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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: July 01, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Pieces of Me by Merrisol Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 115]
Summary:

 

 

Leaving family secrets behind, Bella moves to New York City and, with moral support from Alice, blossoms into an independent, powerful business woman. Enter Edward, the prodigal boss's son, who expects to take his rightful place in the family business. A competition ensues between Edward and Bella; meanwhile the office girls band together to dish out some revenge of their own on the womanizing Edward. Secrets and lemony goodness in the future.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 22139
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: September 29, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: A Painful Past

As said that was fanfuckingtastic...LOL I about fell over laughing reading that Edward had to vacate the premises immediatly...serves him right. The mystery man has me curious. I can only hope it is someone we know...I would love for it to be Emmett....lol



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you! I am so pleased you are enjoying this story. His problems are just beginning, I'm afraid. Everyone is really interested in who the caller is. Edward told me he would tell you guys but he doesn't know either, and I'm not telling him, even if he does sit over there and try to dazzle me. Bad Edward!!!

Thanks for reviewing all the chapters. I love to hear what you guys are thinking!! XOXO

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: What the hell?

Well damn honey! You are gonna give me a complex. I down right laughed my ass off with all the internal monologues and Good Lord jizz pants!!! *ccccann't Breath!* I absolutly loved this chapter! Please don't keep me waiting long, I want to see if Bella's inner self wins!



Author's Response:

I'm working on it as we speak. Poor Edward. He can't seem to control himself these days. I wonder if Bella can control him? I think she is having a bit of trouble controlling herself! What happens when they are finally alone together???? Stay tuned. It will be lemony.

Thanks for taking the time to review. So happy you are enjoying my little story!!!

 
Summary:

 

THIS STORY HAS BEEN PUT ON HIATUS. At least until september-october 2010. I am getting married in august and it's hard to plan a wedding and write at the same time. I applaud those who can do that. I am NOT giving up on this story and I WILL finish it. Eventually. Thanks for understanding.

After Edward left in New Moon, Bella changed. She changed everything about herself in hopes of forgetting him. She graduated and moved down to California. The one place she knew she would never see the Cullens. 4 years later, she is now known as Elle Swan, a successful interior designer. What happens when she is sent somewhere else for her job?

 

Thank you to heatherdawnc for the banner!

Favorite review so far:

Ahh... so good!! A perfect mix with fluff and reality, you're soo good at writing that I gets envious *envious sigh*.

Have I told you how good this story and idea really is. There are many different stories where Bella changes her personality drastically after Edward left. And of all those stories I have been reading I think you are the one that has captured Bella's personalty best. Many of the stories have changed Bella that much that if she wasn't namned Bella you shouldn't know it was her, but you, even if you see the big changes, you can find the Bella how she was shy, sweet and madly in love with Edward four years ago. With another words - I think you are the one that have captured Bellas character best.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 69614
[Report This] Published: June 17, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Holy Hale! My dear that was simply breath taking.... I love how you named the story after the song and the used it!

*inwardly dancing like mad...cuz at the office* They are finally together agian! The fact that Cassie and Rob are coming to is so sweet...now Elle can have both her worlds together....I love it love it love it!

Until next time....



Author's Response:

You know what's funny. Is I loved the song title and the song itself so I named the story but I didn't realize how perfect the lyrics were for it until later. Thank you so much for the great review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What is that evil little pixie up to?



Author's Response:

Hehehe, you'll find out soon enough! Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ahhh and so let the games begin!



Author's Response:

Ohh yes! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

And now he's back...sneaky little devil...hope she makes him work hard for his reentry into her life



Author's Response:

Hehehe, she will to an extent. I hope you enjoy it! Thank you for reviewing every chapter, I love it!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yeah found hunter's lane to be quite humerous as well...



Author's Response:

Hehehehe, thank you.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Me wondering about tomorrow as well. I hope Alice doesn't have a coranary because she didn't get to shop for any of the new stuff...



Author's Response:

Hahha, Oh she will get her shopping you just wait! Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

AAAAhhhhh cliffhangers will be the death of me...



