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Penname: izziey [Contact]
Real name: helina
Status: Member
Member Since: May 17, 2009
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Summary:

An unexpected discovery reveals that Edward lied when he left Bella.  Now, Bella is determined to find a way to contact him, and in the process she learns more than she ever knew about Edward Cullen.

An Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you Mothlights for the fantastic banner!!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 178682
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Gothic Romance

ooohhh. that was gooood. i've always wished that stephenie had kept the scholarship in new moon, but this was just great. i can absolutely picture edward providing books for bella. sheer genius!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: March 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: And So It Begins

loving your story and pulled a bella looking for it on other sites. no luck. i look forward to your next posting!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  Yeah, the chapters are running parallel on Twilighted and FF.  The story is still a work in progress so two chapters is all there is at the moment - I'm working on chapter three now.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Serious Intentions

great chapter. i loved that edward hadn't bought a ring, that would have been over the top; your idea was perfect. and the ending...i jumped in reaction. i am impressed that you've kept the quality of your writing so high. looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I agree with you about the ring ... he wouldn't have done that.  But I always thought that maybe he had bought her a gift for her birthday, something that showed the depth of his feelings and I thought the locket really fitted.   Thanks for your review :)

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bandage

thank god! next chapter - reunion!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Dust Sheets and Drama Queens

fave line: You're not the only one he hurt, Bella!

so much said with so few words.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that.  Charlie isn't one for lots of words, but I thought those few summed it up for him.

 

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Presents

genius. they don't actually *do* anything, but i was squirming in my seat.

and the plot stuff, that was great as well. (sorry, i was a bit distracted by the non-lemon) loved jasper and bella's moment. felt very right.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Getting There

loving how you incorporated elements from eclipse and bd, specifically the bed and the hybrids. very often these sort of references pull me right out of the story, but yours were integrated very smoothly and subtly. i'm hoping that you'll consider a sequel, even a short one to incorporate a pregnancy and birth.

i find it hysterical that it was bella's idea to build their home instead, and the *auto pavilion* almost made me spew lemonade all over the monitor. i really could have used edward's help when i was grating the cheese for my chili, no fair!

so many beautiful sentimental lines, and so many hot comments, but my fave has to be:

"It will be like I'm touching your soul," he whispered. "As I give you mine."

i have to thank you for an original take on NM, you really made it your own.

 
Summary:

My take on what happened at the Cullen house the day Edward bought a bed. Takes place during ECLIPSE.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 933
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2010 Updated: March 10, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: March 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 One-shot

poor edward. maybe he needs some tips from Domward?

 
Summary:

This one-shot was written for the 2010 Twilight Winter Gift Exchange.

Edward has grown to adulthood as the only child of a farming family. Hoping to earn extra money, he travels to the city each day, ultimately finding more than he bargained for within one of the mansions of affluent Chicago. AU, B&E, explicit lemons.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10373
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2010 Updated: March 29, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

a sweet story. i'm glad i had something so tender to read today.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  It was a lot of fun to write as a Christmas gift...

 
Summary:

The NM-AU you’ve never read before! Edward breaks up with Bella, but he doesn’t leave town. Alice has seen that in order for Bella to move on, she must see him move on. Will they ever find their way back together?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Edward, Emily, Jacob, Leah, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 33324
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: November 22, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: You're Beautiful

i can understand being nervous since you're out of your comfort zone, but i have to say - well done! it never fails to amaze me when authors twist the story just a bit and get such an exciting premise. i recall wondering how alice didn't see what would happen and show edward; you took that to the next level. i look forward to more.

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella have a conversation about their daughter's newest development. Assumed B/E. Crack!fic. One-shot.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 599
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: April 01, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - One Shot

fun!

 
Summary:

Unexpectedly thrust into a dangerous situation, will Edward risk his family's secrecy to ensure Bella's safety?


Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 28147
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: April 26, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hmm. i'm intrigued. looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

I'm glad I've captured your interest!  The next chapter is awaiting validation, so with luck an update should appear fairly soon. Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Summary:

Ready for some fun?  After a confining newborn year, Izzy finds herself in more trouble than she bargained for. Dark days lay ahead as she faces new enemies, old friends, a past that won’t stay dead and a future that is alive with more craziness than you can poke a stick at. Sequel to Dirty Dancing with the Devil Herself.

 

ban


Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 12448
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: May 31, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:A History Lesson

i am impressed by the thought and research you put into this chapter alone. this is just another example of the brilliance i encounter in fan fic.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is, according to her friend Jasper Hale, "that girl that every guy in high school falls in love with at least twice." Jasper's new foster brother, Edward, is convinced he's kidding. After all, he can see that Bella's acting, that her perfection is the cover for her true self.

