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Penname: nofangsallowed [Contact]
Real name: Kristi
Status: Member
Member Since: September 04, 2008
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I'm a wife and mother of 2.  I've always enjoyed writing and would love to write something worthy of being published some day. 


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Reviews by nofangsallowed
 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Sixty Seconds

I'm glad that she and Edward are talking.  Alice is such a help--helping her to sort things out by just listening.  Nice cliffie.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Tightrope

They are very good at mirroring the book.  I think you are touching on some of the more poorly explained things in Twilight.  You're explanations for their actions go so much deeper, and I love this story for that.  You've captured the reasons why Edward feels the way he does.  Your Bella has so much more strength, for which I am thankful.  I hated how she just took him back in the books--get some self-esteem, girl!  (I'd find myself yelling at the book quite frequently.)  I'm happy on both accounts.  It's good and angsty, and I thought their kiss was well done.

 
Their Singer by SarahJayne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 498]
Summary:

In Twilight, Edward told Bella that if her blood sang to James like it had to Edward, it would've meant a fight right there in the field. What if this was the case? Follow Bella as she is kidnapped and turned by James, and the Cullens' fevered attempts to get her back. Features James/Bella, but this is ultimately an Edward/Bella story. "NC-17" for language, situations, and eventual sexual content.

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Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 34456
[Report This] Published: July 24, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed
Date: September 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

This is one of my favorite fanfics.  You write it so well.  You've made James into a tolerable, complex character.  I always relish the chance to read your updates.  Keep up the fantastic work.

 
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Date: October 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It's hard for me to like the fact that she had feelings for James, just like when she had feelings for Jacob in the books.  You write really well, and I like the story, but it's hard to reconcile certain feelings, which is my problem--not yours.  You're doing great with this story.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

You are definitely a member of the evil writers club.  There's a twelve-step program for people like us--lol!  Anyway, great, gripping story.  Love it!  Love the angst.  It will make things sweeter in the end.  Great job.

Btw, you need a fake, cheesy handlebar mustache and the secret laugh for club entrance--mwuhahaha!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yeah!  Doing the happy dance!

 
Summary:

 

Did you ever wonder why Bella was so comfortable around vampires? After meeting someone she never expected in the clearing after Victoria's death, Bella hears a story and realizes her acceptance of all things supernatural may just....run in the family.

 *Attention - the story has been given a makeover! Chapters have been deleted and it is starting new and fresh and how I wanted it to go - but the idea is still the same, just a little different look.*

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 26708
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2008 Updated: January 12, 2009


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awesome.  I am riveted by this story.  It is so original.

 
Wishing Star by Mystic_Ice24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4551]
Summary:

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After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?

NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.

Winning Summary:

"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight."  With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can.  The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption.  That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope.  The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister.  What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative?  Will Bella's hopes be destroyed?  What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?

Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 12, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

Cute!  More please!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 18, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

Nice cliffie.  Update soon!  Great story.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 22, 2008 Title: Wishing Star

Bringing James back?  That was unexpected.  Will he make another apprearence?

Author's Response: No...that was officially the end of James...had to find a way for her to deal with him.

 
Summary:

When Jasper Whitlock and Alice Masen tied the knot, they hoped their own siblings would have the same happy ending. Jasper's sister, Isabella, was at the peak of her career, leaving very little time for love. Alice's brother, Edward, was in the process of moving thousands of miles in the name of business.

What happens when Jasper and Alice insist on accompanying Edward to Seattle while he finds his new base of operation, all while staying in Isabella's penthouse?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Lauren, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 77087
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2009


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

I don't blame him for being angry.  Just because Jake was an ass doesn't mean Edward will be.  I'm glad he fought with her--she deserved it!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: The End

I just want to slap your Bella!  That girl has no sense! 

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed
Date: July 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Aftermath

I loathe Jake.  Loathe him.  If this story goes towards Jake, I will have to stop reading it.  I'm sorry--just can't stand him.  Nothing personal with your writing style and all.  Just can't handle the dog.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Wedding

I liked the flashback.  The imagery was great.

 
Complications by tiff418 Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary: Edward and Bella's relationship is full of complications. Sometimes they feel like problems are coming at them from all sides. How will they overcome each new issue and maintain their love?
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 14981
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2008 Updated: February 06, 2009


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed
Date: September 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Countdown has begun

This story is such a blast!  Love it!  Very creative!  Can't wait to read more!

 
Warmth by KatieBelle Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 

A running smutline of Edward and Bella's honeymoon . . . and everything afterwards.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 100790
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2008 Updated: March 21, 2011


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Battle

You weren't cheesy.  It was hot and yet cute (the way they fought against one another in their little game had a comical feel to it at times--they were trying to "one up" the other).  The way he loves and cherishes her is so wonderful.  You are doing a great job.

 
Summary: Bella is a newborn vampire in Volterra with no human memories and an aversion to human blood. Aro decides to send her to live with the Cullens. Will Bella ever uncover her past? will she find what she is missing? What is Aro's master plan? Story came in second place for Best Vampire Bella at the Twilight Awards.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 135619
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: November 11, 2008


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstar
Date: October 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Resolve

This story is so cool.  I need to go to the first chapter and figure out what the deal with Felix is.  I hope Edward kicks his tail!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Surprises

Oooo!  Great cliffie!  Love this story!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Lost

This Bella is so annoying.  I know that she is supposed to be totally selfless, but to the point of shunning her family?  Ugh!  Anyway, the storyline is very good, but like I said--she annoys me.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Amor Vincit Omnia

Thank you!  Way to fight, Edward!  I'm just glad that pathetic, self-hating Bella finally got a clue.

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: November 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Rollercoaster

Great chapter.

 
Vesper by dapixam_q Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

E/B alternate universe. The Cullens stayed in Alaska for three more years than in the books, so Bella spends the end of her junior year in Forks without Edward. How will she deal with her inevitable feelings for him when she's already dating Jacob and mostly happy with her life?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jane, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya, Tyler, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 85699
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2008 Updated: December 28, 2008


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Adrenaline (You can Google it)

Ugh!  Bella needs to dump Jake NOW!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Time

Mad?  Ugh!

 
Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12: The Truth

Jasper and Alice so need to be paid back for interrupting!

I like that this Edward seems to really want Bella, and he's a little less controlled.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan meets a beautiful stranger, lawyer Edward Masen on a holiday in Rome. The chemistry is palpable, the sex passionate - and a physical relationship grows into something more. The days fly in a whirlwind of clothes, sand, sex and wine. After a painful realisation that the fantasy has come to an end, Bella returns apprehensively to Seattle, heartbroken at the loss of her love. 


But, little does she know that the 'beautiful stranger' isn't such a stranger, after all.

 

A surprise awaits Bella Swan in Seattle.

 

 

Rated for explicitly detailed sex scenes and language.

 

 

Beautifully accurate banner by the beautifully talented MrsC. Thank you!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 65735
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: September 09, 2009


Reviewer: nofangsallowed Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: October 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: The Life of a Sex God and his Oh-So-Willing Whore

Great story.  I hope it ends up being more than just about sex though--they need to be together.

 




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