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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Love Comes by stacylambert Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

The Cullens return to Forks to keep an eye on a new generation of Quileute shape-shifters. They find this new pack of wolves to be not only large, but led by the impulsive Jacob Black. When Edward falls for Bella Swan, who just happens to be Jacob's girlfriend,what will happen between the Quileuetes and the Cullens ?

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Aro
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 79824
[Report This] Published: June 10, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: The Call

OH NO do they have any nomadic visitors by chance? The agony of having to wait to find out...but hey it only makes it all the more sweeter. This chapter was filled with lemony goodness...



Author's Response:

No vamps, but that's all I'm saying :-)

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Vision

I wonder how exactly they keep an eye on the young wolves? This is an interesting idea and I can't wait to see where you take this

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: First Day

 Bella's responses were good but once she see's Edward in gym class she may just want to die

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Gym Class

I wonder how it will all work out with the vamps and wolves...If only Bella knew her boyfriend was a wolf and she was flirting with a vampire...the look on her face would be priceless

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Party

Ya I agree about Mike...he seems like a nice guy but still a teenager so most of his reactions written in the book are typical teenage reactions. I am glad you made him a good guy in your story

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Peace Offering

No Volturi...Excellent

I guess vampires lives are complicated enough than to add the 3 musketeers to the mix

Curious how Bella takes the news

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Talk

Ahhh when will that boy ever learn that Bella is more than just a friend. I love the pack but geesh Jake is really just going overboard...LOL guess he hasn't learned that when you dead just lie down (no pun intended for our awesome vamps)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Family Matters

I wouldn't mind if you dragged this out a bit...I am enjoying the story.

Emmett is gonna have weeks of fun at Edward's expense...LOL I can't wait

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: The Chief

Can I make snikerdoodles with Edward? lol

I am glad Charlie met the family...should put his mind to a bit of ease but what can you say he is a daddy. All daddy's feel the need to protect thier baby girls...I know my husband can't see my lil girl growing up so when the boys come a callin I have a funny feeling it will be comical to see and mortifying for my little girl.

Up next the meadow...*excitedly waiting*

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Meadow

Well for this being your first lemon, you did very well. I was starting to think Jake would hold things off but I was pleasantly surprised that he didn't. I love how she accepts that she is now a part of the Cullen family and it cracks me up that she said her family was scary as hell. Hell ya! But they are fiercly loyal...

I can't wait to see what happens next...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Good Intentions

Wow meeting the Cullens was Epic and I so love the Emmett remarks...he had me laughin he entire time. Love it and can't wait to read what happens next...so we get to hear girl talk?



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, no girl talk. I'm keeping the whole thing EPOV, and he's much to polite to repeat what he hears ;-) Hopefully the little surprise next chapter will make up for it.

Thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: The Visitors

LOL...it's funny to see Tanya jealous...wonder what Alice will make Bella wear...that ought to be good



Author's Response:

Who wouldn't be jealous? It's Edward! ;-)

I'm sure whatever it is, Bella won't be happy. I won't make her compain too much, though.

Thanks for the review :-)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: August 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Dance

Don't for a moment think Jake will all of the sudden be the good friend...That boy has a few serious screws loose if he thinks otherwise...LOL



Author's Response:

Haha, I agree. He's expecting everyone to give him a free pass instead of stepping up to accepting responsibility.

Thanks for the review :-)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Confession

What?!? Leah and Sam hurt my Seth!!! *stalks around room thinking murderous thoughts* (Sorry Seth has always been one of my favorites) I sure hope those two get knocked down a notch or two.

Ohhhh Edward will regret being civil to Jacob...wonder what that pup does next. I can't wait for you to share more with us!



Author's Response:

Breathe! He'll be just fine. Carlisle worked his magic. ;-)

The next we see of Jacob will be... BIG. That's all I'm saying for now. :-X

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Gifts

*Gasp* * Double Gasp**feels faint*

Holy Hale!!! Edward proposed!.

 Way to make a girl fall off her chair in shock... That was brilliant!! *does a happy dance* You surprised me on that one as I wasn't expecting a proposal. Wow!

Can't wait for your next update... stares off into space contemplating

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Isle Esme

Sorry to hear about your mom but happy that she is doing better.

I loved the visit to Isle Esme, it was great. Jasper punching a shark was hilarious. The "talk" wow, are they really going to wait five years to change Bella? I can't wait to see what happens when they finally tell Charlie they are engaged.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Confined Spaces

OH No CHARLIE!!!!!!!

Don't get me wrong I'm team Jacob...but in this situation I can't help but be so disappointed in my Jacob. Sigh...

Charlie will be one of them! Oh my Gosh it's just to wonderous to comprehend. I am definatly on needles to see where you take this... I am just so loving how you are weaving you story.

 



Author's Response:

Yes, poor Charlie. He finally gets some attention in a story and look what happens to him. LOL!

Thanks for the review :-)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Waiting Game

OH DEAR LORD...THE WOLVES ARE COMING!!!

While I feel for Billy in this I am not as heartbroken that Jacob is gone...sigh I almost feel like a traitor to Team Jacob...

I definatly will be waiting for your next update...



Author's Response:

I'm sorry! Every time I read a review from a Team Jacob girl I feel just a little bit guiltier inside. Maybe I need to have a Team Edward Only banner! LOL

Thanks for the review ;-)

 
Summary:

When Edward leaves Bella, the rest of his family refuses.  Bella is left scarred and broken by Edward's sudden goodbye; the Cullens are left shocked and torn by his unexpected departure.  As Bella and her bloodsucking family grow closer, life begins to return to normal.

But just when everything starts to calm down, unexpected events lead to the one thing that can either save or destroy everything the Cullens have.

Including eachother.

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 21296
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2009 Updated: January 03, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*silent tears fall* Oh I am so happy they chose to stay...I have always wanted them to fight for Bella and this story is fruitation of that hope. Thank you...it was beautiful

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh so heartbreaking...I am at a lose for words...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh so heartbreaking...I am at a lose for words...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

*Alice like squeals and bouncing* I am thrilled Bella will be able to go to the Cullens. It is hard to see Bella in so much pain and knowing Edward is in the same pain. I just can't believe how much excitment I have over this. Carlisle is such an aweome dad...I cried for him knowin he wouldn't cry himself...he really should; mabe Bella will help him know that it is ok for him to cry as well...

 
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Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

*More silent tears* Oh how you love to make me cry...but in a good joyful way. This was everything I could have imagined. LOL I love Emmett he's just the greatest with his antics. Jasper...there are no word and I am glad he didn't have to live with the guilt much longer. Rose...oh I sure hope they can be friends. Carlisle and Esme are just so loving...protecting thier kids...sigh...just beautiful.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Again Emmett is the greatest. This family talk went rather well and I couldn't help but cheer at Emmett's suggestion when Bella said Edward would pay for what he'd done. I can't wait for more....scampers off for more.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 (V)

YYYYYESSSSS!!!!!

Oh I couldn't be more proud of  Bella for hitting Lauren. It was fabulous. I have no pity for her as she deserved that and more. First day back didn't seem to go to bad and I'm excited about picture time. LOL wonder what they have up thier sleeves.



Author's Response:

To Everyone:

Your support is overwhelming.  I'm SO grateful to all of you for reading this, and for your reviews.  You're all amazing; Thank you all SOO much!!!!!!!

Love always,

~8~

 




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