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Dark Side of the Moon banner

Thanks Roo, for the amazing banner! 

And more keep coming in!  Thanks to m81170 for this lovely piece of art:

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Here's another amazing pic that fits in with Dark Side of the Moon perfectly -thank you to JohannaL for ID'ing the author:  http://smirks-works.livejournal.com/ check out her (I assume) other manips - she's a genius!

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Updated November, 2009

This story is now COMPLETE!

Dark Side of the Moon is my version of New Moon from Edward’s point of view.  Witness how Edward agonized over leaving Bella, hunted for Victoria, faced the Volturi, and came to realize that with Bella was where he was meant to be. 

This tormented story has been a part of my life for about a year and a half – and what a ride it’s been!  Meant to be canon and in character, I hope you enjoy angsty Edward and his suffering during New Moon.  As unhappy as Bella was during this time, Edward suffered so much more (I think).  So be sure and crack open a fresh box of tissues before reading!

 Thank you to everyone for all the reviews, especially to those of you who reviewed each and every chapter!  Your support and loyalty have been the driving force to me getting this project finished – and I hope it’s lived up to all of your expectations.

Love you all,

blondieakarobin

PS.  As one last thank you, I’ve posted a formatted, printable copy of Dark Side of the Moon at http://bit.ly/2vLHMi, as will also post as an electronic version suitable for viewing on a kindle or MobiReader.  I’m also posting a ‘Director’s Cut’ that includes citations of all of Bella’s quotes from Twilight, research notes, and even funny comments from my betas in this version in the same directory.

blondie

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Use of the dialog from the series is just for clarity - Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight!  I'm making absolutely nothing from this work.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 163080
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2008 Updated: February 26, 2010


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: September 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Decision

So this story has been on my favourites list for a while, but I still haven't had the time to read it.  I finally started it, and I'm so glad I did...it's absolutely amazing!  Your imagery and insight into Edward's mind is really perfect, though it breaks my heart to read.  My favourite line of the chapter has to be: "Fate was a cruel vixen" which I thought summed everything up.  Anyway...awesome job so far, I can't wait to have the time to be able to read more :)

 
Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Epiphanies

Well thank goodness I'm all caught up now...though you should know I've been a terrible reviewer and haven't told you how much I've adored each chapter.  Anyway, just wanted to say once again that I absolutely love the way you write Edward!  You really know him as a character, which isn't an easy accomplishment.  I definitely consider this as canon New Moon...just from Edward's perspective instead of Bella's.  And btw, I love that you think of little details like the plasma TV...shows that you're really invested, lol :) I can't wait to read more!

 
Summary:
"This is what his love did to her. Just when it all seemed remotely possible—normal, even—something happened to make it all too much. Too good. As the small, cruel voice in her head began to say, 'Too good to be true,' she felt a pair of now-familiar arms envelop her." This fluffy little one-shot takes place during Bella and Edward's visit to see Renee. I'm not sure if it can/should be categorized as AU.   Disclaimer: I do not own Twilight, but I do own a grey scarf. 
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3015
[Report This] Published: May 25, 2008 Updated: May 29, 2008


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Intertwined

Just...wow.  I'm so glad that reading one of your other stories lead me to this one, or I probably would have missed it.  I adore how you write Edward and Bella; even the little details really illustrated the connection that these two share.  I LOVE the idea of them meeting before...it really ties in with the themes of fate and destiny that are prevalent in the books.  And I loved all the body language between E/B...him kissing her scars, leaning into her on the couch.  Lovely work...so glad you shared it :)

 
Summary:

This is a vision that Alice probably didn’t have, but I thought it would be neat if she did. Set after Edward’s return from Alaska after running away from Bella on her first day at school.  Esme's POV.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3286
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2008 Updated: June 12, 2008


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just found this now...I really enjoyed it!  Love the Edward angst, haha.  Nice Esme perspective, too :)

 
Summary:

"Eventually, she is silent. She moves her face from his and places her ear over his heart. If she is quiet and still and reminds herself that his fear is borne only out of his love, she can almost hear it beating."


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2725
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2008 Updated: July 30, 2008


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

And this is what was supposed to happen. 

