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Penname: izziey [Contact]
Real name: helina
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Member Since: May 17, 2009
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Summary:

An unexpected discovery reveals that Edward lied when he left Bella.  Now, Bella is determined to find a way to contact him, and in the process she learns more than she ever knew about Edward Cullen.

An Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you Mothlights for the fantastic banner!!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 178682
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2010 Updated: November 12, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Yes!

a beautiful chapter, with so many elements i've come to look forward to: romance, tenderness, silliness, fun.

 

fave line:

"And I'll take whatever you'll give me. If it's eighty years, or eternity...I'll love you every day."



Author's Response:

Thank you, I liked that line, too :)  I thought it was a very Edward thing to say.

Cheers :)

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Gothic Romance

ooohhh. that was gooood. i've always wished that stephenie had kept the scholarship in new moon, but this was just great. i can absolutely picture edward providing books for bella. sheer genius!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: March 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: And So It Begins

loving your story and pulled a bella looking for it on other sites. no luck. i look forward to your next posting!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much.  Yeah, the chapters are running parallel on Twilighted and FF.  The story is still a work in progress so two chapters is all there is at the moment - I'm working on chapter three now.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Serious Intentions

great chapter. i loved that edward hadn't bought a ring, that would have been over the top; your idea was perfect. and the ending...i jumped in reaction. i am impressed that you've kept the quality of your writing so high. looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I agree with you about the ring ... he wouldn't have done that.  But I always thought that maybe he had bought her a gift for her birthday, something that showed the depth of his feelings and I thought the locket really fitted.   Thanks for your review :)

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bandage

thank god! next chapter - reunion!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Dust Sheets and Drama Queens

fave line: You're not the only one he hurt, Bella!

so much said with so few words.

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked that.  Charlie isn't one for lots of words, but I thought those few summed it up for him.

 

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Presents

genius. they don't actually *do* anything, but i was squirming in my seat.

and the plot stuff, that was great as well. (sorry, i was a bit distracted by the non-lemon) loved jasper and bella's moment. felt very right.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Getting There

loving how you incorporated elements from eclipse and bd, specifically the bed and the hybrids. very often these sort of references pull me right out of the story, but yours were integrated very smoothly and subtly. i'm hoping that you'll consider a sequel, even a short one to incorporate a pregnancy and birth.

i find it hysterical that it was bella's idea to build their home instead, and the *auto pavilion* almost made me spew lemonade all over the monitor. i really could have used edward's help when i was grating the cheese for my chili, no fair!

so many beautiful sentimental lines, and so many hot comments, but my fave has to be:

"It will be like I'm touching your soul," he whispered. "As I give you mine."

i have to thank you for an original take on NM, you really made it your own.

 
Summary:

My take on what happened at the Cullen house the day Edward bought a bed. Takes place during ECLIPSE.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 933
[Report This] Published: March 02, 2010 Updated: March 10, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: March 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 One-shot

poor edward. maybe he needs some tips from Domward?

 
Summary:

This one-shot was written for the 2010 Twilight Winter Gift Exchange.

Edward has grown to adulthood as the only child of a farming family. Hoping to earn extra money, he travels to the city each day, ultimately finding more than he bargained for within one of the mansions of affluent Chicago. AU, B&E, explicit lemons.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10373
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2010 Updated: March 29, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

a sweet story. i'm glad i had something so tender to read today.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  It was a lot of fun to write as a Christmas gift...

 
Summary:

The NM-AU you’ve never read before! Edward breaks up with Bella, but he doesn’t leave town. Alice has seen that in order for Bella to move on, she must see him move on. Will they ever find their way back together?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Edward, Emily, Jacob, Leah, Sam, Seth, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 33324
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: November 22, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: You're Beautiful

i can understand being nervous since you're out of your comfort zone, but i have to say - well done! it never fails to amaze me when authors twist the story just a bit and get such an exciting premise. i recall wondering how alice didn't see what would happen and show edward; you took that to the next level. i look forward to more.

