Awesome story!  It's fantastic to see Bella so uninhibited, so free and willing.  Not to mention that was just plain HOT!

I loved Edward remarking to himself that he could never be a girl and have boobs because they would be like built-in toys!  Ha! So like a guy to think!  I did a breast cancer walk in 2007 and one of the guys walking wore a bra and had water balloons to fill the bra out.  He was so funny because every single time we would walk by a window (a shop window, house, car, you name it) he would slow down and check himself out.  Sometimes giving a fake boob a squeeze.  he was enjoying himself way too much!  That's what Edward's line immediately made me think of!

Great job!

Damn!  I gotta give Bella some credit.  I probably whould have stolen Charlie's gun and shot Tyler, and Jess.  This is a great beginning to what I'm sure will be a great story.  I'm looking forward to reading more!

Oh my gosh.  This is fantastic.  I love Bella's brain.  Running off on it's own, thinking about having wild monkey sex with Edward.  (I mean, hey, who can blame her...)

Alice described everyone perfectly, especially using the wild monkey sex reference to each relationship, especially how Edward wouldn't know it even if it was right in front of him!  Ha!  I laughed so hard at that line my cat jumped out of my lap and gave me a rude look.  :)

I also liked how Alice promised that Jasper spoke from time to time.  Brillant!

Looking forward to more!

Aaahhh...it was fantastic to finally hear from Edward!  His POV of the last few chapters was brillant.  He's as taken with her as she is with him.  Hm....now what's it going to take to get them together?  I can't wait to see what you have in store.  I loved the whole "40 rolls of toilet paper" and cleaning out the cabinet for her "girl stuff" part.  It just clearly shows how nervous he is and how much he likes her.  I also enjoyed how you had him go over all the things she was going to have to get used to...things about Emmett, Rosalie, Jasper, and finally....Alice's Aliceness!  Perfect!  I've never heard it referred to that way but I love it, there is no other more perfect way to describe what Alice has!

Yeah!  Moving day is next!  I can't wait!  YUMMY...Edward with no shirt on.  I can totally handle that!

Oh hell yeah!  I LOVED Bella and Edward telling off Jessica and Tyler.  And yeah, Edward's mouth (and hands) that close to....well, you know what I mean...I would have had a very happy ending too! 

I have to take a minute to tell you how much I love this story!  I actually fell out of my chair laughing, not necessarily at Emmett and Rose, but at Mr. Jones!  The speech he gave Emmett was priceless!  Plus, I loved hearing about all the things Rose had done to other guys who had insulted her! 

 You are truly making these characters come alive for me!

Heck!  That's a true cliffhanger!  I can't wait to read more!

Okay, favorite line EVER has got to be...Edward and Jasper as drag queen strippers...that does the trick.

HaHaHaha!!!! 

 I don't know though, they might make some sexy looking drag queens!

I bow down to your writing powers! I completely adore the way you have written Esme, and I don't think I've ever laughed so hard as at the line with Alice mentally bowing down to Esme chanting "I'm not worthy. I'm not worthy."

I never would have guessed Bella and Edward would be the first ones out, but then again, they are both extrememly smart and I should have known they would have figured out a compromise. ;)

I'm eagerly looking forward to more!

This chapter is so a 10, just for Esme's sake!!!!

Author's Response:

Gosh!  I'm not worthy of your compliments!  You make me feel like I'm actually able to write something decent.  Thanks.

The reason why Bella and Edward were able to compromise is that Bella is selfless and she cares nothing about cars.  She'd rather be sucking face with Edward than be a part of any stupid bet, so it was actually very easy for her.  Esme is very proud of her.

Thanks for the 10 rating!  I'm honored! 

Ok, I am so happy to see Edward and Bella married.  I'm worried about the Volturi and hope that everything will work out in the end.  Ha ha, I loved Edward and Bella joining the Mile High Club (and creating turbulence).  I also liked Bella's vows where she said "I sometimes think I'm living a fictional life because you're a character that seems too good to be true."

Great job!  I'm looking forward to the next chapter. 

Oh!  And I think that the Voltui will find them on the island.  That's my guess.

You can always count on Emmett to overdo things...if one of something is good, then 10 of that same thing is even better!  He He!  I love Emmett's cluelessness and panic that Bella was starting to panic.  He is so great! Thanks for writing him as such a loveable big guy!

Looking forward to finding out how Bella got pregnant and who is after her and the baby.

My favorite line thus far is..Carlisle was a father to the core, and wished he could protect each of his children from pain and heartache."  You have successfully summed up Carlisle's character in one line.  One very touching and truthful line. 

It's great to see Carlisle and Jasper join Emmett and I feel slightly hopeful that this will not escalate into a full out battle.  It would kill me to see one of the Cullens killed. 

I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter and how Bella convinces them that the baby is in fact Edward's. 

Very good!  I enjoyed that you wrote Bella with enough strength to leave.  I hate that they took most of her money but she has to start somewhere and leaving is the first step.  I hope she looks up Alice when she gets to Seattle.

Author's Response: There was no way I was leaving Bella in Phoenix with her step-mom.  Thanks for reading.