That was utterly sublime...I love how you showed the connection between Edward and Bella, especially in the way that Bella comforts him.  I like your Bella; she's a little more brave and a little less self absorbed and really in tune with Edward's emotions.  I would say more but I don't really know how to articulate how much I love this piece.  Amazing job!

 
Four Seasons by psrasberry Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary: A day/night in each of the seasons: fall, winter, spring, summer featuring mainly Edward/Bella…with a hint or so of other pairings.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 5061
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: September 05, 2008


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: December 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Summer

So, I was going through my favourites and found this wonderful gem that I hadn't even read!  I love "missing" moments that follow canon, and this did not disappoint.  You captured each character very well, and I especially loved the Jasper POV.  I always like to read B/E through another characters eyes. Anyway, great job, and sorry this review is so overdue :)

 
Perspective by ekimmuh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2527]
Summary:

Edward seeks out the counsel of his father and brothers after agreeing to be with Bella after their wedding. What will Edward do with that advise and how will he and Bella prepare for their upcoming wedding night.

Thanks to Anne Cullen for this beautiful banner.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 132792
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: March 17, 2010


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: March 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I'm terrible at reviewing and just recently caught up from sooo long ago, but I just wanted to let you know that you're doing an amazing job with this story!  You really have an ability to capture the palpable connection that Edward and Bella have for each other.  I love getting your "missing moments" that stay true to canon- they are so lovely to read and are really a testament to how well you know these characters.  Loved this version of the wedding, too!  Great job on this fic, seriously.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I wanted to show the characters we all feel in love with in situations SM didn't give us while staying true to that world. I'm pleased that you feel that I have achived that goal.

 
Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: June 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I've just spent the past few days reading the whole fic, and I've really enjoyed it!  I like how you're keeping canon in mind, and this fits nicely as a prequel to some of the events in breaking dawn without being unrealistic.  can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

So happy to have you on board. :)

 

 
Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Oh, Renee!  Exactly how I pictured she would be.  And I'm glad that Charlie's opening up to Edward- that's really nice to see.  And I absolutely loved the moment in the car when Charlie lets them say goodnight...you really emphasize the connection between E/B, and I really love that.  Great job :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always picture Renee as trying to be the 'best girlfriend' instead of the mother. Charlie has done a complete 180. Yesterday he would have gotten out of the car without saying a word or maybe a curt grunt, then stood on the porch watching them intently until Bella got out and came inside. What a change! :)

Edward and Bella's connection is what I love about them. I really wish SM would have explored it more in BD than she did.

 
Summary:

 

Bella: "It occurred to me that there was another way to let you taste my blood, without dying, and without needles. And I think I might like it too."

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 26841
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Second Base: BPOV

I'm really enjoying this fic so far!  I really like your version of Bella...a little less shy but still in character.  And fun and sexy to boot :)  Hope you can write more soon!

 
Summary:

A question from Renesmee leads Bella to reminisce about other times her daughter has asked difficult questions.  About her unique nature, about children... about Jacob.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2965
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow...I'm really glad I found this fic!  I'm not usually a big fan of Nessie, but the characterization in here was lovely, and I'm a sucker for good Bella/Nessie moments, so I really enjoyed this.  You even made me kinda like Jake and Nessie, which is no easy task, haha. Good job!

 
Kissing Bella by FatApolloLove Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary:

 

"Eclipse" EPOV. Mid-"Declarations" through "Wager". Jacob kisses Bella.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7523
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2008 Updated: November 12, 2008


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: October 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Kissing Bella

Wow...you had Edward's voice absolutely picture perfect.  Great job...such great insight and depth!  So glad I found this :)

 
The M Word by NightsofTamara Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Four times Bella didn't want to marry Edward, and one time she did.
Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8948
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2008 Updated: November 29, 2008


Reviewer: singingkat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Was leafing through the Eclipse catagory and found this.  Seriously- one of the best one shots I've read in this fandom! I especially love your depiction of Emmett- it's exactly how I pictured him :) Seriously, you're an amazing writer and really understand these characters.  Kudos!