 
Summary:

Edward and Bella have a conversation about their daughter's newest development. Assumed B/E. Crack!fic. One-shot.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 599
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2010 Updated: April 01, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - One Shot

fun!

 
Summary:

Unexpectedly thrust into a dangerous situation, will Edward risk his family's secrecy to ensure Bella's safety?


Categories: Twilight, New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 28147
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2010 Updated: April 26, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hmm. i'm intrigued. looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

I'm glad I've captured your interest!  The next chapter is awaiting validation, so with luck an update should appear fairly soon. Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Summary:

Ready for some fun?  After a confining newborn year, Izzy finds herself in more trouble than she bargained for. Dark days lay ahead as she faces new enemies, old friends, a past that won’t stay dead and a future that is alive with more craziness than you can poke a stick at. Sequel to Dirty Dancing with the Devil Herself.

 

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Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 12448
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2010 Updated: May 31, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:A History Lesson

i am impressed by the thought and research you put into this chapter alone. this is just another example of the brilliance i encounter in fan fic.

 
Summary:

 

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Bella Swan has spent a lifetime putting everyone else's needs before her own. Could a chance encounter with a mysterious stranger begin to change all of that?

Warning: Some dark scenes and subject matter at times, will try to post warnings on each necessary chapter.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 172047
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2010 Updated: March 16, 2011


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: 15! Por Una Cabeza

thanks for posting the videos, especially the tango; it helped a lot.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Snuff

thank you for sharing some of edward's background. i like how you answer some questions but create more.

your depictions of irina and kate were wonderful; true to their characters in a number of ways: irina's coldness, kate's understanding. nice!



Author's Response:

Thank you!! I had fun working them in!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Oh My God

well, you may have stayed up all night to finish this chapter, but  i might stay up all night thinking about this chapter!



Author's Response:

Yay!! I love to make the pervy thoughts linger!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sick of Myself

hmm. wow. just...yum.



Author's Response:

;-) I like yum.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Sick of Myself

as much as i love the lemons, i am completely drawn in by edward's relationship to his family, and after this chapter, carlisle in particular.



Author's Response:

Thank you for that! There's some Emmett time coming up, too.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Ca Plane Pour Moi

i find it intriguing that edward has so many favorite positions, especially the one for intimacy.  i wonder abouth who/why/how since it doesn't seem that he had intimacy with tanya.

 



Author's Response:

True, but he felt that the position itself was intimate. Doesn't mean he didn't know that the emotion was lacking the action.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bad Romance

um. wow. thank. you.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Come Undone

poor rosalie. thank god she has emmett. i'm surprised that carlisle wasn't around, but i'm guessing he showed up right after bella left.

 

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Stellar

does any DISAGREE with emmett? it's nice to see edward actually relating to his family.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is, according to her friend Jasper Hale, "that girl that every guy in high school falls in love with at least twice." Jasper's new foster brother, Edward, is convinced he's kidding. After all, he can see that Bella's acting, that her perfection is the cover for her true self.

But Edward has secrets of his own, and he's sure he'd be better off without them coming to the surface. His past of multiple foster houses and gang violence aren't the worst of his problems.

Their meeting is an accident. Or maybe fate.

(and you see that incredibly amazing banner of incredible amazingness? my beta, Dr_Twilight_PharmD, who constantly goes above and beyond the call of Beta Duty, made that for me)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 111766
[Report This] Published: April 18, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2011


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

this chapter started out so sweet and hopeful; it just about killed me to see megan like that. i can understand zach's anger, i'm just concerned about the consequences for all of them.

as a high school teacher i can't thank you enough for your a/n.



Author's Response:

And as a high school student, I can't say how much I appreciate how much you and all your colleagues do to help me and all mine. Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i hesitated to read this story because of the gang aspects, but i am happy that i gave it a try.

i worry for bella's sanity with all those AP courses!



Author's Response:

Yeah, that's my junior year schedule. The difference is that I was class vice president instead.

 




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