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Penname: izziey [Contact]
Real name: helina
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Member Since: May 17, 2009
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Summary:

Renee has a conversation with Edward. Eclipse missing moment. One-shot. Edward/Bella. Renee POV.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Edward, Renee
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 852
[Report This] Published: April 23, 2009 Updated: May 03, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Mornings are Special--One-shot

ha ha edward had to eat. nah nah. seriously though, sweet.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked. :)

 
Summary:

 

After Harry Clearwater’s death, Billy realizes a terrible truth about the wolves.  Only one painful path remains for him.  *In Canon*

 

Set: New Moon (p 372-373 of New Moon) the day Bella jumped from the cliff.

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Billy, Harry, Jacob, Sam
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3279
[Report This] Published: April 26, 2009 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

whoa. i never heard what caused harry's heart attack, so this was pretty shocking. i could never understand billy's hatred for the cullens before. i kinda went along with bella's "prejudices" theory and left it at that. your story made me see billy's pov. the part about rachel possibly phasing...wow.

as far as alice's visions go, it makes more sense to me that she wouldn't see the wolves once they started phasing. i thought i read that somewhere, but who knows? i look forward to more from you.

 
Summary:

The Cullen's have left Forks, but when Alice has a vision of Bella dying she's on he first plane back. This is chapet 17 from New Moon, "Visitor", told from Alices' Point of view.

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4566
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: May 11, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Visitor

i'm always nervous about alternate points of view, but you did a very graceful job.

 
Summary:

When Edward leaves Bella in the beginning of New Moon, his decision sets off a spiral of tragic consequences. Edward and Jacob attempt to protect Bella, but there are some things that they can't protect her from.

Rated for occasional profanity, sensitive topics, and sexual content

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 62038
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: August 14, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The End and The Beginning

could you please clear up when she says " i was pregnant until a couple of weeks ago"?



Author's Response:

Sorry, typo...I should read found at that she was pregnant.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: 48 Hours

where is jasper?!?!? how, what, urrrrr....really need some answer here!

poor charlie, poor bella.



Author's Response:

Okay, I will say this. Jasper is not a bad guy. He was a victim in all of this too. All the Cullens are good people and I would never have it any other way. I love the Cullens too much.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Changes

holy crap i thought it was too late that charlie was dead!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Changing Hearts

hmm. charlie and kate? some very interesting possiblities there. i really feel for edward though, he's gotta feel like a freak now.

 
Infinite Heart by makovitza Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 75]
Summary:

"The bottom line is that you have to choose who you are going to commit to - that's the foundation of true love, not a lack of other options." - Stephenie Meyer.   It has been six years since Bella was left alone and heartbroken in the woods.   She has moved on, creating a happy life for herself in La Push.  That is, until an unexpected meeting with some long-lost friends causes her comfortable life to be thrown into disarray.  Will she have to choose between her husband and the man she can't forget?

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Claire, Edward, Jasper, Quil, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 14578
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: August 13, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i have recently discovered an affection for jake that i did not have. i used to avoid jake-centric stories, and although i don't search them out, have stopped avoiding them. i'm glad i did otherwise i would have missed this story.



Author's Response:

I think it's great that you're getting in touch with your inner Jake-fan :-) I am a Team Edward girl at heart, but I have to admit that I have a soft spot for Jake and I feel that he often gets the short end of the stick in this fandom. This is not a completely Jake-centric story, though - Edward will be turning up, and that's when things will get interesting! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :-D

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

to be honest, the thought of me on skates makes me nauseous. thanks for the advice about falling forward. i could have used it before i fell and dislocated my tailbone...anyway, i like how it's jasper and not edward. nice change. i am concerned that jasper is working with beginners. i fell down and sliced my hand; that's when i figured out why they're called blades. oh well, just a bella wanna-be i suppose.



Author's Response:

Haha - you make a good point about the risk of beginners cutting themselves on their blades. I hadn't thought of that! But I have to say that I was a figure skater and trained multiple times per week for a number of years. I can probably count on one hand the number of times I saw people bleed on the ice. I suspect I've seen more blood working in an office than I did on the ice! Anyway, Jasper is having less trouble with his blood-lust these days - as is explained in a later chapter...

It does sound like you and Bella have a bit in common. I imagine the thought of getting on skates makes her nauseous too! :-)

Thanks again for reading and taking the time to write a thoughtful review!! I really appreciate it!! :-D

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

yeah! I'm so happy that you updated. I kept coming across another story that had ice-skating on the banner and would get all excited. Congratulations on your infanticipation. I completely understand the difficulty in updating at this time. As for this chapter, I'm happy to see Bella's reunion with Esme, although I wonder why Esme seemed nervous. I find it quite ironic that Alice wants to keep others in the dark regarding her plans, all things considered. I can't even imagine what their performance will be like. Imagine them on skates without having to hold back! That would be amazing - maybe we'll get a peak someday. Please take care of yourself, and I look forward to your next chapter.

