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Summary:

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There is real life, then there's Real Life.

 

We all know that Rob and Kristen belong together. So what happens when that finally happens, just years down the road? Enter Ever After . . .

 

A series of one-shots, that are tied together by the moments that make up a couple's life together. Add a few 'sex-haired' babies and some Twilight friends for fun.

 

Rated NC-17 because you just never know when the lemon muse will show up.

 

A new series from  jakeward and the shrew.

 

*stories will not be necessarily be in chronological order. Cause that's how we roll. :)

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kellan Lutz, Kristen Stewart, Other Character, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Ever After . . ., The Robsten Files
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 118030
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2009 Updated: March 21, 2013


Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: June 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Art Imitates Life

That was so sweet - there's a big, goofy grin on my face right now. The Duke of Giggleford was priceless!

 
With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5906]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

this is such a compelling story -- wonderful writing! i teared up in this chapter, sheesh :)

 
Summary:

 

 

When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins.  He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own.  This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction.  Can they find their way back to each other?  And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?

HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2012


Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: April 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Maybe I'm Amazed

YAY, you're back! such a nice surprise to see an update and what a sweet one it is. nice to see bella emerging from her shell bit by bit and edward healing. nice smexin' too, hehe ;)

 
Behind the Lens by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1113]
Summary:

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"Once upon a time, there was a girl that wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. Not only did he sweep me off my feet, he managed to completely carry me away."

Where one story ends, another begins. Under a watchful eye, they live . . . Behind the Lens.

Sequel to Behind the Reel.

http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=1989

A fictional tale of Rob & Kristen.

 

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Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 37 Completed: Yes Word count: 199827
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2010 Updated: May 31, 2012


Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: August 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ohhhhh, Nikki... you devil woman. And hands off the pretty!!

Kellan's ball waxing crack literally had me LOL. I can't help but love him.

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: October 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Holy hot toddy! Thank you for that indecently delicious lemon. I think my phone nearly melted as I read.

And Nikki? Welllll... I have my doubts that she's truly on the up and up. Maybe she'll prove me wrong ;)

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: September 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ohhhhhh, poor Rob - LOL. I'll bet that's the last time he offers to give his girl a massage prior to, er, the deed. Hopefully he has better luck in the next chapter.

Also, I couldn't help but laugh at Rob's rant of the giant vamp camp hampster wheel. Hilarious!

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: April 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

such a sweetly funny chapter! really looking forward to the return to LA, yay!



Author's Response:

I am too. It's been almost a year of writing them apart - it's been killing me, too! :) I'm so happy you liked the chapter!! Yay!

 

<3,

jakeward

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: February 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

yay, i was so happy to see a new chapter, you rock! love your handle on rob & kristen's personalities, and great dialogue amongst all of the characters, very natural and real. also, yeaaaah, HOT scenes are always a pleasure, wow.

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: July 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

i looooved this - big sigh! Such fun conversations amongst Rob, Kristen, and Marcus. I died at 'sparkly beast' - hah!! I found Rob's mini-freak and Marcus's reaction so poignant.

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: November 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Aw. I remember some comments about Kristen being ill during the tent shoot. But uggggh, how horrible to be sick and need to work so physically close to *anyone*. AND be wrapped up in a zillion layers, a hat, AND a wig. :(

I wonder if the green eyed monster has been appeased... or instead further fed by the tent and lip lock scenes. I generally don't like jealousy... but it's a wee bit hot in Rob.

I really LOL'd at the 'he was going to birth a cow' line. Hysterical!

 
Bella? Marie? by Nyomi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1284]
Summary: Feature

ON HIATUS. [sorry guys :-(]

Bella (22) longs for love and acceptance, yet her fear of rejection keeps her guarded and single. Her craving to feel needed is fulfilled by working as a live-in nanny to Rosalie, who's a single mom to four-year old Henry.

For months, Bella has been secretly infatuated with Rosalie's ex-husband, Edward (29), but he barely acknowledges Bella during their brief encounters. That is, until one night when she bumps into him at a club.

However, he doesn't recognize her at all.

Afraid for her job, she tells him her name is Marie. He acceptes her pseudonym, and feeling safe with anonymity, Bella reveals her wild side. 

She makes the most of the night, but what happens when he tries to find the mysterous Marie?

When Mr. Cullen gets to know Bella, will he still want Marie?

How will that one incredible night shake their worlds?

AH/OOC/MA

*Rated for language, adult situations and sexual content from early chapters.

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 129626
[Report This] Published: May 01, 2010 Updated: September 30, 2011


Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: May 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Massage

dear god that was so erotic! great story, can't wait to read more :)

 
A Thousand Leaves by flabella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 613]
Summary:

Isabella Swan met the Cullens when she was a child, growing up as Alice's best friend. Not every Cullen liked Bella, though. Alice's older brother Edward took it upon himself to make Bella's trip toward adulthood a nightmare. Everything changes when Edward is sent to prison for the murder of Bella's mother, Renee.

Special thanks to crazyj9girl for the top banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 182060
[Report This] Published: August 28, 2010 Updated: June 21, 2011


Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: April 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: We Carry On

ah, like how you've gotten them to take steps and yet you're also setting up nicely for future chapters. loving this story!

i'm pretty appalled by alice, esme, and carlisle's behavior. can't blame edward for not caring much for them at the moment.

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: April 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24: Ready or Not

wow, i cannot read fast enough -- the story is really gripping! well done!

