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Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: November 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: March 28, 2008 - April 2, 2008

i love love love that edward's gardens are organic.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a hot, bad, gangsta fella who is a new kid in the Chicago underworld. But refusing to pay his respects to the big, ruling Godfather, his arrival is not welcomed. Bella is said Godfather’s estranged daughter who fled his father’s world in an attempt at a normal life.

Both men keep clashing and bumping heads, Edward’s power grows rapidly, men are tired of the old regime, and so a sort of gangster war ensues. Bella is caught in the mayhem when she becomes a prisoner in the hands of her father’s most hated enemy and rival. With Bella as a prisioner, Edward knows her father will have no choice but to do as he is told.

But does Edward have other motives to capture Bella?

**There is rape involved in one of the later chapters. If that topic offends you, please do not read** 

 

Thanks to the awesome Caius for my banner! I absolutely love it!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 61861
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2009 Updated: July 29, 2014


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: August 08, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Imprisonment

I really enjoyed this. However, I wish that Edward had a more defined character at the end. Bella made him give up his gangster life and there wasn't all that much left. 

 
Vegas, Baby! by jslack0816 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3194]
Summary:

Bella takes a trip to Vegas with her roommates Alice and Rosalie. After one wild night, Bella's life is turned upside down. A marriage certificate, a pregnancy, and a best friend in ICU send Bella and her friends into a whirlwind of emotions. Canon pairings and future LEMONS!

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Vegas baby banner

project team beta banner

Much thanks to readergoof and annamorphos (respectively) for the awesome banners!  Also, to Project Team Beta for taking this story on!  You all are the best!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 32 Completed: No Word count: 206944
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2009 Updated: December 01, 2011


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: April 11, 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Stupid Happy

morning sickness is actually a sign of a healthy pregnancy....

 
Summary:

When Alice and Jasper decide to have their bachelor and bachelorette parties together in Las Vegas, the crew finds out that 'what happens in Vegas' does not stay in Vegas.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 247024
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2010


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: October 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Fear

very intense! however, it bothered me that edward operated on her. that is really illigal, not to mention not safe for either bella or edward because if something had gone wrong the emotional implications and that edward could not make clear decisions. Im addicted to your story though!

 
Loner by Nilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9906]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?

WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.

 

 

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Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: February 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

This scene was well done.

 
A Betting Man by mybluesky Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2594]
Summary:

A Betting Man 

Now Complete!

Just two weeks before her best friend's wedding Bella gets dumped by boyfriend James when she refuses to give him what he wants. The next night she discovers he's made a bet with gorgeous pal Edward Cullen that he can't bed her. She brilliantly decides to string Edward along for a few weeks...and subsequently land herself a hot date for the wedding. Things soon get very interesting...

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 166948
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2009 Updated: September 13, 2010


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: January 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue

I read your story in practically one sitting. Lovely job.

 
Summary:

Bella never jumped, Edward never returned - but Victoria did. Not even the intervention of the wolf-pack can stop her from attacking Bella. Now entering her first year of college, Bella has some major decisions to make about her life.

 

The Ugly Ducking


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Edward, Jane
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 43094
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2009 Updated: October 29, 2013


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: October 29, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Lessons

Excited for an update. You're writing is better than a lot of people on this site.

 
Summary:

Isabella is a handmaid to Princess Jessica, Daughter of King Aro. When a knight from a neighboring kingdom wins his choice of bride, Sir Edward bypasses the princess and claims the handmaid instead. Isabella suddenly finds herself married to a man she does not know, and is tossed into the middle of political plots and scheming nobles. Her life is further turned upside down when she is unable to give her husband the one thing he must have.

"This is the hour of Forks' revenge. Volterra will fall to us for Aro's actions against your Queen, and no one – no one – who fights for Volterra will survive. We will not stop until every wall, every tower, every single structure in all of Volterra has been razed."

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 229617
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2010 Updated: December 02, 2011


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: November 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Covertly Strike

This was great, :) I love the historical part and the love story. It really was great. I predicted the tea thing, haha, when it was mentioned at the beginning. I didn't think it was hemlock, but I know there are teas that were used as birth control back in the day. Anyway, I'd love more from your meshed time periods.

 
Summary:

The story of a formerly successful author who can't put pen to paper for her next best seller decides to write a novel about the troubled final year of school for her and her two former friends. Will she finally find success in the book she struggled years to write while, all around her, life falls apart.

 The story of a loving housewife who is pregnant with the child she has wanted her whole life and has a husband she adores. But when the baby comes early, the perfect marriage she thought she had falls apart as her husband’s lies come to light.

 

The story of a woman who nearly everyone has given up on, living in a place she can't properly understand with a man she could never let near her.

 

And the story of how one night the lives of three women changed forever in a way none of them could ever comprehend.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 10039
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2011 Updated: September 27, 2011


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: April 08, 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Alice

.... what have i gotten myself into.....

