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Penname: twimomof4girls [Contact]
Real name: Michelle
Status: Member
Member Since: June 13, 2009
Website: www.mamainpajamas.blogspot.com
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I am a SAHM to 4 lovely girls and total Twilight addict, all thanks to my little sister.  She forced me to read Twilight and nothing has been the same since.  Now I forced her to read fan fiction! 


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Reviews by twimomof4girls
 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: August 1 - September 4, 2008

WOW.   I've pretty much done nothing but read this story since my sister insisted I start it yesterday.  My kids ate cereal and grapes for lunch and dinner yesterday and haven't had anything yet today.  It was worth it!!

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

I'm so glad he found her.  And he knows her name.  I'm on the edge of my seat waiting. 

 
Summary:

Renesmee is finally "fully grown" and ready to start living. How do the people she loves most react when she is ready to be a woman?

Gravity Gravity!

So, I recently was reading through Gravity, and I realized how bad some of the begining (like the first thirty :]) chapters kinda...well, SUCK! so i'm going to be reposting the edited chapters of Gravity over on FF.net.  same story, just better!

 

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 174580
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2010


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45: What If?

wow - the what if's can kill you!  so glad R will be ok.  I'd have had to kill Caius myself!!

 
Our New Life by KrysCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 227]
Summary:

When the Cullen's move to a new town to start over again, life isn't as perfect as they think. Bella struggles to control new, unwanted powers and Renesmee has to fend off hormonal human boys. Will life ever be the same again? (10 years post BD)  Warnings: Extreme sexual situations, sexual jokes and overall sensuality.

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Banner by: M81170 (Thanks so much!)

 


 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 28269
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: January 27, 2011


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Succubi

I just found this story - hope you continue it - it's great!



Author's Response:

Good news everyone! I'm getting some real work done on chapter six and I should have it out to you by next week at the latest!! I also have a new idea for a Twilight novel that came to me this morning that I'm going to be working on. I'm so excited that my muse has finally returned!!

 
All Keyed Up by BlueJ Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 266]
Summary:

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Edward and the gang are college age and heading to Key West for summer jobs. Excitement, laughs and romance abound. Rated NC-17 for adult situations/lemonade. AH, some OOC moments, canon pairing.  Give it a chance and enjoy!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Other Character, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 122278
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2008 Updated: March 13, 2010


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: February 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: I'm Betting On Alice and Rose

not too sweet - Bella has just enough vixen in her to give it some spice.

 
A Person of Worth by tnuccio Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 457]
Summary:

Just a small town girl, livin' in a lonely world
She took the midnight train goin' anywhere
Just a city boy, born and raised in south Detroit
He took the midnight train goin' anywhere

After multiple chance encounters can two strangers find their missing pieces within each other?

Or will their past mistakes hold them back? 

 

Two strangers passing in the night, searching for nothing, but maybe finding everything. 

 

A story of learning to trust and forgive, finding a way to risk opening yourself up. 

 

Inspired by Journey's song Don't Stop Believing.

 

 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4669815/1/A_Person_of_Worth

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 107099
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2011


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: 18th Floor Balcony

Wow - that made me really hate Jacob.  Even more than I already did.  Poor Bella.  She deserves happiness.



Author's Response:

I'm glad the chapter evoked emotion from you!  As for Jake, all I can say is remember, this is BPOV and while Bella may have not done anything to Provoke what happened there are always two sides.  There will be resolution, that I can promise by the end.

Bella does deserve happiness...she does, and she will get it, I promise!

:) T

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Mercy

Tess and Jessie - reminded me of "Beloved Wife" by Natalie Merchant.  A favorite of mine.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'll have to look at that one.  Tess and Jessie are based on a real life couple I knew.  Their story always makes me smile and cry at the same time.

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13655]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

Gah.  Not enough tissues left in the box after this one.  Beautiful.  Just beautiful.

 
Summary:

Bella set Edward on a pedestal and worshiped the ground he walked on. Through Twilight, the readers got to see one side of the Cullenn family. What about the other? Enjoy the Cullen Clan like you've never seen them before. Enjoy them or hate them through Jasper's eyes.

