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Real name: Jamie
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I'm a twenty-something just trying to find my place in the world.


I love to get lost in a book or a story.


I'm a stickler for good grammar. Call me the grammar police.


If my name wasn't a dead giveaway, I love love love hockey. Chicago Blackhawks baby! Stanley Cup Champs 2010! :)


Music is a essential part of my everyday life. There isn't a day that goes by that some song is stuck in my head.


And did I forget to mention I may have a bit of a Twilight obsession? Maybe just a little...who am I kidding? It's a full-blown addiction.


I've been nominated for a Tomato Soup Award :)


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Encore by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 959]
Summary:

 

 

Edward pulls a Forrest Gump and runs at a most inappropriate time. When he and Bella reconnect five years later, can Bella forgive him enough to give him a chance or is it too late? Canon pairings, NC-17 for future lemons and mature subject matter.

Banner by Readergoof

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 248313
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2010


Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wasn't expecting that. I love all the drunkeness though. It makes me smile lol



Author's Response:

There's intermittent drunkeness in this story, smattered with video store talk, to kind of lighten the mood.

And if it makes you feel better, no one has ever figured out the secret, so you're in great company.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: March 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love Emmett. He's so sweet...and pervy lol



Author's Response:

You're going to LOVE the later chapters.  Emmett figures in this story a lot (hmm...can you tell I wrote it?  Full of angst, full of Emmett...) and his sweet and pervy just gets better.  :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: March 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Edward and Bella. I feel so bad for them. And like I said before, I adore Emmett. Nice to see he's the voice of reason even if he is a horny guy lol



Author's Response:

Emmett...sigh...he is a big part, the comic relief in this story, but I worry about him because he internalizes so much.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Slowly but surely progress is being made. I like that all wasn't forgiven as soon as Edward came back but I honestly didn't expect that to happen.



Author's Response:

I don't see HOW all would be forgiven as soon as he came back...that would just be completely wrong and illogical.  I think a part of her is always going to question his motives, his devotion.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like the flashbacks. It gives more insight to the characters and why they are the way they are. And Emma just breaks my heart :(



Author's Response:

There are a few heartbreaking flashbacks to come; however, there are some funny ones to come too...it's not all about the crying.  

Emma is a heartbreaker, that's for sure.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Jasper and Alice's proposal was too funny but yet so sweet.



Author's Response:

It seemed like the Jalice thing to do.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Nice tie-in to Branded and Road Maps with Adam Dick lol I'm so going to use "For the love of Peter Facinelli" in real life.



Author's Response:

"For the love of Peter Facinelli" just rolls off the tongue so nicely; it's like poetry.  ;)

Yay!  You saw the tie-in to the other stories!!  I wondered how many people would see it.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Totally game from these two getting their 5 year rocks off...as long as it's tasteful, I have no problem :) However, once the first time is over, then let the kink begin. The tough titties line...seriously I say that in everyday life lol. It's more like tough tittie said the kittie when the milk ran dry :)



Author's Response:

LOL!  you slay me, HC.  Round two is coming up and you'll have to let me know what you think.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm pissed at Alice for telling Adam the basics of the Bella and Edward tales. That's none of her business. Bitch! lol



Author's Response:

Alice was totally out of line on that, and had she not been so pissed off at that moment, I don't think she would have spilled the way that she did.  She needs to rein in her anger and impulsiveness.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'll wave the white flag at the Alice bashing but I reserve the right to take it back and like the bashing commence again. Love the Michael Phelps sperm comment! Hilarious! And the Emmett prank...priceless!



Author's Response:

Emmett is a precious one, isn't he?  LOL! 

Hopefully you won't have any further reason to want to bash Alice.  I am floored at the reaction people have had to her...guess I didn't make her plight very convincing.

There's more Emmett coming up in the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Leave it to Carlisle to bring some comic relief. I think the phone started the healing process for Esme. Nice touch!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it, HC.  :)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I think it's cute and sad in a way that Edward has the bunny. Poor guy! I'm glad Bella is going to watch the movies but I can only imagine what is going to happen to her already weakened emotional state afterwards.



Author's Response:

I hope that the bunny isn't the one to start another world war.  I think it's sweet that he kept it, but I think he should have told her about it...hiding it is just going to upset her further.

