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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Dr. Edward Masen is a single father of two, a recent widower, and in desperate need of a nanny. Bella Swan just graduated from Penn State University with degrees to become a teacher.  With dreams temporarily on hold, she is literally knocked off her feet by a certain Masen boy, or perhaps two.  After much public begging from them, Bella accepts the job.  Hey, it's not teaching, but a job's a job, and a job means money. What could possibly go wrong?

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Thank you Lou for the fabulous banner! I absolutely LOVE it!


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 47494
[Report This] Published: June 28, 2009 Updated: January 05, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Kiss Me

Omg! The kiss cam on that movie had me laughing till I cried. It was histerical.

Sigh... I loved how Bella raced to Ants...oh it was so sweet. Its to bad Edward has been having bad nights...that man could use some serious sleep. The game sounds exciting and even more so that Edward and Bella got kiss cammed...lol

 
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Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Walking on Sunshine

I am so there for NEW MOON! Already have my tickets and will be waiting by the door. *Does a little happy dance*

Now I must say I loved a day with the family. It really was fun and I just love those two little kids. Anthony is just a sweety and couldn't help but Awwww over his little doctor mode. I was impressed. I sure hope you update soon as i am curious to see how Monday goes.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Coffeeshop Soundtrack

Another great chapter my dear...

I just love that Elizabeth went all protective mama bear but love it even more that Bella took it in good stride. It was a fabulous first meeting for all and I do believe it worked out spectacularly in the end...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: ISWSIFOBAAIGWTSSWAM

Wow I loved Bella's date...it was just to cute. Though I must confess, I do believe Edward must be smitten to not have fired Bella...lol...I can't help but wonder what is running thru his mind right about now.

 

PS: I LOVED New Moon!!! It was...was...well lets just say I was impressed. Dear lord those boys on screen made it easy to pay attention to the movie. (very HOT)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Save a Horse, Ride a Cowboy

Oh dear lord that was amazing. I am glad that no more huge fiascos have occured since the house wreck incident. I couldn't help but fall in love with Tony more when he apologized...it was just a very sweet moment. Of course his how to impress dad suggestions made me crack up.

I can't wait to see what happens at the hockey game...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Crashed

Hmmm just discovered your story and must admit to being riveted already. I love the different points of view and already thaught Maria was evil but was even more sure when she spouted her nonsense. The children seemed like nice kids but bet will find out for sure in future chapters. LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I think I need to place a warning on my story though.

Warning: Children may cause you to giggle and smile until painful. Their adorableness (yes, that is in fact a word in the world of CONSTN) may cause you to squeal. Please follow with caution.

 

=)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Five O'clock Somewhere

Wow...can't help but here "It's a small world" in my head. This is going to be such an interesting story and cant wait to read more about the kids. I adore kids and love the interaction.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Life is a Party

Awww Ants telling Bella he loved her...sigh...it was just to sweet. I think playing hookie for the day is not the end of world. Aye while I understand Edward's panic (have munchkins of my own), he needs to learn how to listen to brain every now and then. I can't wait to read about the aftermath to this.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Watching You

Uh oh Edward is definatly going to get it when Bella gets home...

Oh Anthony is just the cutest thing EVER! LOL i can just imagine what he is going to do with that marker. Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Go Girl

No worries on the updates as I will be here for you...and on that note...grrr to that horrid reviewer. I can't believe the odacity of some people...huffs in annoyance.

Your story lacks nothing and even if they think Bella is a bad nanny she does what she should. She takes care of those children and more importantly she loves them and they her. I'm sorry for the narrow mindedness some people display and I hope you are doing well. Now I do enjoy your story and hope you find comfort in those of us who do appreciate your creative mind. Love ya honey!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: I Want a Mom

Eeeeepppp how could you leave me hanging like that!!!

Ok so I did wonder if Emmett was going to exact revenge for getting his ass thrown in the pool but hey...he deserved it. LoL... I read that section four times and laughed everytime I pictured him flying into the water. Poor Antes is definatly having a rough party isn't he? I just love him!

 

PS: I must concur...Avatar was kickass!!

 
Summary:

A pregnancy changes everything in an instant. Bella went from being a Godmother to a mother and ended up raising her best friends daughter after she died from giving birth. With her families support, she makes it through obstacles until she meets a gorgeous guy at a rare night out. Something in his past could tear her world apart, will it end up that way or will love conquer all?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 52897
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2009 Updated: August 04, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Wedding

I like is so far but your notes indicate Bella will end up with Jasper...makes me wonder what happens to Edward?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Date

Hmmmm what on earth made Edward and Bella break up in the first place...and sounds like Aly-cat did a bit of prowling last night

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The News

It's great that Alice and Rose are pregnant at the same time...it's always easier when someone you know is going thru the same thing and can sympathize properly

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Shopping and the Shower

LOL Alice and her dreams...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Dream

LOL...who's have thunk Alice would make Bella read the Twilight Saga...

It is rather omnious to think Alice saw her own death...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Birth

OH My God that is just heart wrenching...tears fall...I would lose it if my best friend died

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Death

Again heart breaking that Alice should die but a relief that we still have Alicen...God Edward is such an ass in this story...I'd have ripped him a new one immediatly...so unlike the Edward I know and love...Oh well tis your story and I am along for the ride...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Confrontation

What the Hell is Edward's problem...definatly an ass

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Letter

I don't think I've cried so much over such beautiful words...I just don't know what to say...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Funeral

Again with the tears...to lose a friend is devastating...



Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews. I tried to put a lot of emotion into whats happening because I relate it to if it were me, I would be completely devestated if my best friend passed. It was hard writing these chapters but worth it with my reviews. I feel like I have done a good job.

Thanks again, I hope to get the next posted up soon. :)

A

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Baby Jackson

Yay Jackson is now apart of this big happy family...

*sniffle* I am glad Bella is healing and that she realizes Alice will always be with her...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The First Couple Of Years

NO worries on the updates...my niece was born a month only and I know what it's like goin to the hospital...my sister was a wreck until we were able to bring her home.

Love the story and boy is Alicen growing up fast...

The bachlorette party should be fun

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Bacelor/ Bachelorette Party

Brilliant POV change...makes the story so much easier to understand....

Whoo the anticipations is rising...when Bella and Jasper put two and two together concerning Alicen...can't wait

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Bacelor/ Bachelorette Party

Brilliant POV change...makes the story so much easier to understand....

Whoo the anticipations is rising...when Bella and Jasper put two and two together concerning Alicen...can't wait

 




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