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Penname: izziey [Contact]
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Member Since: May 17, 2009
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Summary:


A girl caught between two destinies… She must find the strength to choose.

A boy caught between two worlds… He must find true balance if he is to lead.

 

As if I never existed, Edward Cullen promised when he abandoned Bella Swan. 

But some things can never be undone. 

The vengeance of those left behind.  A father’s quest for redemption.  The obsession of a damned soul.  A love that should have died. 

The sunlight beyond the shadows of twilight. 

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A Jacob/Bella AU FanFic set during the events of New Moon.

 

 

 

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Mad props to xXSizzlingGirlXx and Oceanwaters2006 for the parade of AWESOME banners!


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Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Charlie, Jacob, Jared, Leah, Sam
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 48566
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2009 Updated: December 08, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Elsewheres

still love it. i especially love how it isn't necessary for you to announce the pov, it's obvious when the voice changes, and quickly evident who the speaker is. also impressive is that  you are able to change the pov without losing the tempo of the story. looking forward to the next chapter - i'm scared about the identity of the "boy".



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I was a little worried about the shifting voices at first.  I didn't realize how hard it was going to be to write first person when I started that way (as first-person was Meyers' choice) and show everything I wanted to show.  Thus the shifting perspectives.

Charlie was fun!  I love his "voice."  But Alice was so hard.  I have a feeling that my versions of all the characters are darker and more disturbed than they originally were...

--at5115

 
Summary:

A story about pain... patience... depression... desire... addiction... passion... healing... hope... and above all, love.

Bella moves to Alaska after a devastating accident tears her life apart, leaving her depressed and alone.  Consumed by her loss, she spirals into a deep depression.  At her new high school, she meets Edward Cullen and her life will never be the same. 

Edward moves to Alaska to start over with his coven - as he has been doing for the past four centuries.  Spending hundreds of years alone on the fringes of society has turned him into a pessimistic, sarcastic rebel who has lost hope of ever finding a mate.  The moment he sees Bella Swan, his life is turned upside down.

As friendship and obsession grow into love, Edward helps Bella overcome her crippling grief and teaches her how to live again. 

 RFTA Alternate

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**Warning** This story deals with mental health issues. Please be warned if this is a theme which may bother you in any way.  

 

Nominated for an Indie TwiFic - AU story that knocks you off your feet

Indie TwiFic Awards


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 71573
[Report This] Published: July 03, 2009 Updated: June 22, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Road to Denali

having dealt with depression on a number of occasions i am pleased with how you handled it in your story. still a little confused about edward, so i'm looking forward to seeing how you handle him.



Author's Response:

Thank you so so much.  I've also dealt with depression as well as an anxiety disorder... I am trying to make it as real as I can while still making it interesting and not too angsty.

Keep going - Edward gets explained (but we really get to know Bella first)
-NK

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: First Sight

thanks for the explanation about the tattoos and piercings. I was trying to picture why he wyould have done all that three hundred plus years ago...will his skin heal eventually or is he stuck like that for eternity. sure puts a new spin on "make sure you really want that tattoo for ever!"



Author's Response:

Haha... yeah, piercings weren't exactly popular in the mid 1600s.  I'm pretty sure they wouldn't heal.  Like, he can change his skin but it won't go back on it's own.  And tattoos?  Those are permanent... so I hope he likes them.

Thanks for the questions, and the review... I'm still getting used to people reading my story, and I'm so glad you like it!
-NK-

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: First Week - Edward

i really liked how you worked in edward's story about he was changed. a succubus - hmmm...i wonder if there are any opennings available for that position? so it doesn't seem that edward can read minds, but that both alice and jasper have some degree of their powers. and thanks for explaining why bella smells so much better, i hadn't put the hair washing together with that. i think that's what happens when you just really want to get to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Alice and Jasper do have a certain degree of their canon powers... and I could have kept Edward's as well, but I felt like it was easier to keep him "alone" and "in his head" without being able to read minds.  This will be more important down the road.  Plus, I think SM's Edward relies on it too much - he's always complaining that he doesn't know what Bella is thinking - Welcome to how the rest of us live, Buddy!  Alice really just has good intuition, it's Jasper who has a 'power' or sorts.  He is an empath.  His open heart will be explained later on when we learn his backstory.

Yeah, the bit about the hair... I love that part!

Thanks for reviewing and I'm so glad you like it, I'll post soon!
-NK

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Falling Angel

love it, absolutely love it. so if i post multiple reviews will that count towards getting you to post early? seriously though, i love how edward is so self-aware: the stalking, his language. i love listening to his thoughts; the rambling and stuttering in his mind are hysterical.



