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Real name: Vicki
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Member Since: March 05, 2011

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North Star Rising by spaniard Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 217]


Bella has set her sights on immortality, and finally, Edward has bent to her will. What could possibly go wrong as they plan for their own private eternity?

The best laid plans…

The ripples of the destruction caused by James’s coven have not yet settled, and the Cullen’s are about to understand exactly how much one moment in time can alter their fragile piece of perfection.

Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Kate, Rosalie, Tanya
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No Word count: 91120
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: August 29, 2011

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: September 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: 22: Subterfuge

Wow I owe you a lot of reviews but I can't stop reading long enough to write one. All I can say is I am loving your story.

Author's Response:

And I owed you a response a LONG time ago!  that is one heck of a compliment--not being able to stop reading to review.  Thanks so much for it!

For Eternity by MonksMama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1122]

150 years after Edward leaves and 149 years after Bella's death, Jasper stumbles into a newly published fiction that isn't fiction at all. Who is Eve? Who are the Guardians? What are the concequences?

"May 17, 2153

Dearest Reader,

Come, pull up a chair and sit by me. Locked in these pages you will find my story, my memory, my secrets, my heart, my life, my death, some things that came after and everything in between.

Can I trust you with it?

It is truly fantastic and not for the faint-hearted. Not for the realist, not for the cynic, no never for the cynic, only the pure hearted will find purchase here. Lend me your ear, your open mind and heart and I will pull you to a myth you dare not dream of, a myth you unknowingly live every day.

Tell me dearest, do you believe in Angels? Not as Dogma, not as testament to whichever religion bears your faith, not fairies with wings and halos. Can you believe in the beings of light, of strength and power that govern here on earth, the beings that hold all things in order, beings that guard your humanity?

Perhaps Angels is the wrong word, a word they would see with distaste. So we shall call them what they are in essence, the guardians. Do you believe?  Can you believe in the mythical? If you cannot, this is no place for you. I’ll give you a moment to ponder this. Please do not tread lightly upon my  request.

As I have learned all too harshly, prepared or not, one can never go back. " 

 Told in varying POV, with excerpts from the book Storm.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 92469
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2008 Updated: November 15, 2011

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: August 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Intentions

Sorry I haven't reviewed but I haven't been able to stop reading long enough. I am definitely hooked. Please update soon.

Summary: Feature


While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse.  When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help.  But of course, fate has plans for this man.  Canon Couples.  AU.  DARK Themes.

Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: November 01, 2011

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: October 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Suit

Oh no a cliffie! Not now. Update soon please!


A few weeks before Bella and Edward's wedding, something terrible happens in the state of Washington.  Can the Cullens protect Bella and her father from the living dead?

Rated NC-17 for Graphic violence and language.

Carlisle, zombies

Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Other Character, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 54019
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: June 11, 2011

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: June 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

OK! That I was not expecting. I can't even imagine where that leads!

Mimiteh by pbswimmer Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 394]



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WINNER of Indie Twific Award: Best Use of a Parent. Congratulations to all nominees.

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Mimiteh = Native American word meaning "New Moon". Thanks to Lorne for the banner!

*Alternate Ending to New Moon* Consumed by worry about Bella’s depression, Charlie drags her to counseling with a Quileute psychologist, Dr. Nina Carlton. Unbeknownst to Bella, Nina has wolfish relatives in Forks, a past with Charlie, and a shield of her own. When Alice sees Bella throwing herself into harm's way, Edward races back to Forks. He is torn between staying out of Bella's life, as promised, and saving her from peril. Through a journey forged in therapy, friendship, and the support of their parents, Bella and Edward will learn important lessons about themselves and their love.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Mike, Quil, Rosalie, Seth
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 90771
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2009 Updated: April 14, 2013

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: September 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: The Third Wife

I am going to guess that Victoria had something to do with her sons death. Can't wait to keep reading.

Author's Response:

Excellent guess! :)

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: September 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Suicide Romance, Part Two

I just found your fic. I owe you lots of reviews but I can't seem to stop reading long enough to leave a review. It is one of the best I have every read. Now seriously I have to go finish reading.

Author's Response:

Aww, what a sweet, feel-good review! Thanks, Vicki. Happy reading, Jen xx

A Brave New World by youngmei Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1071]

Edward and Bella

“Bella, I’m going to give you some privacy. I won’t go far, but I won’t listen either. I know you don’t want an audience, no matter which way you decide to go.”

Three years after his mysterious disappearance, Edward’s final words to Bella still haunt her every waking moment. For her parents, Bella tries to put the past behind her and start a new life but one phone call shatters her fragile new world. Bella must then choose between her new life and the potential heartache of her past.

All canon pairings. NO CHARACTER DEATH. This is an Edward and Bella story.

I'd like to thank ms_ambrosia for the awesome banner!

Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 189074
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2010 Updated: July 10, 2014

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: February 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: The Exchange

OMG Sue!!! I didn't see that one coming!!! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter now!

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: October 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Memories and Nightmares

Great update! Oh my what is going on with Bella!

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: April 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Bloodlust and Savagery

Damn that was a cliffie! And then you drop the chapter back to Bella. No wonder I get so excited when I see an update! Hurry please!

Author's Response:

Thank you! The next chapter is up now!

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: A Meeting of the Mind

So glad you are back. Lovin the story. I am guessing Bella's blood was too much for Edward. Can't wait for the next update. Hurry please!


Full Circle by WynterC Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]

Bella and Edward have defeated Victoria and wedding plans are in motion.  Unfortunately, an unforeseen accident causes Bella to put her life on hold, and the problems keep coming month after month.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 108595
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2010 Updated: January 22, 2012

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: June 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 November

Oh my! Alot of reveals in this chapter. I am still amazed Jane's mother is a vampire and its been hidden from Aro and now Edward thinks Bella is dead. This is going to be something! Can't wait for the next chapter.


Just days after Billy Black’s funeral, Charlie received a letter from his best friend that cast a shadow of doubt on everything he thought he knew about his daughter’s death. He had defended and respected the Cullen family for years. Now that nothing was quite what it had seemed before, Charlie doesn’t know what to believe. With the help of some trusted allies, Charlie delves into his memories to search for clues that could change everything…and bring Bella back to him.



Sequel to the one-shot, Look After You. Canon through Eclipse.



 Thanks to marielondon for the awesome banner!

Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Charlie
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 31590
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2010 Updated: January 29, 2013

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: September 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Everybody Lied

I absolutely love this story. So different from any of the others that I have read. Your Charlie is so any other father with a missing child. I can't wait to see his reaction to the fact that they are vampires. I can't wait for the next update. Hurry Please! 

Author's Response:

Now, wait a minute...What makes you think he'll find out they're vampires? ;)

I'm so happy that you're enjoying reading my spin on the post-Eclipse world. I take a lot of time getting into Charlie's mind, so I'm glad that it plays as realistic to the reader!

Thanks for reading and reviewing. It's greatly appreciated!

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: January 30, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Bells

I was so excited when I saw an update. I am so very glad that you didn't give up on this story. I love the way you are writing Charlie it is absolutely perfect. Please update again soon!

Author's Response:

Give up on Charlie's tale? Never!! :) Happy to hear that you're enjoying Charlie. His POV is completely different than anything I've ever written and finding his voice has been so much fun. I'm working on the next chapter. Promise to have it out sooner than the last one! :) Thanks for reviewing!

Enduring Love by Rayday Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]

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Edward leaves more then just Bella behind during New Moon.  Unbeknownst to Edward, he leaves Bella pregnant and in more danger then he could have ever dreamed possible.  Now three years later a reunion is possible, will they finally be a family or will a new danger stop that from ever happening.


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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Other Character
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 42905
[Report This] Published: May 30, 2010 Updated: October 20, 2011

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: August 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great story! Can't wait for the next update and to see what is up with Dr. Lawson!

From The Ashes by RowanMoon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]

Lady with brown hair and long dress, head thrown back. Surrounded by fire



~Sequel to supernatural AU Broken Doll.~  



Bella rises from the ashes of battle against The Volturi in The Great War as the Three that become One; Powerful witch of the Striga line, a blood descendant of Taha Aki the great Pricolici Shifter, and now, newborn vampire with Edward's venom coursing through her veins.

As our heroine celebrates her family's victory and her marriage to her imprinted mate, an unexpected guest shows up at the wedding who is bent on revenge and making Bella suffer in the worst way imaginable.  

Join Bella as she races against time across continents to save a loved one and fulfill a destiny that she was never prepared for. 





Categories: AU Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 90330
[Report This] Published: June 08, 2010 Updated: September 03, 2014

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: January 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I was so excited to see an update that I had to go reread the story. Cant wait for the next one.

Author's Response:

Hee hee!  Thanks Vicki!  You aren't the only one that had to reread the story.  ~points to self~  It's my 2012 resolution to finish this story by spring. Chapter 10 is 6 pages in and I'm hoping to post in the next week or so. Thank you so much for coming back and giving your support and love!



Wicked Games by hitchy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 817]

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It has been more than five years since Renesmee was born.  She's 16 and craving independence from her overprotective family.  She moves to Alaska to attend school with Jake, after painstakinlgy convincing her parents (mainly Edward) that it's a good idea.  Things begin to develop between Jake and Nessie romantically, and she couldn't be more thrilled.

But what happens when a sudden and unexpected visitor casts a dark shadow over things?  The death of a loved one brings the ugly truth of the lethal and Wicked Game to light and no one is safe anymore... especially Renesmee. 

How hard will Jake and Nessie have to fight to be together? 

