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Does anyone else every have an incredibly hard time trying to finish writing the stories you already have up before starting new ones? I am going out of my mind...the wait for Twilighted is just so long...




About Me:


I did somehow manage to make it through high school and walk the stage with my 'offensive' red hair hidden underneath my graduation cap. While resisting the urge to leave my prison of 13 years with both middle fingers in the air, I remained as unnoticed and irrelevant as always. So where is B&C now? Why, on her way to college of course.


Not much has changed really.


I'm flying in the single lane these days since I don't like to be told what to do, and I have a thing for tattooed bad boys... I have, however, recently discovered a very real prejudice against stupidity...but, everyone has some form of poison.


Also attending college with me is my obsession with vampires, namely Twilight and the Vampire Diaries, as well as the countless books I read. Crossing my fingers for Morganville Vampires and Vampire Academy to be in the film media, but we'll see.


I'm sad to admit that the last year or so has left me in a dry state as far as my writing goes. School started it, being so busy with senior year, but now that I'm free I feel...empty. Like nothing is worth writing down anymore...yet I keep this account open. Who knows, maybe a blue moon will pass over?


I still write for the reviewers. How can I know you're reading if you don't tell me? So drop me a message if you're interested in reading more. Maybe the step to fixing my problem is a little motivation :)


If you're still here at this point, then below are a couple of fun facts. I hope you've enjoyed listening to me ramble :)




I absolutely LOVE banners! Especially when people make them for me! So if you have a flare for it, please please make me one, even if I already have one I'll use it :)


About My Stories:


As an important note, my R rated stories are for violence. If you're of a younger audiance, and violence isn't what gets you, then go ahead and give it a try. If  you're of an older audiance, and don't prefer violence, then I strongly suggest against reading. I've often been told I'm twisted.


Although I write stories with Edward and Bella, and maybe even have chapters from their POV, I do not write stories about them. Twilight is about them, I like to shed light on other characters.


My first Twilight fiction was His Little Red Head. It was an idea I got shortly after I finished Breaking Dawn when I wondered what would happen if one of the wolves imprinted on an actual vampire. Seth has always been my favorite wolf and I decided that I'd love to have a story that actually revolved around him. However, romances really aren't my thing. Reading them I like, but writing them? I can never seem to find a good plot line. So pretty much a story that was originally only supposed to be fluff ended up with some action to it. But in all the writing I've done over the years I've never ended a story. This was a first, and I have to admit that the ending kind of sucked. I plan to rewrite this in the future, but I will always leave the original in place.


The Extras for His Little Red Head came around when I got questions asking about Kimmi and what exactly had happened to her in that club. Eventually I decided to go ahead and write it out. Later I was going to do some oneshots on Jace and Alison but I decided that eventually I would just make them their own story someday. The chapters for Extras are written only by request, so let me know if you would like something!


Over The Hills And Far Away...that's an interesting one. Normally I don't go into the AU-Human universe because...it kind of bores me. I need the supernatural aspect or it just seems pointless. And yet that one day I was sitting here listening to that song and thought "this would make a really interesting story..." It didn't turn out quite the way I wanted but I like it nonetheless.


Renesmee's First April Fool's...another interesting one considering the idea for it came in the middle of December. I'm not really sure what I was thinking except that I needed to try my hand at comedy. I think it would be much better as, like, a mini-movie or something but at least I can say I tried.


And then there's Renesmee's First Christmas which I wrote in October. Seriously, what is wrong with me? But I had actually written it for an iFic competition which I decided at the last moment that I was too chicken to actually enter. For some reason it was still good enough to post...


What She's Forgotten... This was the very first Pre-Twilight fiction I ever did and I poured over pages and pages of research to get it just right. Originally I had planned to make it really dark but when Elliot's character developed it didn't end up that way. This fiction was my favorite to write, and Elliot became one of my favorite characters of all, and I seriously almost cried when I had to end it. Originally, I wanted to write out Elliot's death scene at the last of the 12th chapter but I just couldn't bring myself to do it. I liked him way too much for that. And I thank Javamomma0921 again for liking it enough to rec it on Twimpage. (Speaking of Twimpage, if you haven't seen it you should really check it out)


A BIG thank you to qjmom for being the beta of these stories!


I've always wanted to do a Leah story but I've shyed away from it because I never really thought I could get her character down. And yet I still felt the need to write Something To Live For. Shane I love. He is such a joy to write and he makes me laugh out loud sometimes. Of course, I get to hear all of his jokes because I'm in his head...or he's in mine, one of the two. And sadly most of the good stuff never quite makes it into the story. Although I really tried not to, Leah turned out OCC. I didn't mean for it to happen and yet it did, but I tied it into the story plot, blaming her good attitudes on Shane and hoping no one would get to mad at me...


