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Real name: Valerie
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Member Since: October 11, 2008
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I am a readaholic.  That is the sad truth of the matter.  Books and literature are my life.  I have only recently become acquainted with the wonderful word of fanfiction and already it has stolen many of my free hours.  Of course, you won't find me complaining, as there is no better way to pass the time than with well written literature of any kind.  And the time spent is even more enjoyable when that reading involves fanfictions of our favorite vampire family.


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Inhibitions by Capricorn75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Edward is in for some surprises when Bella comes home after a night drinking with the girls. What's happened to his shy, sweet Bella?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4831
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2008


Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: December 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome story!  It's fantastic to see Bella so uninhibited, so free and willing.  Not to mention that was just plain HOT!

I loved Edward remarking to himself that he could never be a girl and have boobs because they would be like built-in toys!  Ha! So like a guy to think!  I did a breast cancer walk in 2007 and one of the guys walking wore a bra and had water balloons to fill the bra out.  He was so funny because every single time we would walk by a window (a shop window, house, car, you name it) he would slow down and check himself out.  Sometimes giving a fake boob a squeeze.  he was enjoying himself way too much!  That's what Edward's line immediately made me think of!

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Of course, I could not be a guy because I would play with myself all the time. Isn't a dick pretty much a built-in toy?!

 
Attitude by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

Isabella is shipped off to Forks by her parents.  Can her cousin and his friends get her to drop her tough exterior and reveal the sweet girl underneath?

Thanks to MrsC for the Banner!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 15348
[Report This] Published: August 21, 2008 Updated: January 06, 2009


Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: January 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update!  I love hearing her talk to James.  And the possibilty of James coming to the states to kick some sense into Bella...hell yeah!  Hmmm...I'm thinking James should suprise Bella and that's when the truth should come out.  After all, he seems to really want Bella to enjoy her time in the states and get over this thing that happened so he should be there to push her into telling the others...after he's checked them out to make sure they're alright and treating her as she should be treated.  But that's just my little unimportant opinion! 

Have a great week and a great 2009!

 
Summary:

Life has dealt Edward and Bella their fair share of problems, but just as they begin to get their marriage back on track tragedy strikes. What happens when the only love you have ever known may be taken away? Will the guilt and memories tear you apart or is there something left worth fighting for?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 15516
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2008 Updated: December 30, 2008


Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: At first sight

Oh wow.  This is amazing.  I know it's going to be sad, but I love the well, love and laughter you have infused within.  I look forward to reading more.  Thank you for blessing us with this beautiful story.

 
Summary:

Vampire brothers Edward, Emmett, and Jasper are stuck at age 17 forever.  Unfortunately, though all of them have lived for over 100 years, they have very little experience with dating girls, especially modern ones.  What happens when their vampire powers and inexperience collide?  Will the results prevent them from winning the hearts of the girls they love? 

If you like humor, angst, and edge of your seat, nail-biting cliff hangers, you'll like this story. 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 108776
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2009


Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Rookie Mistakes

I have to take a minute to tell you how much I love this story!  I actually fell out of my chair laughing, not necessarily at Emmett and Rose, but at Mr. Jones!  The speech he gave Emmett was priceless!  Plus, I loved hearing about all the things Rose had done to other guys who had insulted her! 

 You are truly making these characters come alive for me!

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: A Long Day

Yeah for Rosalie's dad!  I would have liked to see Emmett drown Royce, but hey, Rose's dad is the next best thing!  Argh!  Her mom drives me crazy!  ;)

 I love the picture of Lauren and Eric!  Blackmail can be so wonderful!

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Addicted to Love

Heck!  That's a true cliffhanger!  I can't wait to read more!

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Aftermath

OMC!  That's all I have to say.  That's it.  I'm going to read more now!

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Quality of Life

Okay, favorite line EVER has got to be...Edward and Jasper as drag queen strippers...that does the trick.

HaHaHaha!!!! 

 I don't know though, they might make some sexy looking drag queens!

