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Penname: nofangsallowed [Contact]
Real name: Kristi
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Member Since: September 04, 2008
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I'm a wife and mother of 2.  I've always enjoyed writing and would love to write something worthy of being published some day. 


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Snowed In by eclipsedawn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5322]
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Intimacy

They are too sweet together.  I like your Bella's boldness.

 
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Date: February 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Bella's Turn Part I

I hope they break down and discuss their future together.  They are both so smitten.  This is such a cute story--cute and steamy.

 
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Date: February 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Bella's Turn Part II

Hot and sweet at the same time.

 
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Date: March 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Tongue Tied

Is the declaration going to be really romantic?  I'm so girly about this story--seriously.  I love it.  Wonderful writing.

 
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Date: May 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Sweat

Jake is at the door--either that or some of the "rescue" people from the snow storm.  I don't think it's Alice--I hope not.  I love the pixie, but this would be a horrible time for her to show up.

Great story.  I love how he's getting so close to telling her.  She's completely afraid to talk to him because she believes there's no way he's in love with her.  So cannon in their personalities.  Lovely job.

 
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Date: June 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Knock, Knock-Who's there?

I absolutely loathe this character trait in Bella, but you are being cannon with her attitude.  I cannot stand that she feels so unworthy of anything good!  I hate it.  The girl needs therapy and pills for depression.

That being said, please do not think I'm writing anything negative regarding how you've written her.  SM wrote her this way, and I despise that trait in her, but not how you wrote it.  I'm not complaining about what you've written--it's beyond brilliant.  I'm complaining about what SM wrote.  You're just taking it and interpreting it.  I hope that makes sense.

 
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Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Decisons

So sweet!  Yeah!

 
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Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Homecoming

Why did Edward not meet her?  Hmmmm...probably for some sweet, insanely romantic reason, I bet.  Can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Reunion

I bet it's the Twister mat--hehehe!

Such a wonderful story. 

 
Summary:

We always want what we can't have, but their love for each other was so much more than just temptation. He was the eager young teacher, Bella's friend and her inspiration in a high school world where she didn't quite fit. She was the bright young woman who took Edward completely by surprise, his saving grace after years of closing himself off from life and love. When their days are turned upside down by their secret relationship, will they find a way to be together?

 

 

Rated for subject matter and sexually explicit material in later chapters. Huge thanks to Anne Cullen for the awesome new banner and to m81170 the beautiful fan art/banner below! You are both amazing!  

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 64999
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2010


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Boundaries

Wow.  I really like this story.  It's sort of scary, because my husband and I work in education, and while lines have never blurred with us, we've seen it happen on the news and heard of it happening before.  Anyway, at least she's turning 18 soon, and maybe after graduation, they can be together.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much ^_^ And, yeah, I've heard a lot of people tell me about how they know of similar situations. I, myself, know of a couple, but I never thought it was that common. It's crazy. Thanks so much for the review. And I was wondering....totally cool if that's the rating you want to give me, but I noticed that it doesn't matter how goo your review for me is, you always give me 2 1/2 stars. Again, I'm cool with that. i'm not complaining, but I am a little confused, thanks ^_^

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Killing Me Softly

He's trying to save his job and his reputation, because once something like that becomes public, your career is toast.  I get him completely.

Author's Response:

That's exactly what he's tryign to do, but he's also suffering, because through it all, he does love her. Thanks so much for the review!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Words of Wisdom

Wow--that's tough!  I love E/B together, but this scenario is scary.  Thank goodness it's fiction, because I'd side with Emmett.  I did have a friend whose teacher waited until she graduated to ask her out--that's what he should do, but he probably won't, and he'll lose his job.  Hopefully he'll be able to find something outside of education.  Or maybe his family is independently wealthy and can sustain him.

Author's Response:

It is a tricky situation, but I'm trying to make it as non perverse as I can. Thanks so much for reading and thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Pain Killers

Very angsty!  I think it's cool that they love each other and are willing to sacrifice so much--but I hope they get together, eventually--like as soon as she graduates.  Lauren--she's horrible!



