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Penname: AJ04 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: June 30, 2009
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Used to be a die hard Sci-fi fanatic...but my new Twilight obession is quickly overshadowing it...LOL...loving every minute of it!


I am a mother of three rabuncious and energetic kids ages 11,8, and 6. They keep me on my toes.


I read alot in order to escape the rigors of real life and it was my sister who acutally introduce me to the Twilight Saga after raving about it for months. LoL...I never would imagine the world in which I now find myself. I have met a number of fans and have made lifelong friends along the way. A group of us known as the Edge girls met on Twilighters Anonymous and it was one of my fellow Edger's that introduced me to Twilighted. I love them all to pieces and am thrilled to find another site to fill my reading obsession.



10-27-10 Things in RL are on a rollarcoaster right now, so to my darling authors...I will R&R as I have time but know you are not forgotten. I love each and everyone of you and value the journey's I have been on with every story I read. You author's rock and help me thru some tough times and for that I can't thank you enough. =)

1-1-11 Happy New Years!
Wow...hard to believe it is the start of a new year...to all my unbelievable authors; I write this to let you know that RL has really taken a toll. I am trying to catch up but recently I had a setback when my computer was dropped and now I have trouble logging on. As much as I would love to go buy a new computer, I can't with my budget being the way it is right now. So know that I will try and log on as much as I can at home and at work. As busy as work and my three kids keep me, unfortunatly the time I get to spend on here is limited but so very much appreciated. I regain my sanity here so, Thank you all for being there! Have a safe and blessed New Year!
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Reviews by AJ04
 
Summary:

Edward is a US Air Marshal working to protect our country from air attacks. Bella is a flight attendant on one of the flights he's monitoring. What happens when he can't get her off of his mind? Can he protect her and an entire flight from imminent danger?

Thank you MrsC for the banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 47909
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2010


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That was wonderful! I love how it all worked out for everyone in the end. Emmett is well and will be around in the future, Edward was promoted and is with Bella. It was just great! I have definalty enjoyed this tale and look forward to any future endevours you may share with us. The journey was well worth it...Thank you for sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for reading and reviewing each chapter! I loved hearing (or reading rather) your thoughts along the way :) I loved writing this story and am immensely happy to know that you found it worthwhile to read. I will definitely consider a sequel or maybe something all together different. Thanks again!!!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

*dancing around in my chair for joy* Oh my God Emmett is awake!!! *breaths a sigh of relief* While it was an emotional event...this definatly was life altering. I have to wonder what exactly the Volturi had in mind and what target. Was it really the white house? This has been one heck of a ride!



Author's Response:

You know. I realized after reading your review of this chapter just how open ended I left the Volturi threat in this story. It might make for an interesting sequel. And yes, the target was the white house. That's why the FBI was bound and determined to shoot down that flight before it could reach its mark. I'm glad you enjoyed that ride. And you know Emmett just HAD to be ok. He's my favorite of the Cullen men I think. :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OH God that was so intense!! Good riddance that the rat bastard James is dead!! He shot Bella! Victoria the sniveling bitch deserved more than the  bullets she got! I mean she shot Emmett! I love Emmett's character and am saddened that he was hurt so badly, jeesh if he makes it out ok, Rose is gonna kill him herself.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Damn author honey...you sure know how to get the blood pumping...oh the thought of Victoria and James on this flight is just to scintilating. I can't wait to find out what is going on...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Whoo this sounds fascinating...will be reading more for sure...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well well well Bella honey...you go girl! This will be an intersting flight indeed...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

*This reader has tears in her eyes* Carlisle's story is so sad. 9/11 was truly a sad day in our history. God I can still remember the shock I felt hearing about the first crash. When I saw the second plane hit on TV I was stunned and I cried when the towers fell. Definalty a day I will always remember.



Author's Response:

First, let me say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading your reviews of each chapter. I'm planning to respond back to a few of them, starting with this chapter. I also remember that day (9/11) as clear as if it recently happened. It was a terrible day. As for Carlisle's story, it was terribly sad. I'm glad that part of the chapter was able to move you. It certainly got me down and blue when I wrote it. 

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh I am so excited those two made a connection...it sounds like both of them could use a decent reletionship. I can't wait to see what you bring us next.



Author's Response:

LOL, I absolutely cringed when I went back a re-read this chapter... particularly that gawd awful lemon! But, I still like that they were comfortable and confident enough with themselves and their new found connection to take that step without feeling remorse the next morning. :)

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Holy Freakin Hale that was amazing!! I mean seriously that was awesome!

I am thrilled that everyone had a good time at dinner, but my stomach is in nots at the danger that seems to be right around the corner...so suspensful...

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: February 29, 2008

I do believe you have caught my attention...This is gonna be exciting!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Thursday, March 20, 2008

Wow I would be shell-shocked as well...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: March 22, 2008

Wow what a change for Bella, I don't know if I'd want to go shopping with though. WWEFD was so funny, I have a feeling Bella will need to use that one often

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: March 24-27, 2008

Perspective my foot...he's gonna go crazy without her...lol

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: April 7 - April 11, 2008

OH MY GOD!!! This is gonna be good!

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: April 13 - April 14, 2008

Ok Bella is gonna have to bend over backwards to get on Alice's good side...curious to see what happens next

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: April 15 - April 18, 2008

Ahh this was so great...Gotta give it to Rosalie...she rocks! and so does the author

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: April 27 - May 5, 2008

This is such a good chapter...Love how Emmett is so protective

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: May 17 - May 18, 2008

Oh for the love of all that is Holy...don't crush the sparkle in her eye

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: May 18 - May 20, 2008

A house guest...this should be rich...riveted

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: June 7 - June 13, 2008

I sure hope this trial ends soon...Aro gives me the creeps. Makes me wonder exactly what the connection Aro has to Bella and her family. I'm guessing it has to do with Charlie. I can't wait to see what you write next.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: June 20 - June 24, 2008

W.O.W!!!

What a way to make this exciting!! Edward is playing with fire when it comes to the Volturi and I hope to hell he becomes an expert cuz I don't want to see any of them get burned.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: August 1 - September 4, 2008

OH MY GOD SHE'S LEAVING!!!!!!!

*starts to hyperventilate...Trust your author...trust your author..TRUST YOUR AUTHOR!!!*

OK I feel better now. I will trust all will go well with them. I will believe in a HEA. I will anxiously await the next updates.

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: September 4 - December 13, 2008

Oh God it's been months since Bella disappeared...I hope she is OK.

Dum dum DUM...Alice knows, oh the wake of destruction will begin. Rose is going to kick Emmett's ass once she finds out the truth. Jessica really isn't the shinest penny in the bunch is she...snicker.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009


Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Five Years Ago to the Present

Can't wait to read more...

 
Reviewer: AJ04 Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: James and Close Encounters of the Sexy Kind

Wow this chapter had me rolling and plottting revenge as well...Excellent!

 




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