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Summary: Feature

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This is Edward's side of the bedroom reunion scene in eclipse (Chapter 8: Temper, pages 185-195).

Many thanks to psymom and MarcyJ for very thorough and extremely helpful betas - they're amazing!

As usual, all the regular disclaimers apply: Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight; no money is being made from this work; and absolutely no copyright infringement is intended. The dialog from eclipse here is copied only for clarity. Thanks to Stephenie for creating such wonderful characters!

One other note: I am a member of team Switzerland - I do not dislike Jacob, so don't be upset with me. Edward, on the other hand, has his own opinions...

In Edward's words...


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Totality
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 7339
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2008 Updated: April 18, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: June 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Strawberry Blonde - Bella's Jealousy

Bella's angry message on Edward's phone when Alice kidnaps her is one of my favorite parts.  You think she's going to take Edward's head off when he comes home.  Then when he does she does a complete turn around and is so loving and forgiving.  Of course, she had all the drama with Jacob telling her he wished she was dead rather than becoming a vampire.  She has guilt that she escaped Alice knowing it would make Edward upset. The surprise was Edward wasn't upset about it.  He made the decision that he had to accept her judgement to prevent a wedge in their relationship.  Loved how you handled Edward's thinking through the situation with his surprise at her reactions.  Also that you included his 17 year old lust desires when he would think and be around Bella.  She definitely does push his limits and controls at ever turn.  I thoroughly enjoyed the last four chapters on how you dealt with it.  Especially his thoughts towards Rosalie in regards to Denali and female vampires personal interest in him.  I hope he does dye all her clothes lime green, might teach her something.  Not sure it would teach her to keep her mouth shut.  Not Rosalie's style, but might show her, if you speak, there will be consequences to things you hold dear. 

 
As Bella Sleeps by blondie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary: Feature

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This story is a Midnight Sun-type one-shot, that is, Edward's POV of Twilight.

It takes place at between TW14 (Mind over Matter) and TW15 (The Cullens) while Bella sleeps – a peek into Edward’s infatuation, and how he reacts to hearing Bella say 'I love you" for the first time.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: White Night
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 13616
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2008 Updated: May 23, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: June 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: As Bella Sleeps

So nice to see a carefree and happy Edward.  It's so unusual.  It's refreshing and delightful.  The immense joy he felt when he heard the words "I love you," from Bella in her sleep talk.  Also the the feelings of getting one over on Rosalie.  Edward having  more control than taking Bella in the meadow and being completely happy with Bella to bout.  Making Rosalie angry in the process additional bonus.  Surprising your stud brother that you have not only a singer, but you were able to kiss her and she's still alive.  Amazed the entire family with the exception of Alice, who already saw it all.  Edward and his happy feet making swift steps back to his beloved.  Looking forward to additional Edward POV's from Twilight.

 
Hot Water by psymom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Feature

All Human.  One Shot.  Edward and Bella in the shower on his birthday.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1192
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2008 Updated: May 13, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: November 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Hot Water

Have to give it up to Edward, it is HIS birthday.  He should be able to do whatever he wants, when he wants, even if it'll make them late for their plans.  At least both parties will be happy and relaxed getting there.  Very good.  Gotta love that Edward.

 
Summary: Feature

Carlisle has had it with his children's constant bickering, so he sends the Cullens to Family therapy. Suicidal Edward, Bella's fear of committment, Alice addicted to shopping, Rosalie's hostility, emmett and Jasper's gambling... who will survive?


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 65189
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 29, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Breaking up is Hard to Do!

Don't you just love everyone's favorite vampire family "The Cullens"  Crazy, neurotic, nutty.  Delightfully amusing story filled with humor throughout.  Poor Dr Dover and this family.  Vampire nightmares with vegetables.  Definitely a wonderful metaphor.  Truly love your stories.  You are extremely talented.

 
Vampires in Vegas by vjgm Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Feature

Alice and Rosalie decide to take Bella to Vegas for a bachelorette party against her will. The boys feeling leftout, decide to get themselves into a little trouble too. 1st fanfict I wrote many moons ago... f


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 38331
[Report This] Published: May 29, 2008 Updated: May 30, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: The Gift the Keeps on Giving..

Wonderful story.  My stomach and sides are hurting so bad.  Laughed from the beginning all the way to the end. Emmett is still my favorite.  Rosalie sure knows how to handle that man and his crazy ideas.  Loved Bella and all her Eddie remarks.  Edward didn't believe Alice when she told Edward about Bella riding the cowboy.  I guess he knows he needs to believe Alice at all cost.  Have you had an idea to actually have them on their honeymoon with the cowboy and sailor suit for a giant strip tease?  And don't forget the black corset and tiny panties?  Edward is going to die.  I love your work.  Have been reading a lot of them.  Keep it up.


