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Does anyone else every have an incredibly hard time trying to finish writing the stories you already have up before starting new ones? I am going out of my mind...the wait for Twilighted is just so long...




About Me:


I did somehow manage to make it through high school and walk the stage with my 'offensive' red hair hidden underneath my graduation cap. While resisting the urge to leave my prison of 13 years with both middle fingers in the air, I remained as unnoticed and irrelevant as always. So where is B&C now? Why, on her way to college of course.


Not much has changed really.


I'm flying in the single lane these days since I don't like to be told what to do, and I have a thing for tattooed bad boys... I have, however, recently discovered a very real prejudice against stupidity...but, everyone has some form of poison.


Also attending college with me is my obsession with vampires, namely Twilight and the Vampire Diaries, as well as the countless books I read. Crossing my fingers for Morganville Vampires and Vampire Academy to be in the film media, but we'll see.


I'm sad to admit that the last year or so has left me in a dry state as far as my writing goes. School started it, being so busy with senior year, but now that I'm free I feel...empty. Like nothing is worth writing down anymore...yet I keep this account open. Who knows, maybe a blue moon will pass over?


I still write for the reviewers. How can I know you're reading if you don't tell me? So drop me a message if you're interested in reading more. Maybe the step to fixing my problem is a little motivation :)


If you're still here at this point, then below are a couple of fun facts. I hope you've enjoyed listening to me ramble :)




I absolutely LOVE banners! Especially when people make them for me! So if you have a flare for it, please please make me one, even if I already have one I'll use it :)


About My Stories:


As an important note, my R rated stories are for violence. If you're of a younger audiance, and violence isn't what gets you, then go ahead and give it a try. If  you're of an older audiance, and don't prefer violence, then I strongly suggest against reading. I've often been told I'm twisted.


Although I write stories with Edward and Bella, and maybe even have chapters from their POV, I do not write stories about them. Twilight is about them, I like to shed light on other characters.


My first Twilight fiction was His Little Red Head. It was an idea I got shortly after I finished Breaking Dawn when I wondered what would happen if one of the wolves imprinted on an actual vampire. Seth has always been my favorite wolf and I decided that I'd love to have a story that actually revolved around him. However, romances really aren't my thing. Reading them I like, but writing them? I can never seem to find a good plot line. So pretty much a story that was originally only supposed to be fluff ended up with some action to it. But in all the writing I've done over the years I've never ended a story. This was a first, and I have to admit that the ending kind of sucked. I plan to rewrite this in the future, but I will always leave the original in place.


The Extras for His Little Red Head came around when I got questions asking about Kimmi and what exactly had happened to her in that club. Eventually I decided to go ahead and write it out. Later I was going to do some oneshots on Jace and Alison but I decided that eventually I would just make them their own story someday. The chapters for Extras are written only by request, so let me know if you would like something!


Over The Hills And Far Away...that's an interesting one. Normally I don't go into the AU-Human universe because...it kind of bores me. I need the supernatural aspect or it just seems pointless. And yet that one day I was sitting here listening to that song and thought "this would make a really interesting story..." It didn't turn out quite the way I wanted but I like it nonetheless.


Renesmee's First April Fool's...another interesting one considering the idea for it came in the middle of December. I'm not really sure what I was thinking except that I needed to try my hand at comedy. I think it would be much better as, like, a mini-movie or something but at least I can say I tried.


And then there's Renesmee's First Christmas which I wrote in October. Seriously, what is wrong with me? But I had actually written it for an iFic competition which I decided at the last moment that I was too chicken to actually enter. For some reason it was still good enough to post...


What She's Forgotten... This was the very first Pre-Twilight fiction I ever did and I poured over pages and pages of research to get it just right. Originally I had planned to make it really dark but when Elliot's character developed it didn't end up that way. This fiction was my favorite to write, and Elliot became one of my favorite characters of all, and I seriously almost cried when I had to end it. Originally, I wanted to write out Elliot's death scene at the last of the 12th chapter but I just couldn't bring myself to do it. I liked him way too much for that. And I thank Javamomma0921 again for liking it enough to rec it on Twimpage. (Speaking of Twimpage, if you haven't seen it you should really check it out)


A BIG thank you to qjmom for being the beta of these stories!


I've always wanted to do a Leah story but I've shyed away from it because I never really thought I could get her character down. And yet I still felt the need to write Something To Live For. Shane I love. He is such a joy to write and he makes me laugh out loud sometimes. Of course, I get to hear all of his jokes because I'm in his head...or he's in mine, one of the two. And sadly most of the good stuff never quite makes it into the story. Although I really tried not to, Leah turned out OCC. I didn't mean for it to happen and yet it did, but I tied it into the story plot, blaming her good attitudes on Shane and hoping no one would get to mad at me...


Thank you, psymom, for being the beta of this story :)


And now to talk about my newest story, My (Imaginary) Best Friend. The idea for this story actually came to mind while I was writing a completely different one. I was stuck momentarily and drifted off to dream land and suddenly I thought: I want to write something new. Something with ghosts. Something where...Renesmee befriends a ghost! Just like that episode of Supernatural where Tyler befriended Maggie! And then, just like that, the story planned itself out in moments. My (Coporeal) Best Friend is the parallel to this one, told in the ghosts point of view. The chapters go hand in hand, so I think it offers and interesting look.


Thank you, therunaway, for getting these stories on here, and a HUGE thank you to AngelGoddess1981 for having the faith to pick them up on chapter 10. Don't know what I'd do without her :)




***Favorite Quotes***


Story: The Wedding
By: Valelf
(Embry talking about his relationship with Leah)
"I'm not wrong. I know this is right. I know that we are meant to be together.
 And I know that eventually, we will have a family together. I told her I don't care
 how long it takes and how many times we have to try. And until she stops phasing, we're going to have one hell of a time practicing."


