Tanya isn't finished...and she has her reasons.  Hmmm...maybe we'll find out more.  ;)

I have an overactive imagination, too!  I'll just let you all fill in the blanks! 

They really do deserve to move on and be happy, don't they?



Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Running Home

Well I am not sure if the maintanence on the site messed with this chapter but all I see is Author's notes and chapter end will try and read the is chapter when I can see...can't wait...

Author's Response:

I don't know exactly what is happening with this, but I can't upload the story quite yet.  I'll talk to qjmom and see what we can do.  In the meantime, you can read the chapter on, if you'd like.



Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Reality Check was great that Bella helped Edward recapture his dreams of having a family. I also hope Edward was listening carefully when Bella pointed out that he made all the hard discisions by himself. It would be a relief to him if he had someone there to make decisions with (hint hint).

I can't believe Billy would say such mean things...I know he's scared but how could he hurt someone he considers his daughter. I am glad Bella and Edward are doing some talking and three cheers for mama Esme!

Author's Response:

Edward and Bella are really good for each other.  :D  I think Edward realized what Bella was talking about - he did call Esme when he wasn't sure what to do.  But, yeah, he needs someone to talk things over with...don't you think? 

Billy needs to understand what he's doing to her.  And who better to tell him than Bella?  hmmmm  We'll see...

Gotta love Esme!!


Thank you so much!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 A Time for Everything

Wow, while the funeral was hard on Edward and Bella is was a welcome healing point in thier relationship. I am so happy that Bella talked with Billy and maybe now Billy can heal as well. I'm glad one of his daughters told him he was an ass...sigh

Yay a birthyday party, that means one very important thing, CAKE!!! funny that Alice would go into labor just as the party is kicking off, Violet seems just as anxious to join the Cullen family.

Author's Response:

The funeral was pivotal.  Bella realized a few things and Edward heard some important things.

Bella and Billy really needed to clear up their issues.  He is so important to Seth.  Rachel is a smart girl.

Oh yeah!  Bring on the cake!!  Chocolate, please.  With chocolate chip ice cream.  :D

Violet is into making grand entrances.  She is her mother's daughter.  lol


Thank you!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 New

Ahh my dear the hospital scene was beautiful...sigh Violet is such a lucky little girl. I do believe Bella and Edward will have a chance to expand the Cullen family but know I'll have to wait for that to happen. Seth would be thrilled to get a sibling. 

Hot damn honey that was some Birthday party in Edward's room...and a love confession...swoon!

Author's Response:

**smiling widely**  I'm so glad you liked the hospital scene!  Violet has a wonderful family - all of them! 

E&B could expand the Cullen family just by getting married... ;)  Seth would love that, don't you think? 

Best birthday Edward's ever had!!  :D  Maybe they'll actually say something to each other while they are 'awake'. 

Thank you!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Family

*looks at screen with tears in eyes* That was an absolulty beautiful chapter...Esme's story was so heart touching.  I am at a loss for was spellbinding

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!

I adore Esme - I think she needs more love.  She helped Bella so much by telling her about her past.  Amazing woman!!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Home

Awww...wipes tear from eye...that was just so sweet. I know it was hard for Billy and Charlie to listen to the news about Edward moving in but both papas handled it all very well.

Sigh... one chapter left...I am so going to miss this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Glad that your tears are happy tears.  :D

All of the parents will be supportive of them and happy for them. 

I'll miss writing and posting, but mostly I'll miss all of you!

Thanks again!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 A Family

Wow what a way to end it...on a very good note...I can't wait to see what you have written for the epilogue!!!

Author's Response:

So glad you like it!  The epi is coming soon...after all the holiday madness is over.  lol


Thank you so much!  You've been a huge support!  Can't say thanks enough!

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Epilogue: Life Goes On

Wow a little girl to add to the family. I am thrilled with how you ended this...though I am sad it has come to an end. Oh dear I will miss this..

Author's Response:

I thought they needed a little girl.  lol 

Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you liked the ending.  I'm sad that it's over, too.  Outtakes...I still have the outtakes.  ;)



A heartbroken Bella suffers a type of amnesia after the cliff-diving incident. But instead of erasing her memories, her illness brings to light a power she never knew she possessed.

Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 47102
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2009 Updated: November 29, 2009

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Run

WTF doesn't even cover it...LOL...Is she really having flashbacks or is she seriously conjuring up long lost fantasies? I can't wait to find out

Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Flight

Wow this is just Fascinating!! God the things you throw at me just make my head dizzy with anticipation and just a general want for MORE...

I will have faith that Edward will come around but honestly I'd like nothing more than to smack him around a bit.



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