Author's Response:

Hehehe....I have a few of those...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

That boy doesn't fight fair now does he...he knows what he wants



Author's Response:

Hehe he definitely does not play fair. But that's Edward, since when does he play fair! Haha. Thanks for the review

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What an interesting date...I wonder if Edward will ever tell her what he was doing those years they were seperated. I wonder if he's not so innocent anymore either



Author's Response:

Your questions will be answered...eventually, in the story...Thanks for reviewing

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well that was a very interesting game of truth or dare...the blood thing was just to poetic...LOL was laughing a good five minutes over that one

Author's Response:

Hehehe, the blood was fun to write, I'm glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ahh what's a girl to choose; an eternity with Edward or a mortal existance. If  I had the choice there would be not contest...Edward baby!



Author's Response:

Yeah, no kidding! I would choose Edward...or uhh *ahem* Kellan Lutz in a heartbeat...but sadly I don't think that's gonna happen anytime soon!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LOL I can't believe Alice got her in a wedding dress...now I am extremly curious as to what Edward has planned for the night. Also wondering if we're gonna hear about his time away from the family.



Author's Response:

You know Alice...she can and will do anything! Haha. Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love that movie and yes Steven Strait nd Chance Crawford were sinfully beautiful in that movie....*sigh*

Hmmm wonder if Edward will fight for her...sure hope he has a few tricks up his sleeve...



Author's Response:

Hehe, thats the whole reason I bought the movie! Haha, thanks for the review hun!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

3 more chapters before an Edward appearance *gasp* Oh well I'll get over it...LOL Well until then lets see how Denial Bells lives it up in California...



Author's Response:

Hehe, Denial Bells....I love it! Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

LOL Cassie's cooking ability reminds me alot of one of my sisters. Nice to hear I'm not the only one with a cookin challenged person in thier lives...

The count down to Edward's return has commenced...



Author's Response:

Heheh, did you read my note at the bottom? Cassie, unfortunately, takes after me. Poor girl. My fiance won't let me cook. He's afraid I'm gonna burn the house down. Yeah, like I could if I tried. Haha

Yes, the countdown is on, and trust me it is soooo worth the wait. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Mini Golfing...wonder if Edward knows how to minigolf...LOL it is actually one of my families favorite outing; my boys are actually really good and have the most amazing luck with it.  I on the other hand suck....lol

Oh I sure hope we hit the 50 mark I am dying to see Edward again...



Author's Response:

We have surpassed the 50 mark! It is incredible! Thank you for the review hun!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Yay they are together and the pssibilities are endless...cant ait for the next update



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

LOL...gotta love Emmett and Rosalie. Bella and Edward's date was so sweet. hope to see them coming closer in time...



Author's Response:

Thank you hun!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ahhh great melding is correct. It was great to see both of Bella's worlds colliding and doing well. Hopefully this will ease some of her anxieties for a bit.



Author's Response:

We can only hope! Thank you for the review!

 
Summary:

Bella isn't your regular government agent. She's a rogue agent, and she's killing everyone that ruined her life. What happens when she takes an FBI agent, Edward Cullen, hostage? Will her revenge still be burned into her mind?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 47545
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2009 Updated: July 26, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow that is one hell of a way to start off...I am so curious about Bella's training. I will definalty stick around for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, Redbird is on a roll...I mean those two didn't even know what hit them...



Author's Response:

Not gunna lie, that was one of my favourite scenes, haha.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well we know have met Edward Cullen. Ohhh Bella is badass, but I have to ask myself whether Bella will have the stomach to kill him. I can't wait to find out. I am so excited!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Summary:

When his sex fantasy starts following him to class, Edward realizes that sleep deprivation and drug cocktails are not the best way to rid oneself of temptation. He does not remember the first time he saw Bella, only that she was probably on the arm of his lifelong rival, Jasper. He is haunted instead by the figments of her in his bed, on his floor, against the wall of his studio, atop his piano… He is convinced that if he wants to lose the ghost, he needs to seduce the real girl and begins a rather pathetic crusade to win the stranger’s heart.

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Now, the closer Jasper comes to finding out, the closer the truth behind "the feud" threatens to reveal itself and tear their relationship to shreds.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 134153
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2009 Updated: February 05, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to My World

Wow completly riveted...what in the world set those two boys off? Does Alice walk alone? I have a feeling if Jasper knew he would conveniently bump into her during her walks...LOL

 




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