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Penname: izziey [Contact]
Real name: helina
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Member Since: May 17, 2009
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Summary:

Bella Swan is, according to her friend Jasper Hale, "that girl that every guy in high school falls in love with at least twice." Jasper's new foster brother, Edward, is convinced he's kidding. After all, he can see that Bella's acting, that her perfection is the cover for her true self.

But Edward has secrets of his own, and he's sure he'd be better off without them coming to the surface. His past of multiple foster houses and gang violence aren't the worst of his problems.

Their meeting is an accident. Or maybe fate.

(and you see that incredibly amazing banner of incredible amazingness? my beta, Dr_Twilight_PharmD, who constantly goes above and beyond the call of Beta Duty, made that for me)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 111766
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2011


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

this chapter started out so sweet and hopeful; it just about killed me to see megan like that. i can understand zach's anger, i'm just concerned about the consequences for all of them.

as a high school teacher i can't thank you enough for your a/n.



Author's Response:

And as a high school student, I can't say how much I appreciate how much you and all your colleagues do to help me and all mine. Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i hesitated to read this story because of the gang aspects, but i am happy that i gave it a try.

i worry for bella's sanity with all those AP courses!



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's my junior year schedule. The difference is that I was class vice president instead.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

great closing line for rosalie, and i totally agree with edward's fail. i have to say that i can see where he's coming from...

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i love how slow they're taking things. if i could only go back in time...

and the bit about the scars, sad and tender, both.

 

 

 
Summary:

 

Not all is as it seems when the Edwards from two different universes find a journal that can bridge the gap between them. Things become even stranger when the reality of one universe starts to bleed into the other, since in one universe vampires exist, and in the other universe, they do not.

Until now.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 79576
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2010 Updated: November 22, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i find myself intrigued. you have never failed me, so i'm in.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow.n you really took the alternate universe idea to a whole new level. i like it!



Author's Response:

LOL, thank you!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i'm curious as to where you got this idea. something feels familiar about the journal serving as a link, but i can't remember.

anyway, loving the story!



Author's Response:

I can't say one way or another.  I didn't see something else that inspired it for me, but you never know what's out there.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love the last line!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  This story really is so much fun to write!

 
Beautiful Dreamer by Nessarie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

 

 

I tilted my head closer toward my wife’s tummy, though I didn’t necessarily need to do so in order to hear the baby’s budding thoughts, but I wanted to be closer, still marveling over everything that was happening. Oh, I’m sorry – I’m so sorry for every doubt I had. I’m sorry. Everything was suddenly becoming extremely sharp – I now understood exactly why Bella was so ready to give her life up to make sure this child lived.

Because, I knew that if it were me, I would make the same decision – my life was nothing compared to that of my child’s.

Edward's experiences spanning from when he first hears the baby's thoughts until Bella awakes from her change (with a little steam in the middle).

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 30462
[Report This] Published: April 27, 2010 Updated: October 26, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Life

i completely agree with your explanations for the interpretations of events in BD. alice was obviously not feeling the affection that the others did, and although i felt a bit uncomfortable with edward's physical reactions to biting bella, they are completely logical.

THIS is why i love fanfic: new insights.



Author's Response:

:) Thank you!

 

~Ness

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: November 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Family

this is so sweet! i love all of the little details, especially nessie wetting her diaper!

 

best of luck with NaNoWriMo!

 
Summary:

In All of Me, Bella chooses to serve Edward as his 24/7 consensual slave, but while she serves his needs, Edward is always looking for ways to fulfill hers.  Exploiting the voyeuristic tendencies of their gardener, Jacob, is just one way Edward does that.

In this sideshot, we get to see Jacob's perspective, as he is looking from the outside in and learn how this arrangement came about.  It is best read after Chapter 22 of the main story.

 

WARNING:  This story contains strong, graphic language, graphic sexual situations and BDSM.  Please read with caution.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 4414
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2010 Updated: May 22, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

if. if. if we we want more. that's sarcasm, right?

so. what did i think? hot. sexy. funny. perfect.

 
Lost (One-Shot) by Twivamp Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Written for the What About Alice? Contest. Alice feels lost in New Moon when Edward leaves.

Banner made by FrozenSoldier:

Banner made by FrozenSoldier


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1857
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: June 25, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lost

wow. i am constantly overwhelmed by the talented authors on this site. it never occurred to me that alice would blame herself because of the party. this is the second story i've read this week, but only one of less than a dozen overall, that are now part of the twilight saga. as far as i'm concerned, this happened.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review and your many compliments. Please be sure to vote for this story on July 10th at http://fanfiction-challenges.blogspot.com/ Thanks again!

