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Married at 18 by AimeeBass Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 364]
Summary:

Bella wakes up married to Edward Cullen, who she’s only just met. The problem? She’s still a senior at FHS. The other problem? The judge orders them to stay married for a year as punishment for abusing the sanctity of marriage.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 13829
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: March 10, 2013


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: There's Something About Edward

Great update.  I love the hate!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: The Stepsister

Wow.  I was really freaking out there, but your authors note has calmed me a little.  I can't wait to read more.  I want to know why Edward hates her so much and I am eager for the two of them to start living together alone!  I love it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:1

I love it.  I can't wait for the jealousys to begin!

 
Wonderwall by tuleangel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 297]
Summary:

This takes place after Edward leaves in New Moon.  Jacob and Bella get married and then after 5 years together, Jacob imprints and leaves Bella heartbroken. While at her dad's house Bella finds the items Edward left under her floorboards that Bella thought were gone forever.  All of this drives her to take charge and go after Edward.  But after 5 years, what will happen when she finds him?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Sam
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 25624
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Shattered

I am enjoying this alot.  I am eager for them to reunite.  Great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Mistakes

I am already hooked on this story.  I can't wait to read how it develops!  What an excellent start.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support!  I hope to have Chapter 2 up soon!  I can't believe you are hooked already!  That is the best compliment to me.  When I think of the stories that had me hooked after just one chapter I can't think of better company to be in.  I'm truly touched.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Imprinting and Other Disasters

Go Bella!  I am thrilled that she is going to find him.  She seems determined, too.  I know Jacob feels bad, but he should have seen something like this as a possibility.  Bella would have been better off NOT marrying him.  It would have saved her the heartache and maybe she would he discovered Edward's message earlier.  Now she's 6 years older... great update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the support!  The first time I read new moon (yes you read that right, I said first time lol) I could not figure out why Bella didn't make more of an effort to find the Cullens'.  To just sit there and wallow and not take charge of her life just drove me crazy.  Yes, Bella would have been better off not marrying Jake, but remember in New Moon just before Alice comes back Bella convinves herself a life with Jake was better than nothing at all.   I think it said something like Juliet should have settled for Paris because at least Paris loved her and wanted her.  "And what is she loved Paris?  Not like Romeo. Nothing like that of course.  But enough that she wanted him to be happy, too?"  Then a little futher Bella thinks this, "Would it be so wrong to try to make Jacob happy?  Even if the love I felt for him was a weak echo of what I was capable of, even if my heart was far away, wandering and grieving after my fickle Romeo, would it be so very wrong?"  

Going back and reading that now, I am almost positive Bella would have married Jake (and you know Jake would have married Bella imprinting or not) if Alice had never came back.  That's was kind of my jumping off point for this story.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

NICE>  Definitely liked it!  I can't wait for them to finally find eachother again!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the support!  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  You'll have to wait a while longer.  While the search is not the main focus of my story, I still plan on it taking a while

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Five Carlisles and a Wedding

I am pretty pissed off at Jake right now.... great update!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Welcome to New Hampshire

Poor Bella.  From one trauma to the next!

 
Cosmic Love by rocksox Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Bayleigh comes to London to study and becomes friends with Rob Pattinson's sister. She meets Rob at a party and they eventually fall in love but things fall apart and mistakes are made, hearts are broken. Can they learn to forgive and forget?

 


Categories: AU-Human, Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 3985
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: November 08, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow.  This was intense and heartbreaking.  Well done.

 
Summary:

When Bella moved to Forks, she thought her biggest problems would be finding a job, buying a car, and surviving highschool.  Until one day, she begins working for the dashing Dr. Cullen and spots a lonely boy in a photograph who inexplicably calls to her cautious heart and leads her into a world of myth she can scarcely comprehend. 

For the past century, Edward has lived a sort of half-life.  Gifted with immense power, but forever alone, he has come to loathe his very existence.  A vision of a beautiful girl holds promise of a better future, but how could he ever claim to truly love her if he is willing to corrupt her soul?

She's afraid of rejection.  He's afraid to commit.  Will it take a tragic accident to prove that love can both create and heal the deepest wounds?

This is a re-telling of Twilight centered around the assumption that Alice DID predict the fateful meeting in Biology.  I have tried hard to maintain the integrity of the central characters, so we do have insecure Bella and angsty Edward, but the plot will take us to very different places. 

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All canon pairings.  Some characters slightly OOC.  Told from alternating Bella/Edward POV's in each chapter.  Rating is for language, violence, and mature themes in later chapters.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 35596
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Wheels

I am very much intrigued by this!! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it!  Thanks:)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 ~ A Horse of a Different Color

Excellent update!   I remember one day I was performing on stage and I was lifted and then dropped in front of the entire school... terrible!  I can relate, Bella!!!  I am looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Hi!  Thanks for your comments! I'm so glad you like it.  Sorry to hear about your traumatic experience...it does make me think of Bella.  I'm still deciding which, of numerous, painful moments I'm going to share.  Thanks again! :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 ~ Anxiety Wears a Blue Sweater

Wonderful update.  I can't wait for them to meet.  Poor Edward.  I know he is trying to protect Bella from himself, but how can he not be curious?  I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! I'm so glad you like it.  I'm getting very anxious for their meeting also, but look for a pseudo-meeting in chapter 4.  Poor Edward's curiosity is about to win out, although he still sees it as an extension of his duty to protect her. Ha!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 ~ Pawns of Alice

Great chapter.  I can't wait for them to finally be able to talk face to face!