Author's Response:

Lauren is evil. And they will b together eventually ^_^

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Dangerous Encounters

Okay.  I know I'm late at this, but I have to apologize.  I rated you low on my first few reviews because I did not understand that a 10 meant 5 stars.  So all those low scores on my earlier reviews should be five stars.  I'm so sorry for that, but in my defense, I didn't know any better.

Your James is so creepy!  And is Edward with Tanya?  Why? 

I like how you've done this.  Look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Haha, read more and you shall see why Edward is with Tanya ;) I figured it was something like that with the stars system, haha. I was really confused for a minute though. I'm glad you explained it ^_^

 
Summary:

Bella and Charlie move to Chicago and into a very old house.  But there's something very different about this place.  What if Edward had died in 1918 and what if he never really left his former home?  Will he finally have a shot at romance after all these years?  And will Bella fall for him?  Rated NC-17 for language and future lemons.  Usual pairings.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, James, Jasper, Laurent, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 61919
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2009


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed
Date: December 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: New Start

I'm very intrigued.  Cool premise--very original!  Love Ghost Hunters too.  I actually have a friend who is one.

 
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Date: December 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Set Up

I know what you mean about J.R.--I just wanted to run my fingers through his delicious hair all during the movie.  And he has a bit of a baby-face, which is my favorite (my hubby has one).  Like that Rose and Jasper are close by.  I guess Bella left Alice in Forks?  Hope she visits.



Author's Response:

Edward is a ghost :-)  And that's so cool how one of your friends is a ghost hunter!  Awesomeness.

Yes, Alice is in Forks.  And yes, Alice is definitely going to visit.  I think she's coming in chapter 9 or 10.  I can't remember offhand.  But a Twilight story wouldn't be the same w/o her!

 

Thanks for reading :-)



Author's Response:

Edward is a ghost :-)  And that's so cool how one of your friends is a ghost hunter!  Awesomeness.

Yes, Alice is in Forks.  And yes, Alice is definitely going to visit.  I think she's coming in chapter 9 or 10.  I can't remember offhand.  But a Twilight story wouldn't be the same w/o her!

 

Thanks for reading :-)

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: A Little Night Music

Is Edward a ghost or a vampire with unusual abilities?  Probably a ghost, but just thought I'd throw it out there.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: A Nice Surprise

I like that he's trying to play tricks on her to get her attention--so sweet.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Big City, Big News

Yeah!  Edward is coming!  Anyway, love this story.  It's very different from anything else I've read. 

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: A Peek Into The Past

I love this story.  It is absolutely original, and I thought your telling of Edward's story was superb!  It was very touching.  Nice job.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Collide

I'm surprised that this Edward is less proper than other men of his time, but then again, he's had ages to think about what 17 year old boys think about.  Anyway, love the story.  Cedric cracked me up. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Yes, though Edward is still a gentleman, he is a 17 year old guy after all.  And he does think about what most 17 year old guys think about LOL.

I'm glad you like the story!  I'll update soon.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: It's About Time!

So Alice is a "ghost hunter"--that should be fun!  Love the story!  I'm glad that Alice will know about Edward.  At least she has someone she can talk to about it.  Wonderful job!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Man Candy

Hmmm...negligee?  Teddie?  Just wondering.

I really love this story.  I hope they eventually find a way to be together, and I'm sure that they will.  He's a little less controlled than a man of his time, but heck--he's been dead a long time, and probably died a virgin--I can understand--lol! 

This is so original and creative.  I'm giving you 110 stars (but it only registers as five--sorry). 



Author's Response:

Yay!  I'm glad you're liking everything! 

LOL yeah, since you guessed...Edward's been fantasizing about Bella in some lingerie and he wants Alice to pick some up for her :-)  This will resurface later, of course.  And yes, Edward also died a virgin...so it's about time he gets in on the action!  The two of them are definitely going to have some fun in the future.

I'll update soon :-)

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: At First Sight

I hope that Rose and co.  aren't too freaked out.  I so like where you are going with this.  Nice job.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Explanations, Emotions...and Handcuffs?

Yeah!  How cool is that!  I'm glad everyone is taking it so well.

 




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