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I am a social worker who works with abused kids.


Love TWILIGHTED and rock music. My favorite group is KISS!


I am TEAM EDWARD all the way.


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Reviews by hc4metal
 
Summary: Feature

Blood & Lust banner

EPOV. Edward is having trouble balancing his urges for Bella's blood and Bella's body before the wedding. What started out as a simple "Practice Fic" has become a retelling of BD from EPOV that lets us see just how much he struggles for control at every turn.

Warning: Edward's got issues. Some dark images and angst, but nothing too bad and quickly giving way to steamy goodness.

Golden Lemon


Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 132400
[Report This] Published: May 11, 2009 Updated: March 30, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: The Honeymoon is Over?

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Everything's Biological

Soooooooooo good!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope you like what's coming soon.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Purgatory

 wonder if she would have felt quite so flattered if she had known that said vampire stood drooling over her every night with a raging erection.  LOL!

Great story. Thanks for updating so soon (like Edward, keep it up)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!! Check back for updates, I'm only waiting on the validation.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Exquisite Torture

Why can't I be Bella!

Love the story



Author's Response:

Oh, if we could ALL be Bella! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Explorations

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Other Boot

 awesome chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Divided

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: The Lump

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Awake

another great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: The Cottage

I don't smoke, but I need a cigarette! LOVE IT. He could bite me anytime.



Author's Response:

Seriously, me too. Like, really. *drools*

Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: The Cottage pt Deux: Electric Boogaloo

loved the lemons



Author's Response:

loved the review

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: The Pink Nightmare

Great chapter

 

That looks like something Alice would pick out LOL. I would love to see my husbands face if I got that for our daughter.



Author's Response:

I think just about any husband in their right mind would freak out!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Not Enough Time

GREAT JOB



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Visitors

GREAT CHAPTER

GREAT LEMMONS



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the update.

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Training, Trust, and Christmas

I CONTINUE TO LIKE THE STORY. I THINK A LOT OF PEOPLE JUST DON'T REVIEW ALL OF THE TIME.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Your reviews are always nice to get!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: A New Day

You did a great job with it



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue: Possession

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad!

 
Summary:

This is my take on bella and edward's first time in the cottage, after her transformation.


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1608
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2009 Updated: May 13, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bravo!

 
Taken by BellsNGems Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

Probably around New Moon/Eclipse; no exact time period, but definitely not too late in the story.

Fluffy Bella/Edward moments, but this story becomes serious and violent when Jacob rapes Bella after she decides to talk to him about her and Edward. 

warning: Sexual assault in first chapter. 


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 26467
[Report This] Published: May 12, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

YES, CONTINUE.

Please, let her tell Charlie and Edward right away. I can't stand it when in other stories she tries to hide the rape, especially from Charlie. Jake needs to pay for what he did. Also, so Charle can see what a you know what Jake is. Also, I hope that Bella realizes that Edward will love her no matter what and that he makes Jacob pay. It might be fun to let Charlie and Edward work together to make Jacob pay.



Author's Response:

THANKS so much for your review! i know what you mean - i too hate it when bella tries to hide everything from everyone. i always stop reading if it takes that direction. rape is not something you should hide like that. anyway, as for edward and charlie working together...you're going to have to find out! XP

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: July 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I hope Charlie and Edward kill Jacob. I hope Rose gets a piece as well!

 
Summary:

Jasper's gift allows him to sense the emotions of all the people around him.  Alice forsees that her husband is a little "tense" from sharing Bella and Edwards sexual energy, so she takes him on a little walk in the woods. 

Chapter continues with E/B, and sex and humor ensue...

Canon pairing with Lemony goodness


Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 5448
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2009 Updated: June 05, 2009


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: May 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL Love the ending. You should write another about when they catch Edward and Bella!



Author's Response:

Thats a good idea, i hadn't really considered that. 

 
Broken by Wendyann Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1084]
Summary:

How does someone survive a trauma that changes everything? How does she find the will to live? Edward was too late to save Bella in Port Angeles. Can she save herself?

*Note: This story deals with the aftermath of rape. If you are sensitive to this topic, please do not read.*

Thank you so much to Loushane for the amazing banner!


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 104063
[Report This] Published: May 15, 2009 Updated: June 28, 2010


Reviewer: hc4metal Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Revealing

great way to end hte the chapter

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Silence

I hope Rose took care of them

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Retreat

forgot to add GREAT JOB

 
Reviewer: hc4metal Signed
Date: June 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Justice

Go Rose~

 




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