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Does anyone else every have an incredibly hard time trying to finish writing the stories you already have up before starting new ones? I am going out of my mind...the wait for Twilighted is just so long...




About Me:


I did somehow manage to make it through high school and walk the stage with my 'offensive' red hair hidden underneath my graduation cap. While resisting the urge to leave my prison of 13 years with both middle fingers in the air, I remained as unnoticed and irrelevant as always. So where is B&C now? Why, on her way to college of course.


Not much has changed really.


I'm flying in the single lane these days since I don't like to be told what to do, and I have a thing for tattooed bad boys... I have, however, recently discovered a very real prejudice against stupidity...but, everyone has some form of poison.


Also attending college with me is my obsession with vampires, namely Twilight and the Vampire Diaries, as well as the countless books I read. Crossing my fingers for Morganville Vampires and Vampire Academy to be in the film media, but we'll see.


I'm sad to admit that the last year or so has left me in a dry state as far as my writing goes. School started it, being so busy with senior year, but now that I'm free I feel...empty. Like nothing is worth writing down anymore...yet I keep this account open. Who knows, maybe a blue moon will pass over?


I still write for the reviewers. How can I know you're reading if you don't tell me? So drop me a message if you're interested in reading more. Maybe the step to fixing my problem is a little motivation :)


If you're still here at this point, then below are a couple of fun facts. I hope you've enjoyed listening to me ramble :)




I absolutely LOVE banners! Especially when people make them for me! So if you have a flare for it, please please make me one, even if I already have one I'll use it :)


About My Stories:


As an important note, my R rated stories are for violence. If you're of a younger audiance, and violence isn't what gets you, then go ahead and give it a try. If  you're of an older audiance, and don't prefer violence, then I strongly suggest against reading. I've often been told I'm twisted.


Although I write stories with Edward and Bella, and maybe even have chapters from their POV, I do not write stories about them. Twilight is about them, I like to shed light on other characters.


My first Twilight fiction was His Little Red Head. It was an idea I got shortly after I finished Breaking Dawn when I wondered what would happen if one of the wolves imprinted on an actual vampire. Seth has always been my favorite wolf and I decided that I'd love to have a story that actually revolved around him. However, romances really aren't my thing. Reading them I like, but writing them? I can never seem to find a good plot line. So pretty much a story that was originally only supposed to be fluff ended up with some action to it. But in all the writing I've done over the years I've never ended a story. This was a first, and I have to admit that the ending kind of sucked. I plan to rewrite this in the future, but I will always leave the original in place.


The Extras for His Little Red Head came around when I got questions asking about Kimmi and what exactly had happened to her in that club. Eventually I decided to go ahead and write it out. Later I was going to do some oneshots on Jace and Alison but I decided that eventually I would just make them their own story someday. The chapters for Extras are written only by request, so let me know if you would like something!


Over The Hills And Far Away...that's an interesting one. Normally I don't go into the AU-Human universe because...it kind of bores me. I need the supernatural aspect or it just seems pointless. And yet that one day I was sitting here listening to that song and thought "this would make a really interesting story..." It didn't turn out quite the way I wanted but I like it nonetheless.


Renesmee's First April Fool's...another interesting one considering the idea for it came in the middle of December. I'm not really sure what I was thinking except that I needed to try my hand at comedy. I think it would be much better as, like, a mini-movie or something but at least I can say I tried.


And then there's Renesmee's First Christmas which I wrote in October. Seriously, what is wrong with me? But I had actually written it for an iFic competition which I decided at the last moment that I was too chicken to actually enter. For some reason it was still good enough to post...


What She's Forgotten... This was the very first Pre-Twilight fiction I ever did and I poured over pages and pages of research to get it just right. Originally I had planned to make it really dark but when Elliot's character developed it didn't end up that way. This fiction was my favorite to write, and Elliot became one of my favorite characters of all, and I seriously almost cried when I had to end it. Originally, I wanted to write out Elliot's death scene at the last of the 12th chapter but I just couldn't bring myself to do it. I liked him way too much for that. And I thank Javamomma0921 again for liking it enough to rec it on Twimpage. (Speaking of Twimpage, if you haven't seen it you should really check it out)


A BIG thank you to qjmom for being the beta of these stories!


I've always wanted to do a Leah story but I've shyed away from it because I never really thought I could get her character down. And yet I still felt the need to write Something To Live For. Shane I love. He is such a joy to write and he makes me laugh out loud sometimes. Of course, I get to hear all of his jokes because I'm in his head...or he's in mine, one of the two. And sadly most of the good stuff never quite makes it into the story. Although I really tried not to, Leah turned out OCC. I didn't mean for it to happen and yet it did, but I tied it into the story plot, blaming her good attitudes on Shane and hoping no one would get to mad at me...