Story: I Am A Revolution
By: Forever17
I couldn't help but think that his town seemed far too small for such a large amount of evil.


Story: A Matter of Time
By: duskwatcher
(Edward's reaction to Renesmee and Jacob's relationship)
"I thing he broke my nose," Jacob complained.
"He bit me!" Dad retorted.
"You taste tewwible."
"I certainly hope so."


Story: A New Morning
By: LJ Summers
"I have it on good authority that we're still thousands of miles away from
a certain mind-reading vampire..."


Story: Supernova
By: Suzybear
If I had a heart, it would have broken.


Story: Purgatory
By: Spaniard
(Edward's thoughts as Rosalie goes after her attackers)
I watched her go with a secret longing of my own, wishing her happy hunting.


Story: Breaking News
By: Justine Lark
(A random students thought when Bella and Edwads engagement is announced)
My boyfriend wouldn't marry me if I held a gun to his head.


Story: Bruce Springsteen's Leah
By:
fictionfan


Oh, and by the way, everyone you've ever known thought you were gay before today.”


 


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Reviews by blood-and-chocolate
 
Summary: This is the story of how Alice and Jasper met. It is my interpretation of how it all happened. Enjoy!!1
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2124
[Report This] Published: June 05, 2008 Updated: June 11, 2008


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Story of Alice and Jasper

Loved it!

 
Fear by NoMoreThanUsual Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 127]
Summary:

Bella’s courage does have its limits.   The day Edward was dreading – the day in which Bella runs away screaming – has finally come.  Jasper’s POV and Edward’s POV.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: Missing Pages Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3702
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: June 21, 2008


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lol. A spider. Oh my god I needed that laugh!

 
Understand by Tai Birdsong Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A story on the news drudges up painful memories for Rosalie, and Emmett is there to understand the best he can. EmmettxRosalie, fluff.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1274
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2008


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. This was really good.

 
Summary:

Breaking Dawn inspired:  Leah makes the decision to break free from Sam and his pack. (one-shot)

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Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Leah
Challenges:
Series: Three Days of Leah
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3104
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2008 Updated: August 12, 2008


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You do Leah amazingly well. I loved this little one shot. it was great. I'm definately going to read the others in the series.

Btw, I miss Buffy too.

 
Purgatory by spaniard Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 357]
Summary:

Seven original members of the Olympic Coven, and seven deadly sins. Coincidence? Edward has lived too long to believe in coincidences.

He reluctantly relays the deaths and subsequent turnings of each member of his family to his new bride. Each death represents a deadly sin.

An astounding amount of praise and thanks to MrsC for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 42807
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2008 Updated: June 03, 2009


Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: The Final Layer

Coming to an end...I'm excited and disappointed at the same time

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Gluttony (1)

Very nice beginning. Flowed easily from Jaspers life, to war life, to vampire life. Interested to read more :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Gluttony (3)

Well, do by process of elimination I know that Edward must be next.

I agree with you on the last few lines, I like them :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Gluttony (2)

Aw poor Jasper...

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Canto 1: Conspiracy

Hi, I'm a new reader :) I'm also a very generous reviewer, so be expecting 28 new reviews. I don't have a lot to say here except that this is a very good begining and very well written, I'm looking foward to more.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Sins of the Father

Wow...this is beautifully, beautifully written.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Pride (1)

Still oh so good! I wish I could read more, but I actually have to get up in the morning. (What happened to Spring Break!?) Anyway, I shall be back tomorrow. Can't wait :)

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Pride (2)

Well...I guess I can fit in a few more chapters...

Another great chapter. Your writing style is amazing. Very well done, all in all. I love how much you add to the life stories we all know. It's very good *applauds*

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: The First Level

Oh, I aboslutely LOVE the discription of Alice in the beginning of this.

From the moment I saw this story I wondered what you were going to do with Alice. I'm so glad you did her second, because I'm very interested.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Envy (1)

Honestly, I figured envy would be Rosalie's sin-story. Though, I like it much better that you gave it to Alice. It makes since, now that I think of it. Onward to the next chapter...then bed...maybe *guilty smile*

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Envy (2)

Absolutely and completely amazing. You did a wonderful job spinning a dark tale to fit Alice's life. I loved it.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Prodigal Son

Emmett couldn't always be the happy one? *Has the face of a child who just learned santa isn't real*

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Greed (1)

Ah, gold. One thing that can turn people crazy in mere seconds...

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Greed (2)

Oh wow...that was cry worthy. I think Emmett's tale is my favorite. Its so sad and yet...so heart-touching at the same time. Darkly beautiful.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Among the Shattered

I'm kind of with you there. I want to enjoy it and yet and the same time I really really don't. I know that I will simply because you will write it beautifully, even though it is a dark subject...

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Lust (1)

I think you did a fine job and I think now that lust was the perfect sin for Rosalie

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Lust (2)

No, I don't think you're sick. I think you did a wonderful job writing this out. It is dark but...in a good way. Does that make since? I hope so.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Through the Forest

Still so beautiful and so sad at the same time. I can't even begin to discrib how...capturing your writing is.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Sloth (1)

I think you're right about this Sloth being easier. Another well written chapter. I never pictured Esme as the daredevil type and yet...it makes sense.

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Sloth (2)

Oh...my gosh...that was heartbreaking

 
Reviewer: blood-and-chocolate Signed
Date: March 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Sloth (3)

Well, the ending was..,beautiful. I've said that alot about this story so far but it's always ture. Jasper and Edward are next (I think) can't wait.

 




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