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Captured by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 324]
Summary:

What if Victoria had gotten a hold of Bella in New Moon? What was she planning to do to her? What if what happens to Bella changes her life and the Cullens' lives forever?

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 49091
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: 3: Hell Has Frozen Over

Poor Bella.  Is she a vamp?  She couldn't have survived human, right?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: 2: An Eye for an Eye

Holy shit.  He raped her?  I did NOT see that coming.  I am a little sick now...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: 1: A Not So Happy Birthday

I am SO intrigued!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: 11: Questions Not Answered

Wow.  Great chapter!

 
Summary:

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Edward and Bella were best friends for years before falling in love. A mistake Edward made could result in losing Bella forever. Is their love strong enough to keep them together? Human AU. I Belong To You in EPOV


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 764
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: October 30, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Preface

So, he married the other girl?  Really?  Oh God.  I am going to read the other story about this..... am I going to vomit?  Just tell me now....

 
Summary:

It's been fifty-three years since Edward left Bella in the woods. Since then, the Cullens have added two new members to their coven, and have moved back to Forks. Feeling compromised, the Volturi travel to Forks to dispose of the Cullens. As war is about to commence, the newest Volturi member suffers an onslaught of memories of her human past. The Cullens' saving grace may also mean the end of Edward. Or will Bella Volturi have a change of undead heart. 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 33135
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Saved by (the) Bell

Wow. I am SO already involved in this story!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The (e)X-Files

Wow.  How is Edward being so passive about all of this?  Isn't he freaking out that the love of his life is there?  Or did he actually move on??? I am dying here.... So good.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Three's Company

I am not upset with Bella at all but I am pissed beyond belief at Edward.  He WANTED to leave her??? WTF???  What is he thinking?  I don't get it at all.  How can he not want to explain everything to her, to make her understand?



Author's Response:

haha he will get a chance to explain everything eventually, once he can actually get Bella to give him a chance ;)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Diff'rnt Strokes

Great update.  I liked the changes.  I am looking forward to reading more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: My So-Called Life

Is Edward still a virgin? Poor boy, he didn't want to hear those thoughts about Bella...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Once and Again

This was heartbreaking!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Alice, I Think

I love that Alice showed up.  Hopefully Bella will realize that she is wanted with the Cullens and that she could have the life she has always secretly yearned for.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Bella is a stubborn one, not accustomed to having a heart to follow. She definately won't realize anything on her own...but luckily Alec really only wants Bella to be happy and can see how all of these recent events have affected her, even if she can't.

Thanks for your comments!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: A Different World (il_suo_cantante)

She has to be able to forgive him.  She already knows that she needs to be around him.  She at least needs to make an attempt.  Maybe they should just try to spend some time alone together and see where it goes.  They both needs eachother so much.  I love this!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: LOST

This was great.  I am so excited for Bella to get back to the Cullens.  I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to seeing her coming for him.



Author's Response:

I just submitted the next chapter, which has all of the above! I hope you enjoy it and it lives up to your excitement! Sorry it took so long! Thanks for the comments!

 
Summary:

Bella is a 24/7 consensual slave, but some days are harder than others. When her big mouth gets her in trouble, Edward isn't inclined to go easy on her and he teaches her a lesson that she won't soon forget.

This is a oneshot set prior to the events in All of Me and will not make sense if you have not read at least a few chapters of that story.

In the Dog House

This story contains strong BDSM themes, graphic language and graphic sexual depictions. It is meant for a mature audience (18 and older). Some of the content may be offensive to some readers. Please read with caution.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5053
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2009 Updated: November 03, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: In the Dog House

Brilliantly done.  Very creative on Edward's part.  It was draining for the both of them!  I loved it!

 
Summary:

“You’re just going to love him!” Rosalie had told me about her new boyfriend.
“I sure hope not. He’s your man, remember?” I replied.

One of Bella's biggest worries in life is never finding true love. However, when love comes knocking on Bella's door, the mystery man is none other than her best friend's boyfriend. Things are about to get tricky.

AU-Human


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 10150
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: February 21, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Perceptive Friends and Breaking Trends

Great chapter.  I have to admit, however, that I don't think Bella OR Edward is thinking of Rose at all.  If Bella truly considered Rose to ba a dear friend, she would NOT put herself in a position in which she would pine over Edward.  She would avoid seeing him at all costs.  A threesome at a nice fancy restaurant?  Come on.  Why would Rose want to share her man somewhere like that?  Why would Bella want to see what a third wheel she is and watch them be together?  And if Edward truly cared for Bella, then why wouldn't he break up with Rose?  If they are new into their relationship, it would be easy to start dating Bella soon after.  Why would he want to pursue a relationship with Rose and get deeper into it with her when she isn't who he wants?  Rose cares for Edward and she loves Bella.  They are both being coldhearted and insensitive towards her.  Anyway, that is my opinion.  I am eager to read how it all plays out.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. I understand everything you've said, but I guess the only answer I can give is all will tell in time. Trust me, I do know how wrong it is for Bella to be doing this, but this is just a story I'm here to tell. Everything will work out, I promise.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Looks That Kill and Coffee Spills

Great start.  I am eager to read how this story develops.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Coffee Dances and Weird Romances

I am definitely intrigued.  He should break up with Rose if he already feels a connection with Bella.  Will they keep their relationship a secret to protect Rose's feelings?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Broken Boundaries

I liked Edward's POV.  Great chapter.  I would like to see Edward break up with Rose because he has these intense feelings for Bella.  He pursues Bella.  She tries to resist because Rose is so broken hearted over losing Edward.  They can't stay away.  They try to hide it from Rose.  She finds out and Bella almost loses her best friend.  ;o)  I am looking forward to reading this, no matter how it plays out!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: My Girlfriend and Her Best Friend

You know when all you can think about it that person.  You fantasize about them constantly- in all manners.  You think about making love to them, but also, simply holding their hand, or brushing their hair out of their eyes.  You simply want to be near them, touching them, seeing them laugh or smile.  You miss them constantly when you are apart.  Does that help?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Humiliation and Awkward Situations

I remember this story!  I am glad you are back! I want to know how this all goes down!  Great chapter!

 
Summary:

 

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It's been 25 years after Edward left Bella. Now that the Cullens have reunited with Bella they are suprised to find that she is not running back into their open arms. Instead Bella tells them her story of how her life took a tragic turn after they left.

"Bella, can we just go back to the way things were?" Alice pleaded.

I wouldn't lie to her.  "No."


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 35122
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 31, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: My Alice

I don't know why you are nervous, you are portraying a very detailed and intense storyline.  I am truly enjoying it and eager to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: New Acquaintances

I really liked this chapter.  I feel like we are really delving into the story now.  Basil was ery protective of Bella.  I am eager to understand this pull they have.  Great update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I hope you like the next update.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Vistor

I am definitely intrigued!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Grace

I really am enjoying this story.  I don't blame Bella for wanting to keep her distance.  They all left her and she has been forced to live on without them.  She needs to maintain her life, which doesn't include the Cullens. 

 




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