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Penname: unpinned grenade [Contact]
Real name: Nicole
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Eternal Dawn by Lizbit Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1322]
Summary:

For so long, Edward has maintained control of the monster within him. When Bella finally entices Edward to bed, the control is lost. Can Edward forgive himself for his weakness and mistake? And more importantly, will the newborn Bella, enraged and utterly lost, forgive him, or turn instead to Jacob who lurks in the shadows?

~A BREAKING DAWN ALTERNATE~

 

 

Eternity without your soul mate feels even longer...


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Heidi, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Marcus, Mike, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Completed: Yes Word count: 133063
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: March 28, 2009


Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Plans

Beautifully vivid, thank you for giving us the chance to read it.

 
Acting Out by eroticfan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 478]
Summary:

A story about the ultimate threesome: Edward, Bella and Jake. They're all juniors in Forks in this AU-human take on things. The story's very NC-17 with Edward and Jake both bi, but it's not PWP - there's actual plot and a fair amount of angst, humor and even occasional fluff, as these three messed-up kids figure out their complicated three-way relationship. Don't be put off if you're not a Jake fan - this story's converted some diehard anti-Jake readers.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 117219
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: July 28, 2009


Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed
Date: March 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Breaking Down

All I can say is WOW! Thanks for giving us the opportunity to become addicted to your lovely fic.

 
When Destiny Calls by Anime Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Sam and Leah had been together since their childhood bloomed into adolescence. They had plans, a future together. A mythical legend passed down through generations rock the core of their existence, shattering everything that they once thought they knew.

Everything changes, but will they and the ones they love survive the pull of the inevitable? What happens when Sam's freedom to choose is taken from him? How will he answer when destiny calls?

Disclaimer: I do not own the photo used above.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Emily, Leah, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 18345
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2009 Updated: June 24, 2009


Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed
Date: April 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Normal

Thank you, thank you for this beautiful portrayl of Sam/Leah. Alot of ppl seem to forget that they were actually in love and deeply devoted to each other before he imprinted. I'll tell you a little secret, your story is one of the only ones that actually brought a tear to my eye....okay okay I actually had to use a couple tissues. Your storytelling makes you feel his love for her, but we all know she's going to get her heart crushed ;-(. I'm really looking forward to more updates, and maybe a happy ending for Leah?



Author's Response:

Aww, my first professed tear! You don't know how much that means to me. =) I'm trying to keep things in canon w/the series since everything's pre-Twilight and all, but who knows? Leah's one of my favorite characters, so it's quite possible that I have her ending up in a happy place. Thanks for reviewing! =)

 
Summary:

Rosalie is content to live her vampire life to its fullest, regardless of her resentment of her immortal situation. One day while hunting she comes across a dying man with an innocent face that she cannot resist. In an act of strength, she brings him home to change him into one of them.

How does the vain and selfish Rosalie deal with an irrational newborn vampire who can’t see past his lust for blood to even notice her? Will she be able to swallow her pride and have the patience to stand by him? Will Emmett be the man who can change her life for the better?

All Chapters are Rosalie's POV

Warning: Rated NC-17 for a reason. Some chapters may contain adult language, violence, assault, and sexual content. Lemons in future chapters.

Thank you to my super-efficient Twilighted Beta, Texbelle!

Got Twitter? Follow Me! @achelle131

V&P Awards and Recognition:

  • Mentioned on The Lazy Yet Discerning Ficster Blog
  • Indie Twific Award Finalist Best Canon (WIP) 
  • Sparkle Awards Alice Award Best PreTwilight Second Place
  • Golden Chocolate Awards Best Rosalie and Emmett Runner Up
  • Rec'd and Reviewed on the Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs Blog

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Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles, The Vanity and Patience Series
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 192931
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2011


Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Sunlight

Thank you. Your story really reads wonderfully, the flow is amazing. I am addicted and practically jump up and down when I see an update. I don't think I've come across a story that captures Emmett or Rosalie so perfectly. And I love that you make her vunerable, a side rarely seen. Can't wait for future installments! Devoted reader, Nicole



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I don't even know what to say! I really cherish this review! Im glad you enjoy the story!

 
Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Lessons

Today started out to be really terrible, that is until I saw your update. Words cannot possibly describe my joy! As always this chapter was wonderful, your story plays out like a movie in my head while I'm reading (hmmm, a Rosalie/Emmett movie based on your storyline? Great potential)! And what a cliffie, will they make it in time? I so can't wait for your next update. Thanks again for turning a frown upside down ;-).

Devoted reader,

Nicole



Author's Response:

Thank you! oh i love to put a smile on your face! Funny that you do say movie! I was thinking the exact same thing!

