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Does anyone else every have an incredibly hard time trying to finish writing the stories you already have up before starting new ones? I am going out of my mind...the wait for Twilighted is just so long...




About Me:


I did somehow manage to make it through high school and walk the stage with my 'offensive' red hair hidden underneath my graduation cap. While resisting the urge to leave my prison of 13 years with both middle fingers in the air, I remained as unnoticed and irrelevant as always. So where is B&C now? Why, on her way to college of course.


Not much has changed really.


I'm flying in the single lane these days since I don't like to be told what to do, and I have a thing for tattooed bad boys... I have, however, recently discovered a very real prejudice against stupidity...but, everyone has some form of poison.


Also attending college with me is my obsession with vampires, namely Twilight and the Vampire Diaries, as well as the countless books I read. Crossing my fingers for Morganville Vampires and Vampire Academy to be in the film media, but we'll see.


I'm sad to admit that the last year or so has left me in a dry state as far as my writing goes. School started it, being so busy with senior year, but now that I'm free I feel...empty. Like nothing is worth writing down anymore...yet I keep this account open. Who knows, maybe a blue moon will pass over?


I still write for the reviewers. How can I know you're reading if you don't tell me? So drop me a message if you're interested in reading more. Maybe the step to fixing my problem is a little motivation :)


If you're still here at this point, then below are a couple of fun facts. I hope you've enjoyed listening to me ramble :)




I absolutely LOVE banners! Especially when people make them for me! So if you have a flare for it, please please make me one, even if I already have one I'll use it :)


About My Stories:


As an important note, my R rated stories are for violence. If you're of a younger audiance, and violence isn't what gets you, then go ahead and give it a try. If  you're of an older audiance, and don't prefer violence, then I strongly suggest against reading. I've often been told I'm twisted.


Although I write stories with Edward and Bella, and maybe even have chapters from their POV, I do not write stories about them. Twilight is about them, I like to shed light on other characters.


My first Twilight fiction was His Little Red Head. It was an idea I got shortly after I finished Breaking Dawn when I wondered what would happen if one of the wolves imprinted on an actual vampire. Seth has always been my favorite wolf and I decided that I'd love to have a story that actually revolved around him. However, romances really aren't my thing. Reading them I like, but writing them? I can never seem to find a good plot line. So pretty much a story that was originally only supposed to be fluff ended up with some action to it. But in all the writing I've done over the years I've never ended a story. This was a first, and I have to admit that the ending kind of sucked. I plan to rewrite this in the future, but I will always leave the original in place.


The Extras for His Little Red Head came around when I got questions asking about Kimmi and what exactly had happened to her in that club. Eventually I decided to go ahead and write it out. Later I was going to do some oneshots on Jace and Alison but I decided that eventually I would just make them their own story someday. The chapters for Extras are written only by request, so let me know if you would like something!


Over The Hills And Far Away...that's an interesting one. Normally I don't go into the AU-Human universe because...it kind of bores me. I need the supernatural aspect or it just seems pointless. And yet that one day I was sitting here listening to that song and thought "this would make a really interesting story..." It didn't turn out quite the way I wanted but I like it nonetheless.


Renesmee's First April Fool's...another interesting one considering the idea for it came in the middle of December. I'm not really sure what I was thinking except that I needed to try my hand at comedy. I think it would be much better as, like, a mini-movie or something but at least I can say I tried.


And then there's Renesmee's First Christmas which I wrote in October. Seriously, what is wrong with me? But I had actually written it for an iFic competition which I decided at the last moment that I was too chicken to actually enter. For some reason it was still good enough to post...


What She's Forgotten... This was the very first Pre-Twilight fiction I ever did and I poured over pages and pages of research to get it just right. Originally I had planned to make it really dark but when Elliot's character developed it didn't end up that way. This fiction was my favorite to write, and Elliot became one of my favorite characters of all, and I seriously almost cried when I had to end it. Originally, I wanted to write out Elliot's death scene at the last of the 12th chapter but I just couldn't bring myself to do it. I liked him way too much for that. And I thank Javamomma0921 again for liking it enough to rec it on Twimpage. (Speaking of Twimpage, if you haven't seen it you should really check it out)


A BIG thank you to qjmom for being the beta of these stories!