 

~Twivamp :)

 
Summary:

Post-Eclipse ONE-SHOT.

Jacob has returned; and is desperate to stop the wedding. When he's offered a chance to change fate, will he take the risk? And where will it lead them?

Jacob lovers beware.

Twilighted Beta:  shabbyapple


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4088
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2010 Updated: September 09, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow. that just blew me away.



Author's Response:

Happy to be of service!

 
Summary:

Bella is enjoying a wonderful cloudy day at the beach with her vampire boyfriend Edward when she gets stung by a jellyfish. Jasper helps tend to Bella's sting and Bella learns new things about Jasper she never knew.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2028
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2010 Updated: September 09, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i've always loved the relationship between bella and jasper. he's so afraid to hurt her and so protective of her.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's such an interesting friendship for them. Thanks for reviewing!!

 

~Twivamp :)

 
Summary:

One night in a dark, crowded bar can change everything. J/B/E.

My entry in the P.I.C's Two's Company, Three's A Party Polyamorous Contest.

Thanks to ms_ambrosia for the great banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5348
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: And Bella Makes Three

been rec'ing your stories all over! you just don't disappoint!

 
Summary:

Alice gets invited on a date with her dream guy, but all is not as it seems.

My entry for the FML contest.

Thanks to ms_ambrosia for the banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3785
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2010 Updated: August 17, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: First Date

ouch. at least edward was cool about it!

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward return from Volterra just in time for English final papers. As they struggle to "cure" their relationship wounds, Bella's analysis of Juliet reveals just how far they have to go, and just how alike their stories actually are.  Mostly IC. Takes place actually post-New Moon, pre-Eclipse, pushes Eclipse back a bit so I guess sort of Eclipse-AU?


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 19953
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2010 Updated: May 14, 2011


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i'm so caught up with this story already! you captured their personalities and characters quite well, and i loved the interaction with mike.

really, really looking forward to more.

 
Mind Your Manners by yesyov Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Bella is an uppity, bitchy, in-demand movie star.  Edward is her busboy...or is he?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1375
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2010 Updated: September 23, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Mind Your Manners

nice. *special case* i love it!

 
Sweet Tooth by BellaFlan, mac Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

Sweet Tooth

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Sweet Tooth is the sweet but warped love story of Edward Cullen, a lonely baker of erotic pastry, and Bella Swan, a curious woman with a curious philia. King Schlong introduced them... will buttercream frosting be enough to bring them together?

 

Rec'd by Jessypt on the Perv Pack Smut Shack!


Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 12768
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2010 Updated: November 04, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting...

i love sweets and work at a"sex shop" so you captured my attention right away.

i agree with carlisle - edward is a freak. i don't see anything wrong with that.

 
Summary:

Edward finally forces Bella to make up her mind. Set during Eclipse.

 

Thanks to the lovely TwistedIn_ for the banner


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2071
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2011 Updated: January 07, 2011


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: January 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: It All Begins With A Choice

absolutely not what i was expecting; i thought bella would still be angry at edward, but this is so much better!

 

you made me recall some of my own thoughts from when i initially read this, now i just focus on the almost-smut.

loved: You spend so much time trying not to hurt his feelings, that you... you seem to forget... You hurt mine.

 
Summary:

Edward made a decision after that second biology lesson.  Two years later that decision is challenged.


Categories: AU, Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 77655
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2011 Updated: November 05, 2011


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: March 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very different from anything i've read before. looking forward to more!

 

 
Summary:

Becoming a wolf was the most painful thing he had ever gone through, and there was only one place he could go for shelter. My FGB Breaking Dawn fic.

   

Thanks to the gorgeous time_lights for the banner.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Billy, Embry, Jacob, Jared, Paul, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6386
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2012 Updated: January 14, 2012


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: January 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Safe Haven

i never really thought about what jacob went through; this made me think about that experience very differently. i wonder if you are thinking of continuing it?

 
Summary:

April, 1912. This journey home could change Bella's entire future. She no longer wished to be the decoration on her husband's arm. One fateful voyage could lead to the happiness she always wanted, or be the end of everything.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 14328
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2012 Updated: June 21, 2012


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

thank you for sharing your lovely story, it really captured the time period well, from the relationships to the language and mannerisms.

 




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