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Does anyone else every have an incredibly hard time trying to finish writing the stories you already have up before starting new ones? I am going out of my mind...the wait for Twilighted is just so long...




About Me:


I did somehow manage to make it through high school and walk the stage with my 'offensive' red hair hidden underneath my graduation cap. While resisting the urge to leave my prison of 13 years with both middle fingers in the air, I remained as unnoticed and irrelevant as always. So where is B&C now? Why, on her way to college of course.


Not much has changed really.


I'm flying in the single lane these days since I don't like to be told what to do, and I have a thing for tattooed bad boys... I have, however, recently discovered a very real prejudice against stupidity...but, everyone has some form of poison.


Also attending college with me is my obsession with vampires, namely Twilight and the Vampire Diaries, as well as the countless books I read. Crossing my fingers for Morganville Vampires and Vampire Academy to be in the film media, but we'll see.


I'm sad to admit that the last year or so has left me in a dry state as far as my writing goes. School started it, being so busy with senior year, but now that I'm free I feel...empty. Like nothing is worth writing down anymore...yet I keep this account open. Who knows, maybe a blue moon will pass over?


I still write for the reviewers. How can I know you're reading if you don't tell me? So drop me a message if you're interested in reading more. Maybe the step to fixing my problem is a little motivation :)


If you're still here at this point, then below are a couple of fun facts. I hope you've enjoyed listening to me ramble :)




I absolutely LOVE banners! Especially when people make them for me! So if you have a flare for it, please please make me one, even if I already have one I'll use it :)


About My Stories:


As an important note, my R rated stories are for violence. If you're of a younger audiance, and violence isn't what gets you, then go ahead and give it a try. If  you're of an older audiance, and don't prefer violence, then I strongly suggest against reading. I've often been told I'm twisted.


Although I write stories with Edward and Bella, and maybe even have chapters from their POV, I do not write stories about them. Twilight is about them, I like to shed light on other characters.


My first Twilight fiction was His Little Red Head. It was an idea I got shortly after I finished Breaking Dawn when I wondered what would happen if one of the wolves imprinted on an actual vampire. Seth has always been my favorite wolf and I decided that I'd love to have a story that actually revolved around him. However, romances really aren't my thing. Reading them I like, but writing them? I can never seem to find a good plot line. So pretty much a story that was originally only supposed to be fluff ended up with some action to it. But in all the writing I've done over the years I've never ended a story. This was a first, and I have to admit that the ending kind of sucked. I plan to rewrite this in the future, but I will always leave the original in place.


The Extras for His Little Red Head came around when I got questions asking about Kimmi and what exactly had happened to her in that club. Eventually I decided to go ahead and write it out. Later I was going to do some oneshots on Jace and Alison but I decided that eventually I would just make them their own story someday. The chapters for Extras are written only by request, so let me know if you would like something!


Over The Hills And Far Away...that's an interesting one. Normally I don't go into the AU-Human universe because...it kind of bores me. I need the supernatural aspect or it just seems pointless. And yet that one day I was sitting here listening to that song and thought "this would make a really interesting story..." It didn't turn out quite the way I wanted but I like it nonetheless.


Renesmee's First April Fool's...another interesting one considering the idea for it came in the middle of December. I'm not really sure what I was thinking except that I needed to try my hand at comedy. I think it would be much better as, like, a mini-movie or something but at least I can say I tried.


And then there's Renesmee's First Christmas which I wrote in October. Seriously, what is wrong with me? But I had actually written it for an iFic competition which I decided at the last moment that I was too chicken to actually enter. For some reason it was still good enough to post...


What She's Forgotten... This was the very first Pre-Twilight fiction I ever did and I poured over pages and pages of research to get it just right. Originally I had planned to make it really dark but when Elliot's character developed it didn't end up that way. This fiction was my favorite to write, and Elliot became one of my favorite characters of all, and I seriously almost cried when I had to end it. Originally, I wanted to write out Elliot's death scene at the last of the 12th chapter but I just couldn't bring myself to do it. I liked him way too much for that. And I thank Javamomma0921 again for liking it enough to rec it on Twimpage. (Speaking of Twimpage, if you haven't seen it you should really check it out)


A BIG thank you to qjmom for being the beta of these stories!


