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Penname: HockeyChick [Contact]
Real name: Jamie
Status: Member
Member Since: October 27, 2008
Website: http://twitter.com/Hockey_Chick10
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I'm a twenty-something just trying to find my place in the world.


I love to get lost in a book or a story.


I'm a stickler for good grammar. Call me the grammar police.


If my name wasn't a dead giveaway, I love love love hockey. Chicago Blackhawks baby! Stanley Cup Champs 2010! :)


Music is a essential part of my everyday life. There isn't a day that goes by that some song is stuck in my head.


And did I forget to mention I may have a bit of a Twilight obsession? Maybe just a little...who am I kidding? It's a full-blown addiction.


I've been nominated for a Tomato Soup Award :)


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Reviews by HockeyChick
 
Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks with her daughter after an unexpected event. Her daughter, Leah, has not spoken a word since the event. Bella hopes that surrounding her with her family will help Leah get better. Leah soon befriends a green-eyed little boy next door. Can his father be the key to help Leah get better?

This is a story about how a love between two familes can heal each other and overcome whatever life throws at them - together.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 55582
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2011 Updated: September 20, 2011


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Not cool with the cliffie lol. Loved the breakfast and can't wait for the dinner :) Anthony and Leah are so adorably cute :)



Author's Response:

sorry :-( lol, yeah i love those kids 2,

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 part 1

Bella is so screwed lol



Author's Response:

lol yes she is :-)

 
Fragments by Antevorte Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

He lives in reality, barely dreaming about things that will never happen. She's your average daydreamer, imagining things out of this world. What happens if these two meet somewhere in between the reality he lives in and the dreams she imagines?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Charlie, Edward, Other Character, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 6136
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2011 Updated: July 24, 2011


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Apple Blossom

Kinda reminds me of the Time Traveler's Wife :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Yellow Rose

Loving the meetups with Edward :)

 
Summary:

Isabella, an artist living with anger and hurt, could paint all the colors of the wind and hack all the codes of the virtual world.

Edward, a tormented man who fought his own battles, and a genius who at a young age became a CEO. 

They meet, but will their chaos unite or separate them?

 

Warning: Angst and Dark themes, it's rated M for many reasons...

This beautiful banner war made by Readergoof

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 12182
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2011 Updated: September 26, 2012


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 20, 2011 Title: Colors and Numbers

Can't wait for Edward to make his appearance.



Author's Response:

Hello HockeyChick!

Thanks for your review! Edward is making his appearance really soon, next chapter is waiting to be submitted! ^^

Karyn

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Colors and Numbers

Edward and Bella are like oil and water...right now. They have some powerful demons.

 
Speechless by elysedc Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

When Mike Newton breaks up with Bella as they both head off to the University of Washington, Bella is devastated. She spends all her time and energy trying to get him back, despite her friends' pleas to let him go. Bella is so hung up on Mike, she almost doesn't even remember the stranger she danced with on Halloween. Almost.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1280
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2011 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I want to see where you take this.

 
Summary:

One lie sealed his fate. He couldn’t look back and he couldn’t move on, but what happens when he finds out, sixteen years later, it was all a lie. Can he become the father she needs, and can she accept that she was really wanted? Canon pairings eventually.

http://pics.livejournal.com/tkegl/pic/000er8qy


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 144782
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2011 Updated: May 12, 2012


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jane's a bitch! Poor Savannah :(



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review :)

Some are still asking about the Edward and Bella aspect---she’ll come, it’ll be a few more chapters, but she’ll be here and it will end E&B I promise :) Girl Scout Honor!

Not much this week, for those who celebrate Easter have a great Sunday! Otherwise, enjoy the holiday weekend :)

Teaser for Chapter 3:
At eight, I decided it was early enough to call Jasper. Savannah hadn’t woken up yet, and I wasn’t sure how I felt about her knowing my plans. It wasn’t that I didn’t want her to know, or have an opinion, I just felt like I needed to know everything before I tried to explain it all to my long-lost daughter.

“Jasper Whitlock,” he answered the phone after only a ring. His voice was groggy, and I knew I might be waking him up with the three hour time difference, but I was desperate. Besides, no one sleeps beyond five when you have kids, right?

“Hey, man, it’s Edward,” I started. “I need your help. You see, I have the funniest story to tell you, and...”

“Are you in jail?” he asked sarcastically.

“Um, no,” I replied monetarily confused by the question.

“Are you dying, then?” he shot back.

“Definitely not dying, but man, what I was saying...” He cut me off.

“Dude, if you’re not in jail, and you’re not about to die, why in the world are you calling me at five o’clock in the morning? Do you not own a clock?” he snapped, and I could tell he was slowly becoming more alert.

Thank you!
Kelly (SLM)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review :)

Some are still asking about the Edward and Bella aspect---she’ll come, it’ll be a few more chapters, but she’ll be here and it will end E&B I promise :) Girl Scout Honor!