The home movies...yeah, they're going to be tough.  There is a high tissue warning.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

That had to be one of the most heartbreaking things I have ever read. My god! How can you write that? I totally don't mean that in a bad way, so please don't take it that way. Geez! As for Rose's confession, I think it's what Emmett needed to hear to bring him out of the darkness he was living through the past five years.



Author's Response:

I won't take it in a bad way, and you're not the first person to ask me that.  I guess I have a knack for writing sad stuff...although I wish I was better at writing the happy stuff.

Rose is a true gem, and really, I don't think Emmett would even be opening up about anything without her.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I love Emmett's students. Noah's poem was so funny and I can imagine a little boy singing that while he's doing his business lol. My guess at what Edward's present is going to be...a music composition about the tragedy and rekindling of his and Bella's relationship along with some sort of slideshow to accompany it. Wild guess though! Though he should just get her a pony lol



Author's Response:

Oh damn it!  Why didn't I think of getting her a pony?!  *giggle*

You're kind of warm.

I have so much fun writing Em's students.  I really should write them in more often.  :)  They're cute and sweet and you'll see them again in about ten chapters.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Go Team Bella! It's Your Birthday (well not really, at least not yet)! I'm so glad she slugged Adam. That asshat had it coming and not the good kind ;)



Author's Response:

LOL!  I had a feeling people would be happy about the slap. :)  He did deserve it.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I wish I was invited to that party. Drunken karokee is the funniest thing ever...especially when you're sober lol. Leave it to Emmett to bust out the Esme surprise. How sweet is he! I love Bella just calling Adam dick. That was funny as hell.



Author's Response:

Yes, drunken karaoke is a funny thing...unless you're the drunk fool up there singing.  ;)

Emmett just gets sweeter by the minute.  He's such a good guy.

I'm glad you enjoyed the party, though.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: May 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

And the party don't stop till 6 in the mornin' (my bad attempt at being ghetto fabulous lol). This chapter was so heartfelt. Aww. Oh and "I didn't have the heart to tell him, but I've smelled sweeter-smelling shit from Emmett's ass" One of the funniest lines I have ever read! I swear I was laughing so hard I was crying. Oh sweet Esme, how you are corrupted by the youth lol



Author's Response:

I think Esme likes to play with their heads...I know that every now and then my own mother will pop out with something like that and shock the shit right out of us.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Those childhood stories were hilarious. You have to write more of them.



Author's Response:

I'll try to work more of them into the story.  I wasn't sure if people would like them or not.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Poor Bella! Esme is a saint!



Author's Response:

Bella's just having a bad couple of days.  She'll be okay.  :)  Esme's pretty sweet, isn't she?

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That group session was heart-wrenching. You keep tugging at my heart strings.



Author's Response:

Sorry about that...I don't like upsetting people and it seems i do it a lot.  ;)

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Edward and Jasper's conversation shed some light on things. Thanks for the warning about the upcoming chapter!



Author's Response:

I try to keep my people happy...or loaded with tissues if needed.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Seriously, I was tearing up with the kids and Emmett. Poor Jaden broke my heart. You did warn us though.



Author's Response:

I DID warn you.  In big bold letters, too! 

Jaden really seems to be the breaking point for most people.  He's a cute kid.  I'd like to bring him back...I doubt it'll happen, but it would be nice. 

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Daniel Gale is the dork of my dreams. I want to be invite to their next Halloween party. And who the hell was that in Bella's room? How fitting that he is a vampire lol



Author's Response:

OMG, don't you just ADORE Daniel Gale?!  Love, love, love him!!!

As for the vamp...there's no one better to suck the life out of a party.  *groan*  I know, I know, bad pun.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Why can't things just run smoothly for these two? If anyone deserves happiness, they do. Edward better prove his ass and not run like a chicken shit like last time...bastard! Ok, I feel better :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you got it out of your system and are feeling better.

I swear this isn't gratuitous, this is all happening for a reason.

 
Reviewer: HockeyChick Signed
Date: June 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I'm so proud of Bella. She's been through so much and still comes bouncing back...well maybe not bouncing but you get the picture.



Author's Response:

She's doing what she can.  She's a tough cookie with a creamy middle.  ;)

 




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