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Summary:

Edward leaves Bella alone in the woods after telling her he didn’t want her any more. As she is lying on the cold forest floor; Bella remembers three important things. Edward made a promise not to leave her, and Edward never broke a promise, and third it was her body, her heart, what right did he have to decide what was good for her? All in all Bella realizes that Edward was covering up his true feeling about her. Bella goes to bring Edward home.

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 57466
[Report This] Published: October 05, 2009 Updated: September 14, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Penance

I enjoyed Jasper's POV.  Has Alice had a vision of what Edward has been up to?  He's been wasting away in sorrow.  Shouldn't they try to find him?  Why hasn't Edward asked Alice to look for Bella since she has left?  I am eager for more!



Author's Response:

I'm happy to hear you enjoyed this chapter. I can promise you that everythnig will work out in the end.

Thanks again for reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dark Abyss

THis is a great start!  I am really excited to read more!



Author's Response:

Happy to hear that you think so. THanks for taking the time to read and review.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Sky Won't Fall Forever

I hope they call Edward and tell them that Bella sought them out.  He needs to come home to face her.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I hope you continue to enjoy reading this story of mine thanks again for leaving a review. It means a lot to me.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Mirrored Self

This was my favorite chapter yet!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear it! This chapter was one of my favorites to write.

Thanks again for reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Seek and You Shall Find

I love that they are psychically linked like that!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it. I was trying to go for somethnig different.

As always thanks for reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Choosing to Exist

I have really gotten caught up in this story.  I love it!



Author's Response:

So glad to hear it. I hope you continue to love it.

Thanks again for reviewing.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Love the Medicine for the Soul

I am so happy that he has made peace with changing her. They can never be apart again.  Excellent!!!



Author's Response:

I was over joyed that you thought this chapter was excellent so many other readers had different views of it. They did like the fact that Carlisle wouldn't change Bella. I'm glad you had no problem with it and understood.

Thanks for the Review.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Even Ground

This was a beautiful chapter!



Author's Response:

Happy to hear that you thought so.

As always thanks for taking the time to leave a review.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Living & Forgiveness

Hopefully Edward realizes how he needs to savor every moment with Bella.  I am eager for more!

 



Author's Response:

I can promise you that Edward will indeed learn to savor every waking and non waking moment with Bella I'm so glad to hear that.

Thanks fro taking the time to read and review.  Feel free to stop by my Lunar Eclipe thread to say and get chapter teasers.

http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=6752&p=1007216&sid=eb88a6b6b932d0c5b83009a980407742#p1007216

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10:Changing Course

Great chapter,  These two can never catch a break!



Author's Response:

So happy to hear that oyu thought so. Nope, it doesn't seem like they can catch a break. I can only promise you that the ending of this story with have a happy ending.

Thanks so much for picking Lunar Eclipse to read and review.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Absolution Now

This was a great chapter.  THere was some nice interaction between Jasper and Bella.



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you. I knew that I wanted Jasper and Edward to have some one on one time together in a good way this time. It took me a little while to figure out the right way to have Jasper and Bella talk. The scene with Jasper and Bella has given me many mixed feelings from my readers so thank you for being one of the kind ones.

Thanks for the review as well.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Home

Great update.  They are making progress.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words and review.

Yes, they are making progess. I felt it was time. Considering what they are about to face together.

TaintedDarkInuShemeeko

 

 
That Girl by u2shay Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1078]
Summary:

That Girl

 

Summary: Bella told Edward in Eclipse that she wasn't that girl...but what if she was? 

It has been four and a half months since Edward Cullen left Bella Swan.  Abandoned by friends and family, she has been left to pick up the pieces of her life alone.  Desperate and with no other options, she seeks out the one man she believes can help her: Carlisle Cullen.

Set in New Moon and beyond.  Characters may be a little OOC.  Rated M/R for Language, Adult Concepts, and Lemons.  Romance with some Angst & Humor. Canon Pairings.  Edward/Bella 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 158902
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2009 Updated: August 01, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4--The Best Gifts

Was it real?  IS Bella pregnant???



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

::wink:: I think you may be on to something there! :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3--All I Want For...

Hmmmmm. I can't wait to know what is real...



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

:) LOL...it's real and a dream...the best of both worlds, I guess!

 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2--The Best Laid Plans of Vamps and Men

This is already intense.  I am very much enjoying it!



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

:) Thank you for your review!  I am so happy that you are enjoying the story so far!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1--Paging Dr. Carlisle

I am so intrigued!



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21Bella,

:) Thank you for reading and reviewing!  I'm looking forward to hearing what you think of the story!

 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5--Is There a Doctor In the House

I love that Bella is being so practical and accepting of everyting.  She is taking it all in stride!



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

:) yes, Bella's pregnancy has grown her up a bit!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6--On the Rack

I am so eager for Edward to come home and find out that Bella is pregnant.



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

:) Thank you for all of your reviews!  I appreciate each and every one!

Edward comes home in chapter 12, I believe--then he and Bella have MUCH to discuss! LOL!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7--Interminable

I love it.  Edward is having some realiations, it seems...



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

Yes, Edward definitely has some issues to work out!  It's a good thing that he has his family to help him.  I think Bella might be willing to chip in a bit too! :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8--A Dog By Any Other Name

Good ole Jake!



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

:) Jake...well, he has a small, but pivotal role.  He's always longing to be the white knight, maybe I can work up a FF where he gets his secret wish! LOL!

 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9--Adrift

He needs to hurry his ass home.  I can;t wait to read it!



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

LOL!!!  Edward's hurrying as fast as he possibly can! :D  Thanks for the laugh!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10--Home

Two more chapters.... I can''t make it ;o)



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

LOL! You'll make it!  No worries!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11--Tracking

I do love Jake...



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

Sigh, what can I say about Jake...he's not my favorite--especially when he's crushing on Bella, but he does have a good heart--he just doesn't know how to take no for an answer! LOL!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12--I'm Back

Woah.  This was intense!



Author's Response:

Dulcinea21bella,

:) Yeah, I know...that was a terrible cliffhanger, but I really did need to leave it there!

Thanks for your reviews!

 
Unscripted by Max_and_Marley Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 449]
Summary:

Thanks to MsTwiSwe for the banner!

 

This is the tale of Robsten...from the beginning. 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 66553
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2009 Updated: February 26, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: London Calling

I am intrigued!



Author's Response:

Great! Thanks!

 




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