 
Phases by thejedijoyjoy Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

Nessie Cullen is 6 years old, spontaneous, hormonal, rebellious--and in love with Jacob Black. Rated for language and sexual content in later chapters.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 12091
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2009 Updated: May 03, 2009


Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Great start, I can't wait to read the next chapter, thanks for posting, there aren't enough Jake stories out there ;-)

 
Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 1- Not Normal

Uhh Ohh, caught! Lol I can't wait to see how she charms her way out of this one. Great story, please keep updating.

 
Summary:

Leah Clearwater didn't think her life could get any worse after the love of her life left her. She was wrong. Very Wrong.

Originally started as a one-shot, but developed into a longer story. Couldn't exactly classify it as a one shot, as it has 9 chapters. Loosely linked to "The Dawn Is Already Broken"

Rated NC-17 for language, dark tones, and illegal substance use.

Prelude: Tears welled up in my eyes. I didn’t care if I was branded a sissy for life. How could I not cry? I was watching my sister die. Panic. Complete and utter panic. She was dying, and I couldn’t do a damn thing. I was helpless. This completely sucked.

The Moon's Dark Side

-Thanks for the banner Kathryn!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 34766
[Report This] Published: April 21, 2009 Updated: May 09, 2009


Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed
Date: May 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Screw You, World!

Great first chapter, cant' wait to read the rest!

 
Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Someone kill me please

Oh? Are you going to use your special Jedi powers to keep me from going to the dark side?

I'm still laughing over that one. You have a wicked sense of humor! This story is so well written, and you've captured Leah so well, it's almost uncanny. Can't wait for the update.

 
Summary:

This is an alternative ending to New Moon AU and slightly OOC, for Bella anyway. It starts when Rosalie calls Edward to tell him what Alice saw. Rosalie tells Edward that Bella jumped and that Alice went back to Forks to check on her. Edward decides to come back to find out what is going on. Also, Victoria does not make a newborn army in Seattle...but don't worry about that just yet ;)

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WARNING: This is not a "Jacob is the devil" type of story. Even though it will end up with ExB, if you want to stab Jake, then you probably shouldn't read this fic 'cause I love him and I will not write him as a complete ass.

Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns everything Twilight

Copyright infringment is not intended


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Butterfly Effect
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 64370
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2009 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed
Date: May 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 : EC, phone home

Great first chapter, I'm hooked! Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

:)

 
Summary:


A girl caught between two destinies… She must find the strength to choose.

A boy caught between two worlds… He must find true balance if he is to lead.

 

As if I never existed, Edward Cullen promised when he abandoned Bella Swan. 

But some things can never be undone. 

The vengeance of those left behind.  A father’s quest for redemption.  The obsession of a damned soul.  A love that should have died. 

The sunlight beyond the shadows of twilight. 

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A Jacob/Bella AU FanFic set during the events of New Moon.

 

 

 

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Mad props to xXSizzlingGirlXx and Oceanwaters2006 for the parade of AWESOME banners!


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Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Charlie, Jacob, Jared, Leah, Sam
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 48566
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2009 Updated: December 08, 2009


Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed starstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Bella

Beautiful beginning, I'm so hooked. Hope you updare soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I have the second chapter written - submitted into the queue this evening - with more planned.

 

-- at5115

 
Polar by Witch Hazel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 287]
Summary:

Jackson Rathbone has turned his world upside down and is attracted to a woman who is his polar opposite in every way. Life and outside sources try to tear them down and pull them apart. Is magnetic attraction stronger than vice?

* Lemons ahead. *


Categories: AU-Human, Other Characters: Jackson Rathbone
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 96589
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: March 26, 2010


Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It was REALLY good for me! I love this story, Jackson Rathbone is soo hot. And I like Kate, she seems like the kind of girl you would want as your best friend. Please continue.

Nicole

 
Summary:

 

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A modern day fairytale.

Cupcake store employee, Rosalie, finds herself yearning for tattoo artist, Emmett. One Spring day, fate finally steers Emmett across Rosalie's path.

Written for MsKathy's Twifans 4 Haiti fundraiser.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4023
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2010 Updated: March 08, 2010


Reviewer: unpinned grenade Signed
Date: March 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Cupcake Girl and the Tatooed Boy

Such a cute story, I like this sweet version of Rosalie. There is only one problem though, now I want a cupcake! Thanks for the great read, it's nice to read fluffy goodness.



Author's Response:

Yay! I'm so happy you liked it :) This story made me want to write fluff more often (and I craved cupcakes for a week, lol)





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