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Penname: HockeyChick [Contact]
Real name: Jamie
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Member Since: October 27, 2008
Website: http://twitter.com/Hockey_Chick10
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I'm a twenty-something just trying to find my place in the world.


I love to get lost in a book or a story.


I'm a stickler for good grammar. Call me the grammar police.


If my name wasn't a dead giveaway, I love love love hockey. Chicago Blackhawks baby! Stanley Cup Champs 2010! :)


Music is a essential part of my everyday life. There isn't a day that goes by that some song is stuck in my head.


And did I forget to mention I may have a bit of a Twilight obsession? Maybe just a little...who am I kidding? It's a full-blown addiction.


I've been nominated for a Tomato Soup Award :)


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Reviews by HockeyChick
 
Bad Blood by LadyExcalibur Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 283]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was a man who liked order. He arranged his life into neat little segments, exercising rigid control in all areas of his existence. Then one day, all of it was brought tumbling down by one simple question.

 

The lovely banner is courtesy of Readergoof, and I think it is amazing! Thank you!

 

Bad Blood banner by Readergoof


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52050
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2011 Updated: August 08, 2011


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow. Dying for Edward's meeting.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Loved Edward and Charlie's talk.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Love the ending. Loved the whole story :) I'm sad it's all over :(

 
Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary:

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banner by marcia993

Bella moves back to Forks with her daughter after an unexpected event. Her daughter, Leah, has not spoken a word since the event. Bella hopes that surrounding her with her family will help Leah get better. Leah soon befriends a green-eyed little boy next door. Can his father be the key to help Leah get better?

This is a story about how a love between two familes can heal each other and overcome whatever life throws at them - together.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 55582
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2011 Updated: September 20, 2011


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Leah is adorable but she breaks my heart. I can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you, i kinda love her 2

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 part 2

I'm glad Bella told Edward. Love Edward being protective and Bella too.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Leah is with Anthony on his ship.



Author's Response:

lol, we'll just have to wait and see thank you

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Aww, the end of the chapter was cute. I can't wait for their dinner. Daddyward is such a good daddy :) The kids are adorable too.



Author's Response:

thank you, daddyward is so cute too :-)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Wow. Talk about first impressions so to speak with Edward and Bella. Edward and Leah were adorable together. Totally had a Edward/Reneesme moment!



Author's Response:

I never thought of that, I hope there is a similar scene in BD. :-)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: prologue

OMG! I'm sucked in!



Author's Response:

good, good ;-)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10

Loved hearing Edward's side of things :). Loved Edward and Anthony's outing :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9

Ending the chapter there wasn't cool at all lol. Is it wrong for me to say that Leah's little temper tantrum was cute?



Author's Response:

lol, yeah I think her tantrum was cute as well. thank you :-)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Loved hearing from Edward. Anthony is adorable :)



Author's Response:

thank you

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Wow at Bella's story. Edward is such a good daddy :)



Author's Response:

thank you.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Not cool with the cliffie lol. Loved the breakfast and can't wait for the dinner :) Anthony and Leah are so adorably cute :)



Author's Response:

sorry :-( lol, yeah i love those kids 2,

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 part 1

Bella is so screwed lol



Author's Response:

lol yes she is :-)

 
Fragments by Antevorte Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

He lives in reality, barely dreaming about things that will never happen. She's your average daydreamer, imagining things out of this world. What happens if these two meet somewhere in between the reality he lives in and the dreams she imagines?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Charlie, Edward, Other Character, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 6136
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2011 Updated: July 24, 2011


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Apple Blossom

Kinda reminds me of the Time Traveler's Wife :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Yellow Rose

Loving the meetups with Edward :)

 
Summary:

Isabella, an artist living with anger and hurt, could paint all the colors of the wind and hack all the codes of the virtual world.

Edward, a tormented man who fought his own battles, and a genius who at a young age became a CEO. 

They meet, but will their chaos unite or separate them?

 

Warning: Angst and Dark themes, it's rated M for many reasons...

