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Penname: Nautica7mk [Contact]
Real name: Nadia
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Member Since: February 28, 2009
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Summary:

 

When Charlie catches Bella and Edward in a compromising position how will he react?

What tactics will Edward and Bella have to resort to in order to get time alone together again?

 

Thanks Mandi for the banner!


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 134267
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Breaking All the Rules

I just love how sex-crazed our favorite couple have become. Talk about a sexual awakening. lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, they have a bit of pent up sexual energy here.  Edward is understandable because he's been waiting quite a while and well Bella....well damn if I had Edward I probably wouldn't be able to get enough either.

Thanks for the review.

 
Lucky Charm by profmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 508]
Summary:

Bella and Edward were secret best friends during one of the best periods of Bella's life.  Their friendship has waned.  When they are forced back together, untold secrets are revealed.  When the truth is out there, will anyone feel lucky?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 78205
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue

That was a really beautiful ending.

 
The One by demeterloves2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 210]
Summary:

This is my version of the Twilight Saga, Bella, Edward, and the rest of the Cullen's. There are familiar things and a LOT of twists.

Bella has moved to Forks, WA. and is convinced that she's being punished, even if she did come willingly. That's before she meets Edward.

Edward has never taken much stock in his sister Alice's visions about his so-called soul mate. He was convinced that he was meant to spend the rest of eternity with his family and nothing or no one else.

*thank you Ysar for the grammer heads-up :)

 


Categories: Twilight, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 49081
[Report This] Published: March 07, 2009 Updated: April 25, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: March 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It was okay. The dialogue is very stilted, and I personally had a hard time getting past that.



Author's Response:

I appreciate you taking the time review. I really value your opinion. This is not one of my better little stories and I willingly admit that it won't be wonderful...But I wanted some input and so I'm throwing it out there :) It's my very first attempt! :) lol

Thank you!

 
New Beginings by bleachgirl4 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

It was just another move. Nothing new.


But who are these vampires? Why are they vegetarian?

And why can't Alice see them?

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1474
[Report This] Published: March 08, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: March 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Hunting

My interest is definitely piqued.

 
Good-bye Too Soon by dmomo3 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 537]
Summary:

 

Nominated for Indie TwiFic Award.  Thank you all!!!
Vote at www.theindietwificawards.com

Also: nominated for the Immortal Cookie Award.  Many thanks to those who nominated it.  Further submissions and voting can be found on www.immortalcookieawards.moonfruit.com. 

Thank you again!!***

Edward, Bella and Alice face the Volturi in Italy and are not prepared for the test which Aro places upon Bella.  Edward must now decide what he will do when he risks losing her again. 

However, when a menacing creature decides to take on the entire Cullen family, will Edward ultimately have any control over Bella's destiny?

Welcome to all my Newest readers!!!  Thanks for reading and for all your reviews!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 58508
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2009 Updated: June 29, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: April 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OMG. Alice better not die. That's just... unfathomable.



Author's Response:

Anything is fathomable in fanfic, right?  But I love her too much to say good bye just yet.  Keep reading.  Debra

 
Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: April 08, 2009 Title: Good-bye Too Soon

Oh thank God. You nearly gave me a heart attack that last chapter.



Author's Response:

Sorry! But, I have to admit, that was the intended effect.  Thanks for reviewing.  Debra

 
Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: May 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ack! You're really determined to give me a heart attack. I just love where this is going, wherever it is.



Author's Response: I'm a nurse, your in good hands if you decided to blow a heart valve on me, lol. Thanks for the review, glad you are enjoying it. Debra

 
Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was very cruel leaving us hanging on a cliff there. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Addicted to cliffies, lol, just can't help it.  Have to keep ya coming back for more.  Thanks for reading with me.  Debra

 
Summary: Feature

 

*Takes place during New Moon in an alternate universe.

On March 16, 2006,  the World changed, and everything and anything that the Cullens ever cared about was lost. They had to find their own way in this New World. Edward never wished to exist in a world where Bella didn't.  Unfortunately, his family desperately needed him, so he'd stay to help them.   And by doing so, he hoped to redeem himself for his failure to save the one creature he couldn't protect. 

With rumours in the South of humans feeding off the living and stealing people from their beds, the Cullens have a responsibility to protect the ones they can from those monsters in the night.  This was Edward's last chance to fight for his soul and his salvation.  He would finally be ready to face Judgement day and be deemed worthy enough to be with Bella once again.  Or would something or someone change the path he was destined to go down?  Faith, hope and love are powerful things, and Edward is about to find out just how powerful they are.

 

Yes... this is the story that is set during a post-apocalyptic nuclear war. Just try the Prologue to get a feel for it before passing judgment. You might be surprised. Warning: There is violence and disturbing images the further the story goes along.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 315697
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2009 Updated: March 24, 2012


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: May 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Pride Comes Before the Fall

I am going insane with all the suspense you dish out. I need a drink.



Author's Response:

*phew*

I need a drink too!

thanks baby... i will drink to that.

;)

 
Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Faith Keeps the Man Who Keeps his Faith

Long chapters make me happy. Long well-written chapters make me even happier. Great update. Love the scene between Edward and Charlie.

 
Help Wanted by jaxon 22 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3035]
Summary:

Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.

Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?

A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.

A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Ugly Duckling

I like it. Like it a lot.

 
Summary:

Bella returns to Forks for closure on her father's death.  In the process she both gives and receives more than she originally planned.

 

Inspired by Michael Jackon's Gone Too Soon. (lyrics: http://www.elyrics.net/read/m/michael-jackson-lyrics/gone-too-soon-lyrics.html )

 

 

 

Huge thanks to my betas for helping me improve my story!