I've always wanted to do a Leah story but I've shyed away from it because I never really thought I could get her character down. And yet I still felt the need to write Something To Live For. Shane I love. He is such a joy to write and he makes me laugh out loud sometimes. Of course, I get to hear all of his jokes because I'm in his head...or he's in mine, one of the two. And sadly most of the good stuff never quite makes it into the story. Although I really tried not to, Leah turned out OCC. I didn't mean for it to happen and yet it did, but I tied it into the story plot, blaming her good attitudes on Shane and hoping no one would get to mad at me...


Thank you, psymom, for being the beta of this story :)


And now to talk about my newest story, My (Imaginary) Best Friend. The idea for this story actually came to mind while I was writing a completely different one. I was stuck momentarily and drifted off to dream land and suddenly I thought: I want to write something new. Something with ghosts. Something where...Renesmee befriends a ghost! Just like that episode of Supernatural where Tyler befriended Maggie! And then, just like that, the story planned itself out in moments. My (Coporeal) Best Friend is the parallel to this one, told in the ghosts point of view. The chapters go hand in hand, so I think it offers and interesting look.


Thank you, therunaway, for getting these stories on here, and a HUGE thank you to AngelGoddess1981 for having the faith to pick them up on chapter 10. Don't know what I'd do without her :)




***Favorite Quotes***


Story: The Wedding
By: Valelf
(Embry talking about his relationship with Leah)
"I'm not wrong. I know this is right. I know that we are meant to be together.
 And I know that eventually, we will have a family together. I told her I don't care
 how long it takes and how many times we have to try. And until she stops phasing, we're going to have one hell of a time practicing."


Story: I Am A Revolution
By: Forever17
I couldn't help but think that his town seemed far too small for such a large amount of evil.


Story: A Matter of Time
By: duskwatcher
(Edward's reaction to Renesmee and Jacob's relationship)
"I thing he broke my nose," Jacob complained.
"He bit me!" Dad retorted.
"You taste tewwible."
"I certainly hope so."


Story: A New Morning
By: LJ Summers
"I have it on good authority that we're still thousands of miles away from
a certain mind-reading vampire..."


Story: Supernova
By: Suzybear
If I had a heart, it would have broken.


Story: Purgatory
By: Spaniard
(Edward's thoughts as Rosalie goes after her attackers)
I watched her go with a secret longing of my own, wishing her happy hunting.


Story: Breaking News
By: Justine Lark
(A random students thought when Bella and Edwads engagement is announced)
My boyfriend wouldn't marry me if I held a gun to his head.


Story: Bruce Springsteen's Leah
By:
fictionfan


Oh, and by the way, everyone you've ever known thought you were gay before today.”


 


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Reviews by blood-and-chocolate
 
Purgatory by spaniard Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 357]
Summary:

Seven original members of the Olympic Coven, and seven deadly sins. Coincidence? Edward has lived too long to believe in coincidences.

He reluctantly relays the deaths and subsequent turnings of each member of his family to his new bride. Each death represents a deadly sin.

An astounding amount of praise and thanks to MrsC for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 42807
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2008 Updated: June 03, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Sloth (3)

Well, the ending was..,beautiful. I've said that alot about this story so far but it's always ture. Jasper and Edward are next (I think) can't wait.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Third Level

Gluttony. It didn't dawn on me until now just how perfect that sin is for Jasper.

 
Summary:

Jacob holds Renesmee for the first time, and discovers her power firsthand. Written from Jacob's POV.

Written for the 'Breaking Dawn Missing Moments' contest.

Surprise Runner Up


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1739
[Report This] Published: August 18, 2008 Updated: August 18, 2008


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was very very good :)



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, I'm glad you liked it!!