Author's Response:

ok ok, I'll probably post early anyways.  Chapter 8 is my favorite by far... and I'm really excited to post it.  Keep an eye out this weekend most likely.  Also, Edward knowing he is creepy makes him less creepy, I think.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  Every single one is appreciated,
-NK-

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Friends. Right. Okay.

I was a little confused at the update notice I received, but once I figured out which story it was I was so happy. I was just thinking about this story while reading some stories from the Tattward contest, but couldn't remember the name. Perfect timing! I am looking forward to your next post; please stay healthy!

 
Urban Legend by booboo_kitty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

 

There is a rumor going around that there is a masked stranger that will slip into your room at night and give you one night of hot sexin, and after weeks and weeks of leaving her window open Bella is about to give up when who shows up...yeah, mask wearing Edward. Lots of sexin ensues.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 9526
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Urban Legend

well now who needs any other fireworks this lovely fourth of july..



Author's Response:

LOL!  Thanks for reading babes!!  *MWAH*

 
Coming Home by Dumblydor Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella behind after the incident with Jasper, and doesn't come back. Bella tries to move on with her life, but one day comes face to face with her past, and is changed. So, what happens after she returns to Forks years later, and finds the Cullens again? Read and find out.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1599
[Report This] Published: July 04, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: The End

intriguing beginning. i'm interested to see how you continue this story.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Home

so i'm liking what you've got going. i look forward to your update.

 
Disillusionment by Bkwrm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 135]
Summary:

Set in New Moon. A series of betrayals has left Bella bitter and alone.

With the threat of Victoria looming, she takes desperate action to protect herself and the people of Forks; setting off a chain of events that may lead to tragedy.

The Cullens' "perfect family" slowly unravels as long-hidden resentments come to the surface.

What happens when those we love show their feet of clay?

NO RAPE.

Don't own, (I wish I did!) don't sue!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 14475
[Report This] Published: July 05, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

nice twist. and alice stuttering. beautiful.



Author's Response:

Alice had a different scenario in mind. She hoped to scoop Bella up, take her to Carlisle, have him (or someone else) change Bella, find Edward, and then everyone would live Happily Ever After.

Instead, Bella's angry and hurt, the Wolves are back, and there is a vampire stalking their old home.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

great combination of angst and humor. Damn it, why couldn’t they make cell phones you could slam down? love it and seriously, why can't they?!



Author's Response:

LOL! I've always wondered about that. Just pushing the button angrily doesn't have the same effect as slamming it down.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

you know, you keep repeating "you had to know that was coming," which usually would make for a boring story, but nooo...you keep throwing in these twists and turns! i love the excerpts about edward, nice interludes that increase the tension!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

She was tired of playing Cassandra, screaming fruitlessly into the wind while everyone she loved marched firmly and blindly down the path to doom and destruction. - just about knocked me out with this. I can't believe i never made this connection, but then again, i'm not a writer and you are.



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks. I like to think Alice fought, not only for Bella, but for Edward. It makes more sense than that passive shit of New Moon.

 
Fire and Ice by Franny Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 336]
Summary:

This story begins by re-imagining a favorite scene from Eclipse, in which Edward and Bella are stuck in a blizzard and must call on Jacob to keep Bella warm.  The original scene hints at Bella's curiosity, Edward's awareness, and Jacob's lust, and the possibilities that lie within that love triangle.  This version asks, what if Bella took what she wanted? What if Edward's long-dormant humanity were finally sparked? And what if Jacob's fantasy finally came true?

"Anything I had ever felt, allowed myself to feel, had been only a hint, a taste, a glimmer of that all-consuming heat.  That heat that Bella had plunged me headlong into, mercilessly immersing me in Jacob’s subconscious, ruthlessly repaying me for her months of frustration.  Teaching me desire in one cold, confusing night."

 

happy to see my local Blockbuster advertising my fic for me:

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 54025
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: September 15, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves

that freezing, blazing night in the tent - ung.

avid reader. teacher. bilingual. no other words for that particular phrase.

ironically enough i wrote the above before i read the following:

Conversing with vampires sometimes felt like being in a foreign country where you knew the language but had never spoken it with the natives before; you knew the words but had no time to process them or rearrange them into an appropriate response, and your tongue could never form them quickly enough.

so you knocked me speechless and impressed me with your insight. wow. can i have a sneak peek now? please?



Author's Response:

new chapter is (finally) submitted!  hope you like it!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Bitter and Sweet

i hate that leah's stuck in the middle of the e/b/j mess. such a sweet and tender moment between l/j, i hope this gets resolved.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts Still Beat

wow. what a way to break. maybe they should have tried that earlier in their relationship, before involving jacob?

