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Penname: izziey [Contact]
Real name: helina
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Member Since: May 17, 2009
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Incubus by EJ Santry Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 430]
Summary:

Incubus

Edward has been filling his thirst for blood with an insatiable appetite for flesh for the last 80 years. A new girl arrives at Forks High School that baffles him, and just might turn his world upside down and break him of his rapacious behavior.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 39573
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2009 Updated: March 19, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Devil Wears Converse

one of the very few times i've actually like tanya! great insight into edward.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: The Return

oooohh a secret!

 
Summary:

I never gave a thought about what marriage really meant, i loved Jake and i was happy. isn't that enough? i guess we will have to see.

 

 

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Other Character, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 19380
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: June 11, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Well this is a change

so i have some questions: how are the cullens still in forks? doesn't anyone recognize them? wouldn't it be risky to have the baby in a hospital?

anyway, that was fun. i especially like when reneesme mentions jacob's "hide", edward whimpering, and when alice, bella, and edward show up with food. i could seriously get into that! although, how could alice see all that when she couldn't see jacob or reneesme?



Author's Response:

well....the cullens are still in forks, AFTER being away for many years, in my world, all the kids plus Esme and Carlisle when to college, leaving Jake and Renesmee on thier own. Aki was born at Swedish hospital in Seattle, after thanksgiving. with Alice seeing what Nessie was craving, it was more of a off screen edward adn Jake moment that could have gone:

"Golden palace again Jacob?" Edward asked me. juggling the bags of food into the house.

"Yeah, i think your daughter and grandbaby are turning chinese, she has me order this all the time." i finished with a yawn, " but i wish i could get some sleep." i shrugged and went to the kitchen to set down the food.

"well, you know you can always call us if you need a break." edward said before going back to the paper.

"Sure, Sure." i mumbled. i was so tired.

 

hopefully that helps. thanks for reading!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: School daze 2

i have to admit, i re-watched the first underworlds and saw the third once i found out who was playing aro in new moon. nice touch.

fyi - her name is spelled Selene.

 
Blood Lines by windchime Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2468]
Summary:

 

Edward reveals a secret from his human time which leaves Bella shocked and wondering just how well she knows the man she is about to marry.

This is very much an Edward and Bella love story.

Thank you angel-gidget for the banner!

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 256624
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2009 Updated: December 19, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Baths and Baby Showers

thank you, thank you, thank you for giving bella stretch marks! and for having edward demonstrate his feellings both in front of their friends, and to bella regarding her appearance. but most of all, thanks for having emmett save the day at the shower. greatly looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Bella had to have stretch marks, she just had to.  I'm glad you liked Emmett's little save, I did too.  Next chapter is on the way.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Surprises and Soap Suds

so i've been reading your story all day (except when my brother kicked me) and i don't think i've taken even a second to review because i just want to keep reading. i have to comment about edward's comment regarding biting through the amniotic sac - priceless. i've been caught up in the story since the beginning and just want to thank you for sharing. now i have to see charlie's response to the pregnancy.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Photos and Flatscreens

that was one of the loveliest chapters i've ever read. i love how bella had to go up a size and has stretch marks, that edward didn't remember to bring a condom, and that bella has to give up nursing due to baby teeth and venom. i realize that those aren't the big plot points, but they are the details that make this story so enjoyable to read.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the details, I always have fun putting those in, so thank you :)

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Full Circle

Thank you for finishing the story with the same affection, care, and talent that you started it with. I have to say that Edward's comment about the lion and the lamb gave me goosebumps. Seriously, one of the best lines I've read EVER!

 
Summary:

What if Bella reacted quicker to the paper cut at her party. Could be considered OOC Bella but still funny.  One-Shot


Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 771
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2009 Updated: February 19, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Birthday Redux

nice. sweet. funny. good job. i'm glad this was the random story today.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

I can't believe I was the random story of the day.  *giddy* that's a first.

Thanks again!!

Jace

 
Insomnia by demeterloves2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 608]
Summary:



Alice Cullen has been having visions involving her brother, Edward, and his soul mate for the last five years and yet he refuses to believe her. Her last vision brings the Cullen's to Forks, Washington and Alice knows that the girl in her vision is there.

Bella Swan has been plagued with strange dreams and nightmares for the last five years, causing her to develop a small case of insomnia. She has grown tired of her friends and her boyfriend. She views her life as boring. Then the Cullen's arrive.

Edward wants Bella more than life itself. At first it was just her blood but now it is so much more. He knows he should leave but his family won't allow it. He wants to believe Alice when she tells him he won't hurt Bella, but the monster inside him says differently.

A HUGE thanks to psvtiger for the banner...You're freaking amazing and I mean it when I say that I'm your biggest fan for life, girl!! :HUGS:


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 108753
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

so i'm finding this to be pretty interesting although why are there six cullens?