 
Summary: “In another time from another vampire, the lack of immediate curiosity would have been frightening, but here, with her, it seemed almost as if her look was a familiar caress from a long lost lover.” -- Jasper stumbles upon Alice and never looks back.
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1116
[Report This] Published: October 06, 2008 Updated: October 08, 2008


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked it alot. Very good

 
A Day Without Rain by Avalonia Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

Reeling from yet another heartache, Leah spends the day with someone unexpected and ponders what's to come next. Takes place shortly after the end of Breaking Dawn. The second of three days that will alter Leah's destiny.

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward, Jacob, Leah, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: Three Days of Leah
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6793
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2008 Updated: October 14, 2008


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Day Without Rain

Wow wow wow. I really really LOVE the way you write Leah. I'm so sad there's only one more oneshot. I wish it was a novel, lol.

 
Summary:

Leah 

Leah Clearwater is someone who has always been left behind. Her father is gone, her Sam has moved on and her body has betrayed her. Where is her happily ever after? When dawn broke the Twilight world changed, but not for Leah. Thanks to the Cullens she is stuck in limbo between barely a woman and sort of a wolf. Will she ever find a way to live in peace with the vampires she has come to blame for her unhappiness? Will an unexpected friendship save her when she finally finds love in the most desperate of circumstances? Can you ever truly be fixed once you've been broken?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Leah, Nessie, Other Character, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 38177
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2008 Updated: May 04, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Can You Say Anaphylactic Shock?

Well, about time i review on this now that I have an account. So, I've been reading this since you like very first posted (well, you were three chapters in) and now review time! Well, I really don't know what to say....but...I like it alot, don't stop, you have me hooked ^-^ (<-supposed to be like a really happy face...or something. Next time I'll leave...I dunno...a bunny. lol)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Smelling, Yelling, and Sappy Sunrises

YAY an update!!!! I was so scared that you, like, weren't gunna continue this and I LOVE it! Thanks :) more please (but no rush...lol)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: These Days That Last A Lifetime

Loved it. Love the way you discribed it and evyerthing. Very well written

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: May 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Being Immortal Ain't Easy

oh...wow...that was...wow

Loved it

Love the whole story

wow

 
Summary:

A question from Renesmee leads Bella to reminisce about other times her daughter has asked difficult questions.  About her unique nature, about children... about Jacob.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2965
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aw, this was soooo cute. And very well written, it flowed very nicely.

 
Summary:

 

 

 

After weeks of Emmett teasing Bella, she plans to give him back a little of what he's been dishing out.  This time, Emmett may have bitten off more than he can chew.

 

 

Family humour.  Various POVs. 

 

 

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Thank you, Blondie, for the awesome banner . . . and the instructions on how to use it!

 

 

 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 31879
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2008 Updated: November 21, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Instigator

Give your daughter a golden star (doesn't matter how old she is, everyone loves stars lol)

This was an awesome chapter and I'm still looking forward to the chapters though it has been awhile. I was laughing almost constantly. Sometimes this story just makes my day :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: May 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Things Get Out of Hand

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhho  please please please update soon!!!!!

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: July 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Busted

Lol loved it! and I'm so glad this isn't the end.

 
Breaking News by Justine Lark Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

The day Bella and Edward tell everyone at school they're getting married from Edward's POV. Will Edward like what Jessica, Mike, Angela and others are thinking?


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Jessica, Mike
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2660
[Report This] Published: November 18, 2008 Updated: November 18, 2008


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol this was actually amusing, and close to reality. Well done.

 
Summary:

There is more than one way to start over.

 

Rated rather generously for Mr. McCarty's mouth...

[BxE]

 

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Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 824
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: November 26, 2008


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh I totally loved this! very good, very well written, just good. Loved Emmett, by the way.