 
The Cutting of Cords by lofi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 404]
Summary:

 

I stepped back to the table, and grasped her prone hand. It was already measurably cooler, defeating the swirling heat of her dying heart. The coolness subsumed the scar on her hand. I cringed inwardly. Ironically, where James had failed, I would succeed, leeching all heat from her bones...

What she'd begged me for, what I'd refused, was nevertheless happening.

Edward's point of view, beginning on page 351 of Breaking Dawn, from Renesmee's birth, currently up to Bella's arrival home from her first hunt.

 

the cutting of cords

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 38506
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: August 01, 2009


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: From the Dream

I'm just catching up with this wonderful fic now, but I'm absolutely loving it!  You have such great insight into Edward's character, and all the descriptions and interactions are beautiful.  And I've absolutely loved Alice in the last few chapters...you write her very well.  Thank you for this in character, in depth view...I can't wait to finish reading :)

 
Surprise by eibbil Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Christmas is coming and Bella's still not fond of presents. What's a vampire to do?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4047
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2008 Updated: December 23, 2008


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I know I'm very late on this...but I absolutely loved this cute one-shot.  It was heartwarming, funny and sexy, too.  I love how you incorperated the whole family and I love how you depicted Bella and Edward as parents.  Nicely done :)

 
Summary: Feature

 

"The following September, she lies nearly still in the hospital bed next to him. He listens to her breathing slow, and feels her hand press something cold into his. Her eyes are wet and tired, and it takes all of her strength to speak.

'Your whole heart, Edward.'”

Edward Cullen's Christmases past, beginning in 1918.

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5414
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: January 08, 2009


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: September 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

I'm so glad that I've discovered your writing...it's absolutely exquisite.  I love the way you use repetition to get your message across, but it's never excessive.  And the way you've captured Edward's emotions is so in character and beautiful.  Thanks for sharing this...lovely job!

 
Summary:

A Forever Moment

Bella’s met Edward’s condition of marriage, and he’s fulfilled her wish of lovemaking. Now they both make the ultimate sacrifice.

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This story has been nominated for an Indie award at http://theindietwificawards.com -- they focus on recognizing the best in up and coming or under recognized authors and stories in Twilight Fan Fiction. How cool is that? What an honor!

THANK YOU TIMES 23 to whomever thought of my story.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 12396
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2009 Updated: July 01, 2009


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Just found this fic...and I really like where you've gone with it, so far!  I usually stick to canon fics but this is just so well written and stays so true to the characters that i'm hooked.  Can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Woo, another canon-lover swayed to the alternative universe. It's very important to me that I stay true to Meyer's characters, as that's what made me fall in love with them to begin with. Especially Edward. Bella, I think, could use some mental fleshing out. Even though the stories were told in her point of view, she seems to be a character we most like to question. I'm hoping to show why Edward could love her as my story progressess (because it has to be more than the silence of her mind, and the scent of her blood).

Thank you for your comment, singingkat.

 
Summary:

created by jace

 

If you loved someone, how much would you be willing to sacrifice? Bella makes the most difficult decision of her life; now she has to live with the consequences.  A Bella/Edward story.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 68203
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2009 Updated: November 24, 2009


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Carnival

I'm a little late finding this fic, but I'm intrigued already!  I can't wait to finish off the other chapters- the dialogue between Edward and Bella is lovely; you write them very, very well.  Thanks for sharing :)

 
Reviewer: singingkat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Found

Oh. My. Gosh.  Seriously, I am absolutely loving this!  I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a few chapters, but I was totally distracted because I was so engrossed.  First off, I love "your" Bella.  She's a little more spunky, but still Bella.  And your human descriptions of Edward are so beautiful.  Basically, I am loving everything about this story...you really write these two well, even with this different dynamic between them.  I can't wait to read more, you're doing a lovely job.

 
Summary:

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She got what she wanted. My venom flows through her bloodstream, changing her, reshaping her from a human to a vampire. Soon, that transformation will be complete. And I'll be able to keep her forever.

I am the most selfish creature that has ever walked this earth.

Edward's point of view in "Breaking Dawn", beginning with Book Three.

