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Summary:

One and a half years. That’s how long it's been since Edward Cullen had banished himself and his family from Isabella Swan’s life, from Forks, from the one place they truly felt at home. 

A lot can change in that small amount of time, and it becomes painfully apparent to the Cullen’s when they come face to face with the girl they left behind, only she’s not the same girl anymore.

In an effort to protect herself from the pain of her past, she has become more confident, self assured and fierce. She’s a fighter now and their fate, along with many others, now rests in her hands.

Will she save them or punish them for past grievances?

AU set during New Moon

Let me set everyones mind at ease about the coupling in this story. It IS completely CANON. That means that no matter what I may make it look like between Bella and Marcus by the end of this fic Edward and Bella will be together again...well sort of. 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: The Eyes Series
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 83819
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2012


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Strange

I love this story.  I cannot wait for them to find eachother again.  There will be many questions and emotions to deal with for certain.  I can't wait!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I am intrigued!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Summons

I am SOOOO intrigued.  I can't wait!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Trouble

Wow.  WOnderful!!!  I can't wait to read more!!!!  Bella is SO bitter and SO angry.  I know she was abandoned, but she always thought that she wasn't good enough for Edward.  When he left her in the woods. she was devastated, but accepted it so completely.  Can she blame him for not loving her? 

I am eager to learn more about Bella's relationship with Marcus- there is a special bond there, over broken hearts, no doubt.  Also, I would like to learn more about Bella's relationships with Demetri and Felix... there was kissing???  No doubt now that Jasper and Tanya have seen Bella, Edward will know she is there shortly!  I can't wait for that!  I love this story!!!  Excellent update. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Preparations

Wow.  So good.  I can't wait.  I am concerned about what the Meal Sharing really implies... the next chapter is going to be intense.  Excellent update!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Reintroductions

Great update!  Poor Edward, he must be in such a state of shock!  She needs to listen to him.  The spark is still there, obviously!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Truths

Wow.  I feel so badly for Edward.  He has suffered so much.  They both have.  They need to share some time alone and really talk to eachother. Edward needs to tell her the truth of his feelings.  It is his only hope of ever being with her again... before it is too late!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Truths - Part 2

Great chapter.  I love that Bella felt that chemistry with Edward.  Won't Marcus sense that bond?  It must be buried deep within her, but it is still there, right? 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Shattered REWRITE

I LOVED this chapter!  I am so thrilled that you haven't abandoned this story.  I am eager to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Answers and First Meetings

Wow.  That was an interesting insight into Bella's abilities.  She does have some intriguing powers and she is right to question the validity of the feelings of those around her. 

I loved the dress and very much enjoyed their conversation about mating and remating.  The sharing of a meal was fascinating. 

Once Bella learns to let go of her anger, perhaps she will discover that she has already been mated....

Excellent update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Harsh Goodbyes

Okay, yes, your Marcus IS hot.  But Bella still belongs to Edward!!!  I love this story!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: May 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Undefeated

Great chapter.  I am eager for Edward to get his game on!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Broken Again

This was HEARTBREAKING!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Escape

Wow.  This was great.  I really feel so invested in these two.  I can't wait to read were they go from here!

 
Illusions by Crittab Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 47]
Summary:

New Moon AU. Bella finds something much more dangerous than a motorcycle hoping to hear Edward's voice.

 

Rated NC-17.  Warning: Contains sexual assault.  If you are sensitive to this subject, please do not read.

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 4957
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2009 Updated: September 11, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Epilogue

Nice job!

 
All of Me by flibbins Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3627]
Summary:

Bella lives to serve her Master. It can be tedious at times, titillating at others, but always, her world revolves around his. Come take a peek at the trials and triumphs in the life of a 24/7 consensual slave and find what happens when outside forces threaten to expose her lifestyle.

 

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Please note that this story contains graphic language, graphic sexual situations and is only intended for a mature audience. The BDSM relationship described herein is entirely consensual, but may be offensive to some readers. Read with caution. OOC, AU/AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: All of Me: The Series
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 109463
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow.  Brilliant update!  I am so intrigued with Jasper's role in their lives at this point.  Edward is clearly proud of Bella and is showing her off.... I can't believe I have to wait a week until the next update.  I can't believe that I will be seeing NM in only 2.5 days!!!!  SO EXCITED!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow.  THis was intense and passionate.  It gave me such an insight into their true reasons for living this lifestyle.  It actually takes a stronger couple to do this.  The level of devotion and trust and pure love for the other person must be so intense.  It was nice that they were able to step outisde of the lifestyle to simply focus on reconnecting with eachother, recommitt their love.  Excellent update!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, there is interest.  I am with you.  Fascinating start!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This story is SO captivating.  I am eager to find out more about the dynamics of their relationship and the feelings behind them.  Fascinating!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So very good.  I love that he takes care of her like that.  So he does truly love her?  It appears so.  You were right, this chapter answered a bunch of questions.  I can't wait to read more as this story progresses.  Excellent update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Yep, definitely interested in the one shot.  I love that Edward is so protective of her and sees that she is well taken care of.  It is very interesting how their relationship works for the both of them.  Clearly they meet eachother's needs, sexually, and they do communicate freely at times, but I wonder about his feelings for her.  Surely being her master 100% of the time must be exhausting for him.  He needs to always be attentive to her, more so than she is to him because she simply follows his orders.  He needs to be the creative one and keep her satisfied and engaged.  Doesn't he ever just want to go out to dinner and a movie with her?  Hold her hand and nuzzle her neck.  Is he hopelessly in love with Bella the girl or is in love with the idea of  the slave?  I want more of Edward's mindset.  I am addicted to this story!  Great update.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  You bring up a lot of really good points, most of which will be addressed as we go.  On the surface, it seems like everything is about Edward's needs, but in some ways this lifestyle is harder for Edward than it is for Bella and is more about her needs.


Thanks for reading and for sharing your thoughts.  I really appreciate it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow.  This story just keeps unfolding.  I am so caught up in it.  I like reading about how Bella and Edward handle the details of their relationship in the public eye.  I can't wait to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I love how protective Edward is of Bella.  She does attract attention everywhere she goes!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This was a higly erotic chapter.  I am even more interested in learning more about their relationship.  This story is like a guilty pleasure.  i just can't get enough!!!  I love it.  Excellent update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well, shit.  You really DID leave us hanging!!!  For some reason I did not get the alert for this chapter and I came across it my accident.  It was an excellent chapter.  It is interesting because it feels like Edward's a little disappointed that Bella wanted to jump right back into being his slave.  It feels like he does thie mainly for her, but that he wants some normalcy with the woman he loves.  He is sacrificing that in order to make sure that she is happy and that her needs are met.  It was very fascinating.  I DO hope they talk about it.  I want both of them to get what they need from the relationship.  I love this story!!

 




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