 
Stolen Dreams by Shasta53 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 436]
Summary:

Bella and Edward were ready to become parents as seniors in high school, but tragedy ended their dreams and pulled them apart. Ten years later, they reunite, but all is not what it seems. ExB


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No Word count: 169508
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2011 Updated: November 11, 2012


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: October 09, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I know I'm super behind, but I figured I would comment anyway. It is making me feel really uncomfortable that Bella and Edward haven't really thought about Ryan, and what is best for him. Do they know if the Cullen's have told him that he was kidnapped? How exactly did that conversation go down? They are looking for houses, but I don't think they are really thinking about Ryan. They're thinking of themselves. They are in a super horrible position, but as parents, they have to think about Ryan first, and they haven't really. Bella is a therapist, and she hasn't really thought about what is best for Ryan. I'm not saying they shouldn't have a relationship with Ryan.... but they have to think about Ryan first, and they haven't been. They're being very selfish right now.

 
Rm w/a Vu by AngelGoddess1981 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1434]
Summary:

 

Bella, a struggling student at Arizona State, returns to her dorm room one afternoon to find her boyfriend in bed with her roommate. Unable to look at either of them, she moves out of her dorm, seeking refuge at her parents' place until she can find another room to move to.

 

Since it’s halfway through the semester, there are no other rooms available, so she takes to the classifieds. Just how good is the view being advertised? 

 

AH - Bella/Edward

Romance/Humor

 

Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and later, lemons . . . because this is fanfiction after all.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 229683
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2012 Updated: June 18, 2013


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: April 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11. Bad Timing

Yay! Edward did the right thing. I totally knew they were gonna get walked in on, so so embarassing!

 
Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: April 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10. Liquid Courage

ugg, Edward better not let anything happen between them. Bella is drunk and firsts shouldn't happen then. It would lower my opinion of Edward. Edward also seems to be playing a bit of a daddy role which is creepy... However, I love where the story is going, and you write really well.

 
Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: July 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20. Touchdown

engagement ring? Although, Bella is pretty young for that. But, in the twilight books...

 
Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: March 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9. Overnight Company

would 1 red sock really do that? I'm horrible about seperating my whites and they're all still white....



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, 1 red sock can do this to an entire load, especially I'd the water temperature is hot. I'm living proof :-S

There is a product out called Colour Catcher (they're sheets) that you can throw in as a safety precaution, but our poor Bella doesn't know about them yet ;)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing :) see you Monday!

 

AG1981

 
Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: April 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10. Liquid Courage

I had to come back and add something. It is really sweet when guys hold doors etcetera. However, I think it's disturbing that Bella would let Mike not doing things like that lower her opinion of him. She's in college. She lives in the 21st century. Chivilry can gain points, but a lack of it shouldn't subtract. Anyhow, can't wait until you update!

 
Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: March 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8. Everybody has a Type

Ugg, i've never read a story that is still being written and liked it. The anticipation is killing me. Adorable story though. And no, edward is not gay, that would rather limit where this story could go.

 
Royal Duty by LiveInDakota Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary:

 

Life as a princess isn’t a fairytale like they would lead you to believe. Sometimes decisions are made you don’t like. Sometimes you don’t have a choice at all.

 

Barely out of school, it seems Bella’s future has already been decided, with a marriage she doesn’t want and a nation she doesn’t know how to rule, but not everything is at it seems, and Edward Masen is no exception.

 

E/B. Rated M for language and lemons. Slightly different for me, not too much angst :)

 

Banner made by the awesome FrozenSoldier :D


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 52782
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2012 Updated: April 12, 2013


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: December 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Incoherent Truths

I feel like such a creeper to be commenting for the third time, but please please please update? it would make my day!

 
Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: November 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Princess and the Pea

:( I want an update! Sorry, it is just so addicting!

 
Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: November 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Incoherent Truths

oh shoot, i hate reading in progress stories because it involves some horrid thing called patient. I'm horribly curious about why all this is going down; you've wove yourself a very fine web. Looking forward to next time!

 
Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: January 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: The Princess and the Pea

When are you gonna post again?? Pout.

 
Summary:

A one night stand that goes horribly wrong ... or did it? Based in part by the song 'Forever and Almost Always' by Kate Voegele.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 29707
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2012 Updated: May 31, 2014


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: July 17, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I keep waiting for you to post again!! And I'm worried you won't!! Please don't leave us hanging!

 
Hidden by elauradannon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 61]
Summary:

Life isn't easy, but it shouldn't have to be this hard either. I shouldn't have to pretend to be happy and in love. I shouldn't have to use more make-up in one month than most women use in a year just to avoid the pitying stares. I shouldn't have to be afraid for my life if I make a mistake. But I do, and I think I've finally had enough.  All Human. Edward/Bella.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 31699
[Report This] Published: June 11, 2013 Updated: October 24, 2013


Reviewer: DianaLily Signed
Date: July 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & Chapter One

I'm intrigued!! I'm gonna have to try to find it elsewhere, haha



Author's Response:

I've just sent the next chapter through to be validated so hopefully you won't have to wait too long. Thanks for reading and reviewing!





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