 

Twilight from Jasper's perspective.

 

Wonderful banner by the awesome Anne Cullen!!! Send her some love people.

 


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 39397
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2008 Updated: November 19, 2013


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: October 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Flight

excellent chapter!  I love hearing Jasper's POV.  You are so deserving of your very own Jasper Hale.  Wish I had one to give you!

 
Dying By Degrees by Reamhar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 664]
Summary:

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What if Bella’s thoughts on the plane flying back to Seattle from Italy take her in a different direction from the plot in New Moon? Just where could a little twist of fate take the characters? An indepth look at Bella's thoughts and feeling at the end of New Moon and into an AU Eclipse.

Canon couples, and rated NC17 just to be safe. I am Bella and Edward all the way, so if you like Bella and Jacob, then I am afraid this is not the story for you.

Dying By Degrees on discussion forum.  http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=9136

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 106997
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: June 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

that was an update of epic proportion!  loved it.  the charms made me smile, laugh, cry - all of it.  having Lauren get it good from Bella made my day!

 
Summary:

Honeymoon Suite

NOW COMPLETE!  We all wailed a collective 'ugh!' on the fade to black scenes during Edward and Bella's honeymoon, not to mention the frustratingly limited Jacob POV.  This canon story fills in all the holes that were left by SM -- mostly from Edward's detailed POV.

Enjoy a captivating look at the romance, emotions, music and imagery of Bella & Edward's honeymoon, the struggles of the pregnancy, the bliss over Edward hearing the unborn child's mind, the harrowing birth, and finally Edward's joy as he bonds with Nessie during Bella's transformation. 

 Banner by the talented m81170 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 96645
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2009 Updated: December 29, 2011


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Laid Bare

OMG.  I loved the RPOV. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a comment!!  I am so glad that another reviewer had suggested RPOV -- it was a perfect addition to the chapter and really gives a different twist to the events in BD and in the coming chapters.

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: May 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Forgive Us Our Sins

wow - I loved the ending - where Carlisle is lamenting his decision which makes him no longer E's savior.  Very intense.



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a comment/review.  I have to thank my beta for helping me punch up the ending.  She came up with the black hole analogy.  It seems he just couldn't make a decision to please everyone -- once he knew where everyone stood.  These vamps just don't communicate very well for how much experience they've had on this earth!  A lesson to us all!  I hope to keep us the intensity.  I expect the next few chaps to be very exhausting...then exhilarating

 
Work In Progress by araeo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1514]
Summary:

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Edward, Bella and the gang are adults living in Seattle.  Edward and Bella meet due to a klutzy accident in the restaurant where she works.  Bella's ovaries love Edward and they voice their opinions quite often.  There's an instant attraction between them, but Bella notices there's something that's troubling Edward. 

 

Lovely banner made by famouslyso...because she rocks.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 240878
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2009 Updated: October 03, 2010


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: June 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

She going to marry the Precious.  Today, if she knows what is good for her.  Waiting on the edge of my seat.

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue: The Precious Revealed (vjgm)

Great epi!  I am loathe to give these two up.  Please consider a sequel!  I need more of the Precious!

 
Summary:

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All told from Edward's POV, The Acclimation Diaries, chronicles Edward’s struggles with learning to control himself and taking things one step at a time as he acclimates himself to Bella sexually in preparation of their impending wedding night.  Can he keep his desire in check or will he snap?

 

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A companion story for my one-shot, “Show Me”

TAD Banner by: falconcranelove

Indie Banner by: AngstGoddess

 


Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 84817
[Report This] Published: March 19, 2009 Updated: September 19, 2009


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: August 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Soixante-Neuf

OMG.  Need a cold shower for sure.  Excellent!



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you so much *MWAH*

 
Summary:

 

Bella is left in a world of darkness after Edward leaves her. But just when things start to look bright again, weird things begin to happen. She wonders who could be the cause, knowing only one person could-Edward. But why after he promised to leave forever? An AU version of New Moon starting during her "blank page" period.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 73511
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2010


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Sacrifice

I swear, he's going to kill her himself.  Argh. 