 
Verbal Engagement by blondie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Summary: Feature

Bella and Edward break the news to Charlie and Renee of their engagement.

I wrote this a while back, and it ended up paralleling part of Chapter 1 of Breaking Dawn.  Here's how I saw it happening 8-)

A one-shot in Bella's voice.


Categories: AU, Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2576
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2008 Updated: June 11, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: December 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Verbal Engagement

Very enjoyable. Charlie seeing the sparkling diamonds from a distance without another word from either Bella or Edward.  Appropriate that Edward talk to Charlie alone to be traditional as his era would have been seeking permission/blessings.  Surprised about Renee's reaction, but she was the one always quoting about not getting married young.  Wait, live first, then marry.  Glad Charlie set her right.  After all Charlie sees Bella and Edward together every day and knows by the way they look at each other that it's going to happen.

 
Summary:

Bella is a graduate student in Seattle when she runs into Edward, who teaches at the same college. What will she do when she hits it off with Edward, only to have a former love come back into her life? All-Human. Usual pairings. NC-17 for future chapters.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 46511
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2008 Updated: April 01, 2009


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - A Broken Promise

Poor Edward thinking Bella has feelings for Jacob and is required to return the week back to work.  Leaving her in Forks with his sister Alice.  Poor Bella everything is hitting her at once.  Unknown to her Edward heard her call Jacob, but didn't realize her dream turned towards him and that he loves her.  It's too bad neither of them opened up with their true feelings. Truly enjoyable story line.  Looking forward to the next chapters as to where the story will lead.  Update soon please.

 
Summary: Feature

It was said of early vampire books and movies that vampirism was simply a poorly disguised substitute for sex. Back in the day, the entire genre was considered extremely risque'. With that in mind, this is a parody of Midnight Sun replacing all the vampirism with sexuality - no blood lust - just extreme human lust. AH/AU and consequently, OOC.  Thank you to Debussy_This for the fabulous (and hysterical) banner!!!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 85040
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: March 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

Enjoyed teenage Edward and his adoration of Bella.  The start and building of their relationship.  The addition of physical activity always being moved up a set by Bella.  The night of prom was wonderful.  As were all the nights and lunches beforehand. Edward had a very good imagination for his fantasies especially when they came through later.  The gift of the engagement ring charm on a chain was the perfect gift for Bella representing exactly what the two felt about each other.  Edward could tell James was a predator, but Bella was too innocent to notice.  Edward just watched his expressions and his actions and knew.  Good thing Ms. Cope has the hots for Edward and he was able to get James' address.  Beating him up was good not only for Edward and Bella, but the reader as well.  Loved the ending with the school girl tutoring session to start a long 3 day weekend alone at Cullen Manor.  Looking forward to reading the sequel.

 
Lullabies Go On by jliane Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 146]
Summary: Edward lost his passion for music a long time ago. Bella is fighting to keep her music alive. Can the two of them overcome the odds and see what they could have together?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 20530
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2008 Updated: July 31, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue

Lovely and beautiful.  Very romantic.  Enjoy your writing style.  This is the second story of yours I have read.  I am reading the sequel next.  I hope you continue to write.  Your dialog is great.  True to characters.  Keep up with your writing.

 
Summary:

Bella is on her way home to Seattle after visiting her mother. She is returning a few days early to surprise her boyfriend on their anniversary. What happens when she meets the most incredible man she has ever laid eyes on?

The usual pairings, a B/E story!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 19586
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: August 12, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love the story.  The thought of a month's worth of wedding events, oh my goodness, would be quite tiring and tedious.  Unless of course you have someone to be with you through it all.  I liked the plane flight and how easy they felt together.  Now only more so after their evening together.  Lunch tomorrow.  Edward is wasting no time at all.  He senses this is the woman for him and he's going all out.  someone needs to castrate Mike so he can't do that to anyone else every again.  What a sleaze.  Excited about where the story will continue from here.  Truly love at first sight on Edward's part and definitely feelings on Bella's side as well.  With Rose and Alice plotting for them to be together, Edward and Bella have no choice at all.  The plan will succeed.  I hope she can cram Edward down Mike's throat to totally tell him how little he really meant to her.  

Congratulations on the move.  It is always so time consuming to pack and then unpack especially across country with children as well.  I remember from a child's perspective about it all.  My dad was in the navy so we moved a lot.  Wishing you luck in your new home.  Update when you get a chance.  Looking forward to new chapters.

