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Penname: HockeyChick [Contact]
Real name: Jamie
Status: Member
Member Since: October 28, 2008
Website: http://twitter.com/Hockey_Chick10
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I'm a twenty-something just trying to find my place in the world.


I love to get lost in a book or a story.


I'm a stickler for good grammar. Call me the grammar police.


If my name wasn't a dead giveaway, I love love love hockey. Chicago Blackhawks baby! Stanley Cup Champs 2010! :)


Music is a essential part of my everyday life. There isn't a day that goes by that some song is stuck in my head.


And did I forget to mention I may have a bit of a Twilight obsession? Maybe just a little...who am I kidding? It's a full-blown addiction.


I've been nominated for a Tomato Soup Award :)


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Reviews by HockeyChick
 
Summary:

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet when their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Bella and Edward? Or will they become more than friends? NC-17 for language, possible lemons.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Garrett, Jasper, Kate, Lauren, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 45614
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2010 Updated: September 29, 2011


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I felt bad for Bella during the Lauren conversation. Bella better let Edward in...at least slowly.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

That was cute :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The whole soccer thing was cute, aside from Alex talking about his dad.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Sad to hear about Brody and Sarah but it puts things in perspective. Love Anthony's reasoning about Bella and his dad :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Glad to see you back in action!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

The end was sweet. It reminded me of the movie "Casper" with Cat's mom :) Alex and Emmett were so cute together :)



Author's Response:

Em's a hoot!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Breakfast was so adorable :) Can't wait for the zoo :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetie.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: July 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Not cool with the ending but I'm loving the date :)

 
Summary:

Jacob Black isn't sure his fiancee, Isabella Swan, is ready to commit to him. And so he hires Edward Cullen to steal her heart and then break it, all to test her loyalty. But what happens when Edward, himself, starts to fall in love with her? Will he tell her the truth and face the consequences or will he walk away forever?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
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Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 929
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2010 Updated: August 17, 2010


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! I'm drawn in. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
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Quiet Bella Swan ends up the newest member of The Volturi Bros Circus.  Friendships unfold as she begins to discover herself.  Edward Cullen has never had to keep his hands to himself, until now.  Will the charming trapeze artist be able to control his need?  OOC, AH, NC-17 Eventual Lemon ExB

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 119596
[Report This] Published: July 25, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2011


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Little Ray of Sunshine

Aww that was cute!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you liked it.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: October 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Timing

James is just the perfect douchebag. How sweet is Edward even though we all know he's after Bella's muffin :)



Author's Response:

Yes, he does have a sweet side that you'll be seeing a bit more of soon.  I love messing with James so much.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: November 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Under The Spotlight

The whole Bella and Winston interaction had me LMAO :) I love that Edward is still clueless to Winston lol I can't wait for him to realize it's a camel. It's going to be one of those light bulb moments when Bella lets him in on something so obvious. Tanya is a scheming little bitch. I don't like her lol. But every good love story needs a villian :)



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear that i wasn't the only one LMAO at the Winston moment!  thanks for letting me know. There is a teaser on the Forums.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: January 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Dinner For Two

Love the date and the hanky panky going on lol Loved Rose and her comment to Tanya.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I love a protective Mama Bear Rose.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue - Six months later

Aww, I'm sad the story is over. Tell Winston I said thanks for the kiss and I owe him a root beer. I hope just because this story is over that we still keep in touch on Twitter. I want to thank you for all your kind words through the past week :) I'll miss this story more than you'll know.



Author's Response:

He'd love a root beer from you. Thanks. It make me so happy knowing people are as sad about it ending as me. Of course, we'll keep in touch on twitter. You can count on it.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Costume Capers

I feel so special with a shout out. Thank you! LMAO at the whole naked Edward/Bella interaction. Too funny. I'm waiting for the rumble in the jungle between Edward and James. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Your welcome!  I just have to make sure James can't get his hands on his whip so it's an even fight! haha.  Thanks for your support.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Closer

Edward is a bonehead (get it?). He cockblocked himself...dumbass lol. Loving Bella's sexual awakening...is that wrong? And her and Winstion crack me up every time :)



Author's Response:

He is a bonehead and i'm glad Winston is still amusing you. Thanks for the review Sweetie. There's a teaser on the forums.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Something's Got To Give

Bella turned into a little sex-fiend vixen lol. I'm dying for when they actually do the deed. I've never wanted to punch a "pregnant" woman in the face but I'll make an exception for Tanya :)



Author's Response:

I'm with you on wanting to punch her that's for sure and she really is pregnant! :-0

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: March 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Magic Fingers

*raises hand* PICK ME!!! OH PLEASE PICK ME!!!! Edward confessed his love :) That was adorable. Talk about getting a little hot and bothered.

I don't think I ever told you this but every time I read your story, my mind automatically goes to Water For Elephants :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Take A Bow

You are so cruel! Someone needs to take Tanya out. I volunteer my services! Pregnant or not, I've never wanted to hurt someone so bad!

After seeing WFE, I picture this circus just like the one in the movie. Then again, I did that when I finished the book before the movie even came out lol.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: August 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Circus Comes To Town

Can't wait to see where this is heading :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review.  Chapter 2 is with my beta so I hope it won't be that long away.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: 2. A Sight To Be Seen

I love creeper Bella lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, she makes me laugh too.  Thanks for coming back for more!

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: An Unexpected Friend

Can't wait for the official meeting :)



Author's Response:

Me too!  He's one sexy beast ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: I Want To Be An Ice Cream

I second your Twilight movie moment. He was drop dead (ha ha) sexy :) Can't wait for more! I'll play any game Edward wants to play. We can play Hide the Weiner :)



Author's Response:

haha...yeah and i want to be that ice cream!  Next chapter is with my beta so it shouldn't be far away.  Thanks.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Let Me Show You

Love the Bella and Edward chemistry! Keep it coming! Recovery or no recovery, Renee better not ruin Bella's parade. Happy Birthday, honey!



Author's Response:

Thank you as always! I have posted a little teaser on the Twilighted Forums for chap 9.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: December 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Flying High

Loved it! Thank God Bella isn't with James. I would have to cut a bitch lol He is slime :)

Merry Christmas to you too! I'll miss the update though :(

 




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