I've always wanted to do a Leah story but I've shyed away from it because I never really thought I could get her character down. And yet I still felt the need to write Something To Live For. Shane I love. He is such a joy to write and he makes me laugh out loud sometimes. Of course, I get to hear all of his jokes because I'm in his head...or he's in mine, one of the two. And sadly most of the good stuff never quite makes it into the story. Although I really tried not to, Leah turned out OCC. I didn't mean for it to happen and yet it did, but I tied it into the story plot, blaming her good attitudes on Shane and hoping no one would get to mad at me...


Thank you, psymom, for being the beta of this story :)


And now to talk about my newest story, My (Imaginary) Best Friend. The idea for this story actually came to mind while I was writing a completely different one. I was stuck momentarily and drifted off to dream land and suddenly I thought: I want to write something new. Something with ghosts. Something where...Renesmee befriends a ghost! Just like that episode of Supernatural where Tyler befriended Maggie! And then, just like that, the story planned itself out in moments. My (Coporeal) Best Friend is the parallel to this one, told in the ghosts point of view. The chapters go hand in hand, so I think it offers and interesting look.


Thank you, therunaway, for getting these stories on here, and a HUGE thank you to AngelGoddess1981 for having the faith to pick them up on chapter 10. Don't know what I'd do without her :)




***Favorite Quotes***


Story: The Wedding
By: Valelf
(Embry talking about his relationship with Leah)
"I'm not wrong. I know this is right. I know that we are meant to be together.
 And I know that eventually, we will have a family together. I told her I don't care
 how long it takes and how many times we have to try. And until she stops phasing, we're going to have one hell of a time practicing."


Story: I Am A Revolution
By: Forever17
I couldn't help but think that his town seemed far too small for such a large amount of evil.


Story: A Matter of Time
By: duskwatcher
(Edward's reaction to Renesmee and Jacob's relationship)
"I thing he broke my nose," Jacob complained.
"He bit me!" Dad retorted.
"You taste tewwible."
"I certainly hope so."


Story: A New Morning
By: LJ Summers
"I have it on good authority that we're still thousands of miles away from
a certain mind-reading vampire..."


Story: Supernova
By: Suzybear
If I had a heart, it would have broken.


Story: Purgatory
By: Spaniard
(Edward's thoughts as Rosalie goes after her attackers)
I watched her go with a secret longing of my own, wishing her happy hunting.


Story: Breaking News
By: Justine Lark
(A random students thought when Bella and Edwads engagement is announced)
My boyfriend wouldn't marry me if I held a gun to his head.


Story: Bruce Springsteen's Leah
By:
fictionfan


Oh, and by the way, everyone you've ever known thought you were gay before today.”


 


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Reviews by blood-and-chocolate
 
Summary:

 

Thank you Ava Heartly for the awesome banner!

 

Best Jacob and Renesmee Winner, Twilight Twins Award

A TLYDF recommendation, June 7, 2009 . Check out their great blog here: http://discerningficster.blogspot.com/

Winner of Best Imprint, Silent Tear Awards http://silent-tear-awards.webs.com/

Most Suspenseful, 3rd Place, Wolfpack Awards

Two weeks and the whole world can change. Caius and Jane led an insurrection against Aro and are making a mad power grab.  Renegades from the wolf pack, unhappy with the treaty with the Cullens, are attacking vampires at every opportunity.  Jacob and Renesmee are struggling with the paradox of imprinting.  Edward, Bella and all the Cullens must come together to protect the world they've come to love.

A tale of action, deceit, intrigue and sexual awakening.  


