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Summary:

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Bella and Edward were best friends for years. When Bella finally decides to tell him that she has fallen in love with him, it's too late and he is to marry someone else. Human AU.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 22651
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2009 Updated: January 26, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Home

Aw,  a love as deep as theirs can never be severed.  I am mad at him for actually envisioning his life with somebody else.  What was he thinking????

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Good Old Days

 I really like it.  I am a little freaked out at all of the drama that has yet to unfold.... but I am optimistic for a Happily Ever After?????

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Talk

I enjoyed this chapter.  I am SO nauseated thinking about what is yet to come.  They are both so scared to tell eachother what they are truly feeling!

 
Summary:

What was Edward feeling when he whispered "Forever" on Isle Esme? Follows the events of BD pgs 81-108 from Edward's perpective.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10567
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: September 04, 2009


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thoroughly enjoyed this fic.  I thought your idea about the bruises was brilliant.  I have often pondered that myself.  You did an excellent job.  I think your characterized Edward beautifully.  Excellent job!!!



Author's Response:

I really enjoy writing from Edward's POV, so thank you! And I'm glad you liked my bruises theory. Thanks for reading!

 
The Ties That Bind by yesyov Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 513]
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What happens when your past collides with your present and changes your future forever? Come read The Ties That Bind.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
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Series: None
Chapters: 52 Completed: Yes Word count: 367368
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2011


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So Edward is his father, right?  Will Edward pick up on it right away?  Great update!



Author's Response:

This is a multilayered/ensemble fic... Edward takes a while to make an appearance... you have been warned... but he will come... as to how he reacts...? stay tuned...

 
Summary:

 

She was standing by the bar looking beautiful. I hadn't seen her in two years. She smiled at me and tried to say hi. I couldn't say anything to her. Memories were racing through my mind, of a time when we were happy...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 112640
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2010


Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 13 - Brothers and Friends

Emmett's POV was very insightful.  I enjoyed it.  This was an excellent chapter.  They both suffered so very much.  I am eager to move forward.  I can't wait to find out where they go from here!



Author's Response:

Glad you went to read Em's POV- I think it is important. Glad you liked the chapter. I am also ready to move forward.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18- Comfort

This was amazing.  It was perfect.  I love that Bella went to him.  It was perfect.  He feels safe with her now. secure.  That is huge.  How will they ever handle the separation now?  I love this story.  I love them.  Excellent chapter.  It was 100% worth waiting for!!!!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Present Day

Wonderful update.  I feel the the tint pieces of a puzzle are begining to be put together.... I love it.



Author's Response:

A little bit here, alittle bit there.... :) Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 8 - Enthusiasm and Dread

Well, fuck a doodle do.  I did NOT see that coming.  Hmmmm.  We know she didn't have a baby in the present, so that is not a good sign.  I feel so invested in these characters and it is so hard to see them struggle.  The pregnancy really is going to force them over any of their "minor" issues as now they are going to be linked for the rest of their lives.  It will undoubtedly change their relationship.  So good!

New Moon actually did mess with my head a little.  I have always been Team Edward 110%.  In the book, I liked Jacob, but I wasn't overly attached to him.  In the movie, I definitely connected with him.  I got so caught up with him that I was a little sad when Alice showed up because I wasn't ready to let that part of the story go yet.  But then, they cut to Edward breaking his phone and I was right back with him.  It was done so well.  I can't wait to see it again!



Author's Response:

Fuck a doodle? LOL! WTH is that? I am glad your so invested, it means I'm doing my job well. :)

Yeah- the movie messed with mne too... Taylor was a great Jacob. I wanted to cry a few times. Right with you though about the scene where Edard breaks his phone- GAH!! heartwrenching.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 11- Consequences

My Poor Baby!!!  I feel so badly for the both of them.  I am SOOOO eager to get back to the Present Time and see where they go from here.  Excellent (and heartbreaking) chapter! 



Author's Response:

thank you! Present day is coming soon- I promise! Look in you messages for a letter from Edward.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- In the Beginning

I LOVE this story!  I am already so invested in these characters and I can't wait to find out what happened between them in HS and what is going to happen to them now!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2 - First Decisions

Um, okay, so I llike dominating Edward apparently.  His little lectrure about ownership to Bella at the end there, kind of affected me on a physical level... so fucking hot!!!  Fantastic update!



Author's Response:

LOL! I admit it- Ilike it too! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I loved writing it.

 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 7

I don't think Bella is too forgiving.  They are newly in love!  It is common for two people to lose sight of everything around them when they get caught up in a new romance.  I think the 2 weeks in Phoenix will make them desperate to be intimate again.  I love this story.  I feel bad for Edward because he is so overwhelmed with his feelings for her.  I can't wait to find out what happens to them (and I dread it as well).  I am eager to find out what happens in the present as well!  Great update!



Author's Response:

Ahhh! So happy for this review... Everyone is so mad at EWdward right now!! I am glad you understand them. Yeah, you may be right about Phoenix.... :)

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 4 - Dating

Wow I love this story.  How about, her studying with other people, or being with other "friends" and she leaves her phone home.  He keeps calling her, then goes to track her down?

Thoughts- Edward thinking keeping her in his room, wanting to get her grounded because he can't be with her and he doesn't want her to be able to go out without him?  Wanting to give her a phone so that he can reach her at all times.  Wanting to mark her all the time, hickeys, jewelry, imagining her getting a tattoo.  Considering her getting pregnant a good thing- something that would tie her to him always... how is that? 

I love this story.  I can't wait to read more.  I was out of town last week so I got to read 2 chapters tonight and it was excellent!!!