Author's Response:

Oh, hey, thank you! I fixed that little error in my own copy, but obviously forgot to do so here!!! :D lol

Thank you!!

 
Summary:

The title says it all-- Edward's POV of the scene in Bella's bedroom at the end of New Moon. You know what he said. Find out what he was thinking!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2344
[Report This] Published: February 19, 2009 Updated: February 19, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (One-Shot)

your story really did right true. lovely

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 (One-Shot)

massive doses of Bella- nice

well done. i'm not sure if i reviewed this story but i am going back and re-reading. you ask if the story rang true - yes

 
Ithaca is Gorges by giselle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 886]
Summary:

Ithaca is Gorges Banner

After the Cullens leave Forks and make the move to New York, Carlisle fights to keep his family together as Edward's pain threatens to tear them apart. Ithaca is the story of a son's quest, a father's love, and the unique family struggling to stand behind them both...

This is the Cullens' New Moon.

 

 

Ithaca starts one month into the Cullens' time away from Bella, and will follow New Moon to its end. Carlisle and Edward narrate in alternating chapters. Follows all known canon.

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 118422
[Report This] Published: February 19, 2009 Updated: December 07, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Debts to Ephraim

I was reading this chapter while supervising a study hall and Edward's driver's license made me gasp and get teary-eyed. Maybe a warning next time I'll need tissues so I don't make a fool out of myself in front of students is necessary?  I loved reading Carlisle's pov, especially regarding Bella's visit to his office. Thank you so much for sharing this story with all of us. I look forward to future stories.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Vigil

It was one of the unexpected curses of perfection—our bodies did not tire of sobbing any more than they did any other activity. What a painfully beautiful sentence. One of the best lines I've ever read.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm rather fond of that line myself--it's those things about what it's like to be a vampire that I love to ruminate on.

 
Summary: Feature

Scarred by events in her past, Bella relies heavily on her best friend and roommate, Jasper. When Jasper falls in love with a girl named Alice, Bella is excited for him but can’t help but wonder – where will she fit in? Her answer partially arrives in the form of Alice's older brother, Edward, but as their friendship grows, Bella comes to realize that she may be too broken to give Edward everything he needs.  Canon pairings, AH/AU

This contains explicit content, elements which may be offensive to some, and dark themes.  It is intended for a mature audience.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 256064
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Sandalwood Songs

so,  i had to move over her from ff because this chapter and the others after it it didn't show up.

anyway, i love that song! and i love styx.

now i have to go to bed since i started this story kinda late. hmm...i wonder what i'll teach my students tomorrow? seems like i'm more like jasper than bella as far as planning goes.

 
Never Again by superstarrh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 509]
Summary:

Bella and Edward are reunited after breaking up five years ago.  Can Bella move beyond the pain he caused her to accept him into her life again or is the past too painful to overcome.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 64200
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: April 29, 2010


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Six Months Later

sneaky

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Why Wouldn't I Be Okay?

derek? i thought it was eric.

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: June 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 -

looking forward to your next post.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I am working on it right now!

Jaime

 
Forever by JewelzIsWeird Rated: G starstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Edward never returned after leaving in New Moon. Now, 72 years later, he returns for his final good-bye. BxE Oneshot


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1537
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: February 25, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

i am so glad this was the random story, otherwise i might never have come across it. beautifully written.

 
Summary: Feature

 

While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse.  When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help.  But of course, fate has plans for this man.  Canon Couples.  AU.  DARK Themes.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: The Bedroom

my favorite part: the naked part!

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: The Sunset

  i thought that i had this story on update, but missed quite a few chapters. i'm glad i remembered it, it's as good as i recalled. gonna miss naked vamp though...

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: December 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: The Weekend

ninety years! poor edward...when is bella going to call him my edward...

 
Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: The Jump

love the echoes from bella's first days as a vampire...the hesitancy, discovery, now i'm just waiting for the joy...

 
Elegy by apresmoi Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

OneShot. When Charlie Swan approaches her a week before his daughter is to be interred, Angela Weber is surprised. It seems inappropriate to say that she is pleasantly surprised, considering the situation, but she might be. He mumbles something to her about a eulogy, and what “Bella would have wanted” and she finds herself saying yes, of course yes. Jacob/Angela.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Angela, Ben, Charlie, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3472
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: March 02, 2009


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: July 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i really like this story, which is surprising because i don't really like jacob very much. i would very much like to read more.

 
Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

Beautiful banner by the awesome achelle131


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: izziey Signed
Date: August 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 What Got Left Behind (V)

so, i've been pretty much just lurking here in the corner. I just started reading your story today, and yeah, thought that things moved pretty quickly between Edward and Bella. I do have to agree with you though, that sometimes that just how things are. I was very curious about the whole Sam situation and seriously love your explanation. I have only recently become any sort of fan of AH fanfic, but every chapter of  your story is pulling me in just a little bit more.

 




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