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Penname: wish_girl [Contact]
Real name: Melinda
Status: Member
Member Since: August 06, 2008
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Summary:

After college, best friends Bella, Rosalie and Alice have a run-in with their past. . .and maybe their future? A farcical, romantic comedy with a healthy dose of angst.  Nominated for Best Romance & Best Edward Characterization (Incomplete) at the Twilight Awards.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 144638
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2008 Updated: December 29, 2008


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Gosh...now that is a nice thought - having Edward Cullen say the words “I have a proposition for you." to you! Lucky Bella! I should live so long to hear someone like him say that to ME!!! *grin*


Author's Response: I know!!!!  I would pretty much melt into a pile on the floor. . .

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I really hope you'll continue with this story, it's becoming one of my favourites! It's really well thought out and well done and I hope it's not finished yet!

Author's Response: not by a long shot!  Ch 18 is with my betas right now and should be up in a day or two!

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow. Now that would be a nice way to spend a day at work...with Edward on your desk!

Sign me up!

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Ohhh my god! Poor Alice!

Can't wait for the next chapter! (I saw this as completed, I hope we're not done yet!)



Author's Response: it shouldn't be set as completed--we're not nearly done yet.  Poor Alice indeed. . .

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

God, the stuff with Edward and Bella was HOT! WOOO!

And c'mon Jasper, get your crap together!!!

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

OH MY GOD!!! One - I love this, but you know that. ^_^

Two - Poor Rose!

Three - I want Foo Fighters tickets!! Damn!

 
Summary: Feature

Seven years have passed since Edward and Bella last saw each other. They grew up as children and even became good friends. Once they entered high school, Edward became distant and eventually severed all ties with her. Confused and hurt, Bella moved on with her life in Seattle.Through it all, Bella had her older brother Emmett to get past the estrangement. Now, with Edward's imminent return to Seattle to help out with his sister Alice's wedding, Bella can't help wondering what drove away her brother's best friend all those years ago.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4369590/1/My_Brothers_Best_Friend

Nominated for Best Novel-Incomplete at the Eddie and Bellie Awards.

http://www.thecatt.net/tw/Vote/aspx

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 247400
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2010


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10: Experience Part 2

I LOVE the long chapters. And I love Bella's ringtones. It only makes me even MORE curious to know what Edward's is. ^_^

I can't wait for the next chapter, so it's good it's only a clicky away!

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Mr. Dazzling: Part 1

LOVE the Mr Dazzling playlist! You need to give me more songs! ^_^

Also, love this fic!

 
Summary: Feature

It was said of early vampire books and movies that vampirism was simply a poorly disguised substitute for sex. Back in the day, the entire genre was considered extremely risque'. With that in mind, this is a parody of Midnight Sun replacing all the vampirism with sexuality - no blood lust - just extreme human lust. AH/AU and consequently, OOC.  Thank you to Debussy_This for the fabulous (and hysterical) banner!!!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 85040
[Report This] Published: July 14, 2008 Updated: April 24, 2009


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This is brilliant. Although the image of poor Edward stuck with a sleeping Bella and a miserable erection had me laughing til I cried.

 
Summary:

Bella's ready to bust out of her shell in college with roomie Alice. She meets the dazzling yet rakish Edward, but is warned of his less than angelic ways. Will B/A be just another notch in the belt for J/E, or will they teach the boys a lesson or two?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 28871
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2008 Updated: May 16, 2010


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Leather or Plaid Miniskirt Preferred

OMG. I LOVE this! (Of course, I really love 'Crimson and Clover' - both the original and the cover by JJ&TB.)

I can't wait to see where you take this!

 
Summary:

Bella realizes she and Edward aren't the only ones suffering from her decision to continue with the pregnancy.

 "Jasper," I whispered, knowing he could hear even though he was upstairs.  I had only to blink before he was before me, seated on the floor, his calm face a foot away from mine.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 903
[Report This] Published: August 20, 2008 Updated: August 20, 2008


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww. I loved this. I wish we got more of Jasper in all of the books, but then they wouldn't really be about Edward and Bella, would they?! ^_^

 
Summary:

Letting the love of your life go to another man-a man that is planning to reveal his feelings for her-is hard. How do you deal with the wait, and what do you say when you see her again?

Edward's POV of the day Bella broke her hand.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: Existance
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4057
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2008 Updated: September 03, 2008


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Symphony

Awww. I really liked this! I'd be happy to beta anything new you do. ^_^ Just contact me if you need me!