 
Summary:

Bella's ready to bust out of her shell in college with roomie Alice. She meets the dazzling yet rakish Edward, but is warned of his less than angelic ways. Will B/A be just another notch in the belt for J/E, or will they teach the boys a lesson or two?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 28871
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2008 Updated: May 16, 2010


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Clarifications

Great communication between the two.  Giving and taking information of explanation as to why things happened the way they did and reason why laying back, slowing things done, to get to know each other better.  Starting from friend roots are always the best way for a romantic relationship to develop.  A lot happened through those letters between them.  Alice being the postmaster general without the stamps.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Curbside Confessions

Awesome.  I remember Jem, she was cool.  Loving this story immensely.  Especially Lady and the Tramp, that has always been one of my favorite romantic scenes in all of Disney cartoons.  With the last meatball being pushed toward Lady by Tramp with all the music.  I pictured that whole scene and just laughed until I cried.  The story moves quickly, it's touching, it's hilarious, it's starting to be heartbreaking.  But the matching Lucky Charms (Crimson Clover) was wonderful talk about solidarity.  Looking for additional chapters to follow, including her going back out and kicking some more ASS.  Showing up mooby guy who is truly HOT.  Update soon please. Edward has a lot of groveling ahead to get into her good graces again if ever.

 
Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Independent

Jasper doesn't realize his protective big brother towards Alice is due to submerged feelings for her.  With her dancing with Mike those feelings arose to the surface for him.  Of course, Jasper isn't recognizing why it bothered him so much.  Blaming big brother syndrome which is an excuse for having deep feelings for Alice.  So the keeping the girls close to protect them from the "bad boys" of the world is being a responsible big brother rather than acknowledging his inner feelings.  Edward has met and experienced something wonderful with Bella and his own insecurities have caused him to do stupid things.  Lose his trust in her temporarily and his actions have lost Bella's trust in him.  Bella doesn't want to be together for a couple of weeks to think about everything.  Which will not work with Jasper's plan of keeping both girls close to protect them and educate them about men.  Looking forward to the conflicts with the four of them.

 
Summary:

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This is my vision of the wedding starring of course, the Minister, Emmett Cullen.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6538
[Report This] Published: July 31, 2008 Updated: July 31, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Minister Emmett

Love those vampires, especially humorous Emmett.  Actually he performed a lovely ceremony.  Some of his thoughts and vampire words were very funny.  It kept it light hearted and calming for Edward and Bella.  I just love your writing.  You can write humorous as well as serious pieces.  Very talented.

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Fireworks

Wonderful story.  Truly enjoyable.  Just found this story after reading Now and Forever and When Edward met Bella.  Both of which are very good as well.  Each chapter got better as the story progressed, truly sorry that only the epilog is left in this story.  Definitely worth the time to read, would recommend to friends to read it.  Keep up the great work.

 
Summary:

Just a little pre-Breaking Dawn speculation on what Bella and Edward's wedding night and honeymoon would be like.  Mature themes.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6094
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Honeymoon

I always thought they needed a wedding night alone not sitting on a plane or in an airport. So it was very romantic with the burning candles and flowers. Gentle. Then on the island on the Pacific foreplay with eating of the fruit was very sensual. Expressing what each of them need communications. Very sweet and endearing.

 
The Perfect Day by cdunbar Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Feature

Edward's POV of the wedding day, up until the ceremony. Taken from page 30, Chapter 2 'Long Night', through Chapter 3 'Big Day' of Breaking Dawn.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1766
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Perfect Day

Wonderful to hear Edward's thoughts prior to the ceremony and after he left Bella's room. Edward is so romantic in words and thoughts. Enamored of his future wife. Great one shot.

 
Summary: I felt my face seize up, panic twisting then freezing my mouth, my eyes, my forehead. Unable to help it, I turned towards the hallway, to where Bella had gone, to where I knew she was. The thought of letting her go scalded my insides and brought my basest instincts crashing to the fore again. The urge to go to her, to where she lay in the bath, lay so quiet, so dull, so gone. It took everything I had not to make that first step and a low growl trembled from my throat with the effort.

 

 

Edward comes back for Bella after leaving her in New Moon, but winning her back is not so easy.  Or is it...?


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 16623
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: December 06, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: October 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Angst, nothingness, dead.  Both Bella and Edward are like they are dead inside.  He came back because he can't live without her, one moment she is glad he's back and returned to her.  Then she over thinks it and is convinced he'll leave her again and again.  doesn't want in to that trap, so she said she has moved on, when we all know she hasn't.  She wants him back in her life.  She turned away from Jacob because her love for Edward won't let her move on.  Now Edward has become desperate and has taken Bella.  Keeping her for as long as he can, knowing the werewolves will come after them or Bella.  They will destroy Edward in his mind he's already dead without her love.  He has nothing to live with her.  So he's ready to die as long as she'll be with him to the end. 

Could bearly read any of the chapters, I was crying so hard.  Edward and Bella weren't saying what they really wanted to express.  Just random thoughts and emotions.  Even with Alice she couldn't tell if Bella would ever love Edward again.  Broke my heart completely.