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: A Mess of Contradictions

crap. i am glad no one besides the dogs saw me freeze with a spoonful of chocolate cherry ice cream halfway to my mouth as i read that last line. i'm sure the look on my face would have caused some serious hysterics.



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: The Girl and the Wolf

poor leah, jake is so blinded by bella. it seemed as though seth was lying about more than leah skipping the meeting; i almost wonder if he knows something about jake and his sister.



Author's Response:

hmm.  i always thought seth was smarter than he looked...  we'll see.

 
Simple by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 69]
Summary:

 

When you’re too broken to acknowledge you have a heart,

what do you do when it starts beating?

 

 

Awarded the "Host's Mention" in LolaShoes and tby789's contest, "Love Through Lemons"

 

Simple:  When you are too broken to admit you have a heart, what do you do when it starts beating?

Chapter Two,  Anything But Simple:  How do you read the emotions of someone to refuses to feel them?

 

AU/AH    Mature Content. 

Twilighted Beta:  VJGM       *with gratitude*

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 17455
[Report This] Published: July 08, 2009 Updated: August 19, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Simple

wow. i was thinking it might be emmett and bella, especially because of the blonde. wow. that was so good. i was also wondering about why condoms would only be used for cleanup, shouldn't she (whoever she was) worry about birth control? you got me good. well done. now let me go so i can re-read that.



Author's Response:

there are a few well-cloaked and subtle clues buried throughout that harken back to canon...  i'm very proud of this little story, and am thrilled that you enjoyed it!

she truly was just a nameless blonde. 

there is an alternate pov companion one-shot ready to be posted as soon as the contest for which this was written is over.  i hope to have it loaded by the end of next week.  it goes into much more detail on their family, individual back stories and relationship over the years, including the morning after and a brief epilogue, and is almost 3x the length of "Simple."

thank you again for your review!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Anything But Simple

beautiful story. i was wondering if alice would come along; i love how you portrayed her almost as much as i love bella's role. the first chapter was amazing, but this one just about kills me with. i don't know what i feel most; the angst or the love. thank you for sharing this story.

 
Visceral by four-letter-word Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 324]
Summary:

She’s making all the wrong choices, and she can’t bring herself to care. He’s just trying to make a life for himself. When their paths cross, will Jasper care enough to save Bella from herself? Does she even want to be saved? JxB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 34188
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: A State of Delusion

poor alice. i can't even imagine how she's feeling. i'm assuming that she knows everything that happened between jasper and bella? so what about edward?

 
Summary:

On the day their wedding, Edward gave Bella a letter. Now, on their fifth wedding anniversary, Bella is writing a letter of her own.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2064
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: February 21, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1: Bella

very sweet. commend you on submitting a story to twilighted, i am constantly struck by the quality of the stories and your story certainly belongs among them.



Author's Response:

thank you so much! reviews like that really motivate me to write more!

 
Summary:

One hundred years after the events of Breaking Dawn the Cullens have continued the cycle as a loving family of vampires living in the human world, but things have changed in the aftermath of their confrontation with the Volturi.  Their position in the vampire world has become more prominent and growing numbers are looking to them for leadership.  Change is something an immortal must learn to deal with, but as the family gathers with the Denali Coven to celebrate Carlisle's 470th birthday, they will soon discover that love is eternal, but life is not.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, TWICON 2009 FINALISTS Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Garrett, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Marcus, Renesmee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3017
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: July 10, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

i absolutely loved that story. i think you captured carlisle's devotion perfectly. well done and thank you for sharing. i look forward to reading Waning Moon.



Author's Response:

Thank you, devotion is one of the strongest traits in the entire Cullen family, and of course Carlisle is their model ;)  I hope the whole novel will be up in the near future, stay tuned.

 
Summary:

For the TwiCon Centennial Sunset Fanfiction Contest 2009.

For the past hundred years, the Cullens have continued to live, love and grow as a family. This is their story.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, TWICON 2009 FINALISTS Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3045
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: July 10, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i am so grateful to the contest that has brought so many lovely stories to light. i can see why this one is a finalist. good luck!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. I agree - this contest has been a great way to find new, fantastic authors!

God bless & happy reading!

 
Dusk to Dawn by willis713 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 35]
Summary:

Twicon 2009 Top Ten Finalist

The family is throwing Bella and Edward a one hundred year anniversary party. Edward gives Bella a special gift before they go down stairs to meet the guests.  This gift stirs up many wonderful memories. 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, TWICON 2009 FINALISTS Characters: Bella, Edward, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3006
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: July 10, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Dusk to Dawn

a lovely story - thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

You are very welcome.  I am glad you enjoyed it.

 




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