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 250382
[Report This] Published: March 05, 2009 Updated: November 29, 2009


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: June 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Awakening

I've just finished reading the first chapter (yes, I'm a little late, I know!) and I'm already hooked!  Great job so far...I'm looking forward to finishing the others soon :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

You'll have to let me know what you think when you've finished reading through the most recent chapter. :)

 
Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: June 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Defection

Though I haven't had time to read all of your chapters yet, I absolutely love your writing!  I plan on catching up this weekend, but anyway...I think you've really delved into Edward's head astoundingly well.  Some writers don't really capture Edward 100%, but you do while keeping everything in canon.  Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Forever by heathcliff Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

The staggeringly absent text from Breaking Dawn: My version of Bella and Edward's wedding night.

This is my first fan-fic.  :-)


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5647
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2009 Updated: April 02, 2009


Reviewer: singingkat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm so glad I found this story!  I think it's really interesting to get different perspectives of the honeymoon scenes, but I really appreciate your ability to keep Edward and Bella in character.  I absolutely loved this; it was sexy and fun but dually displayed the deep connection that these characters feel for each other.  And I really enjoyed the moments of fun banter between them in contrast to the more intense declarations.  Many writers get these honeymoon scenes wrong because there's too much of something; either it's too technical, there's too much dirty language, or the descriptions and situations are just so outlandish that the characters aren't even Edward and Bella anymore.  But you struck a nice balance with everything that equates to an in depth and in character version that flows beautifully.  I'll stop babbling now, but really, I loved it.  Great job! :)



Author's Response:

Kat, trust me, I LOVE and ADORE your babbling (almost as much as Edward loves and adores Bella, I should say!!).  Thank you so much for all of your comments, particularly the bit about the balance of everything.  That is definitely something I strive for in all of my writing because I think it makes a story so true to life.  Above all things, I want the reader to feel like she is experiencing what Bella is feeling, and balance is a very important element of that "realism."  Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a thought-out and nice review! I truly appreciate it!  :-)  

 
Choice by eibbil Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

Six years have passed since BD and Renesmee is now a young woman. Due to an agreement b/w Edward, Bella and Jacob, Ness has no idea that Jacob imprinted on her. Jacob left the choice to her. Now she's of age...what will she choose?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 28509
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2009


Reviewer: singingkat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just finished the first chapter...I love this fic so far!  I'm really enjoying your version of Nessie...she's exactly how I pictured her to be at this age.  Plus, it's fun to read things from her perspective, especially the interactions between Bella and Edward.  I can't wait to read more :)

 
Summary:

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This is an AU but NOT completely OOC story that came to me. It would take place before Breaking Dawn. Edward gets the chance to be human for 24 hours. What will he do? How will Bella react? The rating is necessary because I think you can guess some things.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 14057
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2009


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: June 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - What's in the Icebox?

This is such an interesting idea!  I just read all the chapters and love it so far.  Can't wait for more :)

 
The Cold War by gleena Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 275]
Summary:

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In 2026, the Cullens realize that Aro desperately wants to possess Edward in order to use him in a barbaric experiment. Now, the Cullens must evade the Volturi while protecting one of their own as well as Aro's unwitting human pawn. 100% Canon.

Won Best Volturi at Round 2 of the Sparkle Awards!
2nd place in the 1st round Sparkle Awards for Best Post-Breaking Dawn (http://thesparkleawards.yolasite.com/ )

Made it to the Last Round of the Indie Twific awards for:
Best Canon WIP, Best Original Character WIP

Twilighted Beta: myimm0rtal (current) and Admittedly Obsessed (through Ch. 18)

Banner by edward-bella, ebhg.  She is a treasure!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 112625
[Report This] Published: April 27, 2009 Updated: December 15, 2009


Reviewer: singingkat Signed
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3. Back to Wolfeboro

This is shaping up to be very interesting!  I like the dynmaic of 100% canon and non-canon characters...can't wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

thanks!  I'm fairly nervous about how Ch. 1-3 doesn't include too much of the Cullens and the plot is still a complete mystery.  Ch. 4 starts the plot rollercoaster, though.  It's in the validation queue already!

 




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