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Sexual Camels

I laughed so hard at this chapter that I fell out of my chair!  I like what I believed was a B&B reference "It's for pride, bragging rights, and an Aston Martin Vanquish"

Such a great story and such a great chapter!  I can't wait for the next.



Author's Response: Thanks.  I checked out a Vanquish, and if I had as much money as the Cullens, I would so have one.  I'm so pleased that you liked it and that it made you smile.  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Waiting for the Other Shoe

I bow down to your writing powers! I completely adore the way you have written Esme, and I don't think I've ever laughed so hard as at the line with Alice mentally bowing down to Esme chanting "I'm not worthy. I'm not worthy."

I never would have guessed Bella and Edward would be the first ones out, but then again, they are both extrememly smart and I should have known they would have figured out a compromise. ;)

I'm eagerly looking forward to more!

This chapter is so a 10, just for Esme's sake!!!!

Author's Response:

Gosh!  I'm not worthy of your compliments!  You make me feel like I'm actually able to write something decent.  Thanks.

The reason why Bella and Edward were able to compromise is that Bella is selfless and she cares nothing about cars.  She'd rather be sucking face with Edward than be a part of any stupid bet, so it was actually very easy for her.  Esme is very proud of her.

Thanks for the 10 rating!  I'm honored! 

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Futures

Great chapter!  I loved seeing the entire family (including Carlisle and Esme) together and interacting, having fun.  I was a bit suprised to see the Volturi come into play, but I do think it will make the story interesting. 

 I am looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks.  I'm glad that you were surprised to see the Volturi make an appearance.  I like surprising you all.  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Delaying the Inevitable

Ok, I am so happy to see Edward and Bella married.  I'm worried about the Volturi and hope that everything will work out in the end.  Ha ha, I loved Edward and Bella joining the Mile High Club (and creating turbulence).  I also liked Bella's vows where she said "I sometimes think I'm living a fictional life because you're a character that seems too good to be true."

Great job!  I'm looking forward to the next chapter. 

Oh!  And I think that the Voltui will find them on the island.  That's my guess.



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it.  Bella just feels that something ominous is looming over the horizon, and she wanted to be Edward's in every way possible.  Bella's gift gives Edward and her the ability to be quite creative in their sex life.  Thanks for reading.

 
New Life by cowza Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 338]
Summary: After their marriage, Bella has disappeared, shattering Edward and the Cullens. When Emmett finds her, alone and pregnant in a strange city, will he and his family be able to make things right?
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 31135
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2008


Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: November 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh!  I'm going to guess that Bella is pregnant with Edward's child and that the Volturi are wanting the baby.  I can't wait to find out if I'm right or not. 

So glad you chose Emmett to be the one to "find" Bella (even though he wasn't looking for her directly).  He is great in the big brother role!

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: November 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You can always count on Emmett to overdo things...if one of something is good, then 10 of that same thing is even better!  He He!  I love Emmett's cluelessness and panic that Bella was starting to panic.  He is so great! Thanks for writing him as such a loveable big guy!

Looking forward to finding out how Bella got pregnant and who is after her and the baby.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: November 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh!  I can't wait for the next chapter!  Is he going to call Carlisle?

Brillant idea about Aro being able to remove memories, hence Bella's future at the clinic and forward being "black" to Alice.  It totally makes sense now why Alice can't see Bella. 

The musings of Emmett as he holds Bella are very beautiful.  For the first time it seems he completely understands Edward's hesitation to change Bella.  He understands Edward's love of her as a human.  But he also is beginning to feel regret that he can't have what Bella and Edward are going to have, a child. 

Very good.  A nice smooth writing style.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: November 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

My favorite line thus far is..Carlisle was a father to the core, and wished he could protect each of his children from pain and heartache."  You have successfully summed up Carlisle's character in one line.  One very touching and truthful line. 

It's great to see Carlisle and Jasper join Emmett and I feel slightly hopeful that this will not escalate into a full out battle.  It would kill me to see one of the Cullens killed. 

I'm looking forward to seeing the next chapter and how Bella convinces them that the baby is in fact Edward's. 