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Phil, Renee
Challenges:
Series: Thriller
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3538
[Report This] Published: August 11, 2009 Updated: August 11, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One shot

Okay, this is sad. And I seriously feel like crying.

 
Summary:

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~Pre-Twilight.~

 

Just after Rosalie is changed into a vampire, Esme is there to comfort her.

 

“So you see, sweetheart, you’re not really alone at all. You’ve got me, to be there for you every step of the way.”


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1255
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: September 12, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: OneShot

That was heartbreaking. Both women have tragic pasts and you related Rosalie's first days as a vampire beautifully. Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)

 
Summary:

Even the purest of wishes don’t often come true. This is the story of one that did. Entry for the Once Upon a Twilight Contest.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7635
[Report This] Published: August 23, 2009 Updated: September 12, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: September 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

That was pleasantly surprising. I thought it was going one direction when it totally went to another. lol

 
Home by TwiliteAddict Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Rosalie learns the fate of her parents' estate & decides to visit her childhood home. To her displeasure, Bella follows. Bella learns about Rose's past, but what does Rose take back from this journey? My one-shot attempt to understand what makes Roselie 'tick' and winner of the RosaBella challenge. 


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3572
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Home

That was pretty damn amazing. Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the kind words!  I am pretty damn flattered!

 
Summary:

The story of how Edward and Seth build a friendship after the fight with Victoria and Riley. How do enemies become friends?


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Embry, Jacob, Jared, Leah, Paul, Quil, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 5177
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2009 Updated: February 26, 2010


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Unlikely Friendship

Their friendship is so adorable in BD. Thanks for writing this up. Looking forward to their evolution of BFFs. lol



Author's Response:

I know, their friendship is adorable and one of the things I loved about BD. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :). The next chapter should be up soon.

 
Second Chance by christib Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 148]
Summary:

What if Edward had not returned to Forks after his first encounter with Bella in Biology? They have both finished high school and find themselves attending the same University. Bella doesn't know yet that Edward is a vampire and he wants a second chance.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 12915
[Report This] Published: October 12, 2009 Updated: December 09, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: November 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Dazzled

lol @ Edward. The man is on a mission and I don't mind it at all.

 
Summary:

A quiet day in the Cullen house. What does Jasper think when Bella and Edward return from Italy?

A cute, fluffy one-shot. Sure to bring the warm fuzzies!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1181
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Content Family

Awww.

That's just... so freakin sweet. Lovely one-shot. I adored it.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :D

 
The Runaway by rosalielinnea Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

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Edward left after the van crash but he hasn't forgotten Bella.  Living in Phoenix she has an unusual job and a complicated family life. When he finally sees her again she is a different person than he imagined she would be. Leaving her set forward events that can't be undone. Can he redeem himself in her eyes? Is she ready for love? All canon couples.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 84835
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: April 10, 2012


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: November 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Waltz # 2

 I gave it a shot, and it's not really my type of story. Good luck with it though.

 
Summary:

Written for the When Love Was New contest. 

Bella wakes as a newborn vampire with no memories of her past. She knows not who she is, where she is or who the people she just killed are. Lost, alone and disgusted with herself she runs until she finds herself in a weakened state and unable to move. 

She is lost but may find her place sooner then she thinks. 

 


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3088
[Report This] Published: November 06, 2009 Updated: November 07, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found one-shot

This story is beggining for the continuation but I'll take what I can get. lol

 
Loner by Nilla Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9906]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was a loner, an outcast. He clearly hated everybody, including himself. He was not a nice person. So, why was I so drawn to him? And why did I get the crazy feeling he felt the same way?

WARNING: This story will deal with the aftermath of child abuse and rape. If that bothers you too much, I strongly recommend that you don’t read.

 

 

Banner by steffyxxface



Thanks to steffyxxface for the lovely banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 115 Completed: Yes Word count: 365612
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2009 Updated: July 06, 2011


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: May 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Woohoo. I'm so glad Edward is willing to atleast try to be intimate with Bella, and I can very well imagine him to one day truly enjoy the act with someone he loves. Through all of his trauma, I'm surpisingly looking forward to his development and self-discovery of true sexual intimacy. He'll be in for a surprise. lol

 
Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: July 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Finally. Emmett looks like he has an idea of Edward's condition now and I'm glad that he knows. Edward has held his secret for so long from his siblings it's a pleasant change to know that Bella won't be the only one who could possibly help him through his. He's finally untangling and though its been a long journey, it's unraveling at the pace you set for us and not because of our own impatience. lol Great piece of writing and looking forward to the next.

 
Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: July 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Emmett made me freakin cry man!

 
Acceptance by Cullenbabe86 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

How far will Edward go to gain acceptance with his classmates? For one classmate in particular? AH/AU One-shot written for Miztrezboo's birthday. Enjoy!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2000
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2009 Updated: December 02, 2009


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: December 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Acceptance

Ok, that was just entirely sweet. Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Geekward pulls at my heartstrings. :) I'm definitely going to want to write him again.

 
Summary:

They've been friends since the day he thought her to be an angel. Years later, he returns to where his heart had always laid. In the hands of the local cherry farmer's daughter, Bella. Read as they endure true friendship, loss and love. 

My entry for the Cherry Exchange Contest

Photobucket banner by heatherdawn


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 14665
[Report This] Published: December 06, 2010 Updated: December 12, 2010


Reviewer: Nautica7mk Signed
Date: December 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is one of the sweetest stories I've ever read. Thank you for sharing.





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