Author's Response:

Me either!!

Thanks for leaving a comment:)

 
Summary:

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In an alternate all human universe, where society reached modern times with the equivalent to an Ancient Roman appearance and level of technology, sexual pleasure is paramount; the Cullens are a breed apart: sexual vegetarians, if you will. 

Bella is an "Innocent" and so off limits for deeper sexual grat

ification, a role she gladly embraces, taking pleasure only in giving to those around her. 

That is until she meets Edward.  Suddenly her Father's insistence

on her remaining an Innocent and Aro's desires to keep her for himself have become an unwelcome burden to her life.  How will Bella and Edward su

rvive their desire to be together when it is forbidden?

This story is a thinly disguised excuse for steamy lemons in the vein of a Roman orgy, yet there is also a deeper story about selfless giving and how love might just be worth waiting for...and fighting for.

*WARNING*  This story starts out with intense woman/woman imagery, and will depict graphic multi-partner pairings in future chapters.  DO NOT READ IF YOU ARE OFFENDED BY GRAPHIC SEXUAL CONTENT OR IF YOU ARE NOT OF LEGAL AGE TO DO SO!!!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU, AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 49402
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: October 12, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Collision of Worlds: Part II

Excellent update.  I get so caught up in these chapters.  I am so excited that they have both felt that chemistry in their touch.  I am eager for more!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the high praise!  I'm excited to see where they take me too!  ;D

Thanks for the lovely review!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: When Worlds Collide, Part I

Wow.  I love the parallel to Twilight.  I am thrilled that Edward has realized that he needs her.  I can't wait to read more of their interactions!  Great update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Hoping to have the other half up by the end of the month.  RL is keeping me hoping, but I'm excited to get these guys out of my head and out into cyberspace for y'all to enjoy too.  He's in for a bit of a ride for a while.  *mwhaha*

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Tantalizing

I am greatly intrigued!!!



Author's Response:

That's what I was hoping for! :D

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Introduction to Desire

I love that they haven't met, haven't even made eye contact- yet he is drawn to her.  This is so unique and so captivating.  I love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support and encouragement!  I'm so glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Outtake: Forbidden Rose

Wow.  This was intense.  I really enjoyed it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Awakening to Desire

I can't wait for the angst to play out either!  Bring on the lovng!!!!  Wonderful update.  I can't wait for them to finally interact.  THe sexual tension is palpable already.



Author's Response:

I'll try not to tease ya, but it's gotta play out. Trust me, I have something up my sleve, though!  ;D

Glad you liked it.   Thanks for the great review!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:It's Not Just A River In Egypt

Dear Lord, these two need to have a sit down!  I can't wait for them to finally touch hands, even.  The tension will be electric!  I love it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I love a good electric storm!!  ;D 

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Enlightenment

I have missed this story.  I am so eager for them to finally get things rolling between them.  face to face!

 
I'm Home by Sunsquash Rated: G starstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Edward's point of view after Breaking Dawn. A one-shot, short and sweet. Nessie and Bella bring out the best in Edward, and he wonders how he could have spent most of his immortal life in self-pity.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 839
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: September 04, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: one

Awww.  This was a sweet one shot.  I love reading about their carefee happy times.  It feels so good to indulge into Edward's mind post BD when he can finally be truly happy.  He suffered so much before Bella.  He deserves his HEA.  This was a perfect insight into his delightful future,  Thank you for sharing it with us!



Author's Response:

Thankyou! Carefree is how I imagine Edward after Breaking Dawn, and I'm glad I portrayed that properly. Happily Ever After is all I ask! :)

 
The TA by wuogkat Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 330]
Summary:

The three black and white photographs that hang on Bell's apartment wall.  The lights from a police cruiser, a flower, and a man cliff diving.  These represent the three men she loves.

Bella Swan has spent the past four years excelling at school as a way to insulate herself from her past.  She finished her bachelor's degree early and is about to start her first semmester as a TA in the literature department of a small heavily wooded school in the northeast when her past finds her.  Bella finds herself thrust back into the world of vampires and werewolves and she has to decide which path her life will take, if she can survive that long.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Brady, Carlisle, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Quil, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 65421
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: February 21, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The TA

Oh, I am SO hooked already....



Author's Response:

I am SO glad to hear it!

Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Meetings

I love this story!!!  Poor Bella, her entire world has been uprooted- again!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I think that Bella secretly enjoys the chaos.

 




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