Thank you, psymom, for being the beta of this story :)


And now to talk about my newest story, My (Imaginary) Best Friend. The idea for this story actually came to mind while I was writing a completely different one. I was stuck momentarily and drifted off to dream land and suddenly I thought: I want to write something new. Something with ghosts. Something where...Renesmee befriends a ghost! Just like that episode of Supernatural where Tyler befriended Maggie! And then, just like that, the story planned itself out in moments. My (Coporeal) Best Friend is the parallel to this one, told in the ghosts point of view. The chapters go hand in hand, so I think it offers and interesting look.


Thank you, therunaway, for getting these stories on here, and a HUGE thank you to AngelGoddess1981 for having the faith to pick them up on chapter 10. Don't know what I'd do without her :)




***Favorite Quotes***


Story: The Wedding
By: Valelf
(Embry talking about his relationship with Leah)
"I'm not wrong. I know this is right. I know that we are meant to be together.
 And I know that eventually, we will have a family together. I told her I don't care
 how long it takes and how many times we have to try. And until she stops phasing, we're going to have one hell of a time practicing."


Story: I Am A Revolution
By: Forever17
I couldn't help but think that his town seemed far too small for such a large amount of evil.


Story: A Matter of Time
By: duskwatcher
(Edward's reaction to Renesmee and Jacob's relationship)
"I thing he broke my nose," Jacob complained.
"He bit me!" Dad retorted.
"You taste tewwible."
"I certainly hope so."


Story: A New Morning
By: LJ Summers
"I have it on good authority that we're still thousands of miles away from
a certain mind-reading vampire..."


Story: Supernova
By: Suzybear
If I had a heart, it would have broken.


Story: Purgatory
By: Spaniard
(Edward's thoughts as Rosalie goes after her attackers)
I watched her go with a secret longing of my own, wishing her happy hunting.


Story: Breaking News
By: Justine Lark
(A random students thought when Bella and Edwads engagement is announced)
My boyfriend wouldn't marry me if I held a gun to his head.


Story: Bruce Springsteen's Leah
By:
fictionfan


Oh, and by the way, everyone you've ever known thought you were gay before today.”


 


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Reviews by blood-and-chocolate
 
Summary:

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Set after Breaking Dawn, the ongoing story of Renesmee and Jacob, Bella and Edward, and all the Cullens.  Coming of age is hard enough, but half-bred Nessie faces choices no human should have to make.  Romance, angst, drama, all the stuff you love from Twilight!  Read and enjoy, feedback is awesome, flaming makes me cry! XD


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee
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Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 47930
[Report This] Published: May 22, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

the build up is killing me...so glad i don't have to wait for the next chapter ;)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 (vjgm)

OHO I loved it! I really really did. I'm digging your writing style and I love how well you manage to capture all the characters. Very good :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 (vjgm)

Oho things are getting very interesting

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

The more I read the more I love it :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 (vjgm)

it was a short chapter but that's ok, I don't mind them. And luckily I still don't have to wait for updates ha ha

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 (vjgm)

...............Jake shoulda gone with her

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 (vgjm)

Wow, here I was expecting just fluff but instead i actually get some twisty turns? AWESOME. Still loving it, obviously

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 (vjgm)

O.O *can't tear eyes from screen*

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 (vjgm)

Wel I caught up at school the other day and didn't log in so I skipped a few reviews but I promise to review on all the rest. I'm really loving watching this play out and I'm so glad I was in a jake/nessie mood the other day and found this. It's well worth the read :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue (vjgm)

I know I said i was going to review on all the chapters but I caught up again without being signed in. Anyway, I just finished and needless to say I loved and adored the whole thing. Your writing style is amazing, very very well done, and it all flows so very smoothly. I love your charactor develop and how much personality you give them. I also like how Leah changes because you do such a good job of changing the ice queen into the loiving person she is here. I enjoyed the glimse of their children and really really REALLY wish there was a sequel. Maybe there's still a possability?

 

 
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The McCarty clan was known as a wild bunch in the hills of Anderson County, Tennessee. They worked hard and played hard, and were well respected in the community. What happened when the most popular of the seven McCarty boys disappeared?


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 26128
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2009 Updated: June 06, 2010


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Heya. I just started reading and I think you'll be happy to know that I'm going to favorite this. Ha ha. From now on I'll review for each new chapter. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I look forward to hearing from ya!

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm not a fan of mushrooms either. Gross. But it does fit the story.

Still liking the story. Enjoyed Rose's point of view to. Can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

The shoes definately scream Rosalie. No doubt about it. Still liking the story. Update soon :)



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Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: August 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Good chapter. Looking forward to more :)



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Thank you!

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: October 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Well at least you have a good reason for taking so long *glares* ha thanks for the update. Still reading here :) and I don't blame Rosalie for wanting to be the first thing he sees. Not at all.



Author's Response:

Haha- thanks for sticking around!!

 
Summary:

"Emmett" and "Christmas": two words that should NEVER be put in the same sentence together.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Crackfic Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1979
[Report This] Published: May 27, 2009 Updated: June 04, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: June 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Oneshot

Lol i laughed through the whole thing. Very good :)

 
A New Morning by LJ Summers Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 262]
Summary:

He thinks his life is weird -- well, it has been.