But Edward has secrets of his own, and he's sure he'd be better off without them coming to the surface. His past of multiple foster houses and gang violence aren't the worst of his problems.

Their meeting is an accident. Or maybe fate.

(and you see that incredibly amazing banner of incredible amazingness? my beta, Dr_Twilight_PharmD, who constantly goes above and beyond the call of Beta Duty, made that for me)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 111766
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2011


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

this chapter started out so sweet and hopeful; it just about killed me to see megan like that. i can understand zach's anger, i'm just concerned about the consequences for all of them.

as a high school teacher i can't thank you enough for your a/n.



Author's Response:

And as a high school student, I can't say how much I appreciate how much you and all your colleagues do to help me and all mine. Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i hesitated to read this story because of the gang aspects, but i am happy that i gave it a try.

i worry for bella's sanity with all those AP courses!



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's my junior year schedule. The difference is that I was class vice president instead.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

great closing line for rosalie, and i totally agree with edward's fail. i have to say that i can see where he's coming from...

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i love how slow they're taking things. if i could only go back in time...

and the bit about the scars, sad and tender, both.

 

 

 
Summary:

 

Not all is as it seems when the Edwards from two different universes find a journal that can bridge the gap between them. Things become even stranger when the reality of one universe starts to bleed into the other, since in one universe vampires exist, and in the other universe, they do not.

Until now.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 79576
[Report This] Published: April 22, 2010 Updated: November 22, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i find myself intrigued. you have never failed me, so i'm in.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow.n you really took the alternate universe idea to a whole new level. i like it!



Author's Response:

LOL, thank you!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i'm curious as to where you got this idea. something feels familiar about the journal serving as a link, but i can't remember.

anyway, loving the story!



Author's Response:

I can't say one way or another.  I didn't see something else that inspired it for me, but you never know what's out there.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love the last line!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  This story really is so much fun to write!

 
Beautiful Dreamer by Nessarie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 85]
Summary:

 

 

I tilted my head closer toward my wife’s tummy, though I didn’t necessarily need to do so in order to hear the baby’s budding thoughts, but I wanted to be closer, still marveling over everything that was happening. Oh, I’m sorry – I’m so sorry for every doubt I had. I’m sorry. Everything was suddenly becoming extremely sharp – I now understood exactly why Bella was so ready to give her life up to make sure this child lived.

Because, I knew that if it were me, I would make the same decision – my life was nothing compared to that of my child’s.

Edward's experiences spanning from when he first hears the baby's thoughts until Bella awakes from her change (with a little steam in the middle).

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 30462
[Report This] Published: April 27, 2010 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Life

i completely agree with your explanations for the interpretations of events in BD. alice was obviously not feeling the affection that the others did, and although i felt a bit uncomfortable with edward's physical reactions to biting bella, they are completely logical.

THIS is why i love fanfic: new insights.



Author's Response:

:) Thank you!

 

~Ness

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: November 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Family

this is so sweet! i love all of the little details, especially nessie wetting her diaper!

 

best of luck with NaNoWriMo!

 
Summary:

In All of Me, Bella chooses to serve Edward as his 24/7 consensual slave, but while she serves his needs, Edward is always looking for ways to fulfill hers.  Exploiting the voyeuristic tendencies of their gardener, Jacob, is just one way Edward does that.

In this sideshot, we get to see Jacob's perspective, as he is looking from the outside in and learn how this arrangement came about.  It is best read after Chapter 22 of the main story.

 

WARNING:  This story contains strong, graphic language, graphic sexual situations and BDSM.  Please read with caution.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 4414
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2010 Updated: May 22, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

if. if. if we we want more. that's sarcasm, right?

so. what did i think? hot. sexy. funny. perfect.

 
Lost (One-Shot) by Twivamp Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Written for the What About Alice? Contest. Alice feels lost in New Moon when Edward leaves.

Banner made by FrozenSoldier:

Banner made by FrozenSoldier


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1857
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2010 Updated: June 25, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lost

wow. i am constantly overwhelmed by the talented authors on this site. it never occurred to me that alice would blame herself because of the party. this is the second story i've read this week, but only one of less than a dozen overall, that are now part of the twilight saga. as far as i'm concerned, this happened.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review and your many compliments. Please be sure to vote for this story on July 10th at http://fanfiction-challenges.blogspot.com/ Thanks again!

 

~Twivamp :)

 




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