 
Bedtime Stories by ali_cat Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary: Feature

A much-needed missing moment with Edward, Renesmee and a too familiar bedtime story.  EPOV.

Love Winner


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2397
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: November 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Gotta love Emmett and his versions of the fairy tales.  Snow White and the 7 Vampires.  No wonder Nessie thought it was funny.  Especially daddy being Angsty.  Definitely fit him for most of the Twilight Saga.  His bedtime story was a lot better.  His story with Nessie's mommy their ups and downs till it's happy conclusion.  Nessie is a smart little girl.  His little story down memory lane worked very well on Bella. Brought some memories and some desires rising.  She gave him a goal to achieve to make their headboard look like the one at Isle Esme during their honeymoon.  Edward likes the way she thinks when he makes up bedtime stories.  I think this will inspire Edward to come up with some more ideas to be a muse for Bella to set new goals for them to achieve.

 
Summary:

Bella surprises Edward one day after work. He responds by letting his dominating nature take over.

From Edward's POV.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2162
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Accepting The Consequences

Nice one shot.  The tension between Edward and Bella was wonderfully intense until the final moments of your story.  Great job.

 
Summary:

AU-Human, but Edward and Alice retain their mental gifts. An overly sullen Edward is swept off to the unlikely destination of Hawaii by his family after graduation. However, only Alice knows the reason why they are there-she's had a premonition that Edward would finally meet his true love. But when their destined meeting is ruined by unforeseen circumstances, can Alice make things right again? Or does fate have other plans?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 99368
[Report This] Published: August 24, 2008 Updated: July 02, 2009


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Destiny, p. 2

Totally delightful story.  Ran the gambit of emotions.  Tears flowed through multiple chapters.  Laugh outburst with Emmett.  Tender smiles during the Edward and Bella together times.  Great original idea.

 
Summary: After an emotional two week romance, Edward and Bella are finally together and enjoying their life and work at Cullen Institute for the Arts. What happens when someone wants to shake up their fairy tale romance? Can Bella have complete faith in Edward? Sequel to Lullabies Go On!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 30507
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2008 Updated: May 05, 2009


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: The One Down The Road

Delightful one shots.  So glad Alice and Edward handled Tanya and all her lies.  Very romantic proposal in the parking lot.  Enjoyed each chapter submitted.  I have enjoyed the three stories of yours and I am reading When Edward met Bella as well.  All great.  You need to continue with writing.  Great ideas.

 
Phoenix Rising by blondie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

This is a Midnight Sun-like double shot describing Edward’s experience saving Bella in Phoenix. It parallels two chapters in Twilight, 22. Hide and Seek, and 23. The Angel.”  Written from Edward's POV.

As always, all publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. No money is being made from this work. No copyright infringement is intended.

Thanks to psymom (an excellent author) for a great beta.  Originally written in February, 2008.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: White Night
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3789
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: September 01, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: June 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: The Angel

Was always curious how Edward would take the news that Alice and Jasper lost Bella.  Especially since Alice claimed they could take care of her and watch over her.  Very surprising that Alice didn't see Bella's decision to leave them before she did it. interesting that Edward stole a car to reach the dance studio.  Nice knowing his thoughts as he sucked the venom out and drank her blood.  Very hard decision on his part to stop before he actually killed her.  Since her blood was so fulfilling for him.

 
Barbie Doll by COLDASICEx3 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Based on the poem "Barbie Doll" by Marge Piercy. Bella Swan, an average girl in high school, has always been made fun of for not being perfect; Jessica Stanley and Lauren Mallory spent a great deal of time making sure Bella did not feel beautiful.

Can Bella learn to love herself and gain confidence with a little help from the Cullens?

This is a short story about learning confidence.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Nessie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 11435
[Report This] Published: September 11, 2008 Updated: September 13, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Part Five: New Leaf

Beautiful story.  Really enjoyed it.  Lauren and Jessica got what they deserved.  I am sure Irina and Victoria will get theirs eventually.  Very sweet and romantic.

 
Viva Las Vegas by superstarrh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Bella has agreed to marry Edward but doesn't want to wait. Here is my version of what would have happened if they married in Vegas instead.

 

These characters are not my characters. This is all due to the imagination of Stephenie Meyer.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 5421
[Report This] Published: September 12, 2008 Updated: September 23, 2008


Reviewer: romancaholic Signed
Date: September 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Complete

Beautiful ceremony in a beautiful place.  Everything going as planned.  It was great hearing the reaction from both Edward & Bella's POV.  The lovebirds had marvelous moments together in their tenderness and love for each other.  For a wedding night I don't think anything else could have made it any better for them.

Great short story of their trip to Vegas to be joined in all of eternity.  What could be more romantic than that?  Dreams of spending forever with each other.

 




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