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A Life Lived by labrattus Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 184]
Summary:

AU - As Bella waits for Jacob to make her cliff dive, Victoria takes advantage of this opportunity.  The story deviates from New Moon at this point.


Categories: AU, New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 46123
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 08, 2012


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The next step

Sooo, has Edward been following her all along?  I am eager to read more!



Author's Response:

He hasn't been following her, just checking in from time to time.  He's a masochist at heart.  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: The Ciconia cometh

Uh Oh.  TIme to freak out... great update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review.  I'd agree, but of course I know the answer!  The new chapter is submitted, check back soon!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Life is what happens

Wow.  Intense and crazy chapter.  Bella is emotionally not certain what she wants.  Physically something is going on- but what?  Excellent update!



Author's Response:

Oh, very insightful!  You're the only one to have caught on...thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: That explains so much

So she's dying??  Wow.  Great twist!  But so much time has passed.  How will she recieve him?  Will she ever believe that Edward loves her or will she only assume he feels guilty?

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Hallucinations

Great chapter.  Jake has to know that if Bella were to see Edward, she would choose him over Jake.  If Edward turned her, she would never belong to Jake. 



Author's Response:

I wonder if that would be true.  In New Moon it is only a short while between Edward leaving and him coming back.  Now it's longer.  And Bella CHOSE Jake in this story.  I think at the very least she would be conflicted.  We know that she loves him beyond all reason, but would the sense of betrayal and loss overwhelm that love?

 

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Another hospital room

If she has no chace of survival, why endure all of this.  She wants to be with Edward anyway...



Author's Response:

I guess it depends on perspective.  I strive to keep the characters in true character.  Bella would not, I believe, give up on Jake or Charlie.  I 

Think that she would endure anything to spare them pain.  Even this.

 Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: That explains so much

Wow.  I don't remember this!  Holy crow!



Author's Response:

I have most of the story planned, but sometimes the characters surprise me too!

 
The Best Man by Whitney Love Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 392]
Summary:

Womanizer Edward meets Maneater Bella let the sheets fall where they may. It's not the average every day lover story between Edward and Bella. He's not into the one woman kind of deal and she's not into the one man kind of deal. The meet at a wedding, Edward is the Best Man and Bella is the Maid of Honor. Anything goes with these two so hold on tight and enjoy the ride.

Out of Character, All Human, Cannon Pairings.

Potty mouth and lots of lemony goodness included.

First chapter is kind of risky but I gotta show you just how naughty my Edward is. Give it a chance you won't regret it!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 41376
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am liking the hot loving!  I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Everyone can use a little hot loving! Even Edward and Bella! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This was HOT. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll try to keep up the tempature for you.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Niiiiiccceee.  I like it!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow.  So good.  I love that they are going to play with eachother.,  Theire chemistry is unstoppable though... they won't be able to keep their hands to themselves!!!



Author's Response:

You know it girl! They both can give as good as the get so you know it's going to be good! I'm excited for you all to read it so it won't be too long. Thanks for the R&R!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nice.  Dirty boy.  I like it!



Author's Response:

Everybody likes a dirty boy! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hot and steamy.  I love that they are both so used to going from one person to the next but for some reason can't seem to get enough of eachother!



Author's Response:

Neither of them know why they can't get enough of each other. They've never felt like this before. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I like that they are learning to be together in a playful, flirty way in addition to the lustful neediness.  Rose and Emmett will flip!



Author's Response:

A little sweetness goes a long way with these two. Neither of them are used to feeling this way about someone else.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I love that they are falling in deep with eachother but still don't know it.   Their instincts know better!  Great update!



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great update!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it. Thanks for sticking with me. I appreciate the support.

Thanks again for reading and taking the time to review.

 
Married at 18 by AimeeBass Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 364]
Summary:

Bella wakes up married to Edward Cullen, who she’s only just met. The problem? She’s still a senior at FHS. The other problem? The judge orders them to stay married for a year as punishment for abusing the sanctity of marriage.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 13829
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: March 10, 2013


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:2

I was so excited to see this update today.  I have missed this story.  I am anxious for the two of them to finally be left alone and forced to get to know eachother.  Great update!  It sounds like thy may attempt to be civil...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Like it.  I am definitely interested in following it.  Can't wait to see how it develops!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: There's Something About Edward

Great update.  I love the hate!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Stepsister

Wow.  I was really freaking out there, but your authors note has calmed me a little.  I can't wait to read more.  I want to know why Edward hates her so much and I am eager for the two of them to start living together alone!  I love it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:1

I love it.  I can't wait for the jealousys to begin!

 
Wonderwall by tuleangel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 297]
Summary:

This takes place after Edward leaves in New Moon.  Jacob and Bella get married and then after 5 years together, Jacob imprints and leaves Bella heartbroken. While at her dad's house Bella finds the items Edward left under her floorboards that Bella thought were gone forever.  All of this drives her to take charge and go after Edward.  But after 5 years, what will happen when she finds him?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Sam
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 25624
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Shattered

I am enjoying this alot.  I am eager for them to reunite.  Great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Mistakes

I am already hooked on this story.  I can't wait to read how it develops!  What an excellent start.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support!  I hope to have Chapter 2 up soon!  I can't believe you are hooked already!  That is the best compliment to me.  When I think of the stories that had me hooked after just one chapter I can't think of better company to be in.  I'm truly touched.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Imprinting and Other Disasters

Go Bella!  I am thrilled that she is going to find him.  She seems determined, too.  I know Jacob feels bad, but he should have seen something like this as a possibility.  Bella would have been better off NOT marrying him.  It would have saved her the heartache and maybe she would he discovered Edward's message earlier.  Now she's 6 years older... great update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the support!  The first time I read new moon (yes you read that right, I said first time lol) I could not figure out why Bella didn't make more of an effort to find the Cullens'.  To just sit there and wallow and not take charge of her life just drove me crazy.  Yes, Bella would have been better off not marrying Jake, but remember in New Moon just before Alice comes back Bella convinves herself a life with Jake was better than nothing at all.   I think it said something like Juliet should have settled for Paris because at least Paris loved her and wanted her.  "And what is she loved Paris?  Not like Romeo. Nothing like that of course.  But enough that she wanted him to be happy, too?"  Then a little futher Bella thinks this, "Would it be so wrong to try to make Jacob happy?  Even if the love I felt for him was a weak echo of what I was capable of, even if my heart was far away, wandering and grieving after my fickle Romeo, would it be so very wrong?"  

Going back and reading that now, I am almost positive Bella would have married Jake (and you know Jake would have married Bella imprinting or not) if Alice had never came back.  That's was kind of my jumping off point for this story.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

NICE>  Definitely liked it!  I can't wait for them to finally find eachother again!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the support!  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  You'll have to wait a while longer.  While the search is not the main focus of my story, I still plan on it taking a while

 




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