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Penname: HockeyChick [Contact]
Real name: Jamie
Status: Member
Member Since: October 28, 2008
Website: http://twitter.com/Hockey_Chick10
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I'm a twenty-something just trying to find my place in the world.


I love to get lost in a book or a story.


I'm a stickler for good grammar. Call me the grammar police.


If my name wasn't a dead giveaway, I love love love hockey. Chicago Blackhawks baby! Stanley Cup Champs 2010! :)


Music is a essential part of my everyday life. There isn't a day that goes by that some song is stuck in my head.


And did I forget to mention I may have a bit of a Twilight obsession? Maybe just a little...who am I kidding? It's a full-blown addiction.


I've been nominated for a Tomato Soup Award :)


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Reviews by HockeyChick
 
Summary:

Edward is a single father and CEO of Cullen Corporation.  He's emotionally closed off and doesn't want a romantic relationship.  A couple of chance meetings with Bella, a part time entertainment journalist and one of Cullen Corporation's new employees, and that could all change.  Everyone has a past, but can love be enough to build a future?  Bella is willing to try, but Edward's self imposed rules on no dating make it difficult.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 204014
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2011 Updated: July 08, 2012


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

What a rollercoaster of a chapter! Who knew Edward had a bit of kink in him? Lol



Author's Response:

Good description of the chapter.  Their emotions were all over the place.  It was a difficult time for them, but they always come back to love.  And Edward...of course he's got a little kink in him!  Honestly, he was having a REALLY hard time trying to deal with all the emotions running through him.  He needed some outlet ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: October 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I want to hang out with the gang! They are a blast :) Loved dinner with Edward and Bethy at Bella's :) So adorable.



Author's Response:

They are a lot of fun.  Add a little alcohol to the mix and it can get a little crazy.  I've been wanting Bella to have Bethy over to her place for a while, glad we got that done.  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Loved their Halloween :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved it.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I guess that's one Christmas present Edward won't be returning this year lol



Author's Response:

Nope, definitely no refunds or exchanges. LOL

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yay for Edward and Bella getting together and figuring things out :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Shower fun, Pictionary, and cuddles, what more could a girl ask for? lol



Author's Response:

My thoughts exactly :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Nice to hear from Edward and his take on the kiss. Loved the end :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: October 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

*raises hand* I do, I do! That was such a cute Thanksgiving :) Love the Black Friday celebration too. You can't get that at any sale lol



Author's Response:

Imagine the long lines if you could! LOL Thanks for reviewing

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Bethy stole the chapter. Her sweetness and pure innocence are just so adorable. So happy for Bella :)



Author's Response:

I guess you're right...Bethy did rule the chapter.  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Bethy is so adorable. She's getting her mommy that she always wanted. Edward should be happy that Bella to initiative about Gianna. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I don't think we'll have to worry about Gianna after the next chapter.  Should post soon. 

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Loved the ball minus Mike the dick and loved the festivities afterward ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loving it :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

There's gotta to be more behind the way Edward is acting.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I wish I could get a job like Bella :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bethany is so adorably cute :) Bella is in trouble and she doesn't even know it yet lol

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Edward's in trouble lol

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Manwhoreward needs to change his ways. Can't wait for Bella's setup :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loved the trip to the museum :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I wanna go party with them!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Yay for Alice and Jasper :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Love the trip to the zoo. You are never too old for the zoo :) My favorite is the penguins :) Edward's story...wow.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved it! Bethany is just too adorable :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Aww. Loved the visit with Charlie and the beginning of Bella and Edward's relationship :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 20

Poor Bella. Bethy was so sweet though. I know this had some very downer moments but can I say that the dry humping was awesome? lol



Author's Response:

LOL!  I was afraid the more dramatic parts of the story were going to overshadow their little bit of fun.  Maybe it did for some readers.  Glad to hear you enjoyed it!  Thanks for the review.

 




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