Thank you, psymom, for being the beta of this story :)


And now to talk about my newest story, My (Imaginary) Best Friend. The idea for this story actually came to mind while I was writing a completely different one. I was stuck momentarily and drifted off to dream land and suddenly I thought: I want to write something new. Something with ghosts. Something where...Renesmee befriends a ghost! Just like that episode of Supernatural where Tyler befriended Maggie! And then, just like that, the story planned itself out in moments. My (Coporeal) Best Friend is the parallel to this one, told in the ghosts point of view. The chapters go hand in hand, so I think it offers and interesting look.


Thank you, therunaway, for getting these stories on here, and a HUGE thank you to AngelGoddess1981 for having the faith to pick them up on chapter 10. Don't know what I'd do without her :)




***Favorite Quotes***


Story: The Wedding
By: Valelf
(Embry talking about his relationship with Leah)
"I'm not wrong. I know this is right. I know that we are meant to be together.
 And I know that eventually, we will have a family together. I told her I don't care
 how long it takes and how many times we have to try. And until she stops phasing, we're going to have one hell of a time practicing."


Story: I Am A Revolution
By: Forever17
I couldn't help but think that his town seemed far too small for such a large amount of evil.


Story: A Matter of Time
By: duskwatcher
(Edward's reaction to Renesmee and Jacob's relationship)
"I thing he broke my nose," Jacob complained.
"He bit me!" Dad retorted.
"You taste tewwible."
"I certainly hope so."


Story: A New Morning
By: LJ Summers
"I have it on good authority that we're still thousands of miles away from
a certain mind-reading vampire..."


Story: Supernova
By: Suzybear
If I had a heart, it would have broken.


Story: Purgatory
By: Spaniard
(Edward's thoughts as Rosalie goes after her attackers)
I watched her go with a secret longing of my own, wishing her happy hunting.


Story: Breaking News
By: Justine Lark
(A random students thought when Bella and Edwads engagement is announced)
My boyfriend wouldn't marry me if I held a gun to his head.


Story: Bruce Springsteen's Leah
By:
fictionfan


Oh, and by the way, everyone you've ever known thought you were gay before today.”


 


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Reviews by blood-and-chocolate
 
Latent Prints by Cerena Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

 

Six-year-old Nessie has led a life so sheltered that her first day of high school is cause for giddiness, her rapid aging so far having kept her confined to her family circle. But just when she's starting to worry that her strangeness will keep her cloistered up forever, she witnesses a tragic event and starts to accumulate life experience fast. The event forces Leah to come home from a stint as a ranger up in the Yukon, and she and Nessie click as freaks who wish they could be more normal. Their mutual understanding quickly starts evolving into something more, but the problem is that each considers Jake to be her best and oldest friend. Nessie knows that Jake is powerfully attached to her, though she doesn't know just how powerfully, and neither she nor Leah knows how to keep him from getting badly hurt. 

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Angela, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah, Nessie, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: Leah in Love
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 82995
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: October 24, 2010


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Love and Friendship

YAY AN UPDATE!

ok Ima actually go read it now :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Love and Friendship

Sorry, I don't mean to have a coversation in your reviews...

I can access them it's just on a personal level that I don't, mostly because I don't want to land myself in something too serious. I don't blame you at all for leaving the line in if you liked it, I was just disappointed. I really didn't want to stop reading this, lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know how you feel about this--I hear all about Twific readers wanting mucho smut, which isn't really my writing style, but that's why I didn't hesitate to up the rating for safety. The story, in my head, is not getting any more 'serious' than the previous chapters, and I'm happy to remove the body fluids reference if my readers are really not into that kind of thing. I want everyone who likes the story so far to be comfortable reading the rest of it!

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Awakening

Well, you were definatly right, this is the longest one so far. I was relieved to see the rating go back down, but apologize for making you take out that line *guilty smile*

Good chapter. I think the way you wrote the funeral was perfectly done. As always, you did a good job with Leah's POV. You really get her down. Better than I could ever hope to.

i liked the way it ended though, I was waiting for that...

