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Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?

 

What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?

 

This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.

 

All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.

 

Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.

 

And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.

 

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.

 

I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!

 

Maria

twilight gypsy

 

  


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Brilliant Disguise

I love the very last two lines.  SHe is basically giving him the All Clear for more dangerous sexing.... I must admit, I am 100% behind her decision ;o)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for dutifully reviewing each chapter! What about the story did you initially like? Why did you start to read in the first place? What are your fav lines from each chapter? (I am very needy. You need to know this going in.If you start to play this game with me I will drive you crazy with questions!)

Seriously, thanks.

Maria

Oh, and about the dangerous sex? She has no idea. None at all.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Fantasy

I love that she was awake and watching him!!!!  SOOooo good!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Misery

My favorite line was the whole Jeopardy thing.  It was hysterical!

I wish he would simply elope with her.  They are SO close.  And come on, after what has already transpired between them, neither one should be too surprised.  I think he did an excellent job ;o)



Author's Response:

Funny you should say that...

I thought the Jeopardy lines were hysterical as well.

Thank you for following the story. Are you an author? I would gladly read and reveiw for you!

Maria

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Danger Zone

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for continuing to read and review!

Maria

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: When You're Alone

You know, I actually think that Bella is being quite selfish and insensitive here.  She asked for it.  She knows what he is and how difficukt this is for hi and she is purposely pushing him.  Why can't she wait a few more days?  I am eager for more..



Author's Response:

Well of course she is! She is a mere eighteen years old. She knows she is being unreasonable too. She even says so. But, she is not going to let him think it is okay to bite her. Now, you and I know she is being a bit of a bitch, but she always lets Edward off the hook, this time she is making him take responsibility.

I didn't want a weak and whiny Bella, but one that has flaws just like Edward.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! And of course she waits for Edward. This is Twilight! Can't be Twilight without a happy ending, right? :)

Maria

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Bring on the Wonder

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for cont. to read and review~

maria

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Inevitable

Nice!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Maria

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella alone in the woods after telling her he didn’t want her any more. As she is lying on the cold forest floor; Bella remembers three important things. Edward made a promise not to leave her, and Edward never broke a promise, and third it was her body, her heart, what right did he have to decide what was good for her? All in all Bella realizes that Edward was covering up his true feeling about her. Bella goes to bring Edward home.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 57466
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2009 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Needs and Votes

So sweet!



Author's Response:

So happy to see you enjoyed it. I hope you enjoy the Epilogue just as much,

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Trapped

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much it means a lot to me.

I hope you enjoy the next chapter as well.

Thank you for reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Penance

I enjoyed Jasper's POV.  Has Alice had a vision of what Edward has been up to?  He's been wasting away in sorrow.  Shouldn't they try to find him?  Why hasn't Edward asked Alice to look for Bella since she has left?  I am eager for more!



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear you enjoyed this chapter. I can promise you that everythnig will work out in the end.

Thanks again for reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dark Abyss

THis is a great start!  I am really excited to read more!



Author's Response:

Happy to hear that you think so. THanks for taking the time to read and review.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Sky Won't Fall Forever

I hope they call Edward and tell them that Bella sought them out.  He needs to come home to face her.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I hope you continue to enjoy reading this story of mine thanks again for leaving a review. It means a lot to me.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Mirrored Self

This was my favorite chapter yet!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear it! This chapter was one of my favorites to write.

Thanks again for reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Seek and You Shall Find

I love that they are psychically linked like that!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. I was trying to go for somethnig different.

As always thanks for reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Choosing to Exist

I have really gotten caught up in this story.  I love it!



Author's Response:

So glad to hear it. I hope you continue to love it.

Thanks again for reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Love the Medicine for the Soul

I am so happy that he has made peace with changing her. They can never be apart again.  Excellent!!!



Author's Response:

I was over joyed that you thought this chapter was excellent so many other readers had different views of it. They did like the fact that Carlisle wouldn't change Bella. I'm glad you had no problem with it and understood.

Thanks for the Review.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Even Ground

This was a beautiful chapter!



Author's Response:

Happy to hear that you thought so.

As always thanks for taking the time to leave a review.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Living & Forgiveness

Hopefully Edward realizes how he needs to savor every moment with Bella.  I am eager for more!

 



Author's Response:

I can promise you that Edward will indeed learn to savor every waking and non waking moment with Bella I'm so glad to hear that.

Thanks fro taking the time to read and review.  Feel free to stop by my Lunar Eclipe thread to say and get chapter teasers.

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=6752&p=1007216&sid=eb88a6b6b932d0c5b83009a980407742#p1007216

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10:Changing Course

Great chapter,  These two can never catch a break!



Author's Response:

So happy to hear that oyu thought so. Nope, it doesn't seem like they can catch a break. I can only promise you that the ending of this story with have a happy ending.

Thanks so much for picking Lunar Eclipse to read and review.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Absolution Now

This was a great chapter.  THere was some nice interaction between Jasper and Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you. I knew that I wanted Jasper and Edward to have some one on one time together in a good way this time. It took me a little while to figure out the right way to have Jasper and Bella talk. The scene with Jasper and Bella has given me many mixed feelings from my readers so thank you for being one of the kind ones.

Thanks for the review as well.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Home

Great update.  They are making progress.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words and review.

Yes, they are making progess. I felt it was time. Considering what they are about to face together.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 

 
That Girl by u2shay Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1078]
Summary:

That Girl

 

Summary: Bella told Edward in Eclipse that she wasn't that girl...but what if she was? 

It has been four and a half months since Edward Cullen left Bella Swan.  Abandoned by friends and family, she has been left to pick up the pieces of her life alone.  Desperate and with no other options, she seeks out the one man she believes can help her: Carlisle Cullen.

Set in New Moon and beyond.  Characters may be a little OOC.  Rated M/R for Language, Adult Concepts, and Lemons.  Romance with some Angst & Humor. Canon Pairings.  Edward/Bella 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 158902
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2009 Updated: August 01, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--The Best Gifts

Was it real?  IS Bella pregnant???



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

::wink:: I think you may be on to something there! :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3--All I Want For...

Hmmmmm. I can't wait to know what is real...



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

:) LOL...it's real and a dream...the best of both worlds, I guess!

 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2--The Best Laid Plans of Vamps and Men

This is already intense.  I am very much enjoying it!



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

:) Thank you for your review!  I am so happy that you are enjoying the story so far!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--Paging Dr. Carlisle

I am so intrigued!



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21Bella,

:) Thank you for reading and reviewing!  I'm looking forward to hearing what you think of the story!

 

 




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