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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


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I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary:

Alice's visions are subjective. She sees things based on what people decide. But what happens when the decisions are made too quickly and without conscious thought? Alice can't stop what she can't see. And when she sees Bella crash her truck, she fears she may be too late...

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Categories: Eclipse, Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 73033
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2009 Updated: June 17, 2012


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good story but sad. I hope this doesn't turn into a J and B story. When E and B aren't together, the world just isn't right!.

 

Very good writting.



Author's Response:

I have no intention of messing with the pairings at all. Jasper's just going to be a little more focused on in the first three or four chapters due to his talent and then help he will be providing Bella and the rest of the family. Keep reading. My stories tend to read like old country roads - lots of twists, turns and hidden paths. ^_~

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Please, let Edward grow a pair so Bella doesn't become more dependent upon Jasper!!!

I do like the story.



Author's Response:

Lol. Edward will work through his issues in a rather surprising manner. Jasper is important because of his talent and the big brother/little sister relationship he shares with Bella. I'm glad you're enjoying it thus far. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^_^

~Wolf

 
Forgive by ToTheEights Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

After the "Bella's Mortality Vote," Jasper wants to apologize for his behavior.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2885
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2009 Updated: June 10, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great job

 
Summary:

Then Direct You Into My Arms

Then Direct You Into My Arms opens during New Moon. Bella is hunted by Victoria, haunted by Edward, protected by the pack. Amidst the chaos of constant danger, the growth of her relationship with Jacob Black and the difficult beginnings of a new friendship, the Cullens will return to Forks to turn Bella's life upside down again... and again. 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 61415
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2009 Updated: November 01, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Thank you. I hope they don't have sex. I want her with Edward.



Author's Response:

Heh, well then I'm impressed you've kept reading a fic that, up to now at least, has been pretty much all Jacob/Bella. Thanks for reviewing :) 

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: August 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Bella needs to get rid of the guilt!

Great chapter

Jacob needs to move on



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing :) We'll have to agree to disagree on Bella's guilt though, I think she's kind of entitled to it, lol.

 
The Storm by Eddielover Rated: PG-13 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Set after Edward left Bella. What if she was not strong enough to go on? im not good with summarys but this is my first fic. Hope you enjoy.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 648
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Sad. You should do EPOV.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I might, i have one, but im not sure if i like it. Thanks again.

 
Summary:

Edward never got over his rebillous stage and spends his nights prowling for the scum on the streets he deems worthy of being his next meal.  The target of one of his sets of prey has a scent he cannot resist.  Under these circumstances, can Bella and Edward still develop a relationship?  Or will the moster win the battle?


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1139
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: May 25, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Breakdown

So good! Update soon!!!

 
Summary: Feature

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EPOV. Edward is having trouble balancing his urges for Bella's blood and Bella's body before the wedding. What started out as a simple "Practice Fic" has become a retelling of BD from EPOV that lets us see just how much he struggles for control at every turn.

Warning: Edward's got issues. Some dark images and angst, but nothing too bad and quickly giving way to steamy goodness.

Golden Lemon


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 132400
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Honeymoon is Over?

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Everything's Biological

Soooooooooo good!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope you like what's coming soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Purgatory

 wonder if she would have felt quite so flattered if she had known that said vampire stood drooling over her every night with a raging erection.  LOL!

Great story. Thanks for updating so soon (like Edward, keep it up)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!! Check back for updates, I'm only waiting on the validation.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Exquisite Torture

Why can't I be Bella!

Love the story



Author's Response:

Oh, if we could ALL be Bella! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Explorations

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Other Boot

 awesome chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Divided

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Lump

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Awake

another great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: The Cottage

I don't smoke, but I need a cigarette! LOVE IT. He could bite me anytime.



Author's Response:

Seriously, me too. Like, really. *drools*

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo

loved the lemons



Author's Response:

loved the review

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: The Pink Nightmare

Great chapter

 

That looks like something Alice would pick out LOL. I would love to see my husbands face if I got that for our daughter.



Author's Response:

I think just about any husband in their right mind would freak out!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Not Enough Time

GREAT JOB



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Visitors

GREAT CHAPTER

GREAT LEMMONS



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the update.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Training, Trust, and Christmas

I CONTINUE TO LIKE THE STORY. I THINK A LOT OF PEOPLE JUST DON'T REVIEW ALL OF THE TIME.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Your reviews are always nice to get!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: A New Day

You did a great job with it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue: Possession

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad!

 
Summary:

This is my take on bella and edward's first time in the cottage, after her transformation.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1608
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bravo!

 




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