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Penname: tkdalton [Contact]
Real name: Theresa
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Summary:

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Completed: Yes Word count: 482203
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Roommates and Baby Steps

I am so glad that they have both realized that they have feelings for eachother now they just have to make it work. I can't wait for Alice to move in. Bella isn't going to know what hit her. She will definately be looking more like a girl. Trevor is really creeping me out. Why in the world is he touching her all the time. The vibes she gets should be warning her. hopefully he doens't try anything. It will be interesting to see how Alice, Bella and Rose do while the guys are away for two weeks. Please keep up the good work. I have become totally addicted to this story in such a short period of time.

 
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Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For

Another great chapter! It is good to see that they are finally on the right track. I love your writing style. It draws you in and keeps you there. I keep waiting for the prologue to occur and get antsy every time something happens that could be leading up to it. Now you say we have about a dozen chapters till then! I guess i will have to try and be patient. Please keep up the great work i can't wait for you next update and one step closer to the big action! By the way did i mention that i love this story?!

 
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Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

Okay now i totally see why there are so many chapters before we get to the prologue scene. I can't wait! You are weaving this story together beautifully. I can't believe Trevor was that big of a jerk. I figured he was bad but OMG! Please keep up the great writing and the quick posting cycle. I am totally addicted to this story and check multiple times per day for new updates. I know that this is premature but do you have and plot bunnies running around in your head for future stories? I will gladly become addicted to them as well.



Author's Response:

This actually isn't my first story.  I've got a completed short Jasper fic in the queue for validation called Faded Memories and a Contest Oneshot based around The Phantom of the Opera on the list.   I'm not sure how well Faded Memories will be received because people usually aren't too fond of fics that have Jasper without Alice.  This one is an AU Post-Eclipse where the wolves and Cullens never form a partnership and everyone is decimated except for Jasper who barely gets by thanks to his understanding of newborns.  Heartbroken and alone he goes to Volterra trying to take a page from Edward's book, but just before he gets there a mysterious female vampire who seems to know him from his human life is waiting for him.  He later learns she was sent by Alice.  Anyway, It was something that came to my head during a bought of writer's block.  I have a few other ideas, but I really want to get this puppy to bed before I start trying to work too deeply in another plot.  I've also got a story of my own brewing in my head that I think I'm going to try to write and see if I can get it published...if I get brave enough that is :)  Thanks for the interest and the review!

 
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Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

Yeah progress! Now Alice is in as much trouble as Bella. Wonder what is going to happen while they are out of town? Trevor Benson is one bad peice of work. Well keep up the good work. I can't wait for your next update!

 
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Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: New Heat and Old Flames

I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected

more, more, more! I can't believe how addicted i am to this story. I compulsively check for updates every few hours and when i find one i can't help but laugh out loud. Please keep up the great work!

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Underneath It All

*screams* no you can't leave it here! We are finally at the prologue and now i am freaking out. Ilove this story and how it has progressed. Please keep up the great work and update soon please. My sanity is depending on it.



Author's Response:

lucky for you it just posted :)

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: The Angel's Kiss

OMG! What can i say. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time and of course Edward would have to get hurt. Bella was awesome! It will be interesting to see how she deals with being the one to take down James. Now that my heart is racing i need to go read something a little slower. Please keep up the fantastic work i can't wait for the next update.

 
Summary:

 

***BANNER BY MsTwiSwe***

 

****NOW COMPLETE****

Bella Swan is a second year law school student. She goes on an interview that she feels pressured into by her law school advisor, Carlisle Cullen. Who she meets at the interview throws her perfectly orchestrated world completely off balance.

What happens when you think you know exactly what you want and life throws you a curve ball??

AH/AU, OOC, Canon Couples. Lots of Lemons and a description of violence. Nothing too dark, though. The real world is hard enough!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 148187
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: May 03, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - No Air

Love it! Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter and to see where you are going to take us.

 
Sins of my Past by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1934]
Summary:

Banner by the awesome angelgoddess1981!  You rock babe!

Bella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 91 Completed: Yes Word count: 421991
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2011 Updated: January 14, 2013


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Light

I am loving this story! Your authors note made me write this review. I usually just lurk. Your writing style draws the reader in an makes your characters believable. I love your version of Aro and his brothers. This is the first story i have read where i really like them and want more of them. Please keep writing this story because i really want to see where you are going to take us on this crazy trip. This story is alot of things but a dismal failure it is not!!!!

 
Summary: Feature

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~The story of how Angela becomes a Cullen.~

Everyone has a secret that they try to hide, some are just better at it than others. For Angela, that secret was being alone. Assigned to work on history project with Emmett Cullen, he becomes troubled by certain things about Angela that make him question her safety. Later, when Angela realizes that the notes and flowers she has been receiving aren’t from Ben and that someone is stalking her and covering their tracks well enough to make her feel like she is loosing her mind, Emmett and Jasper step in, bringing Angela into the protection and care of the Cullen family.

There is a heavier focus on Angela Webber and her interactions with the Cullens than with the Edward/Bella theme. You have been warned.

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“There’s one thing you have to understand about Emmett,” Rosalie told Angela with an almost annoyed sounding sigh. “He has a very severe case of BBS.”

“BBS?” the girl asked with a confused shake of her head.

“Big Brother Syndrome.”

 

*Special Note: In the books, Angela has younger twin brothers, in this story she does not have any siblings.*

 

 


Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Angela
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 77 Completed: No Word count: 668068
[Report This] Published: May 23, 2012 Updated: January 12, 2014


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed
Date: September 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Another Great chapter. Love your take on Aro. Can't wait to see where you take us next. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed
Date: August 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I hardly ever write reviews but I wanted to let you know that I absolutely love this story. It is completely different than most of the others that you see. I loved Angela's character in the books and your version of her is really well developed and extremely believalble. I hate to admitt it but I am completely addicted to this story. I found it late last week and have been reading it in every free moment I have. I can't wait for your next update! Please keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you, my dear. I'm glad you're enjoying this story. I'm working hard with my beta to get the chapters up as fast as I can. You should be seeing Chapter 19 making its appearance soon. :-) Thank you for sharing your thoughts, i do truly love to hear from my readers.

~Wolf

 




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