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Penname: tkdalton [Contact]
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Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4551]
Summary:

WRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN REWRITTEN

After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!Wishing Star Banner Readergoof

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed
Date: September 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Halloween

Please Please Please Update quickly! This was an evil Cliffy!

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: The End's Beginning

I love this story! I can't wait to see where you take this and how long it takes for Edward to finally realize that Tanya is a bitch. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for your next chapter.

 
Legacy by Autumn Dreamer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 962]
Summary:

Edward is no stranger to new towns and new schools. In his seventeen years, he's been dragged all across the country by his parents, Peter and Liz Masen. With no siblings, no real friends, and no place to truly call "home," Edward gets used to living life as a solitary teenager--until he moves to Washington. There he meets the Cullens and their friends—a beautiful, brilliant group of people who are both rejected and revered by their classmates. Edward reluctantly finds himself growing to like these people more and more...and finds himself having friends and, for the first time, feeling like he belongs. But just when everything settles down, his world is torn apart by a long-kept secret and an ongoing betrayal that will leave him questioning everything he's ever known.

Drama/Humor/Mystery/Angst-lite
Rated R/M (for language and sexual innduendo)

This is not an Edward/Emmett slash story however, there is a lot of Edward & Emmett togetherness.

If you like Legacy, check out Legacy: Extra's & Outtakes for an extra Legacy fix.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 218730
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Emmett in the Middle

I just found this story the other day and have finally caught up. Your writtting is fantastic and i can't wait to see where you take this story line. But i have to let you know that i really need to she Camilla get her pay back for everything that she has done. Please keep up the good work and post as soon as possible.

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: A Round of Apologies

Another great chapter! I am so glad that he came home and that he and Esme have worked out some of their issues. Please keep up the great writing!

 
Summary:

It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?

 

 New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.

 


Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Please Don't Go

Just found this story and love it! Can't wait for your next update.

 
The Trip Home by MsKathy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary:

When Bella takes a long overdue trip back to Forks, an unexpected detour helps her find her way home. AU/AH ExBxJ M for adult themes and lemons. This is a story about a poly(amorous) trio. This means that there are sometimes moments where they all three have sex, sometimes BxJ, sometimes ExB, and sometimes ExJ.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 217268
[Report This] Published: March 31, 2009 Updated: January 20, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love this story! Your interactions are great and i can't wait for Bella to move in with them. Can't wait to see what the future holds for them.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review! Glad you're enjoying the story so far :)

 
Summary:

 

Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.

 

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All canon couples!


Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36:Boy Scouts(TB)

Yeah they are almost all back together again! Please keep posting i love this story.

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32:Explanations

I really liked this chapter! I was wondering how you were going to change her and clear everything up. Well done. I can't wait to see the rest of the Cullen's again and their reactions. Please Please Please make Izzy one really really really kick ass vampire. I loved your human version of her so i can't wait to see what your vampire version has in store for us.

 
Off Limits by lexiecullen17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3311]
Summary:

Womanizing Edward is in a cover band with his brother and best friend, who are pissed that Edward has managed to send their last three lead singers heading for the hills with his tendency to fool around carelessly.  Emmett and Jasper decide to create a "no intra-band dating" rule. 

But what happens when a gorgeous, talented brunette walks into the audition?  Will Edward adhere to his bandmates' new rule, or will he pursue what's now off limits?  OOC Edward/Bella.  Rated for DIRTY HUMOR and lots of future LEMONY GOODNESS. Canon pairings.

(thanks to Evilangel6714 for the banner!!!)

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 171702
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue

I just found this story the other day. I am so glad i did because it is definately one of my all time favorites. I'm just sorry i didn't find it sooner. Your writtin style is fantastic and your story flowed smoothly. I can't wait to read more of your work.

 
Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2410]
Summary:

We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

Fractured Hearts

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

Ijust found this story the other day and have finally caught up. I just wanted to let you know how much i love this story and your version of Bella. It is one of my favorites ever! Please keep up your fabulous writing as i have become addicted and can't wait for you next update.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you found my story and that you've enjoyed it so much. I must apologize that the characters can be rather long winded and I hope that you'll accept some virtual eye drops from me to help with the strain. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing. I appreciate it and look forward to hearing more of your thoughts in the future. :)

~Lisa

 
Practicality by silentnc Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 330]
Summary:

 

Thanks to Kellyjaxn for the rocking banner!

Bella moves to Seattle to start college when she meets Edward, a guy she is drawn to but who is unattainable, and James, a nice guy that she decides she might settle for. But does she really know James, who is becoming very possessive? ExB AU/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 88965
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2009 Updated: May 29, 2011


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I am loving this story! Please keep up the good work!

 
Broken by Wendyann Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1084]
Summary:

How does someone survive a trauma that changes everything? How does she find the will to live? Edward was too late to save Bella in Port Angeles. Can she save herself?

*Note: This story deals with the aftermath of rape. If you are sensitive to this topic, please do not read.*

Thank you so much to Loushane for the amazing banner!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 104063
[Report This] Published: May 15, 2009 Updated: June 28, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Aftermath

What a beautiful final scene for this chapter. Please keep up the good work and Happy Birthday!

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Progress

Yeah progress! I think that this is my favorite chapter so far. I loved the Bella/Edward interaction in this chapter. Just perfect! I can't wait to see what happens next.

