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Penname: izziey [Contact]
Real name: helina
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Member Since: May 17, 2009
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Summary:

Emmett agrees to help Bella with a wedding surprise for Edward.  However, we all know what happens to the best laid plans...


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 14764
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2010 Updated: February 02, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

so edward's hot and all, but really, i think i prefer emmett in the long run. very little angst, so much fun!



Author's Response:

Emmett really is great.  I had a lot of fun thinking about how he'd react as I wrote this.  I'm glad you're enjoying him, too!  Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know.  :)

 
Summary:

Edward's homeroom angel has been fueling his spank bank for years.  What happens when he finds out he's got to share her with the rest of the world?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 16706
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2010 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

interesting start. i like how he's shy and insecure. favorite part: banging his head on the desk...

 
Summary:

"We're family. We stick together - family is an inseparable thing." When a new dog arrives at the Little Paws Animal Shelter. She receives more then just a human family. Crackfic. Fluff.
This Story was has ended incomplete. Sorry to all readers.


Categories: Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Nessie, Other Character, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 3945
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2010 Updated: April 22, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 & 2 - The Arrival & The Scare

i wanna meet emmett! what a sweet idea. i'm so jealous of your creativity.



Author's Response:

Thanks glad you like it. :)

 
Speed Dating by Crittab Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Edward, Bella and Co. are young, bored, horny, and always on the lookout for new ways to get the blood pumping. Featuring B/E, J/A, R/Em, and Bella's truck. Rated a hard NC17 for smut. 

My entry for the "Twific Auto Erotica Challenge".

Oneshot


Categories: AU-Human, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2666
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2010 Updated: January 24, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Speed Dating - One Shot

as a twifan, loved it! as a mom and teacher, not so much...



Author's Response:

Lol, I completely understand. As a person with more than air between my ears, I feel the same way :P

 
Summary:

A geeky Edward is convinced that when it comes to best friend Bella, he doesn't stand a chance... until he finds a magazine article that begs to differ. Going back to school after Spring Break he has an all new image, but is it enough to win Bella's heart!

 

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Thanks to the talented MsTwiSwe for my beautiful banner, I love it!


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 24348
[Report This] Published: January 30, 2010 Updated: June 08, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

edward transforming for bella. nice twist! i especially like that he actively seeks to change; it doesn't *just happen*. off to read the chapter!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

it's funny, i thought that edward would be a geek in high school, then join a frat in college. i like this concept much better.

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward spend their first Valentine's Day together. Set after 'Mistletoe and Wine'.

A smutty E/B one-shot for the holidays.

Big thanks go to m81170 for the amazing banner.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8061
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2010 Updated: February 12, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Saints and Sinners

I have to say that I disagree completely with one line: No-one else would bother looking so closely. seriously? who wouldn't look closely? Everything else. hmmm....you have quite a way with the adjectives!

 



Author's Response:

May be they would look 'closely' but not in the capacity that Bella's thinking of. I like descriptive language, it's my dearest , closest friend. Thanks for the review :) 

 
The Last Goodbye by jmeyer Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

 

“He’s engaged,” Angela blurts out in the middle of dinner.  Once those words escape from her mouth, I know nothing will ever be the same again.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 9877
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2010 Updated: April 23, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Denial

please, please, PLEASE say that you will be continuing this story. you got me, seriously, got me!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Denial

heart palpitations under control. i see that you will be continuing this story. i'm ok.

 
Taken by BellaLovesEdward729 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1178]
Summary:

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Thank you to Mkystich for the awesome banner!

Edward and Bella go to tell Charlie about their engagement when something happens that changes everything. Love is tested, friendships are torn, but how can Edward save Bella from someone they all trusted?


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 88773
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

thank you for the dream sequence. i feel a bit healed now.



Author's Response:

aww you're welcome babe!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

happy birthday! mine was on wednesday and i can't wait for school to be over so i can really celebrate!

i feel so badly for edward and bella. i have to say that you captured his emo-ness and her self-esteem issues perfectly. i like that charlie knows about the cullens and accepts them.

i feel very uncomfortable with jacob's role in this story, but it doesn't feel as ooc in relation to the movie as the book - i couldn't stand the dream-catcher gift scene- i thought jake look way too manipulative. the look on jake's face is kind of how i imagine him looking as he made his plans.



Author's Response:

oh happy birthday to you! :) yeah. he's a creeper haha

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

i love charlie's decision to be changed so that he can be with his daughter forever. that's a true father.