She loves her life -- but it sometimes drives her crazy.

He's accustomed to being her very best friend, protector and playmate.

She's accustomed to being the center of his world.

 

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Jacob and Renesmee, together with the Cullen Family, travel from New Hampshire to Brazil and back to Forks and La Push as they redefine their relationships...for better and for worse... And as Nessie finds herself threatened by a vampire and his son out to redefine bloodlines...

 

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Nessie
Challenges:
Series: The Wolfpack Chronicles, Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 62455
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2009 Updated: August 25, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Nessie: I'm surrounded by stories and they're not always good ones.

Sometimes cell phones really do find the most annoying times to ring...

 



Author's Response:

LOL don't they though? 

At least it wasn't Alice. ;)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Jacob: How can he kick her when HE'S down?

Poor Nessie, Billy was so mean, I don't care how strong she is no one should have to put up with that. Good chapter tho. I'm pretty much half way through and it makes me sad :(



Author's Response:

Billy really was hard on her, wasn't he?  It's a good thing they've spent most of her life far, far away from La Push.  Rachel's a problem, too.

I'm happy you're sad. Is that okay? *smile*

I think I caught up to you again! 

Thank you so much for reading and your energetic responses!

~LJ

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Nessie: I didn't know how much I could learn in one night.

"You're actually married to Aunt Alice?"< second favorite line. Ha ha

and I can't tell you how glad I am that she isn't going to run off and find Nahuel.

 

Sorry my reviews are getting choppy, I just wanna keep reading.



Author's Response:

It WAS going to be Auntie Rose, but I thought Alice was more amusing! :) Glad you liked it!

Oh no.  My Nessie really wants less than nothing to do with Nahuel...she's rather enamoured. :)

 

And please don't apologize for choppy reviews! It's very, very kind of you to review each chapter.  I'm glad the story is holding your interest.

 

~LJ

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Jacob: Getting permission has nothing to do with it.

yeah those last two sentences pretty much sum it all up. Lol. Nice chapter. You did a very good job with Jake's feelins and Nessie's concerns. See, I'm all complimentive, aren't you happy? Lol.



Author's Response:

My validating beta for this one, Hopeful Wager (it's her birthday today!), liked those lines, too. *grin* 

And yes, thank you for your complimentary approach! :)  I hope that future bumps in the road don't unsettle you TOO much!

 

~LJ

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Nessie: Freaking out comes in many forms.

Oh no! Billy had a heart attack?! well, I guess that's a good reason for the two of them to return home, but still *tears*

Lol the only time I am gentle is when I don't feel like dragging out the sentamental chapters, ha ha, so don't worry you still have me!

This was a good chapter, Nessie all grown up and all. Very good indeed.



Author's Response:

Yep! I know, mean of me, but I'm relieved you don't take exception to that. ;-)

It gets worse...if you haven't found that out, already!

 

I like Nessie all grown up, too. Glad she meets with approval.

 

~LJ

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Jacob: Yeah, Life is Weird. So?

Hi :)

I've been looking for a good Nessie and Jake sory for awhile and I'm reading some but they aren't finished yet. Today, I came across this one. YAY

I am a BIG reviewer so be expecting one for each chapter. Also, I'm pretty critical. But, right now, I don't have any. I would however like to comment on your writing skills. It's great. Good description, good charactor, good emotion. I love it.



Author's Response:

Greetings, blood-and-chocolate!

I'm glad you found my story. :)  I never post a story online (with one exception that will remain an exception, lol) until I have finished it on my computer.  I'm uncomfortable presenting anything for public consumption until I have read it in its entirety.  I'm weird. ;-)

I look forward to hearing from you as you travel with my Jacob and Nessie. :)  

Thanks for reading!

~LJ

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Nessie: I just want to die. Right here. In the plane.

I have to admit that I like Jacob's POV better (though, I like guys pov. I even like writing in them better than girls) but I still think you've done a good job. You have really good charactors and are good at showing their feelings



Author's Response:

Oh, I'm a big fan of the Jacob POV my own self. My favorite part of BD, honestly, was the middle part in his voice.  He's got fabulous narrative potential.

Nessie is still very teenage girl at this point in the book. As she matures, so does her voice. lol I hope you will continue to like how I've characterized them.

 

Thanks for reading! :)  ~LJ

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Jacob: Not even what I expected.

oho internal conflict. Lol. Looking forward to read on



Author's Response:

Hi! What's a good romance/adventure without some internal conflict? :D

There should be plenty more where that came from. ;-)

 

Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

 

~LJ

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Nessie: I'm not up for auction!

I like how you described Nessie's unease, even I felt it. Which is really saying something. And I'm very interested to find out about Jake and Ed's little 'talk' lol.



Author's Response:

Good morning!

Thank you. :) I tried to convey her emotional state clearly.  I think it must have been a very awkward place for her to be, since she's been so sheltered her whole life.

I love Jacob and Edward's "talks." lol

Thank you for your continued reviews! :)

~LJ

 




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