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Caius, Edward, Jacob, Jane, Other Character, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 78200
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: July 12, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Red Eyes

Well, I have to admit I'm really glad she managed to get away. And poor Jake, so hurt :(

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Reunion

*Is hoping Rosalie is ok*

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Phase

I'm really enjoying this story :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Lies

Well, I have to admit I'm really glad she found it out on her own

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Meeting

I have to admit the very last to paragraphs of this chapter are my favorite so far :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Sparkling Water

Well FINALLY. Ha ha

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Chase

Omg, your right, there is a review box right down here. Lol, I liked this chapter. So close and yet so far away...

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Mistakes

Wow, the last part of that was intense

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Roc's Cave

talk about a rough day, huh?

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Something Taken Something Given

Wow...I was not expecting that

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Another Conversation At Night

Lol, the tree jumped out in front of her. Ha ha, I have to admit i enjoyed that argument

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Play Ball!

Well I guess theres a good plan to get Bella out of the fight. Didn't work, but a very good thought on the writers behalf. Interesting that Jane wasn't there. You do a very good job at building your plot up, keeps me guessing and interested.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Flight

WAHOO! Go Nessie! *Does happy dance*

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Another Chase

Lol, oddly enough I think the Jacob and Edward interaction in this chapter is my favorite part of this whole story. Hope you don't mind if I use it as a favorite quote.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Wedding

Well, a very good ending :)

 
Choice by eibbil Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

Six years have passed since BD and Renesmee is now a young woman. Due to an agreement b/w Edward, Bella and Jacob, Ness has no idea that Jacob imprinted on her. Jacob left the choice to her. Now she's of age...what will she choose?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 28509
[Report This] Published: March 28, 2009 Updated: August 18, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes I want to see more of it! (which is good considering your a few chapters in already, ha ha)

I'd like to compliment you on your writing skills, very very good. You did well with the personalities too.

Can't wait to read more :)

This is so going in my favorites.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wanna know what she wished too! Lol. Still loving it :) Still very good.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Have to admit by the way you described that wait I'm glad I just started reading. Ha ha. Still hooked, loving it.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I figure now would be a good time to tell you that I love reviews. Love getting them, love leaving them, so be expecting one from me for every chapter. Ha Ha.

Still loving this. This chapter was rather funny actually (Jacob and Edward I mean) looking forward to the rest

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

love it love it love it. Love that she wished jake was jealous, lol, can't wait for the next one. Absolutely cant

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am so in love with this story. Very well writen, emotions were well discribed, it was wonderful. Cannot wait for the next one.

 
Summary:

Three days will change the course of Leah Clearwater's life forever...

Before Leah can finally move on and leave the ghosts of her past behind her, she must confront them one last time.  Along the way, she may learn some surprising things about the people closest to her and perhaps even herself.

This is the final installment of my Leah miniseries and follows the one shots Independence Day and A Day Without Rain.

One Day I'll Fly Away

 

 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Emily, Jacob, Leah, Sam
Challenges:
Series: Three Days of Leah
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 13311
[Report This] Published: April 23, 2009 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really good. I've loved reading your Leah miniseries and I'm really sad this is the end, lol, you write her so well. I really really REALLY hope you'll return to her one day.

 
Comforting Winds by Rowzy Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

It's been awhile since Harry's death, and now Sue has died too. Billy agrees to take in Seth and Leah. But when Leah refuses to confront her feelings of grief, who will be able to help her? Jake/Leah All Human


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2003
[Report This] Published: April 25, 2009 Updated: May 04, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One shot

This was great. I'm really sad it ended here though, would've been nice to see more but it was a very good oneshot.

 
Summary:

Imprint me banner

Set after Breaking Dawn, the ongoing story of Renesmee and Jacob, Bella and Edward, and all the Cullens.  Coming of age is hard enough, but half-bred Nessie faces choices no human should have to make.  Romance, angst, drama, all the stuff you love from Twilight!  Read and enjoy, feedback is awesome, flaming makes me cry! XD


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 47930
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This chapter is really good. Well writen and already giving a hint of Jacob and Nessie's relationship. I can't wait to finish it. I'm favoriting it already

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You write very well, everything flows smoothly and I am really enjoying reading it. I like Nessie's charactor thus far :)

 




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