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Reviews by Dulcinea21bella
 
Summary:

Bella does not jump off the cliff. As may have been inevitable, Edward comes back to Forks on his own accord. What will he find when he gets there?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 12050
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: January 08, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Brilliant chapter.  I love this story!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love it. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

This was amazing.  I feel so captivated.  There is such an intensity between them.  It is magical!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was tender and hearttfelt.  It was wonderful!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This was SO incredibly beautiful.  I loved this story so very much.   Your characters are so compelling and so real.  The dialogue was heartfelt and sincere.  I do hope you continue to write Edward and Bella stories.  You get them so well!!!

 
Captured by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 324]
Summary:

What if Victoria had gotten a hold of Bella in New Moon? What was she planning to do to her? What if what happens to Bella changes her life and the Cullens' lives forever?

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Carmen, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 49091
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: 10: Can't Handle the Truth

I love that Tanya is so protective of Bella.  I am eager to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: 9: Sent Over the Edge

Poor Bella.  What a horrible way to find out about her transformation.  Now she knows that everybody else knew and they weren't telling her!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: 8: An All Around Tease

Edward needs to be careful with her.  She is bound to have repurcussions from being raped.  That was grossly traumatic for her.  Her virginity was savaged stolen from her.  She must have carried those aftershocks with her. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: 7: Emotional Break Downs

Edward really needs to be making an effort to spend time with Bella. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: 6: I Don't Want You

Poor Edward.  He was trying to protect her.  It couldnt have gone more awry.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: 5: Be Careful What You Say

Do none of the Cullens suspect a connection with a strange new newborn and Bella possibly being taken by vampires?  Why wouldn't they approach the Quiluetes about what they know about Bella?  THey both care about her.



Author's Response:

I thought about the Quileutes but I could see them jumping to conclusions and saying the Cullens took Bella. They've always seemed like a 'act now ask later' breed. no one wanted to believe that Bella was a newborn plus Alice couldn't see her as a vampire...couldn't see her at all so they didn't know. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: 4: A Time For Everything

I am glad that Tanya found her.  At least she isn't alone anymore.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: 3: Hell Has Frozen Over

Poor Bella.  Is she a vamp?  She couldn't have survived human, right?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: 2: An Eye for an Eye

Holy shit.  He raped her?  I did NOT see that coming.  I am a little sick now...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: 1: A Not So Happy Birthday

I am SO intrigued!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: 11: Questions Not Answered

Wow.  Great chapter!

 
Summary:

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Edward and Bella were best friends for years before falling in love. A mistake Edward made could result in losing Bella forever. Is their love strong enough to keep them together? Human AU. I Belong To You in EPOV


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Rosalie, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 764
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: October 30, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Preface

So, he married the other girl?  Really?  Oh God.  I am going to read the other story about this..... am I going to vomit?  Just tell me now....

 
Summary:

It's been fifty-three years since Edward left Bella in the woods. Since then, the Cullens have added two new members to their coven, and have moved back to Forks. Feeling compromised, the Volturi travel to Forks to dispose of the Cullens. As war is about to commence, the newest Volturi member suffers an onslaught of memories of her human past. The Cullens' saving grace may also mean the end of Edward. Or will Bella Volturi have a change of undead heart. 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 33135
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2009 Updated: December 14, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Saved by (the) Bell

Wow. I am SO already involved in this story!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The (e)X-Files

Wow.  How is Edward being so passive about all of this?  Isn't he freaking out that the love of his life is there?  Or did he actually move on??? I am dying here.... So good.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Three's Company

I am not upset with Bella at all but I am pissed beyond belief at Edward.  He WANTED to leave her??? WTF???  What is he thinking?  I don't get it at all.  How can he not want to explain everything to her, to make her understand?



Author's Response:

haha he will get a chance to explain everything eventually, once he can actually get Bella to give him a chance ;)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Diff'rnt Strokes

Great update.  I liked the changes.  I am looking forward to reading more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: My So-Called Life

Is Edward still a virgin? Poor boy, he didn't want to hear those thoughts about Bella...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Once and Again

This was heartbreaking!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Alice, I Think

I love that Alice showed up.  Hopefully Bella will realize that she is wanted with the Cullens and that she could have the life she has always secretly yearned for.  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Bella is a stubborn one, not accustomed to having a heart to follow. She definately won't realize anything on her own...but luckily Alec really only wants Bella to be happy and can see how all of these recent events have affected her, even if she can't.

Thanks for your comments!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: A Different World (il_suo_cantante)

She has to be able to forgive him.  She already knows that she needs to be around him.  She at least needs to make an attempt.  Maybe they should just try to spend some time alone together and see where it goes.  They both needs eachother so much.  I love this!

 




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