 
Vendetta by mrsz Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

 

I know that many people felt let down by the fight scene and ending to breaking dawn.  I was one of these readers.  I decide to write my own version.  I think it is a good balance between the happy ending that so many wanted, but the action that was needed.  When I posted this intitally I was only considering a one-shot fight scene.  Once I became aware of the opportunity, I decided to see where else the story might take me...

“This is disturbing indeed,” Marcus stated to no one in particular.  “We have little time to prepare our defenses…  We need to flee.  The only reason you won the last battle is because they did not realize your power.  They will not make the same mistake.  We must find refuge until we can develop a better plan.”

Favorite Review so far:

"HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!! That's what I have to say about that!! You did an amazing job with the fight scene and I loved it!!!! When everyone always talked about wanting a better fight, I wanted that too, but I still wanted the Cullens to win!! You did both and I love Bella's abilities. I thought it was great that ***** left the Volturi too!! I look forward to your next chapters, I think you've got something awesome going here!!!!!!!!!!!!"

 

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Categories: AU, Breaking Dawn Characters: Aro, Bella, Caius, Chelsea, Edward, Jacob, Marcus
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 8721
[Report This] Published: December 02, 2008 Updated: February 14, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: May 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This was really freaking AWESOME!!! About time we get in that fight scene that we all so needed. I'll be reading the next part to. Thanks for writing :)

 
Desperation by sweetishbubble Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 266]
Summary:

What would happen if Jasper got to Bella in New Moon at her birthday party?

**FEATURED ON THE TWIGASM PODCAST 5/18/10.

Banner by Anne Cullen

banner by:  WillBeAWriterSomeday


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Gianna, Jasper, Phil, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 28403
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: February 20, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When I read the summery to this i was sure that Bella would've changed. I was not expecting her to die at all.

You have written this wonderfully. The emotion is gripping. I look foward to reading the rest.

 
Summary:

"That was when Claire just let go, collapsing in my arms and sobbing."

A five-year-old Claire turns to Quil in her time of need.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Claire, Quil
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1537
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2008 Updated: January 03, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohmigosh! I cannot even begin to discribe how much i loved this! It was sooooooo cute...no, so adorable! and very well written, by the way. I loved loved loved LOVED it.

 
Quiet by umbrellas_can Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Jasper was, by nature, a quiet person.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 900
[Report This] Published: January 08, 2009 Updated: January 09, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Quiet (One-Shot)

So sweet. I love it :)

 
The Wedding by valelf Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 734]
Summary:

The Wedding banner

Thank you MegsD for the beautiful banner!

Jacob Black is getting married. As he's waiting anxiously for his bride to join him, he remembers some of the key moments of their relationship. Join Jacob as he reminisces about the good times and the bad: when Nessie was first born, how he watched over her as a little girl, what they went through when she matured and suddenly everything changed, falling in love, jealousy, misunderstandings, dealing with the reactions of family and friends, asking the big question, and so much more.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: No Word count: 74565
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2009 Updated: March 04, 2010


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue, Chapter 1: Renesmee

This is really good. Very well writen. You've got me hooked.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it!

Val

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Tea Party from Hell (v)

Lol :) very funny. Ah, those poor poor boys...lol



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm glad you thought it was funny! Can't you just see them with the big, flowery hats on? Thanks!

Val

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Separations & Temper Tantrums (v)

Lol that was great!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Val

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 The Wheel's Spinning, But the Hamster's Dead (v)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. That was so sad. but really good. very good.



Author's Response:

Yeah, the end was sad. But, I couldn't imagine Nessie just blindly accepting the whole imprinting thing. She seems like she would be the type of person to stop and think about things first. Thank you!

Val

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Oh Crap, There Goes Any Chance I Had (v)

And again this was great.

the ending was funny



Author's Response:

Thank you! Jake needs to learn to never be surprised by anything that comes out of her mouth. She is constantly keeping him on his toes.

Val

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Charlie's Got A Gun

Still lovin it :)



Author's Response:

Yay! Thanks!

Val

 




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