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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Breaking Edward is my first attempt at an AH story. Edward has severe OCD. He has now been dubbed by my readers on fanfiction.net as OCDward. His world and obsessions are completely turned upside-down when he meets his sister's friend, Bella, for the first time. It harbors around the difficulties of both of them struggling with coming to terms with what they are feeling while dealing with his hang-ups.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 46069
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: December 20, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Mementoes

What in the world?!?

Edward runnin again...can't say I am to surprised but how is Bella supposed to know this is normal...this is gonna be epic

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: I Have Decided to Get Laid and Get My Shit Together

You've got to be kidding me...If that boy is going to see Tanya I'll kick his ass myself...what a >?*%...Ok sorry kinda got sucked into the story. Edward is gonna flip when he finds out Bella is Alice' roomate...lol

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Sucking Up

Eeeewwww that a drunk ass pervert. I'd have sanitized my hands after that mess. Where the hell did Edward come from? *runs to next chapter to find out*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: I Have Decided to Ask Bella to Dinner

LOL who'd a thunk it...Edward having the brash to throw some guy out of the bar...LOL LOL I wouldn have loved to seen the look on that guys face

I gotta admit I am glad Tanya and Edward no longer have that type of relationship; curious as to the tongue comment

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: A Tub of Cherry Garcia

Holy Hale...I can't believe Bella got to see Jasper's southern bits...Hell I'd never wash that outta my mind...LOL

Edward seemed  bit more confortable...didn't even wig out over Bella bieng Alice's roomate...is he gonna go flip out more at home...



Author's Response:

Haha, me neither... but Bella has only eyes for one guy. Edward's chilling out a bit. Will he freak out eventually? Of course. It's just a matter of when and what will set him off.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: I Have Decided to Kill Two Birds with One Stone

Ok OCDward baffles me but he's just to darn cute...LOL

So he finally found out Bella is Alice's roomate...the coming conversation should be really good

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Sip and Chew

Awwww the meanings behind simple gestures is just to heart warming....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: I Have Decided to Add Alice to My Hit List

Hell ya for understanding...LOL it would seem Bella is gonna get a huge helping in understanding when it comes to Edward...Well at least now she'll understand some of his crazy ass compulsions. I have no doubt they will hit a few snags but will come thru it ok.

*excitedly waits for more*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chocolate Chip Cookies BPOV

Well well well, this is going to be interesting.

Makes me wonder why Edward bolted so quickly...quark?...LOL I guess I will have to patiently await your revelations...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: I Have Decided to Break My Rules

Awww so much for our young Edward to deal with...sigh...I have faith he will make it thru though...I wonder how those two will get over this hiccup...Until next time

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Fluffy Omelets

Yay Edward is finally letting Bella in! *smiles like a fool* Glad to read all is going well for now...Curious how everything gets handles in the future

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Lasagna with a Side of Blood BPOV

Holy Hale why would you leave me hanging like that! *Looks around...feels like punching Victoria's ginger ass myself* I wonder what fucked up story James told Victoria to get himself out of hot water...seriously...James in one well more like half his fries short of a happy meal. I can't wait for the next chapter...please don't leave us hanging to long...

To your Awesome Beta...on knees...please pretty please the next chapter ASAP!

 
Summary:

Dr. Edward Masen is a single father of two, a recent widower, and in desperate need of a nanny. Bella Swan just graduated from Penn State University with degrees to become a teacher.  With dreams temporarily on hold, she is literally knocked off her feet by a certain Masen boy, or perhaps two.  After much public begging from them, Bella accepts the job.  Hey, it's not teaching, but a job's a job, and a job means money. What could possibly go wrong?

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Thank you Lou for the fabulous banner! I absolutely LOVE it!


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 47494
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: January 04, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Kiss Me

Omg! The kiss cam on that movie had me laughing till I cried. It was histerical.

