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Summary:

When normal girl, Courtney Crawley meets famous actor, Robert Pattinson in Disneyland, she's immediately taken with him. He's convinced they can work things out, but she's not so sure. How can they be a real couple when they're living a world apart?

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Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: No Word count: 237773
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ice Skates and Olyphantastic

I am much happier with him spending the night with her.  THey have such limited time together and they need to take advantage of the time they have.  Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: You Can't Have All of It

They are really becoming intellectually intimate.  It is a solid basis.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Brady

I have to admit that I kind of like Brady right now.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Good Use For a Scarf

I still dont understand why he is going to a hotel.  THey aren't teenagers.  They have such limited time together.  They arent having sex, I get that, but why wouldn't they cuddle all night.  In all of their phone calls how do they not discuss that?  Plus. wouldnt ther be a higher risk of somebody recognizing him at a hotel??

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Carly & Brady

Brady is a smooth talker.  Hmmmm, I wonder about his intentions!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Long Talk

THey had a very productive talk!  Good for them.  They are playing this smart.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: A Steamy Shower

THey are getting closer and closer!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Giving Flowers & Baking Cookies

It is nce to have that conversation done.  How are more people not recognizing him?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: A Final Night Together

I am captivated by them!!



Author's Response:

Me too! lol Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Something Worth Waiting For

This is SO exciting!!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Glad you're still enjoying!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Churro Kisses & Denny's

She is endearing and I love how she is so caught up in him.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you like Courtney, some people have mixed feelings on her.  And yes, she is very caught up in him.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: California Adventures

I am really enjoying this!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it.  I'm sorry it's taking me so long to reply to your reviews, but I really do appreciate you taking the time to review as you read.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Disneyland & Famous Actors

As if anybody else could hod a candle to Rob.... Bye Bye, Brady!



Author's Response:

I have to agree, no one holds a candle to Rob IMO, but she's trying to be careful and not get caught up in all the magic.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A New Year

I'm intrigued!



Author's Response:

I'm glad I caught your interest!  I hope you enjoy!

 
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?

 

What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?

 

This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.

 

All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.

 

Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.

 

And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.

 

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.

 

I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!

 

Maria

twilight gypsy

 

  


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Hard Day's Night

Great chapter.  I am excited to read how this story develops!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and for your great reviews!

What were your favorite lines from each chapter?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Human Touch

Wow. I am a little bit freaking out... SO glad there are more chapters up!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: With a Little Help From My Friends

Wow.  This is intense and erotic.  I love it. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Help!

Wow.  I can't even find the words.  I feel hypnotized and completely captivated.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Run For Your Life

This was sweet.  I love that Bella is the one wanting to wait until they are married.  ;o)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Tell Me Why

Great chapter.  Poor Edward.  He is so guiltridden.  They need to work together to get past this.  The problem is, once they have had sex, how do they really go back to the way they were?  How can they resist those hot, wet kisses and opt for chaste pecks?



Author's Response:

Edward recovers. And there's no problem with the sex! Haha. Scary Edward comes back, maybe next chapter! And those hot wet kisses make a comeback as well...

Thanks for reading and for your great review!

 

Maria

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Brilliant Disguise

I love the very last two lines.  SHe is basically giving him the All Clear for more dangerous sexing.... I must admit, I am 100% behind her decision ;o)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for dutifully reviewing each chapter! What about the story did you initially like? Why did you start to read in the first place? What are your fav lines from each chapter? (I am very needy. You need to know this going in.If you start to play this game with me I will drive you crazy with questions!)

Seriously, thanks.

Maria

Oh, and about the dangerous sex? She has no idea. None at all.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Fantasy

I love that she was awake and watching him!!!!  SOOooo good!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Misery

My favorite line was the whole Jeopardy thing.  It was hysterical!

I wish he would simply elope with her.  They are SO close.  And come on, after what has already transpired between them, neither one should be too surprised.  I think he did an excellent job ;o)



Author's Response:

Funny you should say that...

I thought the Jeopardy lines were hysterical as well.

Thank you for following the story. Are you an author? I would gladly read and reveiw for you!

Maria

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Danger Zone

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for continuing to read and review!

Maria

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: When You're Alone

You know, I actually think that Bella is being quite selfish and insensitive here.  She asked for it.  She knows what he is and how difficukt this is for hi and she is purposely pushing him.  Why can't she wait a few more days?  I am eager for more..



Author's Response:

Well of course she is! She is a mere eighteen years old. She knows she is being unreasonable too. She even says so. But, she is not going to let him think it is okay to bite her. Now, you and I know she is being a bit of a bitch, but she always lets Edward off the hook, this time she is making him take responsibility.

I didn't want a weak and whiny Bella, but one that has flaws just like Edward.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! And of course she waits for Edward. This is Twilight! Can't be Twilight without a happy ending, right? :)

Maria

 




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