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Real name: Jamie
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Member Since: October 27, 2008
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I'm a twenty-something just trying to find my place in the world.


I love to get lost in a book or a story.


I'm a stickler for good grammar. Call me the grammar police.


If my name wasn't a dead giveaway, I love love love hockey. Chicago Blackhawks baby! Stanley Cup Champs 2010! :)


Music is a essential part of my everyday life. There isn't a day that goes by that some song is stuck in my head.


And did I forget to mention I may have a bit of a Twilight obsession? Maybe just a little...who am I kidding? It's a full-blown addiction.


I've been nominated for a Tomato Soup Award :)


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Road Maps by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 925]
Summary:

 

Sequel to BRANDED-It's now six years later; Bella is graduating from Dartmouth, Edward is in Med School. How have their lives changed over the years and what's to come down the road?

AU-Human, rated NC-17 for mature language, mature subject matter, talk of abuse.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 149860
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The Thief

The funny thing is that I just had this conversation with my friend a couple days ago. I can't just choose one because they all have the strong points. Can't I just throw them all in a blender? That way I have a little piece of them all. The all includes Carlisle since he doesn't get as much attention as the other boys.



Author's Response:

My first reaction to the blender comment was "EWWW!" but I totally get what you're trying to say.  Mmm...a freaky Cullen hybrid.  I bet that would have sexy results.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Bonfires and Bon Temps

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays to you too!



Author's Response:

Thanks, HockeyChick.  :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: November 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Big News

I just read the third book in The Immortals series by Alyson Noel. And don't feel bad...I still read YA books lol



Author's Response:

I'm so jealous!  That book is on my Christmas list...can't afford to buy it right now, so hopefully my sister will get it for me.  It makes it easier for her to buy it too, because the other books I want are found in the erotica/romance section, and my sister isn't comfortable shopping in those sections of the bookstore.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Mile High

Everything I Do I Do For You by Bryan Adams. I know it's corny but I love Bryan Adams! Or of course the typical I'll Be or I Could Not As For More by Edwin McCain. I have a whole list lol There has to be something from all the genres at my wedding. I'm ecclectic lol



Author's Response:

Yay!  Another Canadian choice!  Edwin McCain's songs are sweet for weddings.

If I had my way, I would walk down the aisle to Bust a Move, but that just wouldn't happen.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Wedding Day

The wedding was perfect!



Author's Response:

YAY!  Thanks, HockeyChick!  i'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Beach Bums

I love how Edward and Jake are actually friends in your story. So nice to see for a change!



Author's Response:

I thought it might be different to have them be friends instead of rivals.  I felt bad for Jake in the books (but I'm still Team Edward), and I wanted to give him a shot to redeem himself.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: December 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Nightswimming

I think I need a cigarette after that lol



Author's Response:

I wanted to take up smoking again after writing it!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Road Trip!

Aww!



Author's Response:

I'm not sure how to respond to Awww...Thanks?  Merci?  Sweeeeet?  Ooohhhh?  Yay?

I think I'll go with Sweeeeeeeeeet.  :p

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Lazy Day Compromises

Can't wait for the Yahtzee game lol



Author's Response:

LOL!

Good old Yahtzee.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Lullabies and Triple Word Scores

The Scrabble game reminds me of the time my friends and I played Porno Pictionary. And to answer your question, I know Alice is crazy energetic but that's what downers are for lol.



Author's Response:

LOL!  I guess the downers people are going to do booming business, because it seems that everyone is choosing Alice as their BFF.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Breakdown

Those diary entries are so heart-breaking



Author's Response:

I'm glad they work.  I needed a way for Elizabeth's story to be told, and since she's not around, what better way than this?  She is a tragic figure, and Edward needed to know that his mom loved him, needed to understand why she did what she did.

There are a couple more diary entries in the next chapter, so brace yourself.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Contact

He hadn't had any answers to why his mother did what and i think his reaction is what can be expected of from someone who went through something traumatic when they were so little. Poor Edward! I want him to kick his sperm donor's ass!



Author's Response:

Now that would have been a good way to raise money for Haiti Relief...a Kick Edward's Sperm Donor's Ass booth.  I'd like to kick him myself.  *ugh* 

Just wait until you read HIS story.  It's hard on the head.  His thought processes are all over the place.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: The Sperm Donor

I'm hiring a bounty hunter and finding Edward Sr and going to have the hunter bring him to me and I'm going to gut him like a fish..F***ing Coward! Boy I'm violent lol



Author's Response:

Why not hack him up with a hockey stick?  Getting slashed across the shins with a blade is PAINFUL!!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Daddy Dearest

He's such a f***ing asshole! God! My blood is boiling!



Author's Response:

Breathe, HC, breathe.  I would hate for you to blow a gasket over him.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Don't Worry, Be Happy

Emmett is too cute!



Author's Response:

Emmett's just going to get cuter.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Party On!

Can't wait for the baby! It's so refreshing not to feel violent towards any character like I have recently lol



Author's Response:

LOL!  You won't feel violent toward Bean. 

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: IT'S A---

I'm so happy for Emmett and Rosalie!



Author's Response:

Yay!  Bean is here!!!  I'm glad that people are happy for them.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Perfect

Little Lily! How cute!



Author's Response:

Ah, little LilyBean, the apple of her daddy's eye.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Hormonal Horrors

Pregnant Bella is f***ing awesome! You go girl!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying her, HC! 

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: An Expensive Lemon

The ending was really sweet.

I just wanted to say thank you for replying to my reviews :)



Author's Response:

I want to say thank you for giving me reviews to reply to!  I love doing it...I've gotten to know some great people this way, and really I think it's important to respond to them.  You guys take the time to read my story and make comments on it--the least I can do is respond, even if sometimes my replies don't make sense.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Fa La La La La

At least Bella didn't die. I was afraid that might happen. I had a feeling Peanut would be a boy for some reason.



Author's Response:

Wow, you guys think so little of me and doubt me so much.  Do you really think I'd let Bella go through all of that only to kill her off?  I don't think so.

Oh ye of little faith.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Homeward Bound

Like Edward doesn't have enough crap on his plate lol



Author's Response:

I know, but I didn't want to leave any loose ends, and we all know that Ed Sr. is a loose canon of a loose end.  He needs to be dealt with.  Poor Edward never gets a break, does he?

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: RUN!

No one can catch a break, seriously?



Author's Response:

No, no they can't.  I am cruel, evil, and a horrible person.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: February 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Normal

I'm sad to see this story come to an end. :( It is one of my favorites.



Author's Response:

You and me both, Chick.  I hated to end it, but it was the most organic place to do it.  I didn't want it to drag on and have everyone end up hating it.  :( 

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue-Bittersweet Symphony

Great end to a great story! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, HockeyChick.  I hope you'll stick around for the new story.  :)

 




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