This beautiful banner war made by Readergoof

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 12182
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2011 Updated: September 26, 2012


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 20, 2011 Title: Colors and Numbers

Can't wait for Edward to make his appearance.



Author's Response:

Hello HockeyChick!

Thanks for your review! Edward is making his appearance really soon, next chapter is waiting to be submitted! ^^

Karyn

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 12, 2011 Title: Colors and Numbers

Edward and Bella are like oil and water...right now. They have some powerful demons.

 
Speechless by elysedc Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

When Mike Newton breaks up with Bella as they both head off to the University of Washington, Bella is devastated. She spends all her time and energy trying to get him back, despite her friends' pleas to let him go. Bella is so hung up on Mike, she almost doesn't even remember the stranger she danced with on Halloween. Almost.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1280
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2011 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I want to see where you take this.

 
Summary:

One lie sealed his fate. He couldn’t look back and he couldn’t move on, but what happens when he finds out, sixteen years later, it was all a lie. Can he become the father she needs, and can she accept that she was really wanted? Canon pairings eventually.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 144782
[Report This] Published: April 10, 2011 Updated: May 12, 2012


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jane's a bitch! Poor Savannah :(



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review :)

Some are still asking about the Edward and Bella aspect---she’ll come, it’ll be a few more chapters, but she’ll be here and it will end E&B I promise :) Girl Scout Honor!

Not much this week, for those who celebrate Easter have a great Sunday! Otherwise, enjoy the holiday weekend :)

Teaser for Chapter 3:
At eight, I decided it was early enough to call Jasper. Savannah hadn’t woken up yet, and I wasn’t sure how I felt about her knowing my plans. It wasn’t that I didn’t want her to know, or have an opinion, I just felt like I needed to know everything before I tried to explain it all to my long-lost daughter.

“Jasper Whitlock,” he answered the phone after only a ring. His voice was groggy, and I knew I might be waking him up with the three hour time difference, but I was desperate. Besides, no one sleeps beyond five when you have kids, right?

“Hey, man, it’s Edward,” I started. “I need your help. You see, I have the funniest story to tell you, and...”

“Are you in jail?” he asked sarcastically.

“Um, no,” I replied monetarily confused by the question.

“Are you dying, then?” he shot back.

“Definitely not dying, but man, what I was saying...” He cut me off.

“Dude, if you’re not in jail, and you’re not about to die, why in the world are you calling me at five o’clock in the morning? Do you not own a clock?” he snapped, and I could tell he was slowly becoming more alert.

Thank you!
Kelly (SLM)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review :)

Some are still asking about the Edward and Bella aspect---she’ll come, it’ll be a few more chapters, but she’ll be here and it will end E&B I promise :) Girl Scout Honor!

Not much this week, for those who celebrate Easter have a great Sunday! Otherwise, enjoy the holiday weekend :)

Teaser for Chapter 3:
At eight, I decided it was early enough to call Jasper. Savannah hadn’t woken up yet, and I wasn’t sure how I felt about her knowing my plans. It wasn’t that I didn’t want her to know, or have an opinion, I just felt like I needed to know everything before I tried to explain it all to my long-lost daughter.

“Jasper Whitlock,” he answered the phone after only a ring. His voice was groggy, and I knew I might be waking him up with the three hour time difference, but I was desperate. Besides, no one sleeps beyond five when you have kids, right?

“Hey, man, it’s Edward,” I started. “I need your help. You see, I have the funniest story to tell you, and...”

“Are you in jail?” he asked sarcastically.

“Um, no,” I replied monetarily confused by the question.

“Are you dying, then?” he shot back.

“Definitely not dying, but man, what I was saying...” He cut me off.

“Dude, if you’re not in jail, and you’re not about to die, why in the world are you calling me at five o’clock in the morning? Do you not own a clock?” he snapped, and I could tell he was slowly becoming more alert.

Thank you!
Kelly (SLM)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow. Just wow.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm a sucker for little kids. Bella's going to be one of Savannah's teachers....I can feel it.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Holy heart failure!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: October 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Poor Rose but at least she's alive and has her baby :) Loved the kiss between Bella and Edward :)

 




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