Sigh... I loved how Bella raced to Ants...oh it was so sweet. Its to bad Edward has been having bad nights...that man could use some serious sleep. The game sounds exciting and even more so that Edward and Bella got kiss cammed...lol

 
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Date: November 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Walking on Sunshine

I am so there for NEW MOON! Already have my tickets and will be waiting by the door. *Does a little happy dance*

Now I must say I loved a day with the family. It really was fun and I just love those two little kids. Anthony is just a sweety and couldn't help but Awwww over his little doctor mode. I was impressed. I sure hope you update soon as i am curious to see how Monday goes.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Coffeeshop Soundtrack

Another great chapter my dear...

I just love that Elizabeth went all protective mama bear but love it even more that Bella took it in good stride. It was a fabulous first meeting for all and I do believe it worked out spectacularly in the end...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: ISWSIFOBAAIGWTSSWAM

Wow I loved Bella's date...it was just to cute. Though I must confess, I do believe Edward must be smitten to not have fired Bella...lol...I can't help but wonder what is running thru his mind right about now.

 

PS: I LOVED New Moon!!! It was...was...well lets just say I was impressed. Dear lord those boys on screen made it easy to pay attention to the movie. (very HOT)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Save a Horse, Ride a Cowboy

Oh dear lord that was amazing. I am glad that no more huge fiascos have occured since the house wreck incident. I couldn't help but fall in love with Tony more when he apologized...it was just a very sweet moment. Of course his how to impress dad suggestions made me crack up.

I can't wait to see what happens at the hockey game...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Crashed

Hmmm just discovered your story and must admit to being riveted already. I love the different points of view and already thaught Maria was evil but was even more sure when she spouted her nonsense. The children seemed like nice kids but bet will find out for sure in future chapters. LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I think I need to place a warning on my story though.

Warning: Children may cause you to giggle and smile until painful. Their adorableness (yes, that is in fact a word in the world of CONSTN) may cause you to squeal. Please follow with caution.

 

=)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Five O'clock Somewhere

Wow...can't help but here "It's a small world" in my head. This is going to be such an interesting story and cant wait to read more about the kids. I adore kids and love the interaction.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Life is a Party

Awww Ants telling Bella he loved her...sigh...it was just to sweet. I think playing hookie for the day is not the end of world. Aye while I understand Edward's panic (have munchkins of my own), he needs to learn how to listen to brain every now and then. I can't wait to read about the aftermath to this.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Watching You

Uh oh Edward is definatly going to get it when Bella gets home...

Oh Anthony is just the cutest thing EVER! LOL i can just imagine what he is going to do with that marker. Please update soon!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Go Girl

No worries on the updates as I will be here for you...and on that note...grrr to that horrid reviewer. I can't believe the odacity of some people...huffs in annoyance.

Your story lacks nothing and even if they think Bella is a bad nanny she does what she should. She takes care of those children and more importantly she loves them and they her. I'm sorry for the narrow mindedness some people display and I hope you are doing well. Now I do enjoy your story and hope you find comfort in those of us who do appreciate your creative mind. Love ya honey!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: I Want a Mom

Eeeeepppp how could you leave me hanging like that!!!

Ok so I did wonder if Emmett was going to exact revenge for getting his ass thrown in the pool but hey...he deserved it. LoL... I read that section four times and laughed everytime I pictured him flying into the water. Poor Antes is definatly having a rough party isn't he? I just love him!

 

PS: I must concur...Avatar was kickass!!

 
Summary:

A pregnancy changes everything in an instant. Bella went from being a Godmother to a mother and ended up raising her best friends daughter after she died from giving birth. With her families support, she makes it through obstacles until she meets a gorgeous guy at a rare night out. Something in his past could tear her world apart, will it end up that way or will love conquer all?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 52897
[Report This] Published: June 29, 2009 Updated: August 04, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Wedding

I like is so far but your notes indicate Bella will end up with Jasper...makes me wonder what happens to Edward?

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Date

Hmmmm what on earth made Edward and Bella break up in the first place...and sounds like Aly-cat did a bit of prowling last night

 




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