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Penname: Dulcinea21bella [Contact]
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Wild Horses by Anne Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

AU. Edward and the Cullens have returned to Forks following Bella's Italian intervention and life has returned to normal, until a series of strange visions begin to plague Alice, forcing Edward to rethink his resolutions and priorities. 


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 13945
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.  So good.  I am really intrigued.  I can't wait to read how this story develops!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great update. I am thrilled that Edward came through for Bella and bit her.  He secured their future together, at least I hope so!  I am eager to read more!!!

 
Falling Slowly by MrsAC Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 139]
Summary:

Who ever loved, that loved not at first sight. Edward and Bella’s families knew they would be perfect for each other. But will the two of them see it?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 45492
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: January 07, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Crazy for This Girl

Oooh, I like this.  The chemistry is hot.  I am already into it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Use Somebody

So sweet!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I Wanna Make You Sweat

Great update.  I love that they can't get enough of eachother.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Steady As We Go

I love that she fell into the pond and that he followed her in.  So sweet!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Turn Me On

I love it.  They are just so happy and things are going so well.  It is refreshing to read!!!  Great update.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- My Best Friend

It was so romantic.  I loved that Edward was jealous.  I love me a posessiveward!  Great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Their sex scenes are so Hot!!!  I love that they simply can't get enough of eachother and need that constant togetherness.

 
Summary:

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Bella and Edward were best friends for years. When Bella finally decides to tell him that she has fallen in love with him, it's too late and he is to marry someone else. Human AU.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 22651
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2009 Updated: January 26, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It is already so very intense.  I am captivated...

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: My Dad and my Prince

So sweet.  Best friends!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Phoenix

I am excited for Bella to return home!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Home

Aw,  a love as deep as theirs can never be severed.  I am mad at him for actually envisioning his life with somebody else.  What was he thinking????

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Good Old Days

 I really like it.  I am a little freaked out at all of the drama that has yet to unfold.... but I am optimistic for a Happily Ever After?????

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Talk

I enjoyed this chapter.  I am SO nauseated thinking about what is yet to come.  They are both so scared to tell eachother what they are truly feeling!

 
Summary:

What was Edward feeling when he whispered "Forever" on Isle Esme? Follows the events of BD pgs 81-108 from Edward's perpective.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10567
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: September 04, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic.  I thought your idea about the bruises was brilliant.  I have often pondered that myself.  You did an excellent job.  I think your characterized Edward beautifully.  Excellent job!!!



Author's Response:

I really enjoy writing from Edward's POV, so thank you! And I'm glad you liked my bruises theory. Thanks for reading!

 
The Ties That Bind by yesyov Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
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What happens when your past collides with your present and changes your future forever? Come read The Ties That Bind.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 52 Completed: Yes Word count: 367368
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So Edward is his father, right?  Will Edward pick up on it right away?  Great update!



Author's Response:

This is a multilayered/ensemble fic... Edward takes a while to make an appearance... you have been warned... but he will come... as to how he reacts...? stay tuned...

 
Summary:

 

She was standing by the bar looking beautiful. I hadn't seen her in two years. She smiled at me and tried to say hi. I couldn't say anything to her. Memories were racing through my mind, of a time when we were happy...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 112640
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 13 - Brothers and Friends

Emmett's POV was very insightful.  I enjoyed it.  This was an excellent chapter.  They both suffered so very much.  I am eager to move forward.  I can't wait to find out where they go from here!



Author's Response:

Glad you went to read Em's POV- I think it is important. Glad you liked the chapter. I am also ready to move forward.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18- Comfort

This was amazing.  It was perfect.  I love that Bella went to him.  It was perfect.  He feels safe with her now. secure.  That is huge.  How will they ever handle the separation now?  I love this story.  I love them.  Excellent chapter.  It was 100% worth waiting for!!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Present Day

Wonderful update.  I feel the the tint pieces of a puzzle are begining to be put together.... I love it.



Author's Response:

A little bit here, alittle bit there.... :) Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 8 - Enthusiasm and Dread

Well, fuck a doodle do.  I did NOT see that coming.  Hmmmm.  We know she didn't have a baby in the present, so that is not a good sign.  I feel so invested in these characters and it is so hard to see them struggle.  The pregnancy really is going to force them over any of their "minor" issues as now they are going to be linked for the rest of their lives.  It will undoubtedly change their relationship.  So good!

New Moon actually did mess with my head a little.  I have always been Team Edward 110%.  In the book, I liked Jacob, but I wasn't overly attached to him.  In the movie, I definitely connected with him.  I got so caught up with him that I was a little sad when Alice showed up because I wasn't ready to let that part of the story go yet.  But then, they cut to Edward breaking his phone and I was right back with him.  It was done so well.  I can't wait to see it again!



Author's Response:

Fuck a doodle? LOL! WTH is that? I am glad your so invested, it means I'm doing my job well. :)

Yeah- the movie messed with mne too... Taylor was a great Jacob. I wanted to cry a few times. Right with you though about the scene where Edard breaks his phone- GAH!! heartwrenching.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 11- Consequences

My Poor Baby!!!  I feel so badly for the both of them.  I am SOOOO eager to get back to the Present Time and see where they go from here.  Excellent (and heartbreaking) chapter! 



Author's Response:

thank you! Present day is coming soon- I promise! Look in you messages for a letter from Edward.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- In the Beginning

I LOVE this story!  I am already so invested in these characters and I can't wait to find out what happened between them in HS and what is going to happen to them now!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2 - First Decisions

Um, okay, so I llike dominating Edward apparently.  His little lectrure about ownership to Bella at the end there, kind of affected me on a physical level... so fucking hot!!!  Fantastic update!



Author's Response:

LOL! I admit it- Ilike it too! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I loved writing it.

 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 7

I don't think Bella is too forgiving.  They are newly in love!  It is common for two people to lose sight of everything around them when they get caught up in a new romance.  I think the 2 weeks in Phoenix will make them desperate to be intimate again.  I love this story.  I feel bad for Edward because he is so overwhelmed with his feelings for her.  I can't wait to find out what happens to them (and I dread it as well).  I am eager to find out what happens in the present as well!  Great update!



Author's Response:

Ahhh! So happy for this review... Everyone is so mad at EWdward right now!! I am glad you understand them. Yeah, you may be right about Phoenix.... :)

 




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