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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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daybreak by SirenSongx Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1101]
Summary:

It's basically a retelling of Twilight, with a few twists. Edward isn't the only one who can hear thoughts. Bella can also, but like Edward there is that one exception...him. What happens when she learns their secret? And what happens when the Cullen's find out that she already knows? Written from Bellla's point of view.

daybreak

Set during early 2006.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Daybreak Saga
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 89577
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2009 Updated: October 15, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: 22: Sacrifice

Si los palabras era bien...yes the words were right.

James is one sadistic SOB...poor Bella to have to hear his thoughts no less. It was a hard chapter to read since it is of Bella getting hurt. I can't wait to see how this all works out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: 24: Stalemate

Acck spasing computer keeps kicking me off...

 
Summary:

Bella is reunited with her childhood friend Alice under unlikely circumstances. When sparks fly between Bella and Alice's older brother, will she be able to resist? And what secrets is he hiding?

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 132141
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: House of Cards

*Stares at screen speechless...* seriously stunned here...



Author's Response:

Hang in there bb. Thanks for your reviews so far :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Shiny Happy People

Wow that was definatly  a good way to shift things between them. I am super excited to see how things work out between them...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Magnetic

Happy New Year is right!!! This is awesome!! It's freakin 2am but can't stop reading...but may have to quite for the night so I can see straight tomorrow...snicker

 
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Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: You'll Poke Your Eye Out

Hmm sledding ... EXCELLENT!!

 
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Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Pick ups and Spares

Game night just keeps getting better and better.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Moments

Oh dear Lord! Alice KNOWS...heaven help Bella now...

 
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Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: K.O.

HOlY HALE!! I can't believe he gave her a bloody nose...LOL however this is Bella we are talking about...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Out on the Town

Ha Edward cares more than he's letting on and so does Bella...LOL

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Girls and Boys

OMG! *stares at the screen speechless* What the *&!^ !

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Ante Up

Sigh...Bella is definatly caught between a rock and a hard place...gotta admire Edward's tenacity but Jesus freakin christ he's wasting it on Lauren

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Dish It Out

Ok now Lauren has graduated to ice bitch in my book...what on God's green earth is that woman thinking!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Do Not Pass Go

Oh dear lord Alice has a serious issue when picking men out for Bella...cringe...I almost don't know if I want to meet Laurant

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Trick or Treat

*To Johnny be good...Go, Go! Go Edward Go go Go, Edward be good....* That poor boy needs to dump the life sucker quick. I am glad Edward is taking some of Bella's advice and reconnecting with his family. The symphany was a riot. I can't wait to see what happens next.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Caffeine High

OMG Alice is just to much setting up Bella with Alec. I think Bella became my hero when she told James off...that was epic.

PS sounds like Lauren is a raving bitch regardless of what Edward says.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue and Dinner and a Show

Wow what a beginning...just found you story and it sound intriguing

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Trust (V)

Ok before I forget...good luck with finals. Just finished my degree in may and I don't think i will miss those stressful times.

I just loved how Edward is really trying to take it easy with Bella. Sigh...you just gotta love a man who tries. I mean that's all we women ask for isn't it...that they try? No worries on the delays; I'll still be here waiting for your next update. =)



Author's Response:

Thanks for all your reviews, it's always fun to follow along with people as they read :) I appreciate it, and thanks for the good luck wishes. I'm just about halfway through my law degree, and let me tell you I am ready to be done now. I sure love a man who tries, and even better one who listens and learns. You don't have to be perfect, its just about trying to be your best for the person you care about :) Thanks for your review!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Flaws (V)

Wow this was am amazing chapter...i love how your having them take baby steps to get it right...so excited.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Someday (V)

yay...does a happy dance. They definalty are on the right page now! I can't wait to see if thier someday comes to them

 
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Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Perspective (V)

Let me just say...I LOVE ROSE AND HER NO NONSENSE WAY.  I am just happy for a come to jesus meeting with Edward

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Two Steps Back

To be honest I don't blame Bella for giving Edward the cold shoulder...dang that boy said some really evil things. *silently seethes* Sigh...however i am a sucker for happy endings as well so do hope they work it out.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Exposure (V)

That was beautifully written, and the passion...WOW! Definatly worth the wait. I loved it...and so happy that Bella and Edward are working towards being together

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Forward (V)

LoL...I guess that will teach Bella to drink with all of the crew next time...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Exhale (V)

Wow only one chapter left! Sigh...I'm going to miss this story as I have had a blast reading it!

 




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