Mainly Jake & Renesmee's POV's, but has some Edward and Bella chapters as well.

NOTE:  This story is rated NC-17 for a reason.  Violence, sexual content, and dark themes.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Jacob, Leah, Nessie, Renesmee, Seth
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 59 Completed: Yes Word count: 393510
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2010 Updated: May 18, 2011

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: May 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Epilogue - Part Two

Wicked Games was the first story I read on Twilighted. I have to admit it is still my favorite. Wonderfully written. You left everything hanging...a sequel is definitely needed.

Author's Response:

Was I really your first?  I have to say, I'm honoured!  I'm so glad that you decided to stick with it through to the end.

It's been an incredible journey. It seems like it's unanimous... everyone wants a sequel. I'm amazed with the positive response. Unless something in real life changes that prevents me from writing fan fiction altogether, I am definitely planning on writing a sequel for Sarah and Elijah, at the very least. If you're interested in reading it, please keep me on author alert, or keep an eye on my author's notes in other things that I'm writing either here or on

Thank you so much.


Poison in me by Halawia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 86]

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New moon Alternative.

He went away and became the monster he always knew he was. The world changed and he forgot her.

But she always remembered. And she's not the girl she once was.

When all you knew is lost, can you ever become you again?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 23454
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2010 Updated: September 10, 2011

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: October 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Looks like dinner

Intriguing...You have got my attention. What has happened to the rest of the family?


Angela Weber held a secret that she couldn't share with anyone. What happens when that secret lands her in the middle of the forest with the truth about the Cullens' real identities fresh on her mind?

Three years later, Angela has moved away from Forks and barely thinks about the Cullens. That is until a familiar face appears back in her life, turning it upside down once again.

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Categories: AU Characters: Angela, Jasper
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 75196
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2010 Updated: April 25, 2012

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: December 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen

I knew it was coming but I still hate it...Alice is dead! I still need to understand how they didn't know Victoria was near. Update soon please!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Sorry for the late reply.

Trust me, I didn't like killing Alice, either :(

They didn't know Victoria was near because she was too far away. She never got close enough to the house, it was only when Jasper was out of range (of Edward's ability, mainly) did he pick up her scent. This was the first time she was close to the house, so it's the first chance they got to catch her scent. Hope that helps explain a little.

Paula x

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: November 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen

Anxiously awaiting the big reveal! Update soon please!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

The next chapter is already posted on my FFnet account (same username), so if you wanted, you could check it out there first. Let me know what you think if you do!

Paula x


Seventeen year old Bella Swan is fascinated by the elusive and mysterious Edward Cullen. Will he be everything she dreamed of? Or more than she bargained for? And how will they find their way when one night changes everything?

Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 75114
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2010 Updated: November 28, 2011

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Fascination

I just found your story and all I can say is "wow". You are a wonderful writer. I was mesmorized by the first chapter alone. I had to review now because I am sure as I continue to read I will be so captivated by the story that I will forget to hit review while being anxious to get the the next chapter.

Full Moon Rising by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 705]

Banner by the awesome Frozen Soldier!  She is amazing!



We had survived the Volturi and were finally able to enjoy life without fear...until new threats arose.  These were more sinister than any before...because the most terrifying one came from within me...

The lead figure took a few long steps toward us, and I felt Bella stiffen beside me and heard her gasp of pain.  Hands moved toward the cowl of the robe, pushing it backwards.  The moonlight made a valiant attempt to shine through the clouds highlighting him as the angel he’d always seemed.  Bright red eyes scanned the group as a sneer claimed his face, twisting it.  He looked toward the assassins beside him, after one last cold look toward us, he gave his order.   “Destroy them.”

The family tensed at the callousness in his voice.

“Edward…” Bella breathed out from beside me.  Pain laced through her voice.

The figure hesitated only slightly as the weak light framed his bronze hair and the scar along his cheek.  Then as he turned away, the robed figures dashed past him toward us.

 “Henry!” my family screamed around me as we braced for impact.   “Remember our training,” I shouted.  “And if possible bring Edward back alive…”


Sequel to Harvest Moon, my Shimmer Award, Vampie, and Twilighted OC Character award winning story.

Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Heidi, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 72 Completed: Yes Word count: 410332
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2010 Updated: September 30, 2013

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: January 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Storm

Oh wow! I should have been expecting the shoe to drop with Bella having such a nice time but I was lost in the story and didn't see that one coming. But I can't wait for the next update. Hurry Please!!!

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: August 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Character

Great update! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: March 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Major

I loved learning more about Anna and things that I had forgotten. I think we are getting somewhere. Update soon please!

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: February 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Intimacy

It seems Edward is learning a few things from the triplets! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: vicki1969 Signed
Date: July 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Absence

Great update! Both Bella and Edwards were true to character and justly deserved. Can't wait for the next one!



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