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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Bella isn't your regular government agent. She's a rogue agent, and she's killing everyone that ruined her life. What happens when she takes an FBI agent, Edward Cullen, hostage? Will her revenge still be burned into her mind?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 47545
[Report This] Published: June 18, 2009 Updated: July 26, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, Redbird is on a roll...I mean those two didn't even know what hit them...



Author's Response:

Not gunna lie, that was one of my favourite scenes, haha.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well we know have met Edward Cullen. Ohhh Bella is badass, but I have to ask myself whether Bella will have the stomach to kill him. I can't wait to find out. I am so excited!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
Summary:

When his sex fantasy starts following him to class, Edward realizes that sleep deprivation and drug cocktails are not the best way to rid oneself of temptation. He does not remember the first time he saw Bella, only that she was probably on the arm of his lifelong rival, Jasper. He is haunted instead by the figments of her in his bed, on his floor, against the wall of his studio, atop his piano… He is convinced that if he wants to lose the ghost, he needs to seduce the real girl and begins a rather pathetic crusade to win the stranger’s heart.

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Now, the closer Jasper comes to finding out, the closer the truth behind "the feud" threatens to reveal itself and tear their relationship to shreds.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 134153
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2009 Updated: February 05, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome to My World

Wow completly riveted...what in the world set those two boys off? Does Alice walk alone? I have a feeling if Jasper knew he would conveniently bump into her during her walks...LOL

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

It gets better...SCORE! I liked the fluffy momemts and it cracks me up that Edward is so self concious around Bella...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Excellent work...can't wait to see what her dreams tell her.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Punch for punch ayyy. Well it looks like things are gonna heat up and I've got my ice pack ready...LOL

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

What the Hell was Jasper thinking kissing Bella? Possessive much? Although he's gonna have kittens when he wakes up at the Cullen's...LOL

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Wow things are getting extremly interesting. Why is Jasper being such a rat bastard about his relationship with Alice. Like Bella said...thier cute. Ah men, don't know what they want sometimes.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Well if it gets his shirt off...I will review every time if need be. LOL Edward is so digging himself into a hole in this chapter. When will he learn.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Geesh Jazz needs to lighten up...He should just tell Bella about him and Alice and just get over it. LOL...guess big brother has a few things to learn

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

I don't know if reviews are better...an Edward detour is pretty hard to resist...LOL

Can I venture his piano playing is his love before Bella?

Loving the story BTW

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Wow it is so sweet that Bella was there to help Edward thru a nightmare. Looks like they are gonna get some really good data for their project.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Well its about GDT jasper! I am exstatic that he is finally telling Bella about Alice...it's awesome!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

If it's not one thing it's another...lol. Jasper needs to take a fuckin chill pill; well maybe five. I wonder if Edward will remember telling Bella he loves her. LOL i guess happy pills will do that to you =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

If it's not one thing it's another...lol. Jasper needs to take a fuckin chill pill; well maybe five. I wonder if Edward will remember telling Bella he loves her. LOL i guess happy pills will do that to you =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Now Emmett and Rosalie are in on it...EXCELLENT!

Hope you travels are going well...love your story...Can't wait to see what you reveal to us next

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Damn I think I may need a cold shower myself...

I still think Bella needs to do what she joked about...Tie that boy up and make him down a little alcohol and honey have your way with him...Hell I'll buy her the duct tape and provide the drinks. That boy needs to lighten up. I love how diabolical Alice and Rose can be; them girls know thier stuff.

NeuroticMuse413: It is my pleasure to review...your story brings a smile to my face...can't wait to see what you come up with next. =)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Then add another slash for me...It was enlightning to read Jasper's love encounter with Alice. * sigh* I am curious now as to what Bella is blocking and that Jasper's not telling. I guess I will have to wait patiently for your reveal.

What's up with Esme? I am seriously intrigued by what she could have possibly talked to Edward about...*bounces around anxiously*

If Bella gets to take Edward's picture can I place the bow on him *wink*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Do you know the answer to that age old question...what do they wear under those kilts? Seriously wonder that myself...lol

Now I am really curious as to what happened those many moons ago that Bella stopped coming to Folks...

*bouncing around* Can't wait to read about Jasper's reactions to Bella's steady.

BTW: I wouldn't worry about speeding up the story just because some want it resolved...your are the artist my dear so you paint this picture how you see and to hell with everyone else

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

I can imagin you'd still be laughing over a bj scene like that (cracks me up to but hey it happens). Ohh this chapter had raw passion and I just loved it...

Can't wait for the big reveal...

LOL...if Edward needs therepy I'm sure we could help him out...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 10, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Thank God Edward finally told Bella everything...think they have a shot. Was laughing so hard at Carlisle's comment about just being told to lie...god that look would be priceless. Could only imagine if Esme was the one they ran into...LOL she'd probably have had a heartattack; not mama's lil boy. Can't wait to see what happens next...still curious what happened that Bella doesn't remember that kept her from Forks those many summers ago.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Is Edward remembering something he has repressed? It's hard to decifer but damn it all I am absolutly riveted by all the possibilities. Of course, I could smack that boy too for thinking of leaving...Columbia really? What makes him think his dream Bella won't follow him there? Jasper is such a  good big brother...LOL can't wait to read about his reaction when he realizes Bella's mystery man is Edward...

Will gladly stay tuned in!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

It sounds like Edward and Bella's relationship has taken an interesting twist...LOL to say the least.

Bella in a red dress really has Edward losing his mind...

Thanksgiving should be one hell of a time...can't wait.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

You my dear are BRILLIAT! Wow so that is what set off the feud...It sounds like it is gonna be one hell of a come to jesus meeting...I can't wait to find out more!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Screwing Up

Holy Hell Bella was awesome when it came to dealing with Jazz!!!! * does a little jig* I am so glad all of that got out in the open...Alice is such a devious little sprite...5 days of no sex...poor Jasper..LOL

I have a recliner that I sit in when writing reports, term papers, research, whatever...a few strategically placed pillows and I have no problems with my back

 




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