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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.
Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!
I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.
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Summary:

"His agony defines him. His memories destroy him.
But his hope is what sustains him, feeds him, encourages him. It's his purpose. And he doesn't deny it.
Offered the chance to leave all pain and misery behind, Edward knew that it was better to suffer his loss than to forget it. For in having it, Bella remains his and only his.
To forget would be the ultimate betrayal, abandoning her once again to a world of lonliness and despair. He had already done that once upon a time, and he did so spectacularly.
He'll find her. He has to.
HE HAS TO."
- icrodriguez (the most beautiful review I have ever received. THANK YOU for allowing me the honour of displaying it here. It sums up the tone of this story beautifully, hearts, Erin)
Left in the woods, an unfortunate run-in with Laurant and 45 years later - Bella finds herself facing everything she has ever wanted. Does it want her back? What will she discover about how Edward has been spending his time...
Rated for later chapters.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Word count: 140624
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: September 22, 2012
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Alone
I so love it. Update sooN!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Immortal
Oopsies. Love you, Edward! lol
Love the story. PLEASE update soon. I can't wait for them to see each other.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 10, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Trembling
Like the story. Edward needs to stop being an asshole. What now - I say throw down time!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Restraint
Great chapter. Update soon.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Touch Me
Please, don't let him be with Tanya. If he is married to her or something, don't let them have done the deed --- PLEASE
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed    
Date: September 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Love Me
I am so glad you updated. A friend of mine were saying awhile ago we wished it would update. I hate that he slept with that bitch. Hopefully it was only one time.
Great chapter Author's Response: tee hee... you talk about my story *hides* Thats exciting and nreve-wracking all at the same time!
LOVE YOU!
I get the angst everyone is having... must be patient ppl, even E tried to tell us *ahem, Bella* that "it isnt what it seems like..." So... stick it out ;)
Thanks,
Air
xox
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed    
Date: October 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Help Me
can't wait for more
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed    
Date: November 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Leave Me
please update soon
want to know what went on with E and that ho T
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed    
Date: December 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Find Me
dying for more
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed    
Date: January 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Ready
so dying for more
I want to know what he did with the skank Tanya.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed    
Date: January 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Set
I HOPE BELLA IS BEING GOOD
PLEASE NO SLASH. TO EACH THEIR OWN, BUT THAT BELONGS IN STORIES THAT ARE SLASH, NOT WHEN HE IS LOVE WITH BELLA. THAT WOULD RUIN THIS STORY AS HE HAS TO MAKE UP FOR TANYA? Author's Response: Haha... Totally kidding about the slash lmao! Well, not kidding that a lot of people wanted it... But ita that this is SO NOT a slash story lol. No worries buddy. I'll leave the rest up to your guys' imagination. ;) Thanks Air xox
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed    
Date: February 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: No
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER. EDWARD CAN'T GIVE UP....HE NEEDS TO BEG HER AND WIN HER BACK. DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED WITH THE SKANK TANYA.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed    
Date: February 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Options
One of my favorite stories
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed    
Date: March 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Bella
Get to updating...now!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: April 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Shattered
please tell me that it only appeared like she was having sex with him and didn't do the deed - it would just ruin it for me. Author's Response: DID NOT! Promise!
However...it is important that Ed not know one way or the other immediately. He walked in at a bad time and he needs to appreciate just how far Bella has fallen...no deal breaker tho. You have my word.
Air
xox
Summary: Edward hasn't discovered 'vegetarianism.' Bella's out alone in the woods and Edward attacks. Alice has had visions of Edward joining the Cullen's for months and has to race to stop him killing the one person that could turn his life around. As Edward helps Bella recover he has to decide the answer to one of the hardest questions he's ever had to ask himself. What is more tempting, her blood or her body?
"Good." He paused, and took a deep breath. "Now, stories, fairy tales if you will, teach you things. They teach you to dream, to experience a world outside of your own. To escape from reality. But, such fantasies must have origins, don't you think? No one person could have such a vivid imagination to create a world so differently than our own. They must have known that some of these tales or elements of them, existed in reality. Us, my family and I, along with many others, are indeed characters from such tales. Monsters in most," he said in disgust. I, personally, couldn't imagine a world where Carlisle or Alice could be classed as monsters; they were too beautiful, too gentle to be worthy of that description. "We are what some call the 'Cold Ones'. Others know us as the 'Danag', the 'Estrie', the 'Upier', 'Varacolaci', 'Nelapsi', 'Stregoni Benefici'. I could go on forever. Lies have been spun and names created, but you would probably recognize us by the more widely known name." I had become so entranced by his story that it shocked me back into the present when he paused. I waited, with bated breath for him to continue. He looked deep into my eyes as if he was searching for something. "Vampire," he said simply. ~ Excerpt from Chapter Three 'Collision Course'

Told from both Alice and Bella's point of view for the first two chapters, but after that, it's all Bella.
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 4435
[Report This] Published: May 06, 2009 Updated: June 20, 2009
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Meetings
I like it and can't wait for more! Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, glad you're liking it!
Summary: When the Cullens move back to Forks, Edward decides to follow in Carlisle's footsteps and become a doctor. As he becomes more and more frustrated with his monotonous life, Bella is admitted with a serious illness.
Will he be able to resist?

Thanks M81170 for the wonderful banner!
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 82473
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: October 18, 2009
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Can't wait for more. Great writting. PLEASE udate SOON!! Author's Response: Thank you! As soon as it gets approved, chapter two will be up! :)
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Emmett’s last heart to heart with me on the subject of sex consisted of him holding up a banana and a doughnut and then two bananas. He wanted to know which I found more interesting. I was more interested in what he was doing with human food in the first place. He then shoved a DVD in my hands, told me to have fun, and left the room. It was titled Edward Penishands. Clever. LOL! I really like it - keep up the good work. Author's Response: Thanks! There is a really porn called that....or, so I heard...
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Love it! Update soon.
Please let it end well - like he changes her before she dies.
Great writting Author's Response: You will have to keep reading to find out. I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Good chapter Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
So love this story! I will love you more if you let Edward save Bella at the end Author's Response: You'll love me more? Well, that is something to consider. More love never hurt anybody! ;)
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I liked the story a lot.
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Please, don't let him do it.....no! I beg you....please. Let him stop now!!!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
After I posted I looked at some of the reviews and this one cracked me up
sareliz (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 8
::looks warily at the screen::
You want us to read this story, right?
Oh, goodness. I feel dirty now...
LOL! That is how I feel. It is a great story but if he does the deed with Tanya my heart will break. Please, again, let him stop and turn her down!!
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed    
Date: July 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
great chapter Author's Response: thanks!
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