Lol, now I'm going to drive myself completely crazy while I wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked! I find Leah fun to write because her voice isn't all that determined in canon, not compared to Bella's or Edward's anyway. She and Nessie are both more like abstractions than fleshed out characters, which leaves room for a lot of fun fanfic leeway. My Leah is probably more scatterbrained than most Leahs, and it's good to hear that you like her that way :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Love and Friendship

*Pouts* You changed the raiting?



Author's Response:

So the chapter I just uploaded contains a one-line reference to "bodily fluids," which the site guidelines say aren't allowed in R-rated stories. I liked the line, so I left it in, but it definitely isn't critical. I currently don't have serious smut planned; the rating was changed on a technicality. Are underage users allowed to access R but not NC-17? (This also story is posted on fanfiction dot net under the penname KCerena.)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: July 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: The Redeemer

I loved this chapter! And not just because they finally kissed, though that did help lol. I liked the story Helen and Hermie told, it was really interesting. As usual, I cannot wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Sweet; I'm glad the chapter worked for you :) I know it was a lot of info to take in all at once, so please let me know if anything was confusing. Thanks for all of your support, as always; it really helps keep me energized <3

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Happy Families

Just finished reading it all. You're writing is definately different to me, mostly because you write in the present form and, for some odd reason, it makes more since to me for things to be written in the past form. But I'm getting it, and I'm liking it so far. Good job :) looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback on tense; I switch back and forth when I write different stories, and it's always good to hear what's working best for readers. Lots of people tell me that my writing style is different...I dunno, it's just what comes out when I decide to tell a story. I've heard that it sometimes crosses the line from different to confusing, and I hope you'll alert me to bits you're not getting or digging. So glad you like so far!! <3

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Like Mother, Like Daughter

OMG OMG OMG! WHAT KIND OF DRAMA NEXT TIME THEY MEET?

*Pulls at hair* Gawd I really should've waited until this story was finished before I started reading! Man man man! I guess there always is fanfiction.net but I really wanna stay here. *Spins in circle* What am I going to do!?!? (The answer to that question would be: Check my favorites every single day) *Runs away before can start demanding the next chapter*

*Runs back*

Hi, by the way ^-^



Author's Response:

Yikes, don't pull out your hair on my account! *Resolves to be as fast as possible* Sorry about stressing you, but thanks for taking one for the team by reading as I go-- if it weren't for awesome peeps like you, I might get all sad and quit. Not actually, 'cause I'm too into this story, but you get the idea. I do tend to write drama faster than slow burn, and have much of the next two chapters already drafted :) Kay...editing time!

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: May 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Taking Responsibility

You're driving me crazy, you know that? Completely psycho crazy. And I think that cliffie is the mother of all cliffie's. I'm going to have to start checking my favorite's more than once a day for the next one...I'm seriously going crazy.

Lol, good chapter. I actually really like reading for Leah's POV, it's really interesting the way she thinks. But...gee, I can barely review on this chapter because all I want to talk about is the next one!

Alright, I'm going to go before I write, like, a whole page. By the way, I like the outtake idea.

 

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Sorry, the crazy is not on purpose. I could have incorporated this chapter into a monster chapter without a cliffie, but then you'd have had to wait longer, sadly, much as I wish I were superwoman. Glad you enjoyed the LPOV!

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Interpretation of Dreams

I'm still here :) and still loving every step of this story. I really like Leah's dream world. It's...interesting. And it was nice to see a little of Seth (I'm a Seth fan). Your wriitng has gotten so easy to read by now that I actually found myself writing like this the other day. I had to change it though since it was the last chapter to a finished story, lol. Can't wait for the next one :)



Author's Response:

Good to hear you like the new stuff! If you like the way I write this fic, you should read something by David Foster Wallace. I started reading Infinite Jest shortly before I started writing this story, and that book is written in the sort of eccentric style that just barges into your head and throws everything else out the window. A bit unfortunate for the early chapters of my story, seeing that DFW was a crazy, hard to read genius and I'm still new at the whole fiction writing thing, but I'm glad you think I'm mastering the weirdness better now :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Abraham and Isaac

I hate text talk...

YAY, new chapter! I've been waiting forever!

Another interestng chapter. It's always nice to see what's going on with the other people, tho I have to admit I'm a bigger fan of the chapters with Leah in them, ha ha. Can't wait for the next one, but feel free to take your time...no pressure, lol.



Author's Response:

I'm really sorry for the delay :( I think my validation beta has had a lot on her plate right now. On the bright side, I have chapters 13 and 14 already written and posted to ffn, and I will upload 13 to this site right now.

