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Penname: Nayamis [Contact]
Real name: Christina
Status: Member
Member Since: November 11, 2008
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Summary:

 

 

The day Bella went to the Cullens’ home for the first time.  Starting at Chapter 15 of Twilight from various Cullen perspectives.  This story is the behind the scenes look at the day Bella met the Cullens.  What did they think and what went on where Bella could not see them?  

 

 

Carlisle’s POV, Esme’s POV, Jasper’s POV and Emmett's.

 

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
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Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 17689
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: Nayamis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Siblings - Jasper's POV

I really enjoyed reading your chapters. I think, you did a great job about the way you let the characters act. The part about "please, change you clothes" had me giggling a little, too ;)

I can't even say whose POV I liked the most. They are all so... differently, but eaqually great :)!

I'd love to read Emmett's view on this part, too.

 
Music Lessons by locqua Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Summary:

Music can be quite the aphrodisiac, even for vampires. When Edward shares his passion for classical music with Bella, they discover a whole new world together just weeks before their nuptials. Set at the beginning of Breaking Dawn.

Winner of "Best use of Music as Inspiration - Complete" at the Twilight Indie Awards!

 

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 78097
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2008 Updated: April 14, 2009


Reviewer: Nayamis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chopin Pt 2

Great story so far! I really enjoyed the music-hall part. And I guess, this is the first story where Bella is portraied as a "beautifulk young woman" in the thoughts around them. Normally, I read more often about how "hot" Edward looks, Bella gets ignored for the most parts.

Keep up the great work :) I hope to read many more chapters.



Author's Response: Thank you very much!  I always thought Bella was way prettier then she ever saw herself - look at Mike, Eric, and Tyler's reaction to her.  I think it helps too if the story's in Edward's POV. 

 
Summary:

Note: Previously titled "Grey's School... for Young Men"

Edward Masen, number one under-18 track star, and also Bella's inspiration for running.

So what happens when she applies to his school... and gets in?

Not to mention the fact that the school is a boys-only. Based on Hana Kimi. 

AU, AH. Rated NC17 for later chapters (just in case).


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 26468
[Report This] Published: November 12, 2008 Updated: September 01, 2010


Reviewer: Nayamis Signed
Date: November 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: 1: First Bell

Hm... This could get interesting :) I hope, you're going to update soon ^^

Author's Response: Yups ^_^ Thanks a lot! I'll try to update asap

 
Summary:

 

When Charlie catches Bella and Edward in a compromising position how will he react?

What tactics will Edward and Bella have to resort to in order to get time alone together again?

 

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 134267
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2009


Reviewer: Nayamis Signed
Date: November 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Damn...he was just getting fun

Nice chapter ;) Though I wonder how it would feel do bite down on granite o.O° Poor Bella - her teeth must be broken now ;)

Author's Response: Her teeth are okay..she applied just the right pressure.  I was wondering if anyone would think about that.   Edward wonders too in the next chapter.  Thanks for the review!!

 
Summary:

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Fluffy Fluff. What if Tyler wasn't the only one who had their sights set on taking Bella to the prom? Edward's gonna have to start beating off Bella's suitors with a stick pretty soon.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward, Mike
Challenges:
Series: An Introduction to Fluff: Twilight
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2470
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008


Reviewer: Nayamis Signed
Date: November 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, I liked it :) Mostly the part about Edward's thought about killing Mike for social reasons... ;) It made me smile ^^ I kind of like it when Edward is more his... "vampiric self".

I like your style and would read on if you'd update this ;)



Author's Response: Thanks, I think I will add at least one more chapter...maybe two if I get carried away like I often do...

 
Summary:

Pre-Twilight. Emmett/Rosalie. A story that begins with Emmett's awakening as a newborn, and follows the secrets and hurdles of his new relationship with Rosalie, the mysterious blonde girl who saved his life.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 17868
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2008 Updated: December 23, 2008


Reviewer: Nayamis Signed starstarstar
Date: December 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, it's a good first chapter - I like Rose's uncertanty/doubts. But I'm not too "happy" about how Emmett woke up o.O° I mean, his first talk with Edward - and Edward tells him he has to change his name? And Emmett doesn't say anything against that? Hm...

But I'm curious how you'll write on from here :)



Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I always imagined that Emmett would be confused, and distracted by Rosalie, but I can see how that might have been OOC for him. Hope you enjoy the rest of the story.





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