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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

When his sex fantasy starts following him to class, Edward realizes that sleep deprivation and drug cocktails are not the best way to rid oneself of temptation. He does not remember the first time he saw Bella, only that she was probably on the arm of his lifelong rival, Jasper. He is haunted instead by the figments of her in his bed, on his floor, against the wall of his studio, atop his piano… He is convinced that if he wants to lose the ghost, he needs to seduce the real girl and begins a rather pathetic crusade to win the stranger’s heart.

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Now, the closer Jasper comes to finding out, the closer the truth behind "the feud" threatens to reveal itself and tear their relationship to shreds.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 134153
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2009 Updated: February 05, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Damn I think I may need a cold shower myself...

I still think Bella needs to do what she joked about...Tie that boy up and make him down a little alcohol and honey have your way with him...Hell I'll buy her the duct tape and provide the drinks. That boy needs to lighten up. I love how diabolical Alice and Rose can be; them girls know thier stuff.

NeuroticMuse413: It is my pleasure to review...your story brings a smile to my face...can't wait to see what you come up with next. =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Then add another slash for me...It was enlightning to read Jasper's love encounter with Alice. * sigh* I am curious now as to what Bella is blocking and that Jasper's not telling. I guess I will have to wait patiently for your reveal.

What's up with Esme? I am seriously intrigued by what she could have possibly talked to Edward about...*bounces around anxiously*

If Bella gets to take Edward's picture can I place the bow on him *wink*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Do you know the answer to that age old question...what do they wear under those kilts? Seriously wonder that myself...lol

Now I am really curious as to what happened those many moons ago that Bella stopped coming to Folks...

*bouncing around* Can't wait to read about Jasper's reactions to Bella's steady.

BTW: I wouldn't worry about speeding up the story just because some want it resolved...your are the artist my dear so you paint this picture how you see and to hell with everyone else

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

I can imagin you'd still be laughing over a bj scene like that (cracks me up to but hey it happens). Ohh this chapter had raw passion and I just loved it...

Can't wait for the big reveal...

LOL...if Edward needs therepy I'm sure we could help him out...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Thank God Edward finally told Bella everything...think they have a shot. Was laughing so hard at Carlisle's comment about just being told to lie...god that look would be priceless. Could only imagine if Esme was the one they ran into...LOL she'd probably have had a heartattack; not mama's lil boy. Can't wait to see what happens next...still curious what happened that Bella doesn't remember that kept her from Forks those many summers ago.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Is Edward remembering something he has repressed? It's hard to decifer but damn it all I am absolutly riveted by all the possibilities. Of course, I could smack that boy too for thinking of leaving...Columbia really? What makes him think his dream Bella won't follow him there? Jasper is such a  good big brother...LOL can't wait to read about his reaction when he realizes Bella's mystery man is Edward...

Will gladly stay tuned in!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

It sounds like Edward and Bella's relationship has taken an interesting twist...LOL to say the least.

Bella in a red dress really has Edward losing his mind...

Thanksgiving should be one hell of a time...can't wait.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

You my dear are BRILLIAT! Wow so that is what set off the feud...It sounds like it is gonna be one hell of a come to jesus meeting...I can't wait to find out more!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Holy Hell Bella was awesome when it came to dealing with Jazz!!!! * does a little jig* I am so glad all of that got out in the open...Alice is such a devious little sprite...5 days of no sex...poor Jasper..LOL

I have a recliner that I sit in when writing reports, term papers, research, whatever...a few strategically placed pillows and I have no problems with my back

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Aww Jasper is just the greates when he's not being an ass. LOL I love the ring it is perfect. If Edward doesn't get any sleep he's gonna be batshit crazy for lack of a better pharase. Will the dreams come back? *Sigh* I am saddened that this journey is almost at an end, but it has been one hell of a ride.

 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

My dear artist...I was thrilled to take this journey with you and will anxiously await any new endevours you may wish to share with us. I love that Edward has new dreams...after all they have been thru, they deserve a new direction.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Wow my dear...what a wonderful ending...they will be together.

