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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

The Cullens leave Forks after Edward encounters Bella, but he never forgets her. Meanwhile, Bella has vivid dreams about a man whose face she cannot see. Does destiny have something in store for them? AU, OOC. Co-written by Fantasy Mother and Lilliput.

 

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Perchance to Dream is an Indie TwiFic Awards Final Round Finalist for
Best Collaboration

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 94664
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: August 03, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This chapter was absolutly incredible! I am confused as they are who this entity is but I am so grateful for it. You write so beautifully...some of the words bring tears to my eyes. I love how they are coming so close to each other. I wonder when they will figure out how they are mentally connected and when they will realize they have been together for those many years.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, from both of us.  It's wonderful to hear something like this.  It helps make the work worth it.  Thank you again.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Whoa what's up with Bella and the migraines from hell? Does this pertain to her and Edward's mental connection. Whooo can't wait to find out...



Author's Response:

Give it a little time and you'll have some answers ;-)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

He saw her! He finally saw her! What a cliffhanger...arrrgggg why do you torture me so? I absolultly adore this story...got my fingers crossed that you get that award. Well if I guess i am not to worried...you both are gonna do great.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  We'll see, and we'll find out Monday night.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OH MY GOD!!! They have finally put two and two together!!! * doin a happy jig* I am so excited...i wonder what the doctors will tell her. It must have about killed Edward when Bella was sayin goodbye. I am thrilled that they have figured out they were always meant to be together.

Wouldn't doubt you'll get a notice saying you won an award...this is truly a spellbinding story. =)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support.  And, you'll have some answers about her condition tonight.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow...words can't even begin o expain the awe i feel at reading these words. Bella's diagnosis was devastating, but Edward's willingness to keep her forever were elating...I hope Bella's change goes well.



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much but...

Bella hasn't agreed yet...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Yayyy the day is here! Bella will be with Edward for eternity...



Author's Response:

LOL, thank you!  and YUP

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

*tears slowly fall* I am moved by the beauty of Bella's change...

It saddens me that only the epilogue is left but am thrilled you shared this wonderful story with us all. I have recommended it to my sister who has it up next to read...I hope you all write more wonderful stories...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  We cried too.

Lilliput and I (FantasyMother) will be working on separate stories for a while.  If you favorite us under our separate names you'll know when the next thing comes up.  I have a new story that just had the first chapter go up...today, as a matter of fact :-)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

*Tears silently trickle down* That was an absolutly beautiful ending to a great story and my gratitude for such a spellbinding story...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, and you're definitely welcome :-)

 
Pieces of Me by Merrisol Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

 

 

Leaving family secrets behind, Bella moves to New York City and, with moral support from Alice, blossoms into an independent, powerful business woman. Enter Edward, the prodigal boss's son, who expects to take his rightful place in the family business. A competition ensues between Edward and Bella; meanwhile the office girls band together to dish out some revenge of their own on the womanizing Edward. Secrets and lemony goodness in the future.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 22139
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: September 28, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Fresh Start

Ahhh a new life for Bella...this should be exciting



Author's Response:

Bella has finally grown some balls! Now, let's see what she does with them. Thanks for the review!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Settled

*sniff* Alice is such a great friend...I love her to pieces

LOL...The first meeting is great! God Edward can be such an ass...



Author's Response:

Alice and Bella are very good for each other. Edward, on the other hand, is a pompous ass! LOL Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Game On

Operation Edward Goin Down is a go people...EXCELLENT!!!

I can't wait to see how it all goes down



Author's Response:

A lot of funny stuff ... that's what I have planned!! Glad you are enjoying! Thx.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Punked

*silent tears rolling down* I was laughing so hard...God this is great! I can't wait to see what the office girls have up thier sleeve. I'm just as curious as Bella as to the deal with Esme and Emmett...



Author's Response:

She's a nosy thing. Hmmmm. Glad you are enjoying my little story! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: A Painful Past

As said that was fanfuckingtastic...LOL I about fell over laughing reading that Edward had to vacate the premises immediatly...serves him right. The mystery man has me curious. I can only hope it is someone we know...I would love for it to be Emmett....lol



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you! I am so pleased you are enjoying this story. His problems are just beginning, I'm afraid. Everyone is really interested in who the caller is. Edward told me he would tell you guys but he doesn't know either, and I'm not telling him, even if he does sit over there and try to dazzle me. Bad Edward!!!

Thanks for reviewing all the chapters. I love to hear what you guys are thinking!! XOXO

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: What the hell?

Well damn honey! You are gonna give me a complex. I down right laughed my ass off with all the internal monologues and Good Lord jizz pants!!! *ccccann't Breath!* I absolutly loved this chapter! Please don't keep me waiting long, I want to see if Bella's inner self wins!



Author's Response:

I'm working on it as we speak. Poor Edward. He can't seem to control himself these days. I wonder if Bella can control him? I think she is having a bit of trouble controlling herself! What happens when they are finally alone together???? Stay tuned. It will be lemony.

Thanks for taking the time to review. So happy you are enjoying my little story!!!

 
Summary:

 

THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.

After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?

 

Thank you to heatherdawnc for the banner!

Favorite review so far:

Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.

Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Holy Hale! My dear that was simply breath taking.... I love how you named the story after the song and the used it!

*inwardly dancing like mad...cuz at the office* They are finally together agian! The fact that Cassie and Rob are coming to is so sweet...now Elle can have both her worlds together....I love it love it love it!

Until next time....



Author's Response:

You know what's funny. Is I loved the song title and the song itself so I named the story but I didn't realize how perfect the lyrics were for it until later. Thank you so much for the great review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What is that evil little pixie up to?



Author's Response:

Hehehe, you'll find out soon enough! Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ahhh and so let the games begin!



Author's Response:

Ohh yes! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

And now he's back...sneaky little devil...hope she makes him work hard for his reentry into her life



Author's Response:

Hehehe, she will to an extent. I hope you enjoy it! Thank you for reviewing every chapter, I love it!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yeah found hunter's lane to be quite humerous as well...



Author's Response:

Hehehehe, thank you.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Me wondering about tomorrow as well. I hope Alice doesn't have a coranary because she didn't get to shop for any of the new stuff...



Author's Response:

Hahha, Oh she will get her shopping you just wait! Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

AAAAhhhhh cliffhangers will be the death of me...



Author's Response:

Hehehe....I have a few of those...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That boy doesn't fight fair now does he...he knows what he wants



Author's Response:

Hehe he definitely does not play fair. But that's Edward, since when does he play fair! Haha. Thanks for the review

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What an interesting date...I wonder if Edward will ever tell her what he was doing those years they were seperated. I wonder if he's not so innocent anymore either



Author's Response:

Your questions will be answered...eventually, in the story...Thanks for reviewing

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well that was a very interesting game of truth or dare...the blood thing was just to poetic...LOL was laughing a good five minutes over that one

Author's Response:

Hehehe, the blood was fun to write, I'm glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ahh what's a girl to choose; an eternity with Edward or a mortal existance. If  I had the choice there would be not contest...Edward baby!



Author's Response:

Yeah, no kidding! I would choose Edward...or uhh *ahem* Kellan Lutz in a heartbeat...but sadly I don't think that's gonna happen anytime soon!

 




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