Author's Response: it is!! GO CHARLIE! :) Teaser For Chapter 21 I could hear everything. I could see everything. I could see the little dust balls flying in the air and hear the animals moving in the earth. I stared out the window unblinking, unmoving. I didn't have to. My eyes weren't drying out and the muscles in my body weren't begging for me to move. I could stand like that for hours, days, months if I had to. It was amazing to see the world how the Cullens had seen it. The colors were much brighter and everything just seemed alive. "You ready to go hunt, love?" Edward asked, taking me out of my thoughts.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

thank you for sharing this story with us. i look forward to both the epi and new work from you.



Author's Response:

thank you babe! you're awesome

 
Summary:

It’s that time of the year, again. Valentine’s Day. Can Bella distract Edward before he loses his temper with her aggravatingly persistent admirers?

 

Written as a Please Don't Be My Valentine sequel, but can be read and understood as a separate story. Canon E/B fluff, post-Breaking Dawn.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3057
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: February 27, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: February 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: To Be Your Valentine

if only i could make your day the way you made mine! my valentine's was NOTHING like that.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Ahh, I think Edward Cullen would make everyone's valentine's day that much better. ;)

 
Summary:

An unexpected discovery reveals that Edward lied when he left Bella.  Now, Bella is determined to find a way to contact him, and in the process she learns more than she ever knew about Edward Cullen.

An Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you Mothlights for the fantastic banner!!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 178682
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Yes!

a beautiful chapter, with so many elements i've come to look forward to: romance, tenderness, silliness, fun.

 

fave line:

"And I'll take whatever you'll give me. If it's eighty years, or eternity...I'll love you every day."



Author's Response:

Thank you, I liked that line, too :)  I thought it was a very Edward thing to say.

Cheers :)

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Gothic Romance

ooohhh. that was gooood. i've always wished that stephenie had kept the scholarship in new moon, but this was just great. i can absolutely picture edward providing books for bella. sheer genius!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: March 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: And So It Begins

loving your story and pulled a bella looking for it on other sites. no luck. i look forward to your next posting!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  Yeah, the chapters are running parallel on Twilighted and FF.  The story is still a work in progress so two chapters is all there is at the moment - I'm working on chapter three now.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Serious Intentions

great chapter. i loved that edward hadn't bought a ring, that would have been over the top; your idea was perfect. and the ending...i jumped in reaction. i am impressed that you've kept the quality of your writing so high. looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I agree with you about the ring ... he wouldn't have done that.  But I always thought that maybe he had bought her a gift for her birthday, something that showed the depth of his feelings and I thought the locket really fitted.   Thanks for your review :)

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bandage

thank god! next chapter - reunion!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Dust Sheets and Drama Queens

fave line: You're not the only one he hurt, Bella!

so much said with so few words.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that.  Charlie isn't one for lots of words, but I thought those few summed it up for him.

 

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Presents

genius. they don't actually *do* anything, but i was squirming in my seat.

and the plot stuff, that was great as well. (sorry, i was a bit distracted by the non-lemon) loved jasper and bella's moment. felt very right.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Getting There

loving how you incorporated elements from eclipse and bd, specifically the bed and the hybrids. very often these sort of references pull me right out of the story, but yours were integrated very smoothly and subtly. i'm hoping that you'll consider a sequel, even a short one to incorporate a pregnancy and birth.

i find it hysterical that it was bella's idea to build their home instead, and the *auto pavilion* almost made me spew lemonade all over the monitor. i really could have used edward's help when i was grating the cheese for my chili, no fair!

so many beautiful sentimental lines, and so many hot comments, but my fave has to be:

"It will be like I'm touching your soul," he whispered. "As I give you mine."

i have to thank you for an original take on NM, you really made it your own.

 
Summary:

My take on what happened at the Cullen house the day Edward bought a bed. Takes place during ECLIPSE.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 933
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2010 Updated: March 10, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: March 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 One-shot

poor edward. maybe he needs some tips from Domward?

 
Summary:

This one-shot was written for the 2010 Twilight Winter Gift Exchange.

Edward has grown to adulthood as the only child of a farming family. Hoping to earn extra money, he travels to the city each day, ultimately finding more than he bargained for within one of the mansions of affluent Chicago. AU, B&E, explicit lemons.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10373
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2010 Updated: March 29, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

a sweet story. i'm glad i had something so tender to read today.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  It was a lot of fun to write as a Christmas gift...

 
Summary:

The NM-AU you’ve never read before! Edward breaks up with Bella, but he doesn’t leave town. Alice has seen that in order for Bella to move on, she must see him move on. Will they ever find their way back together?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Edward, Emily, Jacob, Leah, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 33324
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: November 22, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: You're Beautiful

i can understand being nervous since you're out of your comfort zone, but i have to say - well done! it never fails to amaze me when authors twist the story just a bit and get such an exciting premise. i recall wondering how alice didn't see what would happen and show edward; you took that to the next level. i look forward to more.

 




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