You bet I'll keep you on my fav list...can't wait for the new story, I will await it anxiously...Until we meet again

 
Summary:

Picks up decades from the day in the meadow of New Moon. What if it had been Victoria who showed up, not Laurent? What if Victoria's 'plans' for Bella did not include killing her, but changing her (the one thing Edward wasn't willing to do to keep Bella safe from James.).

 

Bella has been living as a member of the Volturi for decades now, not able to remember her human life. What happens when she goes searching for her past and comes face to face with her mate and his family whom she has forgotten about for the past 65 years?

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 86459
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2009 Updated: August 06, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmmm what in interesting beginning...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Getting into story and can't believe Victoria did this to Bella. Looking back on the last chapter and Bradley Mason it's no wonder things are starting to be triggered in Bella's head. I wonder if she'll meet up with her long lost past anytime soon...



Author's Response:

We'll have to see. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oooohhhhh Isabella is learning of her past and it is exciting. It breaks my heart though that Charlie is now gone...silent tear falls



Author's Response:

Charlie would be over 100 if he was live. It makes sense that he isn't around. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Holy Hale...I'm losing my mind as well...I am so happy i found this story I am so anxious for a family reunion..



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

O dear lord is it really Carlisle? Your gonna kill me my dear...



Author's Response:

tee-hee. I love cilffhangers.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

*stares at screen in stunned silence*



Author's Response:

Is that a good thing or a bad thing??? haha

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So it's off the Phoenix for us...bounces like Alice with excitement and anticipation...



Author's Response:

I love how bouncy Alice is. Glad you are equally bouncy.:)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow Bella is developing a concious on her own...way to go Bella! Though the idea of vampire Bambi intrigues me this could be somewhat scary. I loved reading about her trying to figure out how to hunt animals...laughed the entire time she was looking for camo gear, was rolling when she spit out bambi's blood...



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed this chapter. I wanted bella to open to the idea of hunting animals on her own, before she met the cullens. As for Bambi, well....

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh poor bambie...shakes head sadly, although he sounded really scary.

Yay for Jasper finding Bella!!! Maybe now they will know that the reason Bella never looked per se is because she couldn't remember...or more like didn't want to remember.I am so excited for the reunion that is to come!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review (all of them!) Glad you are enjoying the story so much!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh dear lord the agony of a cliffhanger. I wonder what in the world is going on in Isabella's mnd. I am so glad they are meeting face to face but can't help but wonder if Bella will remember Edward leaving her and have a complete meltdown. Please update soon...



Author's Response:

i hate reading cliffhangers, but it so much fun to write them! We will have to see what Bella remembers. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh dear lord honey...are you trying to kill me? This is definatly a chapter to remember. Wow oh wow. So many things going on. Thank you for your blub as to why Edward was a little blase about some things. I can't help but wonder what Bella will do after Edward confessed to leaving her like that. Please update soon or my imagination may make it worse than what I have in mind at the moment



Author's Response:

Haha. No, I am not trying to kill you. Hopefully the next chapter will be up quickly to calm your imagination. Thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

Breaking Edward is my first attempt at an AH story. Edward has severe OCD. He has now been dubbed by my readers on fanfiction.net as OCDward. His world and obsessions are completely turned upside-down when he meets his sister's friend, Bella, for the first time. It harbors around the difficulties of both of them struggling with coming to terms with what they are feeling while dealing with his hang-ups.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 46069
[Report This] Published: June 27, 2009 Updated: December 20, 2009


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Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: I Want to Punch a B*tch

*Holds a little Team Edward flag...waves*

I just love me some overprotective Edward. James...what a tool...that creepy punk got what he deserved. LOL...some of Edward's tendancies had me rolling, he worries a bit to much sometimes.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: I Have Decided to Wage a War Against Myself

LOL Edward sure does have a few issue...I have a good feeling about this story

 




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