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Penname: Ophelia [Contact]
Real name: natalie
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Member Since: August 26, 2008
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Hmmm...well right now I am writing Enigma, and crave reviews for it.  I swear, they really are encouraging!!!  I love Twilight, but cannot say that I place it above all others on the alter I have in my mind for literature. I enjoy old movies, politics, science, reading, ballet, swimming, horseback riding, and I love to learn. I also love reading high-quality fanfiction (although I only aspire to write it, lol)


It's kinda weird, cause I'm applying to Dartmouth and Cornell.....yeah, it's just kinda trippy...


That will be all.


 


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Reviews by Ophelia
 
As Bella Sleeps by blondie Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 73]
Summary: Feature

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This story is a Midnight Sun-type one-shot, that is, Edward's POV of Twilight.

It takes place at between TW14 (Mind over Matter) and TW15 (The Cullens) while Bella sleeps – a peek into Edward’s infatuation, and how he reacts to hearing Bella say 'I love you" for the first time.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: White Night
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 13616
[Report This] Published: May 05, 2008 Updated: May 24, 2008


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: November 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: As Bella Sleeps

Weee!!!  I'm all bursting with pride because I have such an awesome beta!! lol, I loved this!!  hooray for happy edward!!

Author's Response:

*blushes*

Thanks, O!

blondie

 
Brotherhood by blondie, Roo Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary:

The Cullen boys go hunting. Jasper can't stop quoting the Princess Bride, Emmett can't stop quoting Monty Python and the Holy Grail, and Edward, rather put out, responds with Shakespeare. Hilarity ensues! Cowritten with the awesomely funny Roo and the Edward-centric blondie!

Amazingly in canon - believe it or not!


Categories: Eclipse, Crackfic Characters: Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 9835
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2008 Updated: August 04, 2008


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: November 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Inconceivable Midsummer Knight Shrubbery

I lurved it!!!

Author's Response:

8-)  Thanks!

blondie

 
Seducing Ms Swan by Rialle Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3026]
Summary:

 

AU Post-New Moon.

Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or will old ties get in the way?

Edward is convinced that getting Bella back is just a matter of 'persuasion', but Bella isn't prepared to be that cooperative. What's more, she's in the grip of a dark secret which threatens to prevent her from loving ever again.

Bella Swan is slipping under...

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 124383
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2008 Updated: July 25, 2010


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: August 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: The Truth

That was awesome, and you are a cruel woman for leaving for three days! how dare you! lol, I'll just be crying into my beer every night now....  :D

 
Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: August 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: The Truth

sheesh!!!  this is getting insane....and I love it!!!  I can't wait for more!

 
Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: October 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Race Against Time

finally!! woohoo this is getting good!

Author's Response: thank you!

 
Summary:

How it happened. How it began. How it ended and how it was revived. 

This is the story of Esme Cullen. 


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Esme, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 29684
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: February 16, 2009


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: August 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'll be waiting to find out what happens next!

 
Summary:

Jacob Black has had his heart stamped on and he's trying to forget. Danni Robbins is looking for freedom. What happens when a werewolf meets a supernatural hybrid? Is it love? Or is it war? Danger lurks 'round every corner for these two.


Categories: AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Billy, Caius, Carlisle, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jared, Jasper, Leah, Marcus, Other Character, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 10314
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2008 Updated: October 07, 2008


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: October 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Charges and Arguments.

this is awesome! keep writing...

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it.

 
Summary:

Now, I love every single one of the Twilight characters, especially angsty, overprotective Edward, but let's face it - sometimes they can go overboard. This is a parody of the characters' personalities.

 


Categories: Eclipse, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 6030
[Report This] Published: August 26, 2008 Updated: September 19, 2008


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: August 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

haha this is hilarious

 
Summary: Sixty years after the events of Breaking Dawn, the Cullens are returning to Forks following years in Alaska.  But what happens when a very familiar face returns to haunt them, and what if she doesn't remember anything?
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 6118
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2008 Updated: October 28, 2008


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: September 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Leaving Alaska

keep writing!  I was sad when I saw that this was the only chapter up....

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward settle happily into married life at Dartmouth but Bella’s dreams of a mysterious child persist, drawing them into a centuries old deception with devastating consequences.

A Breaking Dawn AU.


Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 75617
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: May 03, 2009


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Bonfire

lol, I love it!!  woohoo for dartmouth!!

Author's Response:

Thank you...and woo-hoo for Dartmouth indeed!

 
Summary: Edward reveling in the joy he has in his new life with Bella and Renesmee. EPOV.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1014
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: November 14, 2008


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: November 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awww!!!  I loved it!! It was tasteful, and completely true to the happy Edward.  bravo!!

 
Summary:

A question from Renesmee leads Bella to reminisce about other times her daughter has asked difficult questions.  About her unique nature, about children... about Jacob.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2965
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: November 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WHAT THE HECK WHY DOES IT STOP???

 

this is so adorable!!!  you should write another one!!!

 
Summary:

Edward is a lonely homesteading cowboy in northern Nevada, Bella is a mail order bride full of secrets.   What happens when Edward discovers her lies?  Can he forgive her? Can she measure up?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 85364
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2008 Updated: December 09, 2008


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: November 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Visitors and Lessons

WOOHOO!!  I have to say, I was skeptical about a frontier Bella and Edward, and I love westerns!  But this is AMAZING!!!  I love it, and you must write more soon!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much and more will be forthcoming soon! 