 
Summary:

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At a pivotal moment in New Moon, a simple choice alters the course of Bella's future, and she is forced to endure several more weeks before Edward's eventual return to Forks.  Victoria, a pack of young werewolves, and the blossoming of an undeniable bond become the least of Bella's concerns as she undergoes her own supernatural transformation. It turns out vampires and werewolves aren’t the only things that go bump in the night.  Edward/Bella/Jacob

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A huge thank you to placeofthunder for the lovely banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Kim, Leah, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 145984
[Report This] Published: August 30, 2008 Updated: August 30, 2010


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Scab

Wow! I'm an E/B girl but I do love Jake as well. (Just not in THAT way.) I'm interested in seeing where this goes!

It's well-written and exciting! Well done!

 
Summary:

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Bella attempts to live a normal life after Edward and the Cullen's leave her. Finding herself face to face with an Edward look a like, Andy Masen, she hasn't a clue how he will lure her back into the world of the undead. She will learn how the vampire came into existence, and the political war that is stirring in the bowels of the vampire world. She must chose her side, either with her newfound friend, Andy, or the love of her life, Edward. Where do her allegiances lie? Join Bella on the painstaking journey, and the ride of her life, that may just lead to the end of it. 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Other Character, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 67272
[Report This] Published: August 31, 2008 Updated: February 24, 2009


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Safe

OMG! Edward or Andy?!! Edward AND Andy!?!

I'm bad for wanting her to give in, aren't I? And bad for being so glad to see Edward again! 

 

Ohhh my!

 



Author's Response: Yeah, I was awfully caught between both Edward and Andy myself. Andy hold a special place in my heart. And Edward...well he's just so Edward. They both fit Bella perfectly in different ways. It's hard to say I want her to be with a specific one. So if I the writer is torn between the two, then no its not bad of you to be the same. At all. :) Thanks

 
Envy? by marve Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

Frustrated by Edward's refusal to take their relationship to the next level, Bella decides to use a little manipulation to make Edward jealous. Her plan doesn't work, but it does have some lovely consequences.

One-shot


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 8256
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2008 Updated: September 12, 2008


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

God. This was HOT.

I need more stuff like this in my life! *laugh*

 
Summary: And you thought libraries were just for studying...Bella, resident cool girl librarian, meets a dazzling law student, Edward while working at the university library. Will she help him find what he needs, what he wants?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 75947
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2008 Updated: October 06, 2008


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I used to work in a university library, so you aren't lying when you say that the job is a lot more interesting than people think! I swear, a dull evening in that place was hard to find!!!

I like this!! Just wanted to drop you a line and say that yes, obviously we are interested in reading!



Author's Response: I work in one now and worked in one during college and man...they can be crazy places.  Just the librarians alone are nutso but then you figure in the crazy student body and it makes for some interesting situations.  All of the situations we wrote about are based in fact, from a real library.

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

If I had a dollar for everytime I'd caught someone at it in the stacks....*grin*

Ooh, and we had the foot fetishist there in the Spring, just when sandal season started, crawling underneath the desks and - get this! - licking and sniffing girls' feet!!! 

And when fraternity pledge season started, we'd inevitably have a group of naked boys come in and ask for a book. My person favourite was when one asked for Spartacus. *laugh*

This fic makes me miss those days, but sometimes, the drama really got to you. Most of the time though, it was funny. But the funniest and strangest people were the people who had worked there for years. It's like all the eccentricity concentrated in their bodies to make them truly odd over the years. ^_^

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Waaaaaaaaahahahahahahahahahaha!!!

The Secretary is a HOT film! One of my favourites. Gah, and stuck in a room with Jasper AND Edward?! I should have it so hard. *ahem*



Author's Response: we totally had a foot fetishist too, he would groan when he saw girls toes in sandals...CREEPY!

Author's Response: we totally had a foot fetishist too, he would groan when he saw girls toes in sandals...CREEPY!

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Awwwwwwwwwwwww! Poor Edward!!!

A threesome eh? I don't think I'd say no!! Smut is good!

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Kinky Rose is lots of fun, but I almost cried for Emmett!!! Poor Emmett!!!

Gah, to have a hot guy like him making ME breakfast! She should appreciate that stuff!

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Woot!

Bring on the R/E collar action!

 
New Life by cowza Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 338]
Summary: After their marriage, Bella has disappeared, shattering Edward and the Cullens. When Emmett finds her, alone and pregnant in a strange city, will he and his family be able to make things right?
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 31135
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2008


Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OHHHH NOOOOOOO!!!!!

Poor Edward! Poor Bella!!! Oh nooooo!

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oooh! Angry Carlisle is the SEXIEST thing I've ever seen!

More please! I can't wait to see the reunion with Edward!

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Awwww. Poor Jasper!

Can't wait to see what happens when Edward finds out!

 
Reviewer: wish_girl Signed
Date: September 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Goodness. That bit with Jasper brought tears to my eyes.

 

So write right now!

 




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