 
Summary:

Set in the timeline of post Breaking Dawn (i.e the first November Bella is a vampire!), but AU. Imagine Edward had the strength to stay away from Bella for her to save her humanity. She is happy with Jacob and is settling into a routine. Coming back from Florida to tell Renee some news, Bella meets someone she doesn't expect on the plane.

Now three of our characters face a crossroads and must all make an important decision. What are the consequences of each decision and how will they effect the other two?

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Billy, Brady, Carlisle, Charlie, Claire, Collin, Edward, Eleazar, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kate, Kim, Leah, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 17015
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: November 05, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & Chapter One - Unexpected Meeting

that was really good. i was afraid that their reunion would be cheesy, but you avoided that nicely. please post soon.



Author's Response:

:) Hpe the reunion wasn't too cheesy in later chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: - Why Now?!

oops, in my last review i asked you to post soon - i didn't realize that  you had other chapters up already. nice twist with the scar!



Author's Response:

I know but it doesn't matter! I've probably done that before on either a one shot or on a multi chapter :) Hope enjoyed the twist - which was apprently obvious - in chapter five! Thanks for reading and revieiwng :)

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3:- Repercussions

hmm - i was expecting some sort of immediate reaction to hearing about victoria and laurent.



Author's Response:

You're the first to mention that and now you do, maybe there should have been! Oops! Thanks for reding and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: - Back To Reality

clever bella - i didn't even think about jacob being able to tell that she had kissed edward!



Author's Response:

I just suddenly come to mebut you're right he would - no one else has commented on that lol Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

 
Summary:

While watching a movie for an English class assignment, Bella and Edward happen to be witness to the most strange occurrence.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 701
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Gone With the What?

oh that was so not what i was expecting. i thought they would recognize one of the cullens as an extra or something. oh this was sooo much better! emmett, emmett, emmett



Author's Response:

HAH! That really is a fantastic idea as well! I had never thought of that!

Thank you for reading and reviewing! <3

 
Summary:

Becoming a vampire was supposed to mean a new beginning for Bella. Instead tragedy is visited upon the Cullens, and Bella is neither alive, nor dead, left to keep a promise she wishes she'd never made. This is her Afterlife.

 

Afterlife


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 8997
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: June 20, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Jasper

i know authors want reviews and i haven't at all yet for this story, but honestly, i just couldn't wait to go to the next chapter. i love this story, please, please post soon.

 
Summary:

Edward asks Carlisle's advice about his compromise with Bella. Eclipse missing moment. One-shot. Carlisle POV. Rated R for frank discussion of sex and sexuality.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1488
[Report This] Published: May 04, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Fatherly Advice--One Shot

i love carlisle, maybe even more than i love edward. you've captured his voice so well. thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you for saying so!

 
Summary:

 

 

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"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.

But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.

Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.

To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.

He'll find her. He has to. 

HE HAS TO."

- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received.  THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here.  It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)

 

Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted.  Does it want her back?  What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...

 

Rated for later chapters.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Restraint

i can understand that an author would want reviews, but i'm not a writer so i always feel tongue-tied. that was so good, please, please, post soon.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Touch Me

omigod omigod! are you kidding me?! you authors and your cliff hangers - pure evil!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Find Me

wow. never read a story where bella was the one to go to italy. great chapter. is jacob still physically 25 or has he aged because the cullens are gone? looking forward to seeing what happens in italy.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: October 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Stay

where else would i go?

 
Summary:

Alice's visions are subjective. She sees things based on what people decide. But what happens when the decisions are made too quickly and without conscious thought? Alice can't stop what she can't see. And when she sees Bella crash her truck, she fears she may be too late...

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Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 73033
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2009 Updated: June 17, 2012


Reviewer: izziey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well, i'm lucky enough to have encountered this story with three chapter already up, but i have to say it seems to be worth the wait.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I love writing it and I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Chapter 4 is in the works. Thank you for reviewing! ^_^

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i am very hopeful that you will continue this story soon.

 



Author's Response:

Chapter 4 is in the works, but it's being a little vixen with me and playing a good game of hide-and-go-seek! ^_~ Have no fear though, this story has many more chapters to go! Thank you for reviewing! ^_^

 
Summary:

Then Direct You Into My Arms

Then Direct You Into My Arms opens during New Moon. Bella is hunted by Victoria, haunted by Edward, protected by the pack. Amidst the chaos of constant danger, the growth of her relationship with Jacob Black and the difficult beginnings of a new friendship, the Cullens will return to Forks to turn Bella's life upside down again... and again. 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 61415
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2009 Updated: November 01, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

so that was my very first bella/jacob story. usually i quit after a couple of paragraphs, but this one kept my interest. well done.



Author's Response:

Oh I'm so honored that I'm able to hold your interest with J/B! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. The next chapter is in the queue :)

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

thank you for sharing a lovely story. I'm teamedward myself, but felt my heart melt a little towards jacob - especially in this last chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading it and for your kind words :) I'm so glad that I managed to make a Team Edward person feel a little closer to Jake.

 




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