 
FEAR by Truth in the Moon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 436]
Summary:

When Edward, the son of the rich, multi-billionaire Carlisle Cullen is kidnapped by terrorists, a secret organization puts Agent Bella Swan on the case. It's her job to go rescue him and take down the terrorist group without becoming to involved. Will this mission be too much for her to handle?

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Violence, language, lemons eventually

Thank you to readergoof for my completely amazing banner!!!!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 47059
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is a great start! Please keep up the good work I can't wait to see where you are going with this story. Your writing is fabulous it draws you in and keeps you there. I can't wait for your next update.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan had big dreams.  You know what they say, the bigger they are the harder they fall.  When her life takes a sad turn she is forced to do whatever she can just to keep her head above water.  Edward Cullen's life is perfect.  Well, almost.  Perhaps these two can help each other out in an unorthodox way.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Completed: No Word count: 326924
[Report This] Published: July 07, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2011


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Finish Line

I just found this story and i love it! Please keep updating i can't wait for the next chapter. Victoria is going to be so pissed when she finally sees Bella. I can totally see her selling them out to the media. When in the world is Edward going to get a clue about how poor Bella is? Moron! I really hope she isn't expected to pay for her portion of the dinner on Tuesday? I know you have said that Japer and Alice haven't meet in this story but i keep thinking that they will. If they don't i totally understand but i need to get my brain to stop thinking that. Once again please keep updating your writing is fantastic and incredibly believable!



Author's Response:

Edward will buy a clue fairly soon.  Bella on the other hand...

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Goodbye to the Past

James and Victoria are going to get her again i just know it. I love your version of Felix. I can totally see Lauren telling people that Felix and Bella are together. It should be interesting.



Author's Response:

You're one of the few who've figured that out.  Yes, they will be a problem again.  I've always seen that Felix has an attraction to Bella.  Certainly in Breaking Dawn, but even in New Moon.  I'm just playing that up a bit here. 

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Lady at Lunch

so much going on! Poor Bella always gets wrapped up in more then she knows about. I'm guessing that Tanya is the ?pov. She is probably upset over the break up and her image. Please keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next post!



Author's Response:

The next chapter is with the betas.  Hopefully, it'll be up in a couple of days.

 
Extraction by Ready4Jasper Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 925]
Summary:

When Bella's unit is ambushed in the jungle and she is taken captive, an elite team is sent in to save her.  As events unfold, Bella finds herself caught in the web of this mysterious team made up of elite, and unique, people.  Things become even more interesting when she discovers that the leader of this group is a man she thought had dissapeared forever. 

extraction.jpg Extraction picture by skimmelman

Props to Annamorphos for her awesome banner making skills!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 124260
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: October 06, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed
Date: August 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Running

This is a great story and i can't wait to see where you are taking this. Please keep up the good work and post as soon as possible.

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Change is Hard

I can't wait to see where this story is headed. Your writing is very good. At this point the pacing seems really slow but i know that you need to establish the story and it's plot line. Please keep up the good work and keep posting. I am enjoying this story and can't wait to see Bella's reaction when she finally sees Edward again.

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Soon

Please keep up the good work! I love this story so far and can't wait to see where you are taking this.

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: A Fleeting Glimpse

Please keep up the good work! I really want to see where you are taking this story. I pace is building gradually and i keep wanting more. When i get to the end of each chapter i desperately hope that there is more.

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Digging In

Your writing is fantastic and really draws you in. I Love this version of Bella so far. it sounds like she is going to be really kick ass. Please keep up the good work. I can't wait for your next update!

 
All of Me by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3627]
Summary:

Bella lives to serve her Master. It can be tedious at times, titillating at others, but always, her world revolves around his. Come take a peek at the trials and triumphs in the life of a 24/7 consensual slave and find what happens when outside forces threaten to expose her lifestyle.

 

All of Me

 

Please note that this story contains graphic language, graphic sexual situations and is only intended for a mature audience. The BDSM relationship described herein is entirely consensual, but may be offensive to some readers. Read with caution. OOC, AU/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 109463
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can't wait to see where you take this story. Please keep posting.

 
Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Very intense! I can't wait to see what Lauren is up to and how Jaspers visit will go. I never thought i would read anything like this but you have converted me. Please keep up the good work!

 
Summary:

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

 

Outtakes Now posting on Twilighted.  This banner by yours truly :)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 71 Completed: Yes Word count: 482203
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2009 Updated: March 22, 2010


Reviewer: tkdalton Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

I just found this story and it is absolutely fabulous! Please keep up the good work. Your writing is fantastic and your version of the characters is very believable. I love that you have made Bella the Doctor in this one. I keep waiting for the prologue scene. Not sure how long it will take before we get there but it will be interesting when we finally do. Hopefully Bella will figure Trevor out soon because i really don't want to see her get hurt again. You have said many times that you have multiple chapters already written. Can you give us and idea of how long you think this story will be when completed. I quess that is enough for now but please keep up the good work i can't wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm working on chapter 51 right now and still have a bit to go.  I'm guessing between 55 and 60 by the time I'm done.  Last count I was over 300,000 words!  LOL!  Also the prologue won't happen for a while yet.  It hits about halfway through what I've written so far.  Thanks for the review!

 




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