 
Summary: Bella's life was a fairytale until tragedy struck not once, but twice, changing the course of her life forever.  No matter what life throws her way, Bella accepts her life and trudges on.  Now, as she starts college, Bella meets some new friends who try to help her regain her fairytale life.  Will she meet prince charming in the process? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 51114
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2008 Updated: August 27, 2009


Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prolugue

I'm excited about this story.  It has a lot of possability.  So far I have not read another story that is similar so I am excited to see how this progresses and where you decide to take it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliments.  I try to be really original with my plots.  You might like my other two stories too:  Socially Awkward Vampires and Gifted.  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Alice in Wonderland

Very good!  I enjoyed that you wrote Bella with enough strength to leave.  I hate that they took most of her money but she has to start somewhere and leaving is the first step.  I hope she looks up Alice when she gets to Seattle.

Author's Response: There was no way I was leaving Bella in Phoenix with her step-mom.  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: The Cafe

Ok, my absolute favorite line was Alice warning Bella that there is no filter between Emmett's brain and his mouth.  If you only knew how many times that has been said about me.  That line made me laugh so hard I almost fell off my bed. 

I'm happy to see that Bella has opened up and that she has made some friends.  I look forward to seeing what happens next.



Author's Response:

Maybe you should throw some pillows on the floor so that you will have a soft landing--lol!  Glad you like my story.  Thank you.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Fairy God Alice

Aaahhhh!  FANTASTIC!!!!  I'm really impressed, I've never seen an AU/AH that still has Alice seeing the future.  I really like it; it's a nice addition to the story.  Once again, my favorite line was how Alice's gift made Donald Trump look like he shopped at WalMart!  Ha! 

 As for Edward, I think he is "smitten" with Bella and is extremely shy.  That's why he ran.  But, I'll have to read more to find out if I'm right or not. 

 Beautiful job with this story! 



Author's Response: Thanks for all your positive comments.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Wrath of the Pixie

Oohhh...Alice can be mean.  Remind me never to cross her if I meet her in real life.  :)  hehe!  Poor Edward. 

It was good to hear from Edward, to hear about all the torture from him. 

Why do I have the feeling Alice is not going to let up on this?  I wonder why she doesn't just tell him what she has seen in her visions?  I guess I'll just have to wait and find out!



Author's Response: Keep reading--your question will be answered soon.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Dinner

Alright, can I please have Edward?  I really want him!  I want him to pull out my chair for me and to apologize to me when he's being an ass.  *sigh* 

HaHa!  Emmett in women's underware...yep, that's as good as a cold shower for me.  Hehe! 

Your last line is fantastic!  Keep up the excellent writing!



Author's Response: Nope.  Edward's all mine--actually, I'm married to more of an Emmett.  Thanks for the rate and review.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Conspiracy

PERFECT idea of setting Bella up with Jacob so that Edward gets jealous!  Also, I'm happy to see that Alice pulled out the "vision card" and presented it to Edward.  He's a dork for not wanting to persue Bella.  Oh well, he'll learn, I hope.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the whole set-up date thing.  Wait until you read how the actual date goes...

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Midnight Snack

Yep, I loved the line about Edward having "Emmett's disease", no filter between the brain and mouth.  And all the dreams with Edward in his underware in public were fantastic! 

You are doing an increadible job with this story!



Author's Response: Thank you.

 
Reviewer: 3daygirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Crashing Lunch

OH wow!  Yep, I'm gonna be dreaming about that kiss.  That was one hell of a kiss. 

 Edward crashing lunch was fantastic!  It doesn't get better than that!  I wasn't expecting lunch to be the setup but it worked out great that way! 

Oh, and btw...Socially Awkward Vampires is like my #1 favorite story that's not AH! 

I do have to ask though, are you from the south?  Texas perhaps?  (You don't have to say if you don't want to.)



Author's Response: Glad my kiss was hot.  And thanks for the compliments on SAV.  It's my favorite too--the one that takes the least amount of effort for me, at least.  It just sort of happens.  I'm honored that you think so highly of it.  Thank you for reading.

 




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