 
Summary:

When the Cullens encounter a powerful vampire, there lives are turned upside down. The future collides with the past when Renesmee is thrust into a different time zone and wakes up more than just miles away from her home. While striving to make things right again, Bella falls prey to the same fate as her daughter, only this time she doesn't have Edward to help her.

A million and one thanks to Anne Cullen for the amazing banner!

 


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Eclipse, Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 17661
[Report This] Published: November 01, 2008 Updated: January 16, 2009


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: The Truth About Vamps and Dogs

Wow...this is interesting! keep writing!

Author's Response: ^_^ I most definitely will! Thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

Bathroom Gossip 

This is a missing moment from chapter 1 of Twilight. A one-shot fiction from Bella's first day of school as part of my new series...

*An Introduction to Fluff: Twilight* 

Bella finds herself on a whirlwind adventure to the strange and secretive girl's lavatory where she hears some rather shocking gossip.

This is fluff story numero uno in this series of flufftastic missing moments. 


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: An Introduction to Fluff: Twilight
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 756
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2008 Updated: November 18, 2008


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: November 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it!!!!

 
The Cutting of Cords by lofi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 404]
Summary:

 

I stepped back to the table, and grasped her prone hand. It was already measurably cooler, defeating the swirling heat of her dying heart. The coolness subsumed the scar on her hand. I cringed inwardly. Ironically, where James had failed, I would succeed, leeching all heat from her bones...

What she'd begged me for, what I'd refused, was nevertheless happening.

Edward's point of view, beginning on page 351 of Breaking Dawn, from Renesmee's birth, currently up to Bella's arrival home from her first hunt.

 

the cutting of cords

 

 


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 38506
[Report This] Published: November 30, 2008 Updated: August 02, 2009


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Unveiling

I love it!!!!  You have Edward's character down pat, and so far I have yet to encounter something out of place.  PLEASE put another chapter up soon!!!



Author's Response:

Sorry, trying to write faster! (Does it normally take people this long? I can't believe how many pages I've written, though... I never thought I would get this far!)

 
Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: January 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Falling to Fly

ARGH!!  that was not long enough lol!!!  I hope the next one is up soon...  :)



Author's Response:

I'm trying... I know, I suck, I'm slow. I think I'm discovering it easier somehow if I work on two at once, though...

 
Vendetta by mrsz Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

 

I know that many people felt let down by the fight scene and ending to breaking dawn.  I was one of these readers.  I decide to write my own version.  I think it is a good balance between the happy ending that so many wanted, but the action that was needed.  When I posted this intitally I was only considering a one-shot fight scene.  Once I became aware of the opportunity, I decided to see where else the story might take me...

“This is disturbing indeed,” Marcus stated to no one in particular.  “We have little time to prepare our defenses…  We need to flee.  The only reason you won the last battle is because they did not realize your power.  They will not make the same mistake.  We must find refuge until we can develop a better plan.”

Favorite Review so far:

"HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!! That's what I have to say about that!! You did an amazing job with the fight scene and I loved it!!!! When everyone always talked about wanting a better fight, I wanted that too, but I still wanted the Cullens to win!! You did both and I love Bella's abilities. I thought it was great that ***** left the Volturi too!! I look forward to your next chapters, I think you've got something awesome going here!!!!!!!!!!!!"

 

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Categories: AU, Breaking Dawn Characters: Aro, Bella, Caius, Chelsea, Edward, Jacob, Marcus
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 8721
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: February 14, 2009


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: December 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

woohoo!  that was clever, the whole throwing her shield thing...

Author's Response:

Thanks.  Bella is still such a young vampire.  I just couldn't make sense of her fully realizing her ability so quickly.  I imagine she is barely scratching the surface with what she can do.

 
Summary:

 

stories/2326/images/gonebanner.jpgWhat if the wolf pack hadn't interrupted Laurent before he bit Bella?  This is the story of Bella being changed despite Edward leaving her to prevent it from happening.

Rated for later chapters.  Just like in New Moon, Edward will make an appearance eventually!

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 71429
[Report This] Published: December 10, 2008 Updated: November 25, 2009


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Decisions

WOOHOO this is awesome...well, obviously it is painful right now, but you should keep it going!

 
Summary:

An in canon retelling of Breaking Dawn from the perspective of the thoughtful and pensive Edward.

Time passed, and I was blissfully unaware. I existed only in this moment with her. Hope burgeoned deep within me as I gazed at the sleeping enchantress. She was my salvation… my reason for carrying on what I had once believed to be a pointless and cursed existence. Through Bella’s love, I was redeemed. Through her, I’d finally found the peace that had eluded me for so many years. And so it was here, in our bubble, that I remained for as long as time permitted. Lulled into a state of relaxation by the steady pounding of Bella’s heart, and the rhythmic crashing of the waves.

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 34486
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2010


Reviewer: Ophelia Signed
Date: January 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Bachelor Party, Cullen Style

I love it!!!  I can't WAIT for chapter 3!!!





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