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Penname: HockeyChick [Contact]
Real name: Jamie
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Member Since: October 27, 2008
Website: http://twitter.com/Hockey_Chick10
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I'm a twenty-something just trying to find my place in the world.


I love to get lost in a book or a story.


I'm a stickler for good grammar. Call me the grammar police.


If my name wasn't a dead giveaway, I love love love hockey. Chicago Blackhawks baby! Stanley Cup Champs 2010! :)


Music is a essential part of my everyday life. There isn't a day that goes by that some song is stuck in my head.


And did I forget to mention I may have a bit of a Twilight obsession? Maybe just a little...who am I kidding? It's a full-blown addiction.


I've been nominated for a Tomato Soup Award :)


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Reviews by HockeyChick
 
Summary:

Picking up the Pieces

With many thanks to FrozenSoldier for my beautiful banner. You are amazing.

Bella is about to leave for college and pursue her dream of becoming a teacher, but an unexpected complication leaves her plans in ashes as she struggles to pick up the pieces of her broken life.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 41947
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2010 Updated: September 30, 2010


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Aww! The baby! And all seeing and all knowning Alice is never wrong :)



Author's Response:

Never! Alice has a whole load of predictions up her sleeve yet!

Thanks for reviewing - glad you are enjoying it.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh no!!!! You can't kill off Carlie. She's just an innocent child!



Author's Response:

I may be evil, but I wouldn't do that! Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh shit on a stick!



Author's Response:

You have a lovely way with words!!! lol

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Why does Jake have to ruin everything? lol Is Edward really that dense that he doesn't see that Carlie is his child?



Author's Response:

I don't think he's looking! If you know, the likeness is indisputable, but you have to remember that he has no idea that he could be the father of a child, so he won't be trying to join any dots up. I imagine him looking at Carlie and seeing Bella in her.

And yes, Jake has thrown a spanner in the works - but at least he is not a romantic element in Bella's life, he is just the friend he was always meant to be.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Esme is like the great and powerful Oz :)



Author's Response:

lol! Yes - I totally agree!I love her to bits!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Can't wait for Daddyward to be in full effect! Carlie's reaction was similar to mine when my mom told me we were leaving my dad.



Author's Response:

Bless you. I'm sure you had loads of questions later, but at the time you just accept things and move on. I hope you were able to keep a good relationship with both your parents. Thanks so much for your comments. I love to read them :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love Carlie, she is just too adorable. I want some more Edward and Bella banter :)



Author's Response:

I know - and there will be plenty of it coming up. Lots of interaction. Next chapter, a bit more Jake!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

No more confusion on Edward's part at least for now. Bella? I'm not so sure. :)



Author's Response:

Ah, yes - we haven't tackled the dreadful T word yet, have we!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Tanya just has to rear her head. She's always wrecking everything :)



Author's Response:

I know - damn her!!!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

James is a class A douchebag :)



Author's Response:

Amen sister!!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

At least Carlie was found :) How much could you put this little girl through? lol



Author's Response:

Sorry! But she is fine - no ill effects, as you will see next chapter. Methinks she won't do that again in a hurry!!! lol

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Edward is so dense. Bella is just so...naive to everything lol. They both need their heads clunked together like the Three Stooges. Maybe a little pixie dust will put things in perspective :)



Author's Response:

I think you could well be right there. I know a little someone who might make some dreams come true!!!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was a sweet sex scene. It was passionate no worries there.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad it hit all the right spots! :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Aww! That was a sweet and cute chapter all rolled into one. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks - its nice to write some fluffy good stuff for them both! They deserve it, I think!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Epilogue

That was a great ending but I'm sad this story is over :( Can't wait to see what other creations you have in the works :)



Author's Response:

Thanks - I've loved all your reviews. Thanks so much for all your comments.

 
Need Somebody by antebellum Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

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It begins in tragedy. Will help arrive in time? Or will it be too late to save a life? Contains dark and graphic themes. Proceed at your own risk.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 4283
[Report This] Published: July 10, 2010 Updated: May 26, 2011


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - The End

Wow! Now that's a way to reel a reader in. I'm hooked.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Awake

And in comes Edward...always has to be the hero...at least sort of in this case.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: February 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Doctor

Aww Bella :(

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Meeting Edward

Wow. Poor Bella :(

 
Summary:

 

After a five year relationship with James, Bella is left a broken and abandoned single mother. With the help of his and her best friend, Edward, she finds her way towards happiness. When Edward and Bella's long kept hidden feelings come to a head, things take an awful turn. Through heartbreak and tragedy, will Bella still prevail by breaking even?

**I own nothing. This story contains adult situations, scenarios of physical abuse and is rated NC-17 for lemons in later chapters**


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 184294
[Report This] Published: July 13, 2010 Updated: January 11, 2012


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Finally some relief to the sexual tension :)



Author's Response:

I know, right? It was nice to finally write it too, lol! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love Emmett!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Loved Charlie going after James! Loved the whole sexting debacle too. Loved the chapter!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Love Jake...he reminds me of Lafayette from True Blood :) Can't wait for their first!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

YES!!!! THESE TWO HAVE SEEN THE LIGHT!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: March 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Dun dun dun!

 




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