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: April 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Your Words, Like a Bomb

This is such good stuff! I love your take on Emmett -- he's such an underrated character in my opinion. And Edward and Bella are pretty sad little people right now -- tough to see them a bit broken down. Great story!

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: April 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: What Now?

oh, that was brutally crushing for edward. dang!!

and what a disaster carlisle and esme are. such a pity if they can't figure out how to get past... the past, hehe!

great chapter -- can't wait to see how things develop moving foward.

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: April 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Tattoos and Misunderstanding

aaaaargh :) i do like the way the story is progressing but i am dying a little for the bella edward reunion... no matter what happens! very good character development of bella and edward, by the way.

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: April 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Be Mine

i had a serious 'awww' moment reading this chapter. what a lovely reunion! so impressed w/ edward taking the plunge and bella meeting him half way.

nice to see the cullens slowly putting themselves back together, especially carlisle and esme.

love where you're taking this story; looking forward to seeing where bella and edward go next!

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: April 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Follow Your Heart

this was a great chapter - so exciting to see bella and edward really trying to meet each other half-way. those crazy kids. and just when i think edward can't be any greater he is... aw :)

also, you got me good w/ emmet's opening "Bella's truck is at Edward's," -- i completely LOL'd at rosalie's reaction.

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: May 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36: Top of the World

oh my goodness, that was so sweet, from start to finish - loved it! glad everyone's rebuilding lives and relationships, as well. yay!

 
Summary:

When Bella and Edward hook up at a party their lives quickly become complicated, causing a rift in their close knit circle of friends. Despite the fallout, they can’t stay away from each other. Neither of them are able to admit the depths of their feelings for the other and when Edward has to leave for Italy and Bella realizes she’s attracted to her friend Claire, their already shaky relationship is in danger of falling apart.

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This is ultimately a Bella/Edward story but there are non-canon pairs initially and later in the story there is a Bella/Claire slash pairing for a portion of the story. If this is something you aren't comfortable with, please disregard this story. Rated for language/underage drinking/lemons.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 60 Completed: No Word count: 297209
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2010 Updated: June 25, 2011


Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: June 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Epilogue Part II - Night and Day

the epilogues were wonderful! i really enjoyed this one in particular and seeing how bella and edward matured together over the years. i was a little surprised that they decided not to have chldren (probably because so many B/E HEAs involve kids) but that direction really worked with their characters. and i have to admit that the idea of a hot looking 60+ edward wowing the girls at the supermarket put a huge smile on my face - love him!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed them!

I knew them not having children would be a bit of a controversial issue, but I truly felt it was the right choice for the characters.  I am glad you thought so too. 

I have so many adorable, charming old men flirt with me at work (in a non-creepy way) and I could just picture Edward being the exact same way.  I am really, really going to miss this Edward. 

Thank you so much for your review. I really enjoy hearing your feedback.

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: May 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - With All That I Am

oh, man... bella makes me want to bang my head against the wall. LOL. but i'm really enjoying this story, reading on!

Author's Response:

(laughs) sometimes she makes me want to bang my head against the wall when I write her.  The good news is that her head will be coming out of her ass in the near future.  She's finally going to get her shit together, I promise!

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: May 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 - Magdalena

Oh... sigh. I totally get that Bella needs to figure out what's going on with Claire. In fact, I think her point about having such limited sexual experience is a really good one.

But... of course... I feel terrible for Edward. LOL.

I know it will be fine in the end (you're the author, I trust you) but, well, it's Edward! And he seems to really be trying to both give Bella space as well as declare himself! Stupid, perfect hot boyfriends.

All in all, love this storyline and enjoying reading very much. Now I just have to hold out until the next update....... eep!



Author's Response:

It's so hard, isn't it?  Even if it makes sense, you hate to see Edward get hurt. 

He is trying very very hard to be okay with all of it, but it's not easy.

I am glad you're enjoying it so much!  Thanks for the reviews!

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 - Winter in My Heart

argh, i KNEW edward was going to bug out! i don't really blame himeither, and he is right about bella needing to sort out her feelings and learn to deal with things on her own. was he unfair? no, i don't think so. he was a bit harsh, but bella served it back -- they'll figure out how to communicate better in the end. good chapter, very intense!



Author's Response:

He tried really hard...but he couldn't just move past it, which I think is very realistic.  And ultimately it will be good for their relationship in the long run. 

He was harsh, and she definitely threw it back at him. but they have actually made progress in communicating already, and will get better as they go.

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: May 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48 - Llorando (Crying)

aw, the poor things. so sad bella sat outside of the house... and edward wasn't even there. clearly, tho, bella's learning a lot about herself and how her mother's leaving continues to affect her; that really is positive and will help ensure that her relationships are healthy.
they're imperfect and make mistakes -- and aren't we all -- but those crazy kids will figure their way. very realistic reactions from all, well done!

Author's Response:

Yeah, it was a tough scene to write.  She is learning a lot and every realization she has will get her one step closer to making things work with Edward. 

I am so glad you found it realistic, that's always been my biggest goal for this story.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: karenec Signed
Date: May 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 - Amado Mio

ah, it's nice that they're talking and working it out! they have a ways to go, but definitely seem like they're on the right path. they'll figure out how to communicate if they keep at it. i laughed at the "we're a little overly dramatic" :)

Author's Response:

Yeah, they definitely don't think that they have it all solved yet, and I think that's the biggest thing in their favor.  I'm glad you enjoyed it! 

And I'm glad you liked the "overly dramatic line".  :)

Thanks for the review!

 




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