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Summary:

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This story takes place ten years after Bella Swan graduates from Forks High School. She was able to move on from her heart-wrenching break-up with Edward Cullen when he left for Dartmouth. She has been living her life trying to forget him – her one true love – ever since.

Then that fateful night at the ten year reunion, she runs into Edward Cullen and her life is turned upside down.


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Renesmee, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 78210
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2009 Updated: August 27, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Caught

How can Bella not be freaking out over seeing Jake with flowers, caught in a lie?  She should ask him when he gets home "how was work?"  "Did you eat there"  "anything happen?"  Then pounce of him, catching him in the lies...

And if Edward truly wants to protect her, he wouldn't lie to her either, that just puts him on the same level as Jake.  He needs to simply support her in her choices. 

I am eager to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trip

Poor Bella.  She is so clueless.  Too trusting.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: The Rush

I hope Edward comes clean about.  Otherwise she won't be able to trust him.  He will be keeping huge secrets from her.  She needs to know.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: The Tree

I am just so disappointed in Bella's reactions to everything.  She is so weak!  She doesn't stand up for herself and she lets everybody take advantage of her. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Cabin

Finally!  I really hope that wasn't a dream.  THey both admitted their feelings and did something they wanted.  This was a beautiful chapter!

 
Summary:

Edward is a teenage boy who finds his life instantly changed when his family moves to Forks, WA.  He is intensely drawn to the mysterious girl in his biology class whose mind he discovers he can read.  It doesn’t take long for him to find the truth behind her dark and painful secret but it is already too late “ his life is forever altered by his intense physical and emotional connection to the beautiful girl.   

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 120460
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I  am intrigued!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you are intrigued by the story so far.  I love getting new readers!  I hope you continue to enjoy the story! :)

 
Summary:

When normal girl, Courtney Crawley meets famous actor, Robert Pattinson in Disneyland, she's immediately taken with him. He's convinced they can work things out, but she's not so sure. How can they be a real couple when they're living a world apart?

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Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: No Word count: 237773
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Valentine's Day

It is sweet of him to show up at her door.  How could he not spend the night in her bed cuddling though?  They have such little time together.  I am eager to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Home

I loved the flowers and I loved his coded name on her phone!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Girls do Disneyland

She is divorced?  I didn't see that one coming.  She is so young!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ice Skates and Olyphantastic

I am much happier with him spending the night with her.  THey have such limited time together and they need to take advantage of the time they have.  Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: You Can't Have All of It

They are really becoming intellectually intimate.  It is a solid basis.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Brady

I have to admit that I kind of like Brady right now.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Good Use For a Scarf

I still dont understand why he is going to a hotel.  THey aren't teenagers.  They have such limited time together.  They arent having sex, I get that, but why wouldn't they cuddle all night.  In all of their phone calls how do they not discuss that?  Plus. wouldnt ther be a higher risk of somebody recognizing him at a hotel??

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Carly & Brady

Brady is a smooth talker.  Hmmmm, I wonder about his intentions!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Long Talk

THey had a very productive talk!  Good for them.  They are playing this smart.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: A Steamy Shower

THey are getting closer and closer!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Giving Flowers & Baking Cookies

It is nce to have that conversation done.  How are more people not recognizing him?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: A Final Night Together

I am captivated by them!!



Author's Response:

Me too! lol Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Something Worth Waiting For

This is SO exciting!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Glad you're still enjoying!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Churro Kisses & Denny's

She is endearing and I love how she is so caught up in him.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you like Courtney, some people have mixed feelings on her.  And yes, she is very caught up in him.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: California Adventures

I am really enjoying this!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it.  I'm sorry it's taking me so long to reply to your reviews, but I really do appreciate you taking the time to review as you read.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Disneyland & Famous Actors

As if anybody else could hod a candle to Rob.... Bye Bye, Brady!



Author's Response:

I have to agree, no one holds a candle to Rob IMO, but she's trying to be careful and not get caught up in all the magic.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A New Year

I'm intrigued!



Author's Response:

I'm glad I caught your interest!  I hope you enjoy!

 
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?

 

What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?

 

This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.

 

All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.

 

Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.

 

And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.

 

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.

 

I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!

 

Maria

twilight gypsy

 

  


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Hard Day's Night

Great chapter.  I am excited to read how this story develops!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and for your great reviews!

What were your favorite lines from each chapter?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Human Touch

Wow. I am a little bit freaking out... SO glad there are more chapters up!

 




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