Author's Response:

Did you burrow into my mind?  LOL! You got something right, but I'm not going to tell you what. Thanks for the ideas. One will be used in the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 5 - Unaccomplished Endeavors

I love how Edward went from drooling over her to protective Mad Momma Bear with her.  In his mind, he isn't doing anything wrong.  He is consumed by his need for her.  He has never been effected this way by a girl and he really doesn't know how to handle his emotions.  I love this story.  I am so invested in these characters.  Wonderful update!



Author's Response:

Exactly!!! I am so happy that you get it! LOL! Thanks for review.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 6 - Finally -Part 1

I feel like i need a cigarette now.  This was fantastic.  I think it is wonderful that they made love.  It was a significant milestone for each of them, both physically and emotionally.  You did an excellent job of portraying the depth of Edward's emotions for Bella.  He is truly consumed by her.  She is everything.  I love that.  Edward did not seem stalker possessive, but posessive in such a good, protective way.  It was endearing.  And for the record, he can possess me anyday ;o)

I love this story.  So Much.  I can't wait to read more!  Excellent update!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you se it that way. It is hard for me to write m when he's being an ass, beause he really is a good boy. This chapter wa so nice - I got to show is good side. AND you're right Bella really is everything to him. 

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 6 - Finally (part 2)

This was so sweet!!!  I love that they just need to be together.   From where they are right now, I cannot imagine what could have possibly happened between these two lovebirds!!!  I can't wait (and dread) to find out!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for review. Glad you liked it. There is a lot more to happen yet. I dread it too and I know what is going to happen....

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Edward Present Day 3

Well, a car accident.  But why... were the arguing in the car?  Hmmmm.  Poor Edward.  I can't wait to read more.  I am so into this story!!!!



Author's Response:

We will see. Thanks for review!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: December 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 9 - How to Deal

Edward is surprising me, actually, for the better.  He is being so good to her.  I think he has grown so much since the start of their relationship.  His entire focus is on Bella.  Everything is Bella.  I think your portrayal of Bella is pretty accurate as well.  Of course she is scared.  She is the one who carries the scarlet letter of pregnancy with her everywhere she goes.  In addition to adapting to her own feelings about having a baby, she is forced to deal with the jealousies and cruelties of everybody around her.   They are so in love and so close to eachother right now, I am so sad that are ripped apart by later events.  I can't imagine how they could ever survive without the other.  I love this story.  Excellent chapter.   



Author's Response:

thank you very much! I love writing Edward like this. It gets hard making him a jealous creep. All else will calme later- I can't say anything.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 12 - College

I just have a hard time with Edward sleeping with other women.  I only hope that Bella has the same experiences.  I don't want her to have only had sex with Edward at this point.  I do love this story.  Please update soon.  I don't like the place we are at right now- it hurts!



Author's Response:

I don't know if her and Jake will sleep together. She is a totally different person than Edward. He is more physical (always has been in this story). She is more emotional tied to others. So... I don't know if it fits her character to sleep with someone else. To me it did fit in Edwards.

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 14 - "Edward"

My heart just breaks for them.  It is time for Bella to stop hiding.  She loves him.  She always will.  She knows this.  The only way she is going to find happiness with with him.  It is time to take charge of her life.  Face him.  Listen to him.  They need to mourn together and move on together.  They are both stuck in the past.  I love this story!



Author's Response:

How will Bella come to her senses.. will anyone help?  See my blog for Chapter 15 teaser. http://jarielynn.blogspot.com/

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 15 - The Truth

Argh!  I hope Bella hasn't waited too long.  She really put him through the gauntlet by not talking to him for so long.  At this point, I am on Edward's side.  Enough is enough.  He was suffering too.  He made some exellent points when he confronted her.  How can he ever be certain that she will stand by him through hard times?  She might have pushed him away too far.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  I feel like I have been waiting for it since the start!  I love it!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16 - The Whole Truth

Ah, this chapter truly put me in my happy place.  I am giddy!!!  I feel like I can finally breathe again, as well.  Edward, I have felt your pain!! ;o)

We are finally at the point I have been eagerly awaiting.  I wonder how long they will be able to keep their hands off of eachother.  THey have some serious heat between them.  Will they have the whole, who have you slept with conversation?  How will that go?  Edward moved on (in a sense, at least)- though Bella didn't give him a choice, but still, will that hurt her?  Bella has only EVER been with Edward.  Will he be thrilled at that?  Will he meet Jake?  WIll he feel that same old jealousy???  I can't wait to see how they build on their relationship from here.  How will they handle Edward's upcoming trip?  Will Bella admit to hearing him play at his auidition?  I hope so!  It would mean so much to him! 

I can't wait to read more!  Excellent update!



Author's Response:

Oh my... you have asked alot of questions about things I really wasn't even even going to touch... shit.. now I must think. OMG!  anyway- thanks for reviewing! Off to ponder next few chapters and where I can fit a few things in....  

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17- Falling In Love Again

Great chapter!  I know it is difficult to write when Rob is everywhere.  I was lucky enough to attend the premiere Monday night and he is a yummy specimen....  I love this story and am eager for them to grow even closer.  The upcoming separation will be difficult for the both of them, but it will help with their insecurities and doubts as well.  WHen he comes home Edward should have no fears regarding Bella's committment to their relationship.  I love this story!

 
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 19 - As One

Ah, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!  I am so thrilled that they are finally able to spend some time simply enjoying eachother.  Tomorrow is looming heavily on them, however.  I think they both know that they will be together for the rest of their lives but they haven't really discussed it openly.  They will spend a lot of time getting to reknow eachother over the phone over the next few months.  THey have grown so much as individuals and as a couple.  Their dynamics are so much more healthy now.  I am just smitten with them.  Excellent chapter!!!!  I am so sad to see this story ending. 



Author's Response:

Tromorow will be a sad day.. but - it will be alright I think. Maybe Bella can visit him after she graduates? :)

 




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