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Nothing to Lose

Poor Alice - I just want to wrap my arms around her an give her a hug! 

 
Summary:

Bella and Jacob are getting married tomorrow. While struggling to write their wedding vows, they receive a phone call that will change their lives from now on.

Expect insights in their newlyweds' life, worries about imprinting, familiar vampires, jealousy between husband and brother, pack life, road trips, college memories and more!

Rated for language and lemons.

Banner by Dazzled-by-Jake

 

 

 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 255571
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2009 Updated: July 11, 2011


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: October 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: 31. A Little Bit of Heaven...

Doctor Cullen????  Damn. 

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: March 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: 22. Because You Live

I'm sitting the bookstore cafe and crying, bawling my eyes out.  That was beautiful.  That took my solidly Team Edward mindset and blew it out of the water.  Thank you.

I need to go reread it this chapter.  Maybe the whole thing.  I'm a rereader.  I'm sure I'll find more things to love about your story the second time.



Author's Response:

Well, thank you. It wasn't my objective to make you switch teams but even if it's just for a few minutes, I'm happy with it :)

I like rereading stories. I find new things to like every time.

 
Pretending by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 505]
Summary:

Edward and Bella have known each other since birth. After one moment at a party just months before their college graduation, Edward sends them on a journey that begins with a little pretending. Where it ends? No one knows. NC-17 for language and sexual content. AH/AU/OCC

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 52003
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2010


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Waiting (V)

oh, thank goodness.  I knew you couldn't do it - I knew you were a HEA kind of girl.  Just like me.  thank you, thank you, thank you!  Now, I can't wait to read Jake's reaction!!!

 
Summary: Feature

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EPOV. Edward is having trouble balancing his urges for Bella's blood and Bella's body before the wedding. What started out as a simple "Practice Fic" has become a retelling of BD from EPOV that lets us see just how much he struggles for control at every turn.

Warning: Edward's got issues. Some dark images and angst, but nothing too bad and quickly giving way to steamy goodness.

Golden Lemon


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 132400
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: February 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Tea Party

Congrats on the Golden Lemon.  It is certainly well deserved.  Another great chapter - loved the visuals of the tea party!  And, as the mom of 4 kids under 8, you had me rolling with the Emmett TV time.  I'm so sorry to see this winding down.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I'm sorry to see it ending, too, but I'm also very anxious to start writing the next fic I have in mind, and I can't focus enough to write two at the same time!

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: March 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue: Possession

wow.  That was amazing.  Thanks for sharing it with us.  Can't wait for your next story!



Author's Response:

Thank you! That means so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

 
Summary:

Bella is a 25 year old Editor's assistant in New York City. She has been a casual observer in life, never really actively participating in it.

Edward is a 25 year old tattoo artist who enters Bella's life and knocks it off its hinges.

Will Edward be able to open Bella up to life and all it has to offer, or will she shut him out and return to watching the world happen around her?

(Thanks to Shug for the AWESOME banner!!)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 52545
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2009 Updated: May 01, 2010


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - When the Other Shoe Drops

ahhhhhhh.  phone sex and then drama - I can't wait until the next update.  Figures Tanya would be behind the drama.  That one - always stirring shit up!

 
Broken by Wendyann Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1084]
Summary:

How does someone survive a trauma that changes everything? How does she find the will to live? Edward was too late to save Bella in Port Angeles. Can she save herself?

*Note: This story deals with the aftermath of rape. If you are sensitive to this topic, please do not read.*

Thank you so much to Loushane for the amazing banner!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 104063
[Report This] Published: May 15, 2009 Updated: June 28, 2010


Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas

I love thE Willow Tree figures - Susan Lordi is an amazing artist.  This chapter is so wonderful - I love that the first thing B&E talk about is something that makes her laugh.  Perfect!

 
Reviewer: twimomof4girls Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Panic

very powerful chapter.  what was Edward thinking?? 

 




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