Not much this week, for those who celebrate Easter have a great Sunday! Otherwise, enjoy the holiday weekend :)

Teaser for Chapter 3:
At eight, I decided it was early enough to call Jasper. Savannah hadn’t woken up yet, and I wasn’t sure how I felt about her knowing my plans. It wasn’t that I didn’t want her to know, or have an opinion, I just felt like I needed to know everything before I tried to explain it all to my long-lost daughter.

“Jasper Whitlock,” he answered the phone after only a ring. His voice was groggy, and I knew I might be waking him up with the three hour time difference, but I was desperate. Besides, no one sleeps beyond five when you have kids, right?

“Hey, man, it’s Edward,” I started. “I need your help. You see, I have the funniest story to tell you, and...”

“Are you in jail?” he asked sarcastically.

“Um, no,” I replied monetarily confused by the question.

“Are you dying, then?” he shot back.

“Definitely not dying, but man, what I was saying...” He cut me off.

“Dude, if you’re not in jail, and you’re not about to die, why in the world are you calling me at five o’clock in the morning? Do you not own a clock?” he snapped, and I could tell he was slowly becoming more alert.

Thank you!
Kelly (SLM)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow. Just wow.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm a sucker for little kids. Bella's going to be one of Savannah's teachers....I can feel it.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Holy heart failure!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: October 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Poor Rose but at least she's alive and has her baby :) Loved the kiss between Bella and Edward :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Little different from Blind Intentions. I want to see where you're going to take this :)



Author's Response:

HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Some of you I’ve seen before, and some I haven’t...so hey! I took my break, and I am back! Will definitely try to keep to the weekly updating schedule, just like Blind Intentions, but if I fall off the wagon it’ll have a good reason! I am pre-writing so I am a big ahead and hope to stay that way this time!

A few expressed concerns about the HEA warning---all I meant is that I’m not someone who will flat out say, “Yes or no” to a HEA. Each of my characters will get the ending that fits them. Not everyone gets the rainbows and butterflies, but I am a complete and total E&B shipper so have no fear there ;)

The theories are making me smile, but because I love the feedback. Good reviews and bad reviews all make me happy---I’d prefer not to have a negative one, but if I’m failing you as an author somewhere please hit me up on twitter, facebook, reviews, PMs...whatever. I really just want to get better...so ALL feedback is appreciated!

As always, a teaser for next week...enjoy!
“Wait, Savannah! Where are you going?” I called out.

She didn’t stop running, but it only took me a second to catch up.

“Please, stop,” I tried again, but she didn’t.

“Look, I didn’t come here to cause you problems with your wife. I’ll just find a place to stay tonight and go back home tomorrow,” she said through falling tears.

“No, absolutely not. There is a perfectly good bed in that room for you to use, and tomorrow we’ll figure all of this out. Please, come back,” I pleaded, and she finally hauled her steps. “Thank you.”

“Why are you doing this?” she questioned. “I’m no one.”

“You’re my daughter,” I immediately corrected, but she just shook her head.

“Before today, I was no one to you. I’m not worth you fighting with your wife over,” she tried to brush me off.

Running to hide now, have a great week!
Kelly (SLM)

PS. Definitely different from Blind Intentions...more drama versus angst.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow at the end.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: February 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Aww. Such a sweet ending....sort of lol

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved the dinner :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Friggin typicall high school bitches lol. Can't wait for dinner with Jeremy lol

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Glad Bella is starting to come around to Edward. Aww, Savannah is growing up :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow at Edward's blowup. It was bound to happen though.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Glad Edward kicked Jane out on her ass!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! It means the world to me. I hope to have Chapter Four up in about a week or so, this week I’ll be quickly writing an outtake for my old story Blind Intentions for the Fandom Fights the Tsunami. More details in next weeks chapter! Again, thank you, here is a small teaser until then: “So, can I ask you a question?” I heard Savannah ask. “Sure,” my mom replied. “Last night, I tried to ask Edward about Angela, but it was weird. He told me everything I wanted to know, but it looked like it was painful. Can you tell me about her?” I was shocked that Savannah had picked up on the churn of emotions I felt last night. “Hmmm, yeah, I can imagine that was difficult for him” my mom mused. “Let’s see, Angela was quiet but incredibly smart. She had a very big heart, and for a while I really thought they would end up together. Edward’s father and I were high school sweethearts, so I knew it was a possibility. Angela was a good girl. I see a lot of her in you, and I see a lot of my son, too.” “So, you don’t know why Angela hid me?” she pushed further. “No, I really don’t. I imagine she was scared, and, with the abrupt move of her family, I’m sure her parents played a hand in it all. In a perfect world, she would have sat down with Edward and been truthful, but we can’t focus on that. What’s important is you’re here now, and I’ve never seen him so happy about something in years, so that is good. But you, how do you feel?” my mother subtly pushed for the same answers I wanted. “Edward is nice. I really didn’t know what to expect when I arrived, but it’s definitely been more than I dreamed. I just wanted to know him, but I really wanted to know why I was put up for adoption. I tried tracking Angela first, but that was a dead end...maybe one day.” Thank you! Kelly (SLM)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Can't wait for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Shelly is a bitch! I would have punched her lol.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yay for Savannah! Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

On to Forks we go :)

 




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