You're not the only one who's a bigger fan of the Leah chapters, though I'm still amazed/psyched it turned out that way. Nessie's voice and personality are less of a stretch from normal me, but maybe Leah comes out better because I get this great sense of escapism while writing her. 

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Love Story

I loved the note Nessie wrote her. It was just so...so perfect. I loved the rose thing and Nessie's reasoning behind it. Sweetest thing ever, especially considering who Leah is...heck, even considering who Nessie is.

Poor Leah having to wait for her to text back. That's just awful, I feel so bad for her, lol.

I seem to be your only review lately...what a shame, you deserve MUCH more love.

Well, for now this will have to do:

I LOVE YOUR STORY! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Lol :)

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Aww, well your love means a lot to me :) I have more reviewers on ffn.net, but I've accepted that I'm much too weird to be popular, and I had plenty of time to get used to that fact in high school :-p At least it's extra-satisfying, this way, when someone really likes what I write. I'm really glad you liked the letter, BTW--it's my favorite part of the chapter too, and I'm sad that the sex tends to overshadow it. 

 

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Letting Go

Hey, remember me? I know it's been awhile, but at least I got to come back to a finished story :p

Real life got a little busy for me there for awhile. I've abandoned stories I was reading and stories I was writing...time to get back on track. Starting here :)

So...wow...omg!

What the hell just happened?!?

You know what's great? I don't have to wait to figure out ;p

*hits submit and continues reading*

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: The Alpha Stag

Wow...every chapter I read...I just love this story. Whish I could have it in print...with a lovely velvet cover and expensive soft pages...with its own special spot on my massivly overflowing bookshelf...honestly, that's what it deserves :)

But...in the world of fanfiction I guess this is good enough. The site has a velvet background at least:p

Honestly, you amaze me with you're writing skills. You're just so good at it! Makes me sad to think I didn't read this one for so long...yes, I'm ashamed of myself :(

The things you think up or so great...like Leah and this Redeemer stuff...just...pure gold in writing sense. I think I shall stay up all night to finish this...

We'll see. If I don't get too tired. Want to remember this, not just mindlessly read :p

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Explanations

Ok, have to admit, I love this line: teeny-bopper vampires must hold hands with their high school sweethearts at all times.

That's just great :p

So, wow, ok Carlisle's theories were seriously wonderful. Like should be in the freaking Twilight Guide wonderful. The crap you come up with I swear...(and I mean 'crap' in a totally too awesome for words kinda way'.

I really enjoyed this chapter...maybe because of all the explaining that went on. Leah being the only chick wolf, where Embry's genes came from, so on and so forth...I liked it :) you tied up loose ends for me that I didn't even know needed tying.

Really wanna know what happened to Leah though...what is she now?...so many questions, so little reading left :( (ok, one question, two chapters left, so not the point).

Lol, and Leah's fear that this would make her straight. Serious while reading, amusing afterwords :p

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Love

I think I'm gunna cry. Really, all that's left is an epilogue...finishing this won't be nearly like leaving it alone for a very (miserable) long time...it's really over after this next chapter...really, really...*Tear falls*.

Well...*wipes tear away* ignoring that, I should probably review on this chapter since I'm here.

I loved it. Even if the girls argued a little bit, I loved it. Especially the ending :)

One...more...to...go...

 

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue: The Funeral

*sniffles* not gunna cry...not gunna cry

I guess in the long run this was the best ending chapter I could hope for. Seventy years later, Leah's still alive (and not 90 physically), and, for the most part, they're happy. Though watching people die for a second time could't have been easy...but still, they have each other.

This amazingly great story shall forever stay in my favorite's folder, where I will return to it whenever I'm in need for some good reading. Don't stop writing, k? I enjoy this stuff :)

It's been great :) perhaps one of these days I can bring myself to write a Leah/Nessie...or not, it'd never be as good as this :p

Once again, great story, great characterlization (totally misspelled that), great writing style, great plot. Loved it, loved it, loved it.

Thanks for sharing ^-^ (<epic happy face :p)

 
Summary:

Jake and Rosalie ’bond’ in their own unique way at the Cullens’ residence a few days before the Volturi arrive - and things soon spiral out of control...


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 12069
[Report This] Published: April 15, 2010 Updated: August 11, 2010


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Barbs with Barbie

Lol that was freaking funny. I liked your combacks, pure gold. I'm favoriting.



Author's Response:

Hello blood-and-chocolate,

Wow, favourited by my first reviewer ... thanks very much!!!

I wrote this not long after finishing 'Breaking Dawn' - Jacob and Rosalie's little barbs at each other really made me laugh, so I wanted to expand on the theme. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!

