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Summary:

IBTY BAnner

 

This story takes place ten years after Bella Swan graduates from Forks High School. She was able to move on from her heart-wrenching break-up with Edward Cullen when he left for Dartmouth. She has been living her life trying to forget him – her one true love – ever since.

Then that fateful night at the ten year reunion, she runs into Edward Cullen and her life is turned upside down.


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Mike, Renesmee, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 78210
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: The Bleachers

Okay,  I feel better now.  We are over the worst of it, right?  Phew..... 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Mirror

I love this!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Coffee

True,  I had forgotten about Jake.  Did anybody call him?  How could Edward have not inquired about Bella for the past ten years?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The Bracelet

Really, Jake is an arrogant ass.  Bella desrves better.  Unquestionably.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The Hurdle

What is Edward waiting for?  He needs to put it out there,  They have soooo many things to talk about...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Chair

Yeah, Jake needs to be taken down a notch, publically.  He is making a fool out of Bella.  And Nessie is nothing but a common whore.  Who goes after a married man like that???



Author's Response:

Well, I see you are reading through this pretty quickly. I did want to let you know that on FF.net I have a few of the backstories for this one posted under the title It Happened Over the Past Ten Years. There are also more chapters to this story if you want to get ahead. LOL

Glad you are liking it. Thank you so much for reveiwing and reading. I so appreciate it.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The Woods

I just can't believe what an ass Jake is.  He doesn't confront Bella and try to talk to her?  He jsut committed adultry.  I can't stand him.  I Don't want to see Bella hurt again, clearly Jake couldn't care less about that.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: #16 The Fourth

She jsut needs to get out of that marriage.  Jake needs to come clean and let her go.  If he cares for her at all, he will.  He is a selfish prick.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Session

Jake better come clean.  It is the only thing thaat could humanize him again...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Office

I think Bellla is a weak character. She really doesn;t see the signs of Jake;s affair? She has a chance at real love and she is letting it go? I just don't understand her.... I am hoping that she will redeem herself soon.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The Tease

I just wish Bella could see Jake for what he is.  He is making such a fool out of her.  I want Bella to be the one to walk out on Jake ,on her own accord.  I don't want her to end up with Edward on the rebound.  I am eager to read more!



Author's Response:

It will be worse before it gets better. Hope I didn't give too much away. LOL Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Caught

How can Bella not be freaking out over seeing Jake with flowers, caught in a lie?  She should ask him when he gets home "how was work?"  "Did you eat there"  "anything happen?"  Then pounce of him, catching him in the lies...

And if Edward truly wants to protect her, he wouldn't lie to her either, that just puts him on the same level as Jake.  He needs to simply support her in her choices. 

I am eager to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: July 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Trip

Poor Bella.  She is so clueless.  Too trusting.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: The Rush

I hope Edward comes clean about.  Otherwise she won't be able to trust him.  He will be keeping huge secrets from her.  She needs to know.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: The Tree

I am just so disappointed in Bella's reactions to everything.  She is so weak!  She doesn't stand up for herself and she lets everybody take advantage of her. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: August 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Cabin

Finally!  I really hope that wasn't a dream.  THey both admitted their feelings and did something they wanted.  This was a beautiful chapter!

 
Summary:

Edward is a teenage boy who finds his life instantly changed when his family moves to Forks, WA.  He is intensely drawn to the mysterious girl in his biology class whose mind he discovers he can read.  It doesn’t take long for him to find the truth behind her dark and painful secret but it is already too late “ his life is forever altered by his intense physical and emotional connection to the beautiful girl.   

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 120460
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I  am intrigued!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you are intrigued by the story so far.  I love getting new readers!  I hope you continue to enjoy the story! :)

 
Summary:

When normal girl, Courtney Crawley meets famous actor, Robert Pattinson in Disneyland, she's immediately taken with him. He's convinced they can work things out, but she's not so sure. How can they be a real couple when they're living a world apart?

 Thanks to EZZA4EVA and Minigolf for their great banners.

 

 

 

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Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: No Word count: 237773
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Valentine's Day

It is sweet of him to show up at her door.  How could he not spend the night in her bed cuddling though?  They have such little time together.  I am eager to read more!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Home

I loved the flowers and I loved his coded name on her phone!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The Girls do Disneyland

She is divorced?  I didn't see that one coming.  She is so young!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Ice Skates and Olyphantastic

I am much happier with him spending the night with her.  THey have such limited time together and they need to take advantage of the time they have.  Great chapter!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: You Can't Have All of It

They are really becoming intellectually intimate.  It is a solid basis.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Brady

I have to admit that I kind of like Brady right now.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Good Use For a Scarf

I still dont understand why he is going to a hotel.  THey aren't teenagers.  They have such limited time together.  They arent having sex, I get that, but why wouldn't they cuddle all night.  In all of their phone calls how do they not discuss that?  Plus. wouldnt ther be a higher risk of somebody recognizing him at a hotel??

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Carly & Brady

Brady is a smooth talker.  Hmmmm, I wonder about his intentions!

 




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