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Summary: AU - As Bella waits for Jacob to make her cliff dive, Victoria takes advantage of this opportunity. The story deviates from New Moon at this point.
Categories: AU, New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 46123
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 08, 2012
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Waiting
I am intrigued... will this be a Bella/Edward story ultimately or a B/J? I just need to know what I should be prepared for... A great start! Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'd love to tell you the pairing, but maybe in this case a surprise would be best? Keep reading..
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Aftermath
Intriguing. Great update! Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The intrigue will continue, I promise!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: The End in the Beginning
I am a definite E&B girl. But this seemed natural to me. She is trying. But her heart will always belong to Edward. But she is trying to make a life for herself. She has no choice. Either this, or waste away- although she hasn't decided 100% that waste away isn't the best choice... Great update! Author's Response: I agree with you, Edward and Bella are natural, but it seemed like she would have made the effort with Jake if she hadn't jumped. I'm not done playing with the characters though..stay tuned.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Struggle in the jungle
Poor Edward. He is going to be heartbroken. Won't he hear, though, Bella be missing him still? WOn't Jake be able to pick up on his scent? I can't wait! Author's Response: Ah thanks so much! That's why the next couple of chapters may take a little longer, I want to make sure I get the details right. Stay tuned!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Want
Wow. Intense. I like it. Poor Edward. Is he going to stay? Could he leave her again? If not, is he going to fight for her? I can't wait... Author's Response: Poor Edward indeed, although he really brought it upon himself, now didn't he? Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: The next step
Sooo, has Edward been following her all along? I am eager to read more! Author's Response: He hasn't been following her, just checking in from time to time. He's a masochist at heart. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: The Ciconia cometh
Uh Oh. TIme to freak out... great update! Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review. I'd agree, but of course I know the answer! The new chapter is submitted, check back soon!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Life is what happens
Wow. Intense and crazy chapter. Bella is emotionally not certain what she wants. Physically something is going on- but what? Excellent update! Author's Response: Oh, very insightful! You're the only one to have caught on...thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: That explains so much
So she's dying?? Wow. Great twist! But so much time has passed. How will she recieve him? Will she ever believe that Edward loves her or will she only assume he feels guilty?
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Hallucinations
Great chapter. Jake has to know that if Bella were to see Edward, she would choose him over Jake. If Edward turned her, she would never belong to Jake. Author's Response: I wonder if that would be true. In New Moon it is only a short while between Edward leaving and him coming back. Now it's longer. And Bella CHOSE Jake in this story. I think at the very least she would be conflicted. We know that she loves him beyond all reason, but would the sense of betrayal and loss overwhelm that love?
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Another hospital room
If she has no chace of survival, why endure all of this. She wants to be with Edward anyway... Author's Response: I guess it depends on perspective. I strive to keep the characters in true character. Bella would not, I believe, give up on Jake or Charlie. I
Think that she would endure anything to spare them pain. Even this.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: That explains so much
Wow. I don't remember this! Holy crow! Author's Response: I have most of the story planned, but sometimes the characters surprise me too!
Summary: Womanizer Edward meets Maneater Bella let the sheets fall where they may. It's not the average every day lover story between Edward and Bella. He's not into the one woman kind of deal and she's not into the one man kind of deal. The meet at a wedding, Edward is the Best Man and Bella is the Maid of Honor. Anything goes with these two so hold on tight and enjoy the ride.
Out of Character, All Human, Cannon Pairings.
Potty mouth and lots of lemony goodness included.
First chapter is kind of risky but I gotta show you just how naughty my Edward is. Give it a chance you won't regret it!
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 41376
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I am liking the hot loving! I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Everyone can use a little hot loving! Even Edward and Bella! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
This was HOT. Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'll try to keep up the tempature for you.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Niiiiiccceee. I like it! Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Wow. So good. I love that they are going to play with eachother., Theire chemistry is unstoppable though... they won't be able to keep their hands to themselves!!! Author's Response: You know it girl! They both can give as good as the get so you know it's going to be good! I'm excited for you all to read it so it won't be too long. Thanks for the R&R!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Nice. Dirty boy. I like it! Author's Response: Everybody likes a dirty boy! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Hot and steamy. I love that they are both so used to going from one person to the next but for some reason can't seem to get enough of eachother! Author's Response: Neither of them know why they can't get enough of each other. They've never felt like this before. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I like that they are learning to be together in a playful, flirty way in addition to the lustful neediness. Rose and Emmett will flip! Author's Response: A little sweetness goes a long way with these two. Neither of them are used to feeling this way about someone else.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I love that they are falling in deep with eachother but still don't know it. Their instincts know better! Great update! Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Great update! Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thanks for sticking with me. I appreciate the support.
Thanks again for reading and taking the time to review.
Summary: 
Bella wakes up married to Edward Cullen, who she’s only just met. The problem? She’s still a senior at FHS. The other problem? The judge orders them to stay married for a year as punishment for abusing the sanctity of marriage.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 13829
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: March 10, 2013
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:2
I was so excited to see this update today. I have missed this story. I am anxious for the two of them to finally be left alone and forced to get to know eachother. Great update! It sounds like thy may attempt to be civil...
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
Like it. I am definitely interested in following it. Can't wait to see how it develops!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: There's Something About Edward
Great update. I love the hate!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: The Stepsister
Wow. I was really freaking out there, but your authors note has calmed me a little. I can't wait to read more. I want to know why Edward hates her so much and I am eager for the two of them to start living together alone! I love it!
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