Thanks for R & R-ing,

Kara's Aunty ;)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Let battle commence ...

Another WONDERFUl chapter. I can't get over how awesome their little jokes and gibes are. It's just so funny! I could never come up with this stuff! You right the fight scenes really well too, where it's actually possible to visualize what's going on.

Only one more chapter??? *Pouts* but it's so good!

The only thing I really don't like is all () (I know what they're called, just can't spell it lol) breaking up the story. They're fine, really, and I like them cuz they add a little to the story but once there's more than one in a paragraph it kinda throws the reader out. My problem with this is that your writing is so easy to get pulled into that it kinda makes me...not mad, exactly, but I don't like being thrown out. Don't take them out of the story or anything, just try a little less. Or not, whatever, that's just my opinion :)

I'll be watching my favorite's for the next one :)



Author's Response:

Hello blood-and-chocolate,

*blush* gosh, I'm THRILLED you're enjoying their jokes so much (and relieved. I'd have been mortified if no one else found them funny). The fight scene was actually difficult to write - I spent ages trying to visualise the book-version of the house and garden, and where Jake and Rosalie would be sparring in relation to it; or who would land what punch, and where, etc. What a relief I didn't mess it up (too much) :o)

I completely sympathise with your feelings about the parentheses (). Most people are oky with them, but, naturally, they will eventually throw the occasional reader off. For that, I apologise, m'dear :(  Unfortunately, they're kind of my trademark - particularly when writing humour. They allow more insight into a character's thoughts, or to a particular scene, etc, and I find them invaluable. I try to minimise their use and try to work in the point I'm making with the natural flow of the fic, but sometimes parentheses are just more ... liberating. Wherever I do have them though, I try to construct them in such a way that the sentence could flow just as well without their presence as with. Works most of the time, but not always ...

*sheepish grin*

I'm chuffed (very pleased) that you're enjoying the fic nonetheless! Thanks very much for R & R-ing,

M :) 

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The last laugh

I LOVED IT! This is the best, funnest, most awesome story in the world. I'm definately keeping it in my favorites for future reads whenever I need a good laugh. Sooooooooooo funny. Good ending though, even tho I'm sad it's over :(



Author's Response:

Hello blood-and-chocolate,

wow, you really DID enjoy it, didn't you? I cannot tell you how absolutely thrilled I am that something I wrote made you laugh so much! Had I only had one single review for this entire story, and that one was the one you have just posted, it would have been well worth all the effort and research just to know it had such a positive impact.

Thank you so very much for all your concrit throughout 'Getting To Know You', but mostly for letting letting me know that it brought you such pleasure. That's the very reason I write :) And who knows? Maybe Jacob and Rosalie will have another face-off sometime in the future? After all, Rosalie will DEFINITELY want revenge after being manoeuvred into waering Walmart threads for a full week ...  

M :o)

 
Summary:

Seth and Emmett discuss basic functions. Very basic functions ... Breaking Dawn era one-shot. Humour.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Emmett, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 572
[Report This] Published: October 16, 2010 Updated: October 17, 2010


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Talking Bull

LOL You write a lot of funny crap! (lol, crap, get it? get it? *wiggles eyebrows*)



Author's Response:

Hello blood-and-chocolate,

forgive the delayed response - I just needed a break from all things fanfic for a few weeks. But I'm back and thrilled to see you think I talk crap ...

*massive snort*

I do indeed get it, m'dear! And your review really made me laugh! Thanks very much for R & R-ing,

M :o)

 
Summary:

I did NOT make the banner! A friend of mine did on MNI, and I'm sooo grateful :)

 

It's been 18 years since Breaking Dawn, and Renesmee has finally reached the furthest point in her growth. When her relationship with her best friend Jacob Black blossoms, she begins to experience the sacrifices of being a grown up...not all of which she was prepared for.

I did NOT make the banner. A friend of mine did on MNI, and I'm sooo grateful! :)


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 54183
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2012 Updated: August 06, 2012


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: July 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Advice

Wolf, vampire, hybrid,,,girls are still girls. Haha.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing so much LOL! :) Glad you like it!

--Nikki

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: July 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Unexpected

And I'm STILL crying. Thanks. Jeez. *Clicks Next button*

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: July 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Time

Yes, you made me cry *wipes away tear*

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: July 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Of Loves Lost

Nother good one!

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: July 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Progression

I think I'm going